Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
A Thought.
Laura🌻 said:
Fabulous message
my dear Poetess Fay!
LOVE is all...
A wondrous thought indeed!
November 27th, 2017 08:53
Laura🌻 said:
Fabulous message
my dear Poetess Fay!
LOVE is all...
A wondrous thought indeed!
November 27th, 2017 08:53
Recharging.
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay, \"The calm of taking pause\" is something we all nee to do.
November 27th, 2017 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay, \"The calm of taking pause\" is something we all nee to do.
November 27th, 2017 01:53
Recharging.
rrodriguez said:
Excellent write... I want to recharge, but not yet. I have to write another poem. Maybe later... I\'m ready to go. Fine write. Thank you.
November 26th, 2017 11:59
rrodriguez said:
Excellent write... I want to recharge, but not yet. I have to write another poem. Maybe later... I\'m ready to go. Fine write. Thank you.
November 26th, 2017 11:59
Recharging.
Louis Gibbs said:
Beautifully balanced and structured, Fay! Such fine attention to form ... so important an element of fine poetry, adding to and enhancing its beauty. And this is a beauty! An appreciation of the in-breath of nature. Kudos!
November 26th, 2017 11:42
Louis Gibbs said:
Beautifully balanced and structured, Fay! Such fine attention to form ... so important an element of fine poetry, adding to and enhancing its beauty. And this is a beauty! An appreciation of the in-breath of nature. Kudos!
November 26th, 2017 11:42
Recharging.
Michael Edwards said:
Beautifully written Fay - but it also means cluttering up the house with a load of decorations, piles of cards to be written, parcels to be wrapped - oh for spring.
November 26th, 2017 06:15
Michael Edwards said:
Beautifully written Fay - but it also means cluttering up the house with a load of decorations, piles of cards to be written, parcels to be wrapped - oh for spring.
November 26th, 2017 06:15
Recharging.
kevin browne said:
beautifully written, FaySlimm. I\'m certainly wrapping up warm this winter. the heat has gone and the cold runs through.
November 26th, 2017 05:51
kevin browne said:
beautifully written, FaySlimm. I\'m certainly wrapping up warm this winter. the heat has gone and the cold runs through.
November 26th, 2017 05:51
Were I.
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Poetess Fay,
Another extraordinary gem of a write accompanied by a great pic! Thank you for the share!
November 25th, 2017 22:43
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Poetess Fay,
Another extraordinary gem of a write accompanied by a great pic! Thank you for the share!
November 25th, 2017 22:43
Were I.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for a very sensuous and alluring Love Poem ! Each verse draws us closer into you to fulfil your desires and share in your pleasures ! Bedded and sating need ~ Feelings unfolding ~ On fire and finding Paradise ~ TOGETHER ! Love the visual ~ a perfect trysting place for Love alfresco and \"DULUX\" would ensure your Lover behaved like a Gentleman ! Thanks for caring ~ Gentle Hugs ~ BRIAN @@@
November 24th, 2017 18:06
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for a very sensuous and alluring Love Poem ! Each verse draws us closer into you to fulfil your desires and share in your pleasures ! Bedded and sating need ~ Feelings unfolding ~ On fire and finding Paradise ~ TOGETHER ! Love the visual ~ a perfect trysting place for Love alfresco and \"DULUX\" would ensure your Lover behaved like a Gentleman ! Thanks for caring ~ Gentle Hugs ~ BRIAN @@@
November 24th, 2017 18:06
Were I.
Christina8 said:
Oh I love this poem, Fay! I hope you find Paradise! Very well written.
November 24th, 2017 16:17
Christina8 said:
Oh I love this poem, Fay! I hope you find Paradise! Very well written.
November 24th, 2017 16:17
No Words.
FredPeyer said:
Sometimes we learn more without words....
Beautifully said, as only you can!
November 24th, 2017 12:36
FredPeyer said:
Sometimes we learn more without words....
Beautifully said, as only you can!
November 24th, 2017 12:36
Were I.
FredPeyer said:
A simple message, said in an incredibly beautiful way. Fay, I adore your writing! A favorite for sure!
November 24th, 2017 11:38
FredPeyer said:
A simple message, said in an incredibly beautiful way. Fay, I adore your writing! A favorite for sure!
November 24th, 2017 11:38
Were I.
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Unsettled my sleep ... Uneasy my soul ... Unrested my mind\" ... Things you and I share with so many creative types, Fay. This one is simply beautiful and quite touching!
November 24th, 2017 09:25
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Unsettled my sleep ... Uneasy my soul ... Unrested my mind\" ... Things you and I share with so many creative types, Fay. This one is simply beautiful and quite touching!
November 24th, 2017 09:25
Were I.
Michael Edwards said:
Sweet, succinct and one of your best - super work Fay.
November 24th, 2017 06:29
Michael Edwards said:
Sweet, succinct and one of your best - super work Fay.
November 24th, 2017 06:29
Were I.
kevin browne said:
you are such an entices poet that I wish I were in paradise with you. lovely poem, FaySlimm.
November 24th, 2017 04:07
kevin browne said:
you are such an entices poet that I wish I were in paradise with you. lovely poem, FaySlimm.
November 24th, 2017 04:07
No Words.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Excellent Picture & Awesome Poem ~ Thanks for sharing & caring ! The voice of NATURE is oft more reassuring than the clamour of MAN ! Yours as ever BRIAN
November 23rd, 2017 17:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Excellent Picture & Awesome Poem ~ Thanks for sharing & caring ! The voice of NATURE is oft more reassuring than the clamour of MAN ! Yours as ever BRIAN
November 23rd, 2017 17:59
No Words.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write and a wonderful bird. I have spent hours watching them in the past, they are super to watch.
November 23rd, 2017 06:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write and a wonderful bird. I have spent hours watching them in the past, they are super to watch.
November 23rd, 2017 06:32
No Words.
orchidee said:
Yes, lovely write Fay. Erm, sometimes \'little birds\' can be awful gossips if the \'speak\'. Oohh heehee.
November 23rd, 2017 06:17
orchidee said:
Yes, lovely write Fay. Erm, sometimes \'little birds\' can be awful gossips if the \'speak\'. Oohh heehee.
November 23rd, 2017 06:17
No Words.
kevin browne said:
ah, this is so sweet and nice to read. a lovely poem, FaySlimm.
November 23rd, 2017 04:39
kevin browne said:
ah, this is so sweet and nice to read. a lovely poem, FaySlimm.
November 23rd, 2017 04:39
The Proof
FredPeyer said:
Fay, I love your poem, love the excellent choice of words, the flow, EVERYTHING! And that last stanza is a gem (or maybe a pearl!).
November 22nd, 2017 13:24
FredPeyer said:
Fay, I love your poem, love the excellent choice of words, the flow, EVERYTHING! And that last stanza is a gem (or maybe a pearl!).
November 22nd, 2017 13:24
I Am Cloud.
FredPeyer said:
I always viewed clouds as objects, but thanks to you and your very imaginative and beautiful poem, you personalized them for me!
November 22nd, 2017 12:52
FredPeyer said:
I always viewed clouds as objects, but thanks to you and your very imaginative and beautiful poem, you personalized them for me!
November 22nd, 2017 12:52
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