Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Dark Delight.
Christina8 said:
Absolutely wonderful! Nostalgic! The picture and the poem together were fantastic!!
October 12th, 2017 05:31
Christina8 said:
Absolutely wonderful! Nostalgic! The picture and the poem together were fantastic!!
October 12th, 2017 05:31
Dark Delight.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, my comment has only two words:
Simply beautiful!
October 12th, 2017 03:49
FredPeyer said:
Fay, my comment has only two words:
Simply beautiful!
October 12th, 2017 03:49
This Too.
lasergraph said:
WOW, very heartfelt. I am left speechless. That doesn\'t happen often.
October 11th, 2017 15:16
lasergraph said:
WOW, very heartfelt. I am left speechless. That doesn\'t happen often.
October 11th, 2017 15:16
This Too.
Louis Gibbs said:
Congratulations on the strength and insight you have gained around loss, Fay! Indeed, we will meet them again, and again, I believe.
October 11th, 2017 09:03
Louis Gibbs said:
Congratulations on the strength and insight you have gained around loss, Fay! Indeed, we will meet them again, and again, I believe.
October 11th, 2017 09:03
This Too.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write. May your love go on towards eternity.
October 11th, 2017 08:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write. May your love go on towards eternity.
October 11th, 2017 08:08
This Too.
Christina8 said:
Beautiful poem and so heartwarming for such a tough subject. Thanks for sharing, Fay!
October 11th, 2017 05:13
Christina8 said:
Beautiful poem and so heartwarming for such a tough subject. Thanks for sharing, Fay!
October 11th, 2017 05:13
This Too.
FredPeyer said:
I really don\'t know what to say, Fay!
Your poems don\'t only touch the readers heart, they worm right into it.
October 11th, 2017 03:26
FredPeyer said:
I really don\'t know what to say, Fay!
Your poems don\'t only touch the readers heart, they worm right into it.
October 11th, 2017 03:26
Playing At Love.
MendedFences27 said:
So true, Fay. Unintended yet spoken love can be hurtful, destructive, and vicious. I can only offer that I\'ve seen this between a couple, both plating at the same game. Interesting to watch the interplay and explosive ending. It seems time exposes every weakness. Great write. - Phil A.
October 10th, 2017 13:53
MendedFences27 said:
So true, Fay. Unintended yet spoken love can be hurtful, destructive, and vicious. I can only offer that I\'ve seen this between a couple, both plating at the same game. Interesting to watch the interplay and explosive ending. It seems time exposes every weakness. Great write. - Phil A.
October 10th, 2017 13:53
Playing At Love.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, I love this poem, which seems to be a little bit different from your usual writing style, but is equally exquisite.
Something that came to my mind when reading it is that kids learn through play. Maybe the same is true for love? We start out playing at love and learn before finding that true and lasting love. Just a thought!
October 10th, 2017 11:34
FredPeyer said:
Fay, I love this poem, which seems to be a little bit different from your usual writing style, but is equally exquisite.
Something that came to my mind when reading it is that kids learn through play. Maybe the same is true for love? We start out playing at love and learn before finding that true and lasting love. Just a thought!
October 10th, 2017 11:34
Playing At Love.
Louis Gibbs said:
Good advice, to the young just entering the arena of love especially. Well written and formed poet wisdom, Fay!
October 10th, 2017 10:02
Louis Gibbs said:
Good advice, to the young just entering the arena of love especially. Well written and formed poet wisdom, Fay!
October 10th, 2017 10:02
Playing At Love.
malubotelho said:
Great writing and a reminder. Don’t play with love. Love can be playfull but not played off.
October 10th, 2017 08:57
malubotelho said:
Great writing and a reminder. Don’t play with love. Love can be playfull but not played off.
October 10th, 2017 08:57
Artful.
FredPeyer said:
So many people are afraid of spiders. I just hope that your beautiful poem takes some of that fear away. They (the spiders) and your poem are awesome!
October 9th, 2017 12:32
FredPeyer said:
So many people are afraid of spiders. I just hope that your beautiful poem takes some of that fear away. They (the spiders) and your poem are awesome!
October 9th, 2017 12:32
Artful.
Louis Gibbs said:
As an engineer, I tip my hat to the talent of the spider. Nice tribute to their creative works, Fay.
October 9th, 2017 09:20
Louis Gibbs said:
As an engineer, I tip my hat to the talent of the spider. Nice tribute to their creative works, Fay.
October 9th, 2017 09:20
Artful.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay, love the \"silver lace doilies\".
October 9th, 2017 08:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay, love the \"silver lace doilies\".
October 9th, 2017 08:13
Sleep\'s Acres.
malubotelho said:
Another great piece from you Fay. You always gather your special words making them dancing and singing a master piece, day after day.
October 8th, 2017 19:36
malubotelho said:
Another great piece from you Fay. You always gather your special words making them dancing and singing a master piece, day after day.
October 8th, 2017 19:36
Sleep\'s Acres.
FredPeyer said:
Fay you really are a wordsmith. The way you use words and weave them into sentences is so unique and beautiful.
October 8th, 2017 04:11
FredPeyer said:
Fay you really are a wordsmith. The way you use words and weave them into sentences is so unique and beautiful.
October 8th, 2017 04:11
Sleep\'s Acres.
Michael Edwards said:
Can\'t say it\'s a scenario I am familiar with. As soon as my eyes are open I am wide awake and just have to get up - to lie there is sheer purgatory. Nonetheless this is such superbly crafted work and I really enjoyed the read.
October 8th, 2017 03:03
Michael Edwards said:
Can\'t say it\'s a scenario I am familiar with. As soon as my eyes are open I am wide awake and just have to get up - to lie there is sheer purgatory. Nonetheless this is such superbly crafted work and I really enjoyed the read.
October 8th, 2017 03:03
Less Trodden.
MendedFences27 said:
Forget the \"path less taken,\" take the one never dreamed of. Your poem itself is original and unconventional. It will inspire many to follow their hearts and not their fears. Such a well composed poem, Fay. I loved it - Phil A.
October 7th, 2017 16:26
MendedFences27 said:
Forget the \"path less taken,\" take the one never dreamed of. Your poem itself is original and unconventional. It will inspire many to follow their hearts and not their fears. Such a well composed poem, Fay. I loved it - Phil A.
October 7th, 2017 16:26
Less Trodden.
FredPeyer said:
After reading your fine poem, Fay, I do not need any University classes on writing! Going straight to my favs!
October 7th, 2017 12:30
FredPeyer said:
After reading your fine poem, Fay, I do not need any University classes on writing! Going straight to my favs!
October 7th, 2017 12:30
Less Trodden.
Louis Gibbs said:
A complete and brilliant course in composing good poetry! So well presented here, Fay. Kudos!
October 7th, 2017 12:14
Louis Gibbs said:
A complete and brilliant course in composing good poetry! So well presented here, Fay. Kudos!
October 7th, 2017 12:14
Less Trodden.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Thos poem amplifies the cry of us all ~ irrespective of AGE ! \"I WANNA BE FREE # AMEN\" Yours as ever BRIAN (I\'m off line for week !)
October 7th, 2017 08:22
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Thos poem amplifies the cry of us all ~ irrespective of AGE ! \"I WANNA BE FREE # AMEN\" Yours as ever BRIAN (I\'m off line for week !)
October 7th, 2017 08:22
Less Trodden.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Erm, I tried it in some woods, but got lost! I\'ve not got the hang of it yet! lol.
October 7th, 2017 05:45
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Erm, I tried it in some woods, but got lost! I\'ve not got the hang of it yet! lol.
October 7th, 2017 05:45
These Days.
malubotelho said:
Fay, you are such a fantastic poet. I have to say that you are one of my favorites all time poets. For me you are not behind any one of them. If anyone would ask me today who is my favorite poet now a days I would site your name without blinking. This piece is marvelous as all others I have read from you. Thanks
October 6th, 2017 14:35
malubotelho said:
Fay, you are such a fantastic poet. I have to say that you are one of my favorites all time poets. For me you are not behind any one of them. If anyone would ask me today who is my favorite poet now a days I would site your name without blinking. This piece is marvelous as all others I have read from you. Thanks
October 6th, 2017 14:35
These Days.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, reading your poems is such a joy. Reading this one, I could hear the mermaids sing!
October 6th, 2017 12:07
FredPeyer said:
Fay, reading your poems is such a joy. Reading this one, I could hear the mermaids sing!
October 6th, 2017 12:07
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