Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
His Last.
FredPeyer said:
And what a fine tribute this is, Fay! Grant was a master photographer, you Fay are a master writer.
December 16th, 2017 03:36
FredPeyer said:
And what a fine tribute this is, Fay! Grant was a master photographer, you Fay are a master writer.
December 16th, 2017 03:36
His Last.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ An awesome photo (says it all !) and a fine tribute ! People who Photograph ~ Paint and Write about NATURE (like William Grant) and those who Film & Televise it (like David Attenborough) bring us closer to GOD than most sermons ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Christmas Hugs ~ BRIAN @@@
December 14th, 2017 10:56
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ An awesome photo (says it all !) and a fine tribute ! People who Photograph ~ Paint and Write about NATURE (like William Grant) and those who Film & Televise it (like David Attenborough) bring us closer to GOD than most sermons ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Christmas Hugs ~ BRIAN @@@
December 14th, 2017 10:56
His Last.
Louis Gibbs said:
So well written and beautifully formed this fine tribute, Fay! He would be quite gratified, I\'m sure.
December 14th, 2017 09:40
Louis Gibbs said:
So well written and beautifully formed this fine tribute, Fay! He would be quite gratified, I\'m sure.
December 14th, 2017 09:40
His Last.
Accidental Poet said:
And a fine tribute this is to William Grant Fay. Much like my all-time favorite photographer Ansel Adams, Grant was a master in his field. Wonderful write Fay. Maybe I\'ll have to do one for Adams too.
December 14th, 2017 05:12
Accidental Poet said:
And a fine tribute this is to William Grant Fay. Much like my all-time favorite photographer Ansel Adams, Grant was a master in his field. Wonderful write Fay. Maybe I\'ll have to do one for Adams too.
December 14th, 2017 05:12
Turbulence.
Louis Gibbs said:
Truly one of nature\'s greatest displays of beauty, to awe and inspire us. Great picture and ode, Fay!
December 13th, 2017 16:48
Louis Gibbs said:
Truly one of nature\'s greatest displays of beauty, to awe and inspire us. Great picture and ode, Fay!
December 13th, 2017 16:48
Turbulence.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY another beautiful symbiosis of POEM \'n PIC ~ Thanks for sharing. I have seen the N L\'s in NORWAY ~ Mauve & Green for Wimbledon ~ UNFORGETTABLE ! Please add an odd ode to my SNOW FUSION ~ Thanks B.
December 13th, 2017 12:54
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY another beautiful symbiosis of POEM \'n PIC ~ Thanks for sharing. I have seen the N L\'s in NORWAY ~ Mauve & Green for Wimbledon ~ UNFORGETTABLE ! Please add an odd ode to my SNOW FUSION ~ Thanks B.
December 13th, 2017 12:54
Turbulence.
Michael Edwards said:
Your poem captures the imagery as only you can Fay.
December 13th, 2017 12:04
Michael Edwards said:
Your poem captures the imagery as only you can Fay.
December 13th, 2017 12:04
Turbulence.
Goldfinch60 said:
Great display of an awesome sight, I have never seen them and would love so to do. Good write Fay.
December 13th, 2017 09:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Great display of an awesome sight, I have never seen them and would love so to do. Good write Fay.
December 13th, 2017 09:08
Challenge..
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Fay, it reminded me of the Chinese Proverb - \"If you get up one more time than you fall you will make it through\"
December 13th, 2017 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Fay, it reminded me of the Chinese Proverb - \"If you get up one more time than you fall you will make it through\"
December 13th, 2017 01:45
Challenge..
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ \"I am often knocked down ~ but never knocked out !\" In my Youth (2000 ~ 2013) I did some severe Rock Climbing in the Lake District & Snowdonia (Angela loves to SKI but dissuades me from Rock Climbing !). Your poem ~ is a perfect metaphor between Mountaineering and the daily challenges of Life & Love and their problems and hurdles ~ especially experiences of near death & disaster ! In Verse two you mention that Faith in GOD can be and aid and assurance in life\'s undulations ! I can say amen to that ~ AMEN ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours as ever BRIAN X Please add a poem to my SNOW ~ FUSION ~ Thanks B.
December 12th, 2017 15:35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ \"I am often knocked down ~ but never knocked out !\" In my Youth (2000 ~ 2013) I did some severe Rock Climbing in the Lake District & Snowdonia (Angela loves to SKI but dissuades me from Rock Climbing !). Your poem ~ is a perfect metaphor between Mountaineering and the daily challenges of Life & Love and their problems and hurdles ~ especially experiences of near death & disaster ! In Verse two you mention that Faith in GOD can be and aid and assurance in life\'s undulations ! I can say amen to that ~ AMEN ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours as ever BRIAN X Please add a poem to my SNOW ~ FUSION ~ Thanks B.
December 12th, 2017 15:35
Challenge..
Michael Edwards said:
Life always sets challenges - as my Dad always used to say: For every solution there\'s a problem. But no problem here - fine write Fay.
December 12th, 2017 11:41
Michael Edwards said:
Life always sets challenges - as my Dad always used to say: For every solution there\'s a problem. But no problem here - fine write Fay.
December 12th, 2017 11:41
Challenge..
lasergraph said:
Life indeed has its challenges for us all and when we solve one another appears. Without them there is nothing. Great write.
December 12th, 2017 09:15
lasergraph said:
Life indeed has its challenges for us all and when we solve one another appears. Without them there is nothing. Great write.
December 12th, 2017 09:15
Challenge..
Louis Gibbs said:
A failed ego\'s test, may indeed be a soul\'s victory ... a life-lesson learned.
I enjoyed this thought-provoking poem about life\'s challenges, Fay. Lord knows, we meet enough of them over a lifetime, don\'t we!
December 12th, 2017 09:09
Louis Gibbs said:
A failed ego\'s test, may indeed be a soul\'s victory ... a life-lesson learned.
I enjoyed this thought-provoking poem about life\'s challenges, Fay. Lord knows, we meet enough of them over a lifetime, don\'t we!
December 12th, 2017 09:09
Challenge..
orchidee said:
A fine, constructive, positive write fay. Now all we need do is put it into practice. I don\'t always!
Meanwhile - just as long as anyone does not face the blows hearing MY singing! If they bear that, everything else is easy as can be! lol.
December 12th, 2017 06:57
orchidee said:
A fine, constructive, positive write fay. Now all we need do is put it into practice. I don\'t always!
Meanwhile - just as long as anyone does not face the blows hearing MY singing! If they bear that, everything else is easy as can be! lol.
December 12th, 2017 06:57
Fused.
Accidental Poet said:
Love the quote at top of page, love your poem too Fay.
December 11th, 2017 16:40
Accidental Poet said:
Love the quote at top of page, love your poem too Fay.
December 11th, 2017 16:40
Fused.
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful, stunning, gorgeous declaration of love! I too am a believer that our souls will meet again!
This is so good, it just has to be made a favorite!
December 11th, 2017 15:56
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful, stunning, gorgeous declaration of love! I too am a believer that our souls will meet again!
This is so good, it just has to be made a favorite!
December 11th, 2017 15:56
Fused.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay, the soul mates WILL ALWAYS meet again.
December 11th, 2017 13:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay, the soul mates WILL ALWAYS meet again.
December 11th, 2017 13:41
Fused.
Louis Gibbs said:
Indeed you will, Fay. You and I were blessed to have met and enjoyed the sweet company of a soul-mate in this lifetime, if only for a short duration, and of course we will be joined with them again! It is the way of things.
This strong and beautiful poem reveals the blessing enjoyed absolutely perfectly!
December 11th, 2017 11:42
Louis Gibbs said:
Indeed you will, Fay. You and I were blessed to have met and enjoyed the sweet company of a soul-mate in this lifetime, if only for a short duration, and of course we will be joined with them again! It is the way of things.
This strong and beautiful poem reveals the blessing enjoyed absolutely perfectly!
December 11th, 2017 11:42
Fused.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Poetess Fay!
The entire poem is beautiful! It oozes with pure love! Some gems that stand out for me...
“...unfastened the bodice of stiff convention...
“...galloped happily bare-back on imagined kisses...
“We feasted our needs on what was forbidden...
Absolutely exquisite! Thank you for sharing your gift!
~Laura~
December 11th, 2017 11:24
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Poetess Fay!
The entire poem is beautiful! It oozes with pure love! Some gems that stand out for me...
“...unfastened the bodice of stiff convention...
“...galloped happily bare-back on imagined kisses...
“We feasted our needs on what was forbidden...
Absolutely exquisite! Thank you for sharing your gift!
~Laura~
December 11th, 2017 11:24
Fused.
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna sing it: \'We\'ll meet again....\' heehee. A fine write Fay.
December 11th, 2017 10:55
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna sing it: \'We\'ll meet again....\' heehee. A fine write Fay.
December 11th, 2017 10:55
Fused.
Christina8 said:
Another poem written like only you can! Love this poem. Like you said in your last line, you will meet your soul mate again. Like Kat said, love never dies. Beautiful poem, Fay!
December 11th, 2017 10:44
Christina8 said:
Another poem written like only you can! Love this poem. Like you said in your last line, you will meet your soul mate again. Like Kat said, love never dies. Beautiful poem, Fay!
December 11th, 2017 10:44
Sound-Encounter.
FredPeyer said:
So well written again, Fay! Bird migration is an incredible thing and I wish I could have been there. But your poem let me experience it just as good.
December 10th, 2017 20:44
FredPeyer said:
So well written again, Fay! Bird migration is an incredible thing and I wish I could have been there. But your poem let me experience it just as good.
December 10th, 2017 20:44
Sound-Encounter.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Poetess Fay,
Another brilliant gem! As I read and reread the poem, I too wanted to “pray for God to bless all feathered migration with another season’s success”. Magical writing that speaks to the reader! Loved it!
December 10th, 2017 18:27
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Poetess Fay,
Another brilliant gem! As I read and reread the poem, I too wanted to “pray for God to bless all feathered migration with another season’s success”. Magical writing that speaks to the reader! Loved it!
December 10th, 2017 18:27
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