Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.



Behind and Between.
Laura🌻 said:

Awesome write Fay!
This is a beyond the beyond read!
There’s a lot to think about!
Enjoyed it very much!
You are truly gifted!
Thank you!


October 26th, 2017 06:57

Behind and Between.
FredPeyer said:

Fay, I know you are a good writer, but you went way beyond being good. This is \'out of this world\', absolutely no choice, have to make it a favorite!

October 26th, 2017 04:09

Behind and Between.
orchidee said:

Good write Fay.

October 26th, 2017 01:50

Quenchers.
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write Fay about one of the treasures of the English countryside.

October 26th, 2017 00:50

Quenchers.
ron parrish aka wordman said:

and as a country boy i can appreciate it

October 25th, 2017 21:19

Quenchers.
Christina8 said:

\"produce collected in baskets\' so nostalgic for me because of my grandmas farm-how I miss picking berries. Always a joy reading your richly worded poems!

October 25th, 2017 17:18

Quenchers.
myself and me said:

It is always an enjoyment to read your poem. I have those berry bushes in my backyard, the berries are all gone by now.

October 25th, 2017 14:04

Quenchers.
FredPeyer said:

A great poem, Fay, brings me back to my childhood and our blackberry bushes in the back of the garden!

October 25th, 2017 10:49

Quenchers.
Louis Gibbs said:

A succulent poem, indeed, Fay. Well done!

October 25th, 2017 10:23

Quenchers.
lasergraph said:

I feel quenched already. I love this little treat. A cobbler might be nice too. Now I am thinking about food.

October 25th, 2017 09:52

Quenchers.
Laura🌻 said:

Unfortunately, we depend upon the fruit markets in the city to provide us with this delicious berry!
Fay, your picture and description of this blackberry is inviting! I’ll have to check the market and buy some.
My 95 year old mom loves them. She remembers when she was little walking to her grandma ‘s farmhouse. Along the way she’d pick and eat these luscious blackberries!
~Laura ~

October 25th, 2017 09:05

Quenchers.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks FAY ~ although the SE of England is a Concrete Jungle ~ compared with Rural Cornwall ~ there is a woodland area behind where my MUM lives ~ replete with BLACKBERRY bushes. Full of luscious berries in the Summer ! I always pick in gloves ! My MUM has Apple Trees (Bramley) and she miraculously (all mums have the magic touch) turns her apples and my blacks into B & A Suet Puds ~ Jam ~ Pies etc all of which are my favourites ! Thank GOD for FREEZERS ! Love all your Poems & Pictures FAY they are so so evocative ~ Love you too ! BRIAN

October 25th, 2017 08:24

Quenchers.
orchidee said:

Good write Fay.

October 25th, 2017 07:55

Quenchers.
Michael Edwards said:

One of my favourite fruits and free by the bucket load round here - such a great piece Fay.

October 25th, 2017 07:54

Quenchers.
kevin browne said:

gosh, that was thirsty work reading this quenching poem. great work, Fay.

October 25th, 2017 06:43

Shore-Songs.
FredPeyer said:

Great writing, Fay! We don\'t have high tides here, but winter can bring 50\' waves to the North Shore, making it a surfers paradise. And you described it perfectly!

October 24th, 2017 18:28

Shore-Songs.
Louis Gibbs said:

Exquisite poem, so finely presented in precise form! This is truly a beauty in all aspects, Fay!

October 24th, 2017 09:57

Shore-Songs.
Goldfinch60 said:

I was starting to get soaked as this poem washed over me, great write.

October 24th, 2017 08:04

Shore-Songs.
WL Schuett said:

The crashing waves of this poem roll all over me ....😎🌊

October 24th, 2017 07:51

Shore-Songs.
Michael Edwards said:

It takes me there - so well written Fay

October 24th, 2017 05:52

Shore-Songs.
Laura🌻 said:

Great write, Fay!
It brings the coast to life.
I could almost see, feel and smell the
wonders of that coastline! I’ve never lived
near one...only vacationed
near one once in a while!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~

October 24th, 2017 05:37

Shore-Songs.
Accidental Poet said:

Fay, I\'ve lived near the coastline all my life, and the sounds, smells and feel of being near the shore always pulls on my heart. This is a beautiful write. I could feel the waves crashing on the rocks.

October 24th, 2017 03:53

Oiled with Love.
Laura🌻 said:

Fay,
As everyone has said...a beautiful write!
I still remember that unhinged feeling when that key unlocked that door!
The feelings are still all there!
Like the pic you chose for your perfect poem!

~Laura)


October 24th, 2017 03:27

Shore-Songs.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

GOOD MORNING CORNWALL ! Hi FAY ~ love the North Cornish Coast ~ TINTAGEL ~ real rocks ~ real breakers ~ I could taste the SALT ! Thanks for sharing ~ Coastal Hugs ~ BRIAN

October 24th, 2017 03:26

Oiled with Love.
Goldfinch60 said:

Another beautiful write Fay.

October 24th, 2017 00:52

Oiled with Love.
Accidental Poet said:

Very beautiful Fay.

October 23rd, 2017 18:44

Oiled with Love.
Louis Gibbs said:

Another fine ode to lost love, Fay, as only you can pen them!

October 23rd, 2017 16:19

Oiled with Love.
lasergraph said:

A fine write, and a lock without a key is lonely indeed.

October 23rd, 2017 14:58

Oiled with Love.
orchidee said:

A fine write Fay.

October 23rd, 2017 13:40

Love\'s Wand.
Goldfinch60 said:

Good caring write Fay.

October 23rd, 2017 00:45



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