Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Silent Music.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I love flowers FAY and your sweet Poem reminds us that although at their most beautiful in bed ! They retain their beauty ~ and fragrance ~ if lovingly cut to grace indoors ! You are a graceful Gardenia in my imagination ~ Yours as ever BRIAN. Love the subtlety of your visual ~ awesome B.
November 13th, 2017 17:39
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I love flowers FAY and your sweet Poem reminds us that although at their most beautiful in bed ! They retain their beauty ~ and fragrance ~ if lovingly cut to grace indoors ! You are a graceful Gardenia in my imagination ~ Yours as ever BRIAN. Love the subtlety of your visual ~ awesome B.
November 13th, 2017 17:39
Silent Music.
Michael Edwards said:
I can hear and smell the odoratum Fay - lovely subject, lovely poem.
November 13th, 2017 09:16
Michael Edwards said:
I can hear and smell the odoratum Fay - lovely subject, lovely poem.
November 13th, 2017 09:16
Silent Music.
Goldfinch60 said:
That silent mood of flowers can awe inspiring, like this poem.
November 13th, 2017 08:58
Goldfinch60 said:
That silent mood of flowers can awe inspiring, like this poem.
November 13th, 2017 08:58
Silent Music.
Christina8 said:
A beautiful write, Fay! Sweetpeas and lilies sound delightful!
November 13th, 2017 08:03
Christina8 said:
A beautiful write, Fay! Sweetpeas and lilies sound delightful!
November 13th, 2017 08:03
Our Tune.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write, it is so wonderful when the fruits collected from the joys of walking in the countryside can be converted into a wonderful nectar. I used to make my own wine.
November 13th, 2017 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write, it is so wonderful when the fruits collected from the joys of walking in the countryside can be converted into a wonderful nectar. I used to make my own wine.
November 13th, 2017 01:40
Our Tune.
dusk arising said:
Oh the joys of home wine making, the pleasures, and disappointments too which somehow reinforce those joys. Memory\'s of elderflower champagne\'s, crisp light \'perfection\'.
\"in sip-stolen unhurry\" raised a smile in me. A lovely joyous write at this melancholy memory day.
November 12th, 2017 15:39
dusk arising said:
Oh the joys of home wine making, the pleasures, and disappointments too which somehow reinforce those joys. Memory\'s of elderflower champagne\'s, crisp light \'perfection\'.
\"in sip-stolen unhurry\" raised a smile in me. A lovely joyous write at this melancholy memory day.
November 12th, 2017 15:39
Our Tune.
Christina8 said:
This is a beautiful poem, Fay! So descriptive and your writing just takes me to another place!
November 12th, 2017 12:58
Christina8 said:
This is a beautiful poem, Fay! So descriptive and your writing just takes me to another place!
November 12th, 2017 12:58
Our Tune.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WINE which maketh glad the heart of Man and stirs a Woman\'s memory ! Thanks for caring FAY ~ Lovely symbiosis of PIC & POEM ........... AGAIN ! Yours for ever BRIAN.
November 12th, 2017 11:41
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WINE which maketh glad the heart of Man and stirs a Woman\'s memory ! Thanks for caring FAY ~ Lovely symbiosis of PIC & POEM ........... AGAIN ! Yours for ever BRIAN.
November 12th, 2017 11:41
Our Tune.
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. My tune may improve after a sherry nectar or three! lol.
November 12th, 2017 09:39
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. My tune may improve after a sherry nectar or three! lol.
November 12th, 2017 09:39
Our Tune.
Accidental Poet said:
A fine write is much like a fine wine Fay. We savor the read as it stimulates our senses and our taste buds of emotions. Superbly written and tasted.
November 12th, 2017 08:58
Accidental Poet said:
A fine write is much like a fine wine Fay. We savor the read as it stimulates our senses and our taste buds of emotions. Superbly written and tasted.
November 12th, 2017 08:58
Our Tune.
Michael Edwards said:
Country wines - they have something not captured in their more lauded grape cousins. Superb writing Fay.
Also great photo and she is holding the glass correctly - so few know how or why the stem is so important.
November 12th, 2017 08:47
Michael Edwards said:
Country wines - they have something not captured in their more lauded grape cousins. Superb writing Fay.
Also great photo and she is holding the glass correctly - so few know how or why the stem is so important.
November 12th, 2017 08:47
Our Tune.
kevin browne said:
your stunning array of wonderful wording blew me out the water. I love this and have read a couple time now. beautifully written, Fay Slimm.
November 12th, 2017 08:39
kevin browne said:
your stunning array of wonderful wording blew me out the water. I love this and have read a couple time now. beautifully written, Fay Slimm.
November 12th, 2017 08:39
Our Tune.
Syd said:
Reminds me of my father. Always making wine. Nice write Fay - Syd
November 12th, 2017 06:20
Syd said:
Reminds me of my father. Always making wine. Nice write Fay - Syd
November 12th, 2017 06:20
Our Tune.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, you are speaking my language here! Love that picture too! Your words are a beautiful tribute to the nectar of the Gods!
November 12th, 2017 03:46
FredPeyer said:
Fay, you are speaking my language here! Love that picture too! Your words are a beautiful tribute to the nectar of the Gods!
November 12th, 2017 03:46
Never Forget.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, this is the most eloquent and beautiful tribute to our fallen heroes I have read. Thank you!
November 11th, 2017 17:10
FredPeyer said:
Fay, this is the most eloquent and beautiful tribute to our fallen heroes I have read. Thank you!
November 11th, 2017 17:10
Never Forget.
orchidee said:
A sensitive write and tribute Fay. \'Sing sweetly little birds now in Paradise, though you arrived there early\'.
November 11th, 2017 09:10
orchidee said:
A sensitive write and tribute Fay. \'Sing sweetly little birds now in Paradise, though you arrived there early\'.
November 11th, 2017 09:10
Never Forget.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
ROLL OUT THE BARREL FAY ~ The songs of the 1st & 2nd World Wars are forever etched on our memories. We sang them all (The Short and the Tall and the Small) on a recent trip on the Thames with the Pearly Kings & Queens ~ no hymn sheets everyone instinctively knew the words ! I\'ve never been in the Military but I am a Queen\'s Scout ~ an organisation in which GIN GAN GOOLY etc plays its part. We have Remembrance Day Services planned for tomorrow ~ we can FORGIVE ~ but we must never FORGET ~ THEIR UNTIMATE SACRIFICE for OUR FREEDOM ~ AMEN ~ Yours as ever BRIAN.
November 11th, 2017 09:08
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
ROLL OUT THE BARREL FAY ~ The songs of the 1st & 2nd World Wars are forever etched on our memories. We sang them all (The Short and the Tall and the Small) on a recent trip on the Thames with the Pearly Kings & Queens ~ no hymn sheets everyone instinctively knew the words ! I\'ve never been in the Military but I am a Queen\'s Scout ~ an organisation in which GIN GAN GOOLY etc plays its part. We have Remembrance Day Services planned for tomorrow ~ we can FORGIVE ~ but we must never FORGET ~ THEIR UNTIMATE SACRIFICE for OUR FREEDOM ~ AMEN ~ Yours as ever BRIAN.
November 11th, 2017 09:08
Never Forget.
Louis Gibbs said:
You have portrayed with beauty one of man\'s ugliest pastimes, Fay. War is the definition of insanity, yet is and has always been man\'s favorite endeavor. Go figure!
Well done as usual, my friend! I love the attention to form.
November 11th, 2017 08:32
Louis Gibbs said:
You have portrayed with beauty one of man\'s ugliest pastimes, Fay. War is the definition of insanity, yet is and has always been man\'s favorite endeavor. Go figure!
Well done as usual, my friend! I love the attention to form.
November 11th, 2017 08:32
Never Forget.
Laura🌻 said:
Fay,
Once again you’ve expressed the message you want to impart
to the reader with
eloquence and pure
heart! Thank you for the
write my dear poetess!
~Laura~
November 11th, 2017 07:02
Laura🌻 said:
Fay,
Once again you’ve expressed the message you want to impart
to the reader with
eloquence and pure
heart! Thank you for the
write my dear poetess!
~Laura~
November 11th, 2017 07:02
Never Forget.
Michael Edwards said:
You have captured so well the spirit of the past and in doing so the hope for the future - touching write Fay.
November 11th, 2017 04:32
Michael Edwards said:
You have captured so well the spirit of the past and in doing so the hope for the future - touching write Fay.
November 11th, 2017 04:32
Today\'s Poem.
Michael Edwards said:
What was I thinking of? I nearly missed this gem Fay.
November 10th, 2017 17:04
Michael Edwards said:
What was I thinking of? I nearly missed this gem Fay.
November 10th, 2017 17:04
Today\'s Poem.
MendedFences27 said:
A beautiful write it is, Fay.\"Bird-agility,\" \"feathers reflect to perfection,\" \"natures sessions of fresh happenings.\" - Loved those three. Also loved the Open and closing lines. Oh to have the Sun as your morning muse. _ Phil A.
November 10th, 2017 15:53
MendedFences27 said:
A beautiful write it is, Fay.\"Bird-agility,\" \"feathers reflect to perfection,\" \"natures sessions of fresh happenings.\" - Loved those three. Also loved the Open and closing lines. Oh to have the Sun as your morning muse. _ Phil A.
November 10th, 2017 15:53
Today\'s Poem.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
As so often FAY ~ your poem paints a perfect picture of natural Cornwall ! It is also complemented by an elegant photograph. This poem enables me to visualise ~ the last red rose of Autumn ~ nodding marigolds and the singular Sparrow ~ drinking from dew-wet geranium heads ! You have unique Poetic Skills which we all admire ~ but none can emulate ! You are both a hallmark and an encouragement. We all love you FAY ~ just for being you ! Yours forever BRIAN.
November 10th, 2017 15:04
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
As so often FAY ~ your poem paints a perfect picture of natural Cornwall ! It is also complemented by an elegant photograph. This poem enables me to visualise ~ the last red rose of Autumn ~ nodding marigolds and the singular Sparrow ~ drinking from dew-wet geranium heads ! You have unique Poetic Skills which we all admire ~ but none can emulate ! You are both a hallmark and an encouragement. We all love you FAY ~ just for being you ! Yours forever BRIAN.
November 10th, 2017 15:04
Today\'s Poem.
Louis Gibbs said:
I have no doubt you have been here many, many times, Fay. An old and wise soul you are, revealed in the beauty of your work. This is but another fine example.
November 10th, 2017 11:28
Louis Gibbs said:
I have no doubt you have been here many, many times, Fay. An old and wise soul you are, revealed in the beauty of your work. This is but another fine example.
November 10th, 2017 11:28
Today\'s Poem.
myself and me said:
What a beautiful, peaceful autumn morning to enjoy. Thank you.
November 10th, 2017 09:48
myself and me said:
What a beautiful, peaceful autumn morning to enjoy. Thank you.
November 10th, 2017 09:48
Today\'s Poem.
Goldfinch60 said:
Yet another wonderful write with great imagery.
November 10th, 2017 09:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Yet another wonderful write with great imagery.
November 10th, 2017 09:04
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