Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Voiceless.
Louis Gibbs said:
Ah, the undeniable power of unspoken communication between twin-flame souls. One is blessed indeed to have experienced it on this plane of existence.
Beautifully described in this remarkable poem, Fay!
November 2nd, 2017 09:41
Louis Gibbs said:
Ah, the undeniable power of unspoken communication between twin-flame souls. One is blessed indeed to have experienced it on this plane of existence.
Beautifully described in this remarkable poem, Fay!
November 2nd, 2017 09:41
Voiceless.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing FAY \"We all say it best when we say NOTHING AT ALL !\" Yours silently ~ BRIAN
November 2nd, 2017 09:16
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing FAY \"We all say it best when we say NOTHING AT ALL !\" Yours silently ~ BRIAN
November 2nd, 2017 09:16
Voiceless.
WL Schuett said:
Beautifully thought out Fay , you conveyed it wonderfully. Great poem
November 2nd, 2017 07:45
WL Schuett said:
Beautifully thought out Fay , you conveyed it wonderfully. Great poem
November 2nd, 2017 07:45
Voiceless.
Christina8 said:
That is so beautiful. That last line summed it up so well! Wonderful job!
November 2nd, 2017 06:35
Christina8 said:
That is so beautiful. That last line summed it up so well! Wonderful job!
November 2nd, 2017 06:35
Voiceless.
Michael Edwards said:
Ah that last line is a masterpiece wrapping it up so well.
November 2nd, 2017 06:10
Michael Edwards said:
Ah that last line is a masterpiece wrapping it up so well.
November 2nd, 2017 06:10
Dreamscape.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write, those dreams can lead us into the wonders of the Universe.
November 2nd, 2017 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write, those dreams can lead us into the wonders of the Universe.
November 2nd, 2017 01:16
Dreamscape.
Louis Gibbs said:
It seems we share a muse today, Fay, both writing about escape into dreams. I would just say that, to me, achieving the dream state is the Ascent, and the waking state, the Decent. Great write, my friend!
November 1st, 2017 09:37
Louis Gibbs said:
It seems we share a muse today, Fay, both writing about escape into dreams. I would just say that, to me, achieving the dream state is the Ascent, and the waking state, the Decent. Great write, my friend!
November 1st, 2017 09:37
Dreamscape.
Michael Edwards said:
If this is just playing - well!! Super stuff Fay.
November 1st, 2017 06:14
Michael Edwards said:
If this is just playing - well!! Super stuff Fay.
November 1st, 2017 06:14
Dreamscape.
Laura🌻 said:
Reality...
a NIGHTMARE!!!
We are living it!
Thank God for pleasant
Dreams so we can
escape...for a while!
Fay,
Thank you for the write.
Much needed and appreciated...
ESPECIALLY TODAY!
November 1st, 2017 05:16
Laura🌻 said:
Reality...
a NIGHTMARE!!!
We are living it!
Thank God for pleasant
Dreams so we can
escape...for a while!
Fay,
Thank you for the write.
Much needed and appreciated...
ESPECIALLY TODAY!
November 1st, 2017 05:16
Dreamscape.
kevin browne said:
brilliant imagery here in the patterns of sleep. great write, my friend x
November 1st, 2017 05:13
kevin browne said:
brilliant imagery here in the patterns of sleep. great write, my friend x
November 1st, 2017 05:13
Dreamscape.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ Perchance to sleep ~ Perchance to dream ~ AMEN For me often a great escape from the harshness of 21st C reality ! Love your aptly chosen visual ! Sometimes when the beauty of a Dream lingers ~ it kick starts my day on a High ! Thanks for caring ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
November 1st, 2017 04:53
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ Perchance to sleep ~ Perchance to dream ~ AMEN For me often a great escape from the harshness of 21st C reality ! Love your aptly chosen visual ! Sometimes when the beauty of a Dream lingers ~ it kick starts my day on a High ! Thanks for caring ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
November 1st, 2017 04:53
Dreamscape.
orchidee said:
All this in dreaming! Busy nights for our minds. A fine write Fay.
November 1st, 2017 04:45
orchidee said:
All this in dreaming! Busy nights for our minds. A fine write Fay.
November 1st, 2017 04:45
Dreamscape.
FredPeyer said:
This is awfully good for \'just playing around\'!
November 1st, 2017 04:34
FredPeyer said:
This is awfully good for \'just playing around\'!
November 1st, 2017 04:34
Dreamscape.
Accidental Poet said:
A fantastic write is this! Add another to my favs. Thank you for starting off my day with a smile Fay.
November 1st, 2017 04:19
Accidental Poet said:
A fantastic write is this! Add another to my favs. Thank you for starting off my day with a smile Fay.
November 1st, 2017 04:19
Fierce Hunger.
WL Schuett said:
Beautiful write , could feel the waiting and wondering and longing ....
October 31st, 2017 16:01
WL Schuett said:
Beautiful write , could feel the waiting and wondering and longing ....
October 31st, 2017 16:01
Fierce Hunger.
FredPeyer said:
You wrote an outstanding poem, Fay! The reader can actually feel the tension, dread, and longing. Beautiful!
October 31st, 2017 12:24
FredPeyer said:
You wrote an outstanding poem, Fay! The reader can actually feel the tension, dread, and longing. Beautiful!
October 31st, 2017 12:24
New Kind.
FredPeyer said:
Like the whole poem, but love that last stanza! What a good write, Fay!
October 31st, 2017 11:42
FredPeyer said:
Like the whole poem, but love that last stanza! What a good write, Fay!
October 31st, 2017 11:42
Fierce Hunger.
Goldfinch60 said:
This is another wonderful write Fay, thank you.
October 31st, 2017 09:03
Goldfinch60 said:
This is another wonderful write Fay, thank you.
October 31st, 2017 09:03
Fierce Hunger.
Laura🌻 said:
Beautiful and realistic write!
Relatable because of the
many recounts my mom
tells me about my dad’s
service in WWII! They
weren’t married yet. They
were waiting for the war
to be over! She waited
and waited until he finally
got home safe!
I read poem to my mom
and she retold me the story
of the waiting for my dad!
Thank you for the posting!
I always look forward to
read your masterpieces!
October 31st, 2017 07:30
Laura🌻 said:
Beautiful and realistic write!
Relatable because of the
many recounts my mom
tells me about my dad’s
service in WWII! They
weren’t married yet. They
were waiting for the war
to be over! She waited
and waited until he finally
got home safe!
I read poem to my mom
and she retold me the story
of the waiting for my dad!
Thank you for the posting!
I always look forward to
read your masterpieces!
October 31st, 2017 07:30
Fierce Hunger.
Louis Gibbs said:
A fisherman\'s wife is not an easy life. You paint it so well in this fine write, Fay! I like the repetitive theme in the first lines of each phrase. Well done, again.
October 31st, 2017 07:22
Louis Gibbs said:
A fisherman\'s wife is not an easy life. You paint it so well in this fine write, Fay! I like the repetitive theme in the first lines of each phrase. Well done, again.
October 31st, 2017 07:22
Fierce Hunger.
Accidental Poet said:
A beautiful tribute to the women who wait for their man to return from the mistress of the sea. Excellent write Fay.
October 31st, 2017 04:17
Accidental Poet said:
A beautiful tribute to the women who wait for their man to return from the mistress of the sea. Excellent write Fay.
October 31st, 2017 04:17
New Kind.
Louis Gibbs said:
Amazing how a good friend can infuse new life into us. Well expressed in this fine poem, Fay!
October 30th, 2017 11:49
Louis Gibbs said:
Amazing how a good friend can infuse new life into us. Well expressed in this fine poem, Fay!
October 30th, 2017 11:49
New Kind.
Laura🌻 said:
Beautiful write, Fay!
The ability and strength
to know yourself is a gift!
You certainly deserve all
the best that God
can offer you!
Wishing you all the best!
Enjoy to the fullest!
October 30th, 2017 08:56
Laura🌻 said:
Beautiful write, Fay!
The ability and strength
to know yourself is a gift!
You certainly deserve all
the best that God
can offer you!
Wishing you all the best!
Enjoy to the fullest!
October 30th, 2017 08:56
New Kind.
myself and me said:
Feels like from worm to butterfly, a beautiful transform.
October 30th, 2017 07:27
myself and me said:
Feels like from worm to butterfly, a beautiful transform.
October 30th, 2017 07:27
New Kind.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ I so love the new kind of YOU ! Y our love for life & love & GOD and His wonderful Creation ~ Love the Poem ~ the Picture and the New Kind of You ~ You are altogether lovely. Love all Your Poems & Pics a real Cornish Tonic each day. Yours as ever BRIAN
October 30th, 2017 06:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ I so love the new kind of YOU ! Y our love for life & love & GOD and His wonderful Creation ~ Love the Poem ~ the Picture and the New Kind of You ~ You are altogether lovely. Love all Your Poems & Pics a real Cornish Tonic each day. Yours as ever BRIAN
October 30th, 2017 06:51
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