Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Dreamscape.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ Perchance to sleep ~ Perchance to dream ~ AMEN For me often a great escape from the harshness of 21st C reality ! Love your aptly chosen visual ! Sometimes when the beauty of a Dream lingers ~ it kick starts my day on a High ! Thanks for caring ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
November 1st, 2017 04:53
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ Perchance to sleep ~ Perchance to dream ~ AMEN For me often a great escape from the harshness of 21st C reality ! Love your aptly chosen visual ! Sometimes when the beauty of a Dream lingers ~ it kick starts my day on a High ! Thanks for caring ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
November 1st, 2017 04:53
Dreamscape.
orchidee said:
All this in dreaming! Busy nights for our minds. A fine write Fay.
November 1st, 2017 04:45
orchidee said:
All this in dreaming! Busy nights for our minds. A fine write Fay.
November 1st, 2017 04:45
Dreamscape.
FredPeyer said:
This is awfully good for \'just playing around\'!
November 1st, 2017 04:34
FredPeyer said:
This is awfully good for \'just playing around\'!
November 1st, 2017 04:34
Fierce Hunger.
WL Schuett said:
Beautiful write , could feel the waiting and wondering and longing ....
October 31st, 2017 16:01
WL Schuett said:
Beautiful write , could feel the waiting and wondering and longing ....
October 31st, 2017 16:01
Fierce Hunger.
FredPeyer said:
You wrote an outstanding poem, Fay! The reader can actually feel the tension, dread, and longing. Beautiful!
October 31st, 2017 12:24
FredPeyer said:
You wrote an outstanding poem, Fay! The reader can actually feel the tension, dread, and longing. Beautiful!
October 31st, 2017 12:24
New Kind.
FredPeyer said:
Like the whole poem, but love that last stanza! What a good write, Fay!
October 31st, 2017 11:42
FredPeyer said:
Like the whole poem, but love that last stanza! What a good write, Fay!
October 31st, 2017 11:42
Fierce Hunger.
Goldfinch60 said:
This is another wonderful write Fay, thank you.
October 31st, 2017 09:03
Goldfinch60 said:
This is another wonderful write Fay, thank you.
October 31st, 2017 09:03
Fierce Hunger.
Laura🌻 said:
Beautiful and realistic write!
Relatable because of the
many recounts my mom
tells me about my dad’s
service in WWII! They
weren’t married yet. They
were waiting for the war
to be over! She waited
and waited until he finally
got home safe!
I read poem to my mom
and she retold me the story
of the waiting for my dad!
Thank you for the posting!
I always look forward to
read your masterpieces!
October 31st, 2017 07:30
Laura🌻 said:
Beautiful and realistic write!
Relatable because of the
many recounts my mom
tells me about my dad’s
service in WWII! They
weren’t married yet. They
were waiting for the war
to be over! She waited
and waited until he finally
got home safe!
I read poem to my mom
and she retold me the story
of the waiting for my dad!
Thank you for the posting!
I always look forward to
read your masterpieces!
October 31st, 2017 07:30
Fierce Hunger.
Louis Gibbs said:
A fisherman\'s wife is not an easy life. You paint it so well in this fine write, Fay! I like the repetitive theme in the first lines of each phrase. Well done, again.
October 31st, 2017 07:22
Louis Gibbs said:
A fisherman\'s wife is not an easy life. You paint it so well in this fine write, Fay! I like the repetitive theme in the first lines of each phrase. Well done, again.
October 31st, 2017 07:22
New Kind.
Louis Gibbs said:
Amazing how a good friend can infuse new life into us. Well expressed in this fine poem, Fay!
October 30th, 2017 11:49
Louis Gibbs said:
Amazing how a good friend can infuse new life into us. Well expressed in this fine poem, Fay!
October 30th, 2017 11:49
New Kind.
Laura🌻 said:
Beautiful write, Fay!
The ability and strength
to know yourself is a gift!
You certainly deserve all
the best that God
can offer you!
Wishing you all the best!
Enjoy to the fullest!
October 30th, 2017 08:56
Laura🌻 said:
Beautiful write, Fay!
The ability and strength
to know yourself is a gift!
You certainly deserve all
the best that God
can offer you!
Wishing you all the best!
Enjoy to the fullest!
October 30th, 2017 08:56
New Kind.
myself and me said:
Feels like from worm to butterfly, a beautiful transform.
October 30th, 2017 07:27
myself and me said:
Feels like from worm to butterfly, a beautiful transform.
October 30th, 2017 07:27
New Kind.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ I so love the new kind of YOU ! Y our love for life & love & GOD and His wonderful Creation ~ Love the Poem ~ the Picture and the New Kind of You ~ You are altogether lovely. Love all Your Poems & Pics a real Cornish Tonic each day. Yours as ever BRIAN
October 30th, 2017 06:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ I so love the new kind of YOU ! Y our love for life & love & GOD and His wonderful Creation ~ Love the Poem ~ the Picture and the New Kind of You ~ You are altogether lovely. Love all Your Poems & Pics a real Cornish Tonic each day. Yours as ever BRIAN
October 30th, 2017 06:51
New Kind.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. There are things that can come in to distract us: \'What about this or that?\' \'What about tomorrow?\' \'Something\'s bound to go wrong I bet\', etc. Negativity, hurting, hating, harming oneself, can all come in. Yet to live one day at a time, to be ourselves each day, though not in an escapism sort of way.
October 30th, 2017 04:23
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. There are things that can come in to distract us: \'What about this or that?\' \'What about tomorrow?\' \'Something\'s bound to go wrong I bet\', etc. Negativity, hurting, hating, harming oneself, can all come in. Yet to live one day at a time, to be ourselves each day, though not in an escapism sort of way.
October 30th, 2017 04:23
Wonderment.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderment is all around us, all we need to do is look. Great write Fay.
October 30th, 2017 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderment is all around us, all we need to do is look. Great write Fay.
October 30th, 2017 01:35
Wonderment.
Laura🌻 said:
Fay,
AP and Brian said it best! I totally concur with their comments.
The entire poem is a wonder! My favorite line that opens up my mind to welcome the wonderment of nature is...
to climb from depression and take comfort in beauty in viewing surrounding reality.
So masterfully written.
It reads like a prayer. Thank God for Mother Nature and you for being able to capture it with words!
October 29th, 2017 05:48
Laura🌻 said:
Fay,
AP and Brian said it best! I totally concur with their comments.
The entire poem is a wonder! My favorite line that opens up my mind to welcome the wonderment of nature is...
to climb from depression and take comfort in beauty in viewing surrounding reality.
So masterfully written.
It reads like a prayer. Thank God for Mother Nature and you for being able to capture it with words!
October 29th, 2017 05:48
Wonderment.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
AMEN FAY ~ Thank GOD for MOTHER NATURE who brings everything into perspective for us to enjoy DAILY ! We can have a thousand reasons to be depressed ~ but for me a \"Walk in the Woods\" or the East Coast Shore (which is only 10 miles away !) lifts my Spirit to Heaven and I say to myself \"What a Wonderful World ~ AMEN !\" Thanks for carin\' an\' sharin\' ~ Yours as ever |BRIAN
October 29th, 2017 05:09
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
AMEN FAY ~ Thank GOD for MOTHER NATURE who brings everything into perspective for us to enjoy DAILY ! We can have a thousand reasons to be depressed ~ but for me a \"Walk in the Woods\" or the East Coast Shore (which is only 10 miles away !) lifts my Spirit to Heaven and I say to myself \"What a Wonderful World ~ AMEN !\" Thanks for carin\' an\' sharin\' ~ Yours as ever |BRIAN
October 29th, 2017 05:09
This Time.
LukeCoomer said:
Fantastic I enjoyed your nostalgic feelings made me remember similar things
October 28th, 2017 18:16
LukeCoomer said:
Fantastic I enjoyed your nostalgic feelings made me remember similar things
October 28th, 2017 18:16
This Time.
Louis Gibbs said:
The time of reflection in the late stages of a fully lived life echoed in this exquisite poem, Fay. Another beauty, and gift to us all! Thank you.
October 28th, 2017 07:54
Louis Gibbs said:
The time of reflection in the late stages of a fully lived life echoed in this exquisite poem, Fay. Another beauty, and gift to us all! Thank you.
October 28th, 2017 07:54
This Time.
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m always in awe of your word choices - great work Fay
October 28th, 2017 05:57
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m always in awe of your word choices - great work Fay
October 28th, 2017 05:57
This Time.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhh CORNWALL ~ Mysterious land of all our emotions JOY & PAIN ~ SUNSHINE & SADNESS. Thanks for sharing FAY another beautiful Poem tinged with melancholy ~ ameliorated with a picture of aloness ! We all LOVE you FAY and our lives are blessed by Your poetry ~ Yours for ever ~ BRIAN X
October 28th, 2017 04:14
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhh CORNWALL ~ Mysterious land of all our emotions JOY & PAIN ~ SUNSHINE & SADNESS. Thanks for sharing FAY another beautiful Poem tinged with melancholy ~ ameliorated with a picture of aloness ! We all LOVE you FAY and our lives are blessed by Your poetry ~ Yours for ever ~ BRIAN X
October 28th, 2017 04:14
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