Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
I Am Cloud.
kevin browne said:
indeed, a very weathering poem, let\'s hope more sun shines through your cloud. I love this work, Fay, very imaginative writing.
November 21st, 2017 05:04
kevin browne said:
indeed, a very weathering poem, let\'s hope more sun shines through your cloud. I love this work, Fay, very imaginative writing.
November 21st, 2017 05:04
I Am Cloud.
Accidental Poet said:
Clouds have a life of their own, do they not? Wonderful piece Fay.
November 21st, 2017 04:27
Accidental Poet said:
Clouds have a life of their own, do they not? Wonderful piece Fay.
November 21st, 2017 04:27
Caught.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ First let me say ~ I love your new PHOTO ~ very attractive ~ looks like a Lady ready to party @ CHRISTMAS ! I love the simplicity (and the awesomeness) of BUBBLES ~ so elegant and yet so fragile (like some Ladies I know !) Reflections in Bubbles are always ethereal and of course the disappear when \"The Bubble bursts\" just like in real life ! All the KIDS I know (in my Extended Family & at Church) love Bubbles and I always give them those bubble making kits which keeps them amused for hours ! Thanks for sharing ~ when I read you poem ~ I blew some Bubbles of my own ~ I\'m just a kid at heart ~ Bubble Hugs ~ BRIAN OOOOOOO (A Bubble for each day !)
November 20th, 2017 18:34
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ First let me say ~ I love your new PHOTO ~ very attractive ~ looks like a Lady ready to party @ CHRISTMAS ! I love the simplicity (and the awesomeness) of BUBBLES ~ so elegant and yet so fragile (like some Ladies I know !) Reflections in Bubbles are always ethereal and of course the disappear when \"The Bubble bursts\" just like in real life ! All the KIDS I know (in my Extended Family & at Church) love Bubbles and I always give them those bubble making kits which keeps them amused for hours ! Thanks for sharing ~ when I read you poem ~ I blew some Bubbles of my own ~ I\'m just a kid at heart ~ Bubble Hugs ~ BRIAN OOOOOOO (A Bubble for each day !)
November 20th, 2017 18:34
Fervour.
FredPeyer said:
And that \'emotional fire\' in you keeps on burning very brightly!
November 20th, 2017 17:18
FredPeyer said:
And that \'emotional fire\' in you keeps on burning very brightly!
November 20th, 2017 17:18
Fervour.
myself and me said:
Great, just great. no matter what subject your pen touched.
November 20th, 2017 10:28
myself and me said:
Great, just great. no matter what subject your pen touched.
November 20th, 2017 10:28
I Saw Him.
myself and me said:
You describe the experience in such a tremendous way.
November 20th, 2017 10:03
myself and me said:
You describe the experience in such a tremendous way.
November 20th, 2017 10:03
Caught.
Louis Gibbs said:
Enchanting and well presented, Fay! Brings back childhood memories of awe at new experiences.
November 20th, 2017 09:45
Louis Gibbs said:
Enchanting and well presented, Fay! Brings back childhood memories of awe at new experiences.
November 20th, 2017 09:45
Caught.
kevin browne said:
you caught me and I fell straight into your bubble. great wording, Fay Slimm.
November 20th, 2017 04:18
kevin browne said:
you caught me and I fell straight into your bubble. great wording, Fay Slimm.
November 20th, 2017 04:18
Caught.
dusk arising said:
Yes you\'re right, they are awesome structures. I haven\'t seen any for quite some time. Your fine words evoke a memory, thank you.
November 20th, 2017 04:11
dusk arising said:
Yes you\'re right, they are awesome structures. I haven\'t seen any for quite some time. Your fine words evoke a memory, thank you.
November 20th, 2017 04:11
Caught.
Michael Edwards said:
The use of language can only come from the magic which enchants - love it Fay.
November 20th, 2017 04:04
Michael Edwards said:
The use of language can only come from the magic which enchants - love it Fay.
November 20th, 2017 04:04
Fervour.
Laura🌻 said:
A great read, Fay!
Enjoyed it very much!
Beautiful painting to accompany your great poem! Delightful dear Poetess!
November 19th, 2017 21:00
Laura🌻 said:
A great read, Fay!
Enjoyed it very much!
Beautiful painting to accompany your great poem! Delightful dear Poetess!
November 19th, 2017 21:00
Fervour.
Christina8 said:
Very good poem. I enjoyed reading it. Made me think!
November 19th, 2017 15:20
Christina8 said:
Very good poem. I enjoyed reading it. Made me think!
November 19th, 2017 15:20
Fervour.
dusk arising said:
Yeay tho i didst first see etchings of my forebears which didst portray the beauty within, images carved in bloody awe, upon their cave dwelling walls. Twas empathy for their passionate expression, inner emotional turmoil. To spear the beauty and tear its flesh for sustenance. Something within cries out.
Great fun to read \'olde worlde\' stuff.
November 19th, 2017 13:29
dusk arising said:
Yeay tho i didst first see etchings of my forebears which didst portray the beauty within, images carved in bloody awe, upon their cave dwelling walls. Twas empathy for their passionate expression, inner emotional turmoil. To spear the beauty and tear its flesh for sustenance. Something within cries out.
Great fun to read \'olde worlde\' stuff.
November 19th, 2017 13:29
Fervour.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
The moving hand doth write ~ and having writ moves on ~ because the MUSE ~ MOVED !
Just occasionally ~ when I read back a poem ~ I HAVE WRITTEN ~ I am amazed and put it down to \"The long~licked bones which actually maketh the sake of the poem !\" Sometimes the elegance of the resultant ODE is confirmed by comment by equally elegant Poets ~ such as yourself ! Because of the way MPS is organised each of our Poems only gets a 24 hour window so anything in excess of 5 comments is a bonus ! The oft castigated FUSION POEM has a much longer shelf life ! Mine on DRINK ~ unsurprisingly has 20 poems (MAX + 5) and comments ! The opportunity to comment is one of the many Blessings of MPS and ~ thank GOD ~ our fellow commentators are on the whole very gracious ! I love the nostalgia and pensiveness in the painting of my Maternal Great~granny ~ Yours graciously BRIAN.
November 19th, 2017 04:03
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
The moving hand doth write ~ and having writ moves on ~ because the MUSE ~ MOVED !
Just occasionally ~ when I read back a poem ~ I HAVE WRITTEN ~ I am amazed and put it down to \"The long~licked bones which actually maketh the sake of the poem !\" Sometimes the elegance of the resultant ODE is confirmed by comment by equally elegant Poets ~ such as yourself ! Because of the way MPS is organised each of our Poems only gets a 24 hour window so anything in excess of 5 comments is a bonus ! The oft castigated FUSION POEM has a much longer shelf life ! Mine on DRINK ~ unsurprisingly has 20 poems (MAX + 5) and comments ! The opportunity to comment is one of the many Blessings of MPS and ~ thank GOD ~ our fellow commentators are on the whole very gracious ! I love the nostalgia and pensiveness in the painting of my Maternal Great~granny ~ Yours graciously BRIAN.
November 19th, 2017 04:03
I Saw Him.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Poetess Fay...
A beautifully penned verse! You never disappoint us! You always grace us with wonderful writings! Your carefully choice of words for this verse about the majestic beauty of your subject is extraordinary! They enhance its beauty! Thank you!
November 18th, 2017 13:04
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Poetess Fay...
A beautifully penned verse! You never disappoint us! You always grace us with wonderful writings! Your carefully choice of words for this verse about the majestic beauty of your subject is extraordinary! They enhance its beauty! Thank you!
November 18th, 2017 13:04
I Saw Him.
orchidee said:
Makes it sound real though, as if you did actually see him.
Meanwhile, my \'cougar\' makes me swoon. But we won\'t go into that! And what am I doing, knowing about such things?! heehee.
Well, I\'m married to Kate Price now, supposedly. An arranged marriage made by some other poets on here.
November 18th, 2017 09:43
orchidee said:
Makes it sound real though, as if you did actually see him.
Meanwhile, my \'cougar\' makes me swoon. But we won\'t go into that! And what am I doing, knowing about such things?! heehee.
Well, I\'m married to Kate Price now, supposedly. An arranged marriage made by some other poets on here.
November 18th, 2017 09:43
I Saw Him.
Louis Gibbs said:
Nothing in nature fascinates and inspires awe quite like a great cat species does. Regal and threatening by their very presence. You capture both the majesty and respect of it beautifully here, Fay!
November 18th, 2017 09:32
Louis Gibbs said:
Nothing in nature fascinates and inspires awe quite like a great cat species does. Regal and threatening by their very presence. You capture both the majesty and respect of it beautifully here, Fay!
November 18th, 2017 09:32
I Saw Him.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Yes indeed FAY ~ some animals by their very presence inspire awe an admiration ! Elephants ~ Giraffes ~ Lions ~ Alligators and Eagles all alfresco of course ! BUT top of my list would also be the COUGER ~ magnificent ! Perfect symbiosis of POEM & PIC ~ Yours as always ~ BRIAN
November 18th, 2017 08:09
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Yes indeed FAY ~ some animals by their very presence inspire awe an admiration ! Elephants ~ Giraffes ~ Lions ~ Alligators and Eagles all alfresco of course ! BUT top of my list would also be the COUGER ~ magnificent ! Perfect symbiosis of POEM & PIC ~ Yours as always ~ BRIAN
November 18th, 2017 08:09
I Saw Him.
Accidental Poet said:
I have to agree with Kevin and Michael here Fay, experience and imagination are the tools of a great poet of which you\'ve so well proved of yourself. Thank you for not only this poem, but for being here on MPS.
November 18th, 2017 07:18
Accidental Poet said:
I have to agree with Kevin and Michael here Fay, experience and imagination are the tools of a great poet of which you\'ve so well proved of yourself. Thank you for not only this poem, but for being here on MPS.
November 18th, 2017 07:18
I Saw Him.
Michael Edwards said:
A poet writes from experience, a great poet writes from experience and imagination. You\'re a great poet Fay
November 18th, 2017 06:28
Michael Edwards said:
A poet writes from experience, a great poet writes from experience and imagination. You\'re a great poet Fay
November 18th, 2017 06:28
I Saw Him.
kevin browne said:
how you penned this has beautiful imagery all the way through to the to of the mountain which then I could see all. gorgeous poem, Fay Slimm.
November 18th, 2017 05:54
kevin browne said:
how you penned this has beautiful imagery all the way through to the to of the mountain which then I could see all. gorgeous poem, Fay Slimm.
November 18th, 2017 05:54
Making Believe.
Christina8 said:
A wonderful and sweet poem, Fay! As lovers, they can sweeten their waiting for quite a while I suppose! Perfect picture to match your description of them!
November 17th, 2017 14:04
Christina8 said:
A wonderful and sweet poem, Fay! As lovers, they can sweeten their waiting for quite a while I suppose! Perfect picture to match your description of them!
November 17th, 2017 14:04
Making Believe.
Louis Gibbs said:
And what a sweet way to pass the time it is. The harsh can come later, as it always does.
A well written and well presented poem here, Fay!
November 17th, 2017 10:18
Louis Gibbs said:
And what a sweet way to pass the time it is. The harsh can come later, as it always does.
A well written and well presented poem here, Fay!
November 17th, 2017 10:18
Making Believe.
Accidental Poet said:
Fay, you\'ve captured the photo so well in your poem. Beautiful poem for a beautiful photo.
November 17th, 2017 09:00
Accidental Poet said:
Fay, you\'ve captured the photo so well in your poem. Beautiful poem for a beautiful photo.
November 17th, 2017 09:00
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