Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
I Saw Him.
Lauraš» said:
My dear Poetess Fay...
A beautifully penned verse! You never disappoint us! You always grace us with wonderful writings! Your carefully choice of words for this verse about the majestic beauty of your subject is extraordinary! They enhance its beauty! Thank you!
November 18th, 2017 13:04
Lauraš» said:
My dear Poetess Fay...
A beautifully penned verse! You never disappoint us! You always grace us with wonderful writings! Your carefully choice of words for this verse about the majestic beauty of your subject is extraordinary! They enhance its beauty! Thank you!
November 18th, 2017 13:04
I Saw Him.
orchidee said:
Makes it sound real though, as if you did actually see him.
Meanwhile, my \'cougar\' makes me swoon. But we won\'t go into that! And what am I doing, knowing about such things?! heehee.
Well, I\'m married to Kate Price now, supposedly. An arranged marriage made by some other poets on here.
November 18th, 2017 09:43
orchidee said:
Makes it sound real though, as if you did actually see him.
Meanwhile, my \'cougar\' makes me swoon. But we won\'t go into that! And what am I doing, knowing about such things?! heehee.
Well, I\'m married to Kate Price now, supposedly. An arranged marriage made by some other poets on here.
November 18th, 2017 09:43
I Saw Him.
Louis Gibbs said:
Nothing in nature fascinates and inspires awe quite like a great cat species does. Regal and threatening by their very presence. You capture both the majesty and respect of it beautifully here, Fay!
November 18th, 2017 09:32
Louis Gibbs said:
Nothing in nature fascinates and inspires awe quite like a great cat species does. Regal and threatening by their very presence. You capture both the majesty and respect of it beautifully here, Fay!
November 18th, 2017 09:32
I Saw Him.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Yes indeed FAY ~ some animals by their very presence inspire awe an admiration ! Elephants ~ Giraffes ~ Lions ~ Alligators and Eagles all alfresco of course ! BUT top of my list would also be the COUGER ~ magnificent ! Perfect symbiosis of POEM & PIC ~ Yours as always ~ BRIAN
November 18th, 2017 08:09
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Yes indeed FAY ~ some animals by their very presence inspire awe an admiration ! Elephants ~ Giraffes ~ Lions ~ Alligators and Eagles all alfresco of course ! BUT top of my list would also be the COUGER ~ magnificent ! Perfect symbiosis of POEM & PIC ~ Yours as always ~ BRIAN
November 18th, 2017 08:09
I Saw Him.
Michael Edwards said:
A poet writes from experience, a great poet writes from experience and imagination. You\'re a great poet Fay
November 18th, 2017 06:28
Michael Edwards said:
A poet writes from experience, a great poet writes from experience and imagination. You\'re a great poet Fay
November 18th, 2017 06:28
I Saw Him.
kevin browne said:
how you penned this has beautiful imagery all the way through to the to of the mountain which then I could see all. gorgeous poem, Fay Slimm.
November 18th, 2017 05:54
kevin browne said:
how you penned this has beautiful imagery all the way through to the to of the mountain which then I could see all. gorgeous poem, Fay Slimm.
November 18th, 2017 05:54
Making Believe.
Christina8 said:
A wonderful and sweet poem, Fay! As lovers, they can sweeten their waiting for quite a while I suppose! Perfect picture to match your description of them!
November 17th, 2017 14:04
Christina8 said:
A wonderful and sweet poem, Fay! As lovers, they can sweeten their waiting for quite a while I suppose! Perfect picture to match your description of them!
November 17th, 2017 14:04
Making Believe.
Louis Gibbs said:
And what a sweet way to pass the time it is. The harsh can come later, as it always does.
A well written and well presented poem here, Fay!
November 17th, 2017 10:18
Louis Gibbs said:
And what a sweet way to pass the time it is. The harsh can come later, as it always does.
A well written and well presented poem here, Fay!
November 17th, 2017 10:18
Making Believe.
myself and me said:
Such a beautiful poem make the view so romantic.
November 17th, 2017 08:39
myself and me said:
Such a beautiful poem make the view so romantic.
November 17th, 2017 08:39
Making Believe.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Poems inspired by Pictures are always an inspiration ! I adore the experience of Love Alfresco and your poem stirred memories long past ~ and recent beach interludes with ANGELA ! Thanks for caring & sharing and \"love warming\" a very cold and frosty morning ! We love all your poems & pictures (especially this one !) Love Brian & Angela XOX
November 17th, 2017 03:54
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Poems inspired by Pictures are always an inspiration ! I adore the experience of Love Alfresco and your poem stirred memories long past ~ and recent beach interludes with ANGELA ! Thanks for caring & sharing and \"love warming\" a very cold and frosty morning ! We love all your poems & pictures (especially this one !) Love Brian & Angela XOX
November 17th, 2017 03:54
Making Believe.
Goldfinch60 said:
That sweetness can be wonderful Fay. Good write as usual.
November 17th, 2017 03:32
Goldfinch60 said:
That sweetness can be wonderful Fay. Good write as usual.
November 17th, 2017 03:32
Sunday-Ways.
Seek said:
For me, a wonderful journey down memory lane. Thank you for sharing, Fay!
November 17th, 2017 01:01
Seek said:
For me, a wonderful journey down memory lane. Thank you for sharing, Fay!
November 17th, 2017 01:01
Sunday-Ways.
FredPeyer said:
Sunday today just isn\'t anymore what it used to be, but your tongue in cheek poem brought it back! Thanks, Fay!
November 16th, 2017 21:35
FredPeyer said:
Sunday today just isn\'t anymore what it used to be, but your tongue in cheek poem brought it back! Thanks, Fay!
November 16th, 2017 21:35
Back There
FredPeyer said:
This is the time of the year when being away from home and family is so much harder. You captured the longing beautifully, Fay!
November 16th, 2017 20:29
FredPeyer said:
This is the time of the year when being away from home and family is so much harder. You captured the longing beautifully, Fay!
November 16th, 2017 20:29
Sunday-Ways.
Louis Gibbs said:
A tough life indeed, your poem describes. Those were the days ... I suppose.
A well-formed and presented tribute to the good times of life, Fay!
November 16th, 2017 10:31
Louis Gibbs said:
A tough life indeed, your poem describes. Those were the days ... I suppose.
A well-formed and presented tribute to the good times of life, Fay!
November 16th, 2017 10:31
Sunday-Ways.
myself and me said:
such a relaxing and joyful Sunday to enjoy. I am in Sunday mood already.
November 16th, 2017 09:14
myself and me said:
such a relaxing and joyful Sunday to enjoy. I am in Sunday mood already.
November 16th, 2017 09:14
Sunday-Ways.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, those were the days of my youth, life is different now.
November 16th, 2017 09:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, those were the days of my youth, life is different now.
November 16th, 2017 09:02
Sunday-Ways.
Michael Edwards said:
Just had to smile at this one written with your usual flair for the language but with a wry comical twist.
November 16th, 2017 05:50
Michael Edwards said:
Just had to smile at this one written with your usual flair for the language but with a wry comical twist.
November 16th, 2017 05:50
Back There
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and great feelings within your words Fay, I do hope and pray that all will \"be there once more\".
November 16th, 2017 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and great feelings within your words Fay, I do hope and pray that all will \"be there once more\".
November 16th, 2017 01:26
Duo Ballet.
FredPeyer said:
\'I saw wisdom delivering itself to fate\' I see wisdom in your poems. You really do have a way with words, Fay!
November 15th, 2017 18:07
FredPeyer said:
\'I saw wisdom delivering itself to fate\' I see wisdom in your poems. You really do have a way with words, Fay!
November 15th, 2017 18:07
Back There
lasergraph said:
Great write, one can only imagine their yearning for home and all things normal.
November 15th, 2017 17:01
lasergraph said:
Great write, one can only imagine their yearning for home and all things normal.
November 15th, 2017 17:01
Back There
myself and me said:
A homesick season for those who can not reunion with their families. Beautifully penned.
November 15th, 2017 11:32
myself and me said:
A homesick season for those who can not reunion with their families. Beautifully penned.
November 15th, 2017 11:32
Back There
Lauraš» said:
Great write Fay!
Of course, this is every
soldierās plight!
It reminds me of my fatherās
WWII stories and his
yearning to go home
to see his mom and his
future bride! He finally
did make it...walking from
Northern Italy to Southern
Italy! Thank you for the
memories!
November 15th, 2017 06:52
Lauraš» said:
Great write Fay!
Of course, this is every
soldierās plight!
It reminds me of my fatherās
WWII stories and his
yearning to go home
to see his mom and his
future bride! He finally
did make it...walking from
Northern Italy to Southern
Italy! Thank you for the
memories!
November 15th, 2017 06:52
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