Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.



Making Believe.
myself and me said:

Such a beautiful poem make the view so romantic.

November 17th, 2017 08:39

Making Believe.
Michael Edwards said:

Another great write Fay.

November 17th, 2017 05:07

Making Believe.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks FAY ~ Poems inspired by Pictures are always an inspiration ! I adore the experience of Love Alfresco and your poem stirred memories long past ~ and recent beach interludes with ANGELA ! Thanks for caring & sharing and \"love warming\" a very cold and frosty morning ! We love all your poems & pictures (especially this one !) Love Brian & Angela XOX

November 17th, 2017 03:54

Making Believe.
Goldfinch60 said:

That sweetness can be wonderful Fay. Good write as usual.

November 17th, 2017 03:32

Sunday-Ways.
Seek said:

For me, a wonderful journey down memory lane. Thank you for sharing, Fay!

November 17th, 2017 01:01

Sunday-Ways.
FredPeyer said:

Sunday today just isn\'t anymore what it used to be, but your tongue in cheek poem brought it back! Thanks, Fay!

November 16th, 2017 21:35

Back There
FredPeyer said:

This is the time of the year when being away from home and family is so much harder. You captured the longing beautifully, Fay!

November 16th, 2017 20:29

Sunday-Ways.
orchidee said:

Another fine write Fay.

November 16th, 2017 15:18

Sunday-Ways.
WL Schuett said:

Very well done Fay a wonderful read

November 16th, 2017 14:37

Sunday-Ways.
Louis Gibbs said:

A tough life indeed, your poem describes. Those were the days ... I suppose.
A well-formed and presented tribute to the good times of life, Fay!

November 16th, 2017 10:31

Sunday-Ways.
myself and me said:

such a relaxing and joyful Sunday to enjoy. I am in Sunday mood already.

November 16th, 2017 09:14

Sunday-Ways.
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write, those were the days of my youth, life is different now.

November 16th, 2017 09:02

Sunday-Ways.
Michael Edwards said:

Just had to smile at this one written with your usual flair for the language but with a wry comical twist.

November 16th, 2017 05:50

Back There
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write and great feelings within your words Fay, I do hope and pray that all will \"be there once more\".

November 16th, 2017 01:26

Duo Ballet.
FredPeyer said:

\'I saw wisdom delivering itself to fate\' I see wisdom in your poems. You really do have a way with words, Fay!

November 15th, 2017 18:07

Back There
lasergraph said:

Great write, one can only imagine their yearning for home and all things normal.

November 15th, 2017 17:01

Back There
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 15th, 2017 11:43

Back There
myself and me said:

A homesick season for those who can not reunion with their families. Beautifully penned.

November 15th, 2017 11:32

Back There
orchidee said:

An eloquent write Fay.

November 15th, 2017 09:47

Back There
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Great write Fay!
Of course, this is every
soldierā€™s plight!
It reminds me of my fatherā€™s
WWII stories and his
yearning to go home
to see his mom and his
future bride! He finally
did make it...walking from
Northern Italy to Southern
Italy! Thank you for the
memories!

November 15th, 2017 06:52

Back There
Michael Edwards said:

Oh to be there with you - well with my wife - no offence Fay - great atmosphere in this lovely work.

November 15th, 2017 05:59

Back There
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

JOHNNY will go to sleep ~ in his own little bed again ...................... As we approach the Advent Season ~ which in the UK is always Family centred our hearts reach out to the Military ~ often holed up in God-forsaken places ! Thanks for sharing & caring FAY ~ Yours as always ~ BRIAN

November 15th, 2017 04:41

Duo Ballet.
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write with fabulous imagery Fay.

November 15th, 2017 02:05

Duo Ballet.
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Such beauty expressed
in this write and illustration!
You are a pro with the
poetic language! You
pen it so well. Awesome,
Poetess Fay!

November 14th, 2017 17:35

Duo Ballet.
myself and me said:

Beautiful picture with wonderful ballet to dance till the end.

November 14th, 2017 15:04

Duo Ballet.
lasergraph said:

Loved the image, both visual and written. Cold November night awaits, for such a delicate pair.



November 14th, 2017 13:02

Duo Ballet.
orchidee said:

A fine write again Fay.

November 14th, 2017 11:41

Duo Ballet.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Good afternoon FAY ~ The observation of the minute and grand moments in Nature is one of the Blessings of living in Cornwall ! The BIBLE tells us that GOD cares for the minutiae of His Awesome Creation so we have to leave the Butterflies ~ Birds & Bees to His Care. Thanks for sharing a beautiful \"Gem of Nature\" in Pic & Poem ! You are lovely ~ BRIAN

November 14th, 2017 09:05

Duo Ballet.
Louis Gibbs said:

A well formed and delightful one, Fay! You do appreciate nature\'s gifts well.

November 14th, 2017 08:21

Duo Ballet.
Christina8 said:

Lovely picture you paint of two butterflies. Just a beauty of a poem, Fay!

November 14th, 2017 07:50



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