Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Springtime\'s First.
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful poem, Fay!
I don\'t even know if daffodils grow here. But we are blessed with so many beautiful flowers all year round.
December 5th, 2017 04:19
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful poem, Fay!
I don\'t even know if daffodils grow here. But we are blessed with so many beautiful flowers all year round.
December 5th, 2017 04:19
Sweet Potion.
FredPeyer said:
To use \'fragrance\' in writing about love is not only imaginative, but also romantic. And I do love the last three lines very much.
Another wonderful poem by Fay!!!
December 5th, 2017 03:44
FredPeyer said:
To use \'fragrance\' in writing about love is not only imaginative, but also romantic. And I do love the last three lines very much.
Another wonderful poem by Fay!!!
December 5th, 2017 03:44
Springtime\'s First.
myself and me said:
Daffodil, the messenger of spring..
December 4th, 2017 19:07
myself and me said:
Daffodil, the messenger of spring..
December 4th, 2017 19:07
Springtime\'s First.
Christina8 said:
Beautiful write on a beautiful flower! I always look to them to bloom at the end of winter! Wonderful write!
December 4th, 2017 17:36
Christina8 said:
Beautiful write on a beautiful flower! I always look to them to bloom at the end of winter! Wonderful write!
December 4th, 2017 17:36
Springtime\'s First.
orchidee said:
Oh yes, we brought in some cuttings from the greenhouse. They are flowering again! A fine write Fay.
December 4th, 2017 14:27
orchidee said:
Oh yes, we brought in some cuttings from the greenhouse. They are flowering again! A fine write Fay.
December 4th, 2017 14:27
Springtime\'s First.
Louis Gibbs said:
Lovely dedication to the courageous daffodil, Fay! It is a tough and brave little gift of nature, for sure.
December 4th, 2017 09:27
Louis Gibbs said:
Lovely dedication to the courageous daffodil, Fay! It is a tough and brave little gift of nature, for sure.
December 4th, 2017 09:27
Springtime\'s First.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, when we first moved into our current house we had a daffodil that was in flower on Christmas Day for many years.
December 4th, 2017 09:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, when we first moved into our current house we had a daffodil that was in flower on Christmas Day for many years.
December 4th, 2017 09:04
Springtime\'s First.
Michael Edwards said:
Still a way to go - delightful write Fay.
December 4th, 2017 08:48
Michael Edwards said:
Still a way to go - delightful write Fay.
December 4th, 2017 08:48
Sweet Potion.
Accidental Poet said:
And from some friendships a love emerges to test the hands of time. Great poem Fay.
December 3rd, 2017 10:52
Accidental Poet said:
And from some friendships a love emerges to test the hands of time. Great poem Fay.
December 3rd, 2017 10:52
Sweet Potion.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Poetess Fay...
Love the quote!
You never cease to amaze
me! This write is exquisite!
I wanted to quote a favorite
line, but I can’t. The entire
poem is my favorite. So it’s
going right into faves!
December 3rd, 2017 08:36
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Poetess Fay...
Love the quote!
You never cease to amaze
me! This write is exquisite!
I wanted to quote a favorite
line, but I can’t. The entire
poem is my favorite. So it’s
going right into faves!
December 3rd, 2017 08:36
Sweet Potion.
Michael Edwards said:
Just love the way you use the language but I think I\'ve said that before - another great work Fay.
December 3rd, 2017 05:27
Michael Edwards said:
Just love the way you use the language but I think I\'ve said that before - another great work Fay.
December 3rd, 2017 05:27
Magical.
myself and me said:
Your pen like a magic wand, spell the magic words in the air, turned into this beautiful poem.
December 1st, 2017 19:57
myself and me said:
Your pen like a magic wand, spell the magic words in the air, turned into this beautiful poem.
December 1st, 2017 19:57
Magical.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another very elegant and symbiotic Poem \'n Pic. The picture lifted us from the Mundane to the Magical and each triplet lifted our Hearts & Minds higher & higher ! You are altogether lovely ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Love BRIAN
December 1st, 2017 15:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another very elegant and symbiotic Poem \'n Pic. The picture lifted us from the Mundane to the Magical and each triplet lifted our Hearts & Minds higher & higher ! You are altogether lovely ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Love BRIAN
December 1st, 2017 15:30
Magical.
Michael Edwards said:
It is indeed magical Fay and love the form in which it is drafted.
December 1st, 2017 13:33
Michael Edwards said:
It is indeed magical Fay and love the form in which it is drafted.
December 1st, 2017 13:33
Magical.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. as if a woodland walk. Erm, I enjoyed some local woods, until I fell into a bog! Did I, or is it that Orchi teasing again?! heehee.
December 1st, 2017 10:31
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. as if a woodland walk. Erm, I enjoyed some local woods, until I fell into a bog! Did I, or is it that Orchi teasing again?! heehee.
December 1st, 2017 10:31
Magical.
Accidental Poet said:
Fay, I love how you can look at any photograph and describe it as if you are there. Excellent imagery. Thanks for sharing.
December 1st, 2017 08:43
Accidental Poet said:
Fay, I love how you can look at any photograph and describe it as if you are there. Excellent imagery. Thanks for sharing.
December 1st, 2017 08:43
Magical.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Poetess Fay,
This write of yours is
an extraordinary gem...
...or should I say pearl...
Interesting style of writing!
The last four lines, in particular,
resonate for me!
Beautifully executed!
Thank you!
December 1st, 2017 08:01
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Poetess Fay,
This write of yours is
an extraordinary gem...
...or should I say pearl...
Interesting style of writing!
The last four lines, in particular,
resonate for me!
Beautifully executed!
Thank you!
December 1st, 2017 08:01
Magical.
Louis Gibbs said:
I love the way you are experimenting with different forms, Fay. This one is a unique beauty. Connecting with nature can be very healing, indeed! Well done.
December 1st, 2017 07:44
Louis Gibbs said:
I love the way you are experimenting with different forms, Fay. This one is a unique beauty. Connecting with nature can be very healing, indeed! Well done.
December 1st, 2017 07:44
Seize and See.
FredPeyer said:
Carpe diem! Beautifully expressed, interesting, incredible structure! Fay, you keep on surprising me with your excellent writing and artistic flair!
November 30th, 2017 13:27
FredPeyer said:
Carpe diem! Beautifully expressed, interesting, incredible structure! Fay, you keep on surprising me with your excellent writing and artistic flair!
November 30th, 2017 13:27
Seize and See.
Michael Edwards said:
Really struck with this - great write Fay
November 30th, 2017 10:28
Michael Edwards said:
Really struck with this - great write Fay
November 30th, 2017 10:28
Seize and See.
Louis Gibbs said:
I too love Eckhart Tolle\'s philosophy, and have read all of his work. This poem is a departure for you, style-wise, Fay. Congratulations on branching out and trying new forms! I like this one..
November 30th, 2017 09:27
Louis Gibbs said:
I too love Eckhart Tolle\'s philosophy, and have read all of his work. This poem is a departure for you, style-wise, Fay. Congratulations on branching out and trying new forms! I like this one..
November 30th, 2017 09:27
Seize and See.
myself and me said:
Live at this moment, live for now sounds simple, but most of the time, we spend too much time worry about the non-exist future. Best philosophy for living a easy life.
November 30th, 2017 08:30
myself and me said:
Live at this moment, live for now sounds simple, but most of the time, we spend too much time worry about the non-exist future. Best philosophy for living a easy life.
November 30th, 2017 08:30
Found Absent.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fay showing the sadness and horror that was once (and may be still is (sweatshops)) part of an awful norm.
November 30th, 2017 02:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fay showing the sadness and horror that was once (and may be still is (sweatshops)) part of an awful norm.
November 30th, 2017 02:01
Found Absent.
FredPeyer said:
A picture of a thousand words and a poem that paints a picture!
Incredible, Fay, well done!
I don\'t want to comment on the subject, there would not be enough space! It was wrong and inhuman!
November 29th, 2017 18:16
FredPeyer said:
A picture of a thousand words and a poem that paints a picture!
Incredible, Fay, well done!
I don\'t want to comment on the subject, there would not be enough space! It was wrong and inhuman!
November 29th, 2017 18:16
Found Absent.
Louis Gibbs said:
The history of humanity is grim, indeed! Well expressed here, Fay, in all its brutality.
November 29th, 2017 15:05
Louis Gibbs said:
The history of humanity is grim, indeed! Well expressed here, Fay, in all its brutality.
November 29th, 2017 15:05
Found Absent.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for reminding us FAY of the price paid in the PAST for cheap ENERGY ! The UNIONS did a lot to remove \"Child Labour\" in the UK and improve working conditions for Adults ! Today we mostly use ELECTRICITY but give scant to how it is produced ! There is always a high \"human price\" to be paid for primary sources of ENERGY ~ Coal ~ Oil ~ Gas but Nuclear Wind Power & Hydroelectricity are safer and cleaner. Your poem made me very sad and reminded me of todays refugees who often perish by escaping in BOATS ! Beautiful Structure but a sad Subject ! Please check my \"QUICKIES\" and please add a Poem to my FUSION on CHRISTMAS ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
November 29th, 2017 12:52
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for reminding us FAY of the price paid in the PAST for cheap ENERGY ! The UNIONS did a lot to remove \"Child Labour\" in the UK and improve working conditions for Adults ! Today we mostly use ELECTRICITY but give scant to how it is produced ! There is always a high \"human price\" to be paid for primary sources of ENERGY ~ Coal ~ Oil ~ Gas but Nuclear Wind Power & Hydroelectricity are safer and cleaner. Your poem made me very sad and reminded me of todays refugees who often perish by escaping in BOATS ! Beautiful Structure but a sad Subject ! Please check my \"QUICKIES\" and please add a Poem to my FUSION on CHRISTMAS ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
November 29th, 2017 12:52
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