Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
YOU.
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Key? Secret? Text? Spell?\" You keep us enthralled to the end, Fay. It is a brilliant design, indeed, this creation ... as you capture herein!
October 16th, 2017 11:59
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Key? Secret? Text? Spell?\" You keep us enthralled to the end, Fay. It is a brilliant design, indeed, this creation ... as you capture herein!
October 16th, 2017 11:59
YOU.
FredPeyer said:
A beautiful, beautiful poem, Fay!
Thank you for posting!
October 16th, 2017 11:25
FredPeyer said:
A beautiful, beautiful poem, Fay!
Thank you for posting!
October 16th, 2017 11:25
YOU.
MendedFences27 said:
Alchemy and Nature, said to be one and the same. What great descriptive meanderings you have taken us on. Lovely as usual, especially the fourth stanza. Loved it. - Phil A.
October 16th, 2017 10:07
MendedFences27 said:
Alchemy and Nature, said to be one and the same. What great descriptive meanderings you have taken us on. Lovely as usual, especially the fourth stanza. Loved it. - Phil A.
October 16th, 2017 10:07
YOU.
Heather T said:
From your unique eye to your pen, you give us new revelations of creation\'s splendor. What a gift!
October 16th, 2017 08:28
Heather T said:
From your unique eye to your pen, you give us new revelations of creation\'s splendor. What a gift!
October 16th, 2017 08:28
Owl-Sound.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write once more Fay. Owls are wonderful creatures.
October 16th, 2017 00:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write once more Fay. Owls are wonderful creatures.
October 16th, 2017 00:30
Owl-Sound.
MendedFences27 said:
As it hunts through ruins of castles, an owl\' s call do you hear? Somehow there is an unearthly tinge to this natural occurrence. Owls in myth are harbingers of death. In other myths they signify wisdom. Surely, an owl among the ruins of a former seat of wisdom, would be the basis for a great poem. Inspiration!!
Your poem is lovely and it creates images of many things, of ruins, of olden castles, of an owl flying in the night, then catching its prey in a sudden fall. Loved every line. - Phil A.
October 15th, 2017 15:43
MendedFences27 said:
As it hunts through ruins of castles, an owl\' s call do you hear? Somehow there is an unearthly tinge to this natural occurrence. Owls in myth are harbingers of death. In other myths they signify wisdom. Surely, an owl among the ruins of a former seat of wisdom, would be the basis for a great poem. Inspiration!!
Your poem is lovely and it creates images of many things, of ruins, of olden castles, of an owl flying in the night, then catching its prey in a sudden fall. Loved every line. - Phil A.
October 15th, 2017 15:43
Owl-Sound.
Louis Gibbs said:
A lovely ode to a magical creature, in my mind. I once had a unique encounter with a Great White Owl, but that it is a long story for another time. Really like this one, Fay!
October 15th, 2017 07:08
Louis Gibbs said:
A lovely ode to a magical creature, in my mind. I once had a unique encounter with a Great White Owl, but that it is a long story for another time. Really like this one, Fay!
October 15th, 2017 07:08
Owl-Sound.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for a lovely \"Tone Sonnet 4442 !) I can both hear and see the BARN OWL ~ lovely photo. Once again you have shared some of the sights and sounds of Autumn ~ beautiful. Your Friend BRIAN
October 15th, 2017 06:53
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for a lovely \"Tone Sonnet 4442 !) I can both hear and see the BARN OWL ~ lovely photo. Once again you have shared some of the sights and sounds of Autumn ~ beautiful. Your Friend BRIAN
October 15th, 2017 06:53
Crossed Wires.
orchidee said:
Yes, fine write Fay. I thought similar things when I saw some abstracts at an art show.
October 14th, 2017 10:01
orchidee said:
Yes, fine write Fay. I thought similar things when I saw some abstracts at an art show.
October 14th, 2017 10:01
Crossed Wires.
WL Schuett said:
Very good melding of poem to picture , well done Fay
October 14th, 2017 09:04
WL Schuett said:
Very good melding of poem to picture , well done Fay
October 14th, 2017 09:04
Crossed Wires.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR SHARING FAY ~ Using a \"block\" presentation gives it a poignancy the content justifies. In our communities we are all cross linked ~ Family ~ Work ~ Community ~ Church etc. Life & Love affects everyone in our web ! Love the poem ~ it made me think. MPS is of course one such network ! Love the picture it resonated with my muse as well ! Your as ever BRIAN
October 14th, 2017 08:26
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR SHARING FAY ~ Using a \"block\" presentation gives it a poignancy the content justifies. In our communities we are all cross linked ~ Family ~ Work ~ Community ~ Church etc. Life & Love affects everyone in our web ! Love the poem ~ it made me think. MPS is of course one such network ! Love the picture it resonated with my muse as well ! Your as ever BRIAN
October 14th, 2017 08:26
Crossed Wires.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, this seems to be a departure from your usual writing, but I like it!
October 14th, 2017 04:48
FredPeyer said:
Fay, this seems to be a departure from your usual writing, but I like it!
October 14th, 2017 04:48
In The Making.
MendedFences27 said:
An artist or an artisan, whichever they are called, their work can be compared to music. You give them a voice here, their tools are surely their instruments, their performances, however, linger in forms not like a recording, but more tangible, and are never lost into the wind. You have built a remarkable piece, a song whose voice is dynamic and full of beauty. I enjoyed every sliver of it. Bravo! - Phil A.
October 13th, 2017 11:26
MendedFences27 said:
An artist or an artisan, whichever they are called, their work can be compared to music. You give them a voice here, their tools are surely their instruments, their performances, however, linger in forms not like a recording, but more tangible, and are never lost into the wind. You have built a remarkable piece, a song whose voice is dynamic and full of beauty. I enjoyed every sliver of it. Bravo! - Phil A.
October 13th, 2017 11:26
In The Making.
FredPeyer said:
So well written, Fay, I even had the smell of freshly cut wood in my nose when reading it. I love to work with wood, but unfortunately whenever I build something it usually comes out at least a little bit crooked, or off-kilter.
October 13th, 2017 11:24
FredPeyer said:
So well written, Fay, I even had the smell of freshly cut wood in my nose when reading it. I love to work with wood, but unfortunately whenever I build something it usually comes out at least a little bit crooked, or off-kilter.
October 13th, 2017 11:24
In The Making.
Louis Gibbs said:
As a once-wood worker, I can hear the music of which you speak in this masterful piece, Fay. Speaks to my soul too, as AP states. Another wonderful piece from your magic pen! Kudos.
October 13th, 2017 09:35
Louis Gibbs said:
As a once-wood worker, I can hear the music of which you speak in this masterful piece, Fay. Speaks to my soul too, as AP states. Another wonderful piece from your magic pen! Kudos.
October 13th, 2017 09:35
In The Making.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful start to the symphony of craftmanship.
October 13th, 2017 08:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful start to the symphony of craftmanship.
October 13th, 2017 08:06
Dark Delight.
Mugsdaddy said:
Certainly sounds like a fond memory, thanks for sharing.
Mugsdaddy
October 12th, 2017 10:13
Mugsdaddy said:
Certainly sounds like a fond memory, thanks for sharing.
Mugsdaddy
October 12th, 2017 10:13
Dark Delight.
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds like you had a pleasant youth, there by the sea? Lovely reflective poem, Fay!
October 12th, 2017 08:10
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds like you had a pleasant youth, there by the sea? Lovely reflective poem, Fay!
October 12th, 2017 08:10
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