Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Unexplained.
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully said, Fay! I think we who are in the Fall or even Winter of life, all have this yearning for Spring sometimes. You expressed it so well. And while we may not follow the other star yet, we do know that eventually we will be flying together again.
October 27th, 2017 11:55
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully said, Fay! I think we who are in the Fall or even Winter of life, all have this yearning for Spring sometimes. You expressed it so well. And while we may not follow the other star yet, we do know that eventually we will be flying together again.
October 27th, 2017 11:55
Unexplained.
Louis Gibbs said:
Your poem touches a deep chord in reflecting such a great loss, Fay. \"Why was one star made to fly in unexplained orbit yet its mate may not follow?\" says it all quite beautifully!
October 27th, 2017 10:04
Louis Gibbs said:
Your poem touches a deep chord in reflecting such a great loss, Fay. \"Why was one star made to fly in unexplained orbit yet its mate may not follow?\" says it all quite beautifully!
October 27th, 2017 10:04
Unexplained.
myself and me said:
The last stanza caught me. Beautiful writing.
October 27th, 2017 08:03
myself and me said:
The last stanza caught me. Beautiful writing.
October 27th, 2017 08:03
Unexplained.
Laura🌻 said:
Fay,
Your writes are amazing!
This one does make us wonder and ponder
why one goes
and the other one stays!
My mom asks that
every single day!
Why he and not me?
October 27th, 2017 04:00
Laura🌻 said:
Fay,
Your writes are amazing!
This one does make us wonder and ponder
why one goes
and the other one stays!
My mom asks that
every single day!
Why he and not me?
October 27th, 2017 04:00
Behind and Between.
Goldfinch60 said:
That veil is so thin and some can see through it. Good write once more Fay.
October 27th, 2017 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
That veil is so thin and some can see through it. Good write once more Fay.
October 27th, 2017 00:50
Behind and Between.
Heather T said:
This other-worldly offering pairs well with a book by Dr. Hugh Ross that I\'m nibbling on for the second time regarding the transdimensionality of God. Stunning work, Fay.
October 26th, 2017 20:00
Heather T said:
This other-worldly offering pairs well with a book by Dr. Hugh Ross that I\'m nibbling on for the second time regarding the transdimensionality of God. Stunning work, Fay.
October 26th, 2017 20:00
Behind and Between.
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Through the thinnest of veils there exists worlds behind and between\" ... Speaks volumes on the perception of the seeker. The phrase says it all so succinctly and so poetically well, Fay. I do believe your and your muse share my conception of this illusory realm. This one must go into my favorites. Congratulations on this treasure!
October 26th, 2017 08:46
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Through the thinnest of veils there exists worlds behind and between\" ... Speaks volumes on the perception of the seeker. The phrase says it all so succinctly and so poetically well, Fay. I do believe your and your muse share my conception of this illusory realm. This one must go into my favorites. Congratulations on this treasure!
October 26th, 2017 08:46
Behind and Between.
myself and me said:
The words in your poem are so accurate and elegant. So much pleasure to read.
October 26th, 2017 07:51
myself and me said:
The words in your poem are so accurate and elegant. So much pleasure to read.
October 26th, 2017 07:51
Behind and Between.
Michael Edwards said:
Supreme poetry as ever - great Fay
October 26th, 2017 07:30
Michael Edwards said:
Supreme poetry as ever - great Fay
October 26th, 2017 07:30
Behind and Between.
Laura🌻 said:
Awesome write Fay!
This is a beyond the beyond read!
There’s a lot to think about!
Enjoyed it very much!
You are truly gifted!
Thank you!
October 26th, 2017 06:57
Laura🌻 said:
Awesome write Fay!
This is a beyond the beyond read!
There’s a lot to think about!
Enjoyed it very much!
You are truly gifted!
Thank you!
October 26th, 2017 06:57
Behind and Between.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, I know you are a good writer, but you went way beyond being good. This is \'out of this world\', absolutely no choice, have to make it a favorite!
October 26th, 2017 04:09
FredPeyer said:
Fay, I know you are a good writer, but you went way beyond being good. This is \'out of this world\', absolutely no choice, have to make it a favorite!
October 26th, 2017 04:09
Quenchers.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Fay about one of the treasures of the English countryside.
October 26th, 2017 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Fay about one of the treasures of the English countryside.
October 26th, 2017 00:50
Quenchers.
ron parrish aka wordman said:
and as a country boy i can appreciate it
October 25th, 2017 21:19
ron parrish aka wordman said:
and as a country boy i can appreciate it
October 25th, 2017 21:19
Quenchers.
Christina8 said:
\"produce collected in baskets\' so nostalgic for me because of my grandmas farm-how I miss picking berries. Always a joy reading your richly worded poems!
October 25th, 2017 17:18
Christina8 said:
\"produce collected in baskets\' so nostalgic for me because of my grandmas farm-how I miss picking berries. Always a joy reading your richly worded poems!
October 25th, 2017 17:18
Quenchers.
myself and me said:
It is always an enjoyment to read your poem. I have those berry bushes in my backyard, the berries are all gone by now.
October 25th, 2017 14:04
myself and me said:
It is always an enjoyment to read your poem. I have those berry bushes in my backyard, the berries are all gone by now.
October 25th, 2017 14:04
Quenchers.
FredPeyer said:
A great poem, Fay, brings me back to my childhood and our blackberry bushes in the back of the garden!
October 25th, 2017 10:49
FredPeyer said:
A great poem, Fay, brings me back to my childhood and our blackberry bushes in the back of the garden!
October 25th, 2017 10:49
Quenchers.
lasergraph said:
I feel quenched already. I love this little treat. A cobbler might be nice too. Now I am thinking about food.
October 25th, 2017 09:52
lasergraph said:
I feel quenched already. I love this little treat. A cobbler might be nice too. Now I am thinking about food.
October 25th, 2017 09:52
Quenchers.
Laura🌻 said:
Unfortunately, we depend upon the fruit markets in the city to provide us with this delicious berry!
Fay, your picture and description of this blackberry is inviting! I’ll have to check the market and buy some.
My 95 year old mom loves them. She remembers when she was little walking to her grandma ‘s farmhouse. Along the way she’d pick and eat these luscious blackberries!
~Laura ~
October 25th, 2017 09:05
Laura🌻 said:
Unfortunately, we depend upon the fruit markets in the city to provide us with this delicious berry!
Fay, your picture and description of this blackberry is inviting! I’ll have to check the market and buy some.
My 95 year old mom loves them. She remembers when she was little walking to her grandma ‘s farmhouse. Along the way she’d pick and eat these luscious blackberries!
~Laura ~
October 25th, 2017 09:05
Quenchers.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ although the SE of England is a Concrete Jungle ~ compared with Rural Cornwall ~ there is a woodland area behind where my MUM lives ~ replete with BLACKBERRY bushes. Full of luscious berries in the Summer ! I always pick in gloves ! My MUM has Apple Trees (Bramley) and she miraculously (all mums have the magic touch) turns her apples and my blacks into B & A Suet Puds ~ Jam ~ Pies etc all of which are my favourites ! Thank GOD for FREEZERS ! Love all your Poems & Pictures FAY they are so so evocative ~ Love you too ! BRIAN
October 25th, 2017 08:24
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ although the SE of England is a Concrete Jungle ~ compared with Rural Cornwall ~ there is a woodland area behind where my MUM lives ~ replete with BLACKBERRY bushes. Full of luscious berries in the Summer ! I always pick in gloves ! My MUM has Apple Trees (Bramley) and she miraculously (all mums have the magic touch) turns her apples and my blacks into B & A Suet Puds ~ Jam ~ Pies etc all of which are my favourites ! Thank GOD for FREEZERS ! Love all your Poems & Pictures FAY they are so so evocative ~ Love you too ! BRIAN
October 25th, 2017 08:24
Quenchers.
Michael Edwards said:
One of my favourite fruits and free by the bucket load round here - such a great piece Fay.
October 25th, 2017 07:54
Michael Edwards said:
One of my favourite fruits and free by the bucket load round here - such a great piece Fay.
October 25th, 2017 07:54
Quenchers.
kevin browne said:
gosh, that was thirsty work reading this quenching poem. great work, Fay.
October 25th, 2017 06:43
kevin browne said:
gosh, that was thirsty work reading this quenching poem. great work, Fay.
October 25th, 2017 06:43
Shore-Songs.
FredPeyer said:
Great writing, Fay! We don\'t have high tides here, but winter can bring 50\' waves to the North Shore, making it a surfers paradise. And you described it perfectly!
October 24th, 2017 18:28
FredPeyer said:
Great writing, Fay! We don\'t have high tides here, but winter can bring 50\' waves to the North Shore, making it a surfers paradise. And you described it perfectly!
October 24th, 2017 18:28
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