Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
New Kind.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. There are things that can come in to distract us: \'What about this or that?\' \'What about tomorrow?\' \'Something\'s bound to go wrong I bet\', etc. Negativity, hurting, hating, harming oneself, can all come in. Yet to live one day at a time, to be ourselves each day, though not in an escapism sort of way.
October 30th, 2017 04:23
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. There are things that can come in to distract us: \'What about this or that?\' \'What about tomorrow?\' \'Something\'s bound to go wrong I bet\', etc. Negativity, hurting, hating, harming oneself, can all come in. Yet to live one day at a time, to be ourselves each day, though not in an escapism sort of way.
October 30th, 2017 04:23
New Kind.
Accidental Poet said:
And a wonderful new glorious you is the source of this great write Fay.
October 30th, 2017 04:10
Accidental Poet said:
And a wonderful new glorious you is the source of this great write Fay.
October 30th, 2017 04:10
Wonderment.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderment is all around us, all we need to do is look. Great write Fay.
October 30th, 2017 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderment is all around us, all we need to do is look. Great write Fay.
October 30th, 2017 01:35
Wonderment.
Laura🌻 said:
Fay,
AP and Brian said it best! I totally concur with their comments.
The entire poem is a wonder! My favorite line that opens up my mind to welcome the wonderment of nature is...
to climb from depression and take comfort in beauty in viewing surrounding reality.
So masterfully written.
It reads like a prayer. Thank God for Mother Nature and you for being able to capture it with words!
October 29th, 2017 05:48
Laura🌻 said:
Fay,
AP and Brian said it best! I totally concur with their comments.
The entire poem is a wonder! My favorite line that opens up my mind to welcome the wonderment of nature is...
to climb from depression and take comfort in beauty in viewing surrounding reality.
So masterfully written.
It reads like a prayer. Thank God for Mother Nature and you for being able to capture it with words!
October 29th, 2017 05:48
Wonderment.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
AMEN FAY ~ Thank GOD for MOTHER NATURE who brings everything into perspective for us to enjoy DAILY ! We can have a thousand reasons to be depressed ~ but for me a \"Walk in the Woods\" or the East Coast Shore (which is only 10 miles away !) lifts my Spirit to Heaven and I say to myself \"What a Wonderful World ~ AMEN !\" Thanks for carin\' an\' sharin\' ~ Yours as ever |BRIAN
October 29th, 2017 05:09
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
AMEN FAY ~ Thank GOD for MOTHER NATURE who brings everything into perspective for us to enjoy DAILY ! We can have a thousand reasons to be depressed ~ but for me a \"Walk in the Woods\" or the East Coast Shore (which is only 10 miles away !) lifts my Spirit to Heaven and I say to myself \"What a Wonderful World ~ AMEN !\" Thanks for carin\' an\' sharin\' ~ Yours as ever |BRIAN
October 29th, 2017 05:09
Wonderment.
Accidental Poet said:
WOW! Again you have mesmerized me with your words Fay. You are a poet for the ages. Simply beautiful write.
October 29th, 2017 05:06
Accidental Poet said:
WOW! Again you have mesmerized me with your words Fay. You are a poet for the ages. Simply beautiful write.
October 29th, 2017 05:06
This Time.
LukeCoomer said:
Fantastic I enjoyed your nostalgic feelings made me remember similar things
October 28th, 2017 18:16
LukeCoomer said:
Fantastic I enjoyed your nostalgic feelings made me remember similar things
October 28th, 2017 18:16
This Time.
Louis Gibbs said:
The time of reflection in the late stages of a fully lived life echoed in this exquisite poem, Fay. Another beauty, and gift to us all! Thank you.
October 28th, 2017 07:54
Louis Gibbs said:
The time of reflection in the late stages of a fully lived life echoed in this exquisite poem, Fay. Another beauty, and gift to us all! Thank you.
October 28th, 2017 07:54
This Time.
Accidental Poet said:
A very thought provoking read Fay. Thanks for sharing.
October 28th, 2017 07:12
Accidental Poet said:
A very thought provoking read Fay. Thanks for sharing.
October 28th, 2017 07:12
This Time.
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m always in awe of your word choices - great work Fay
October 28th, 2017 05:57
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m always in awe of your word choices - great work Fay
October 28th, 2017 05:57
This Time.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhh CORNWALL ~ Mysterious land of all our emotions JOY & PAIN ~ SUNSHINE & SADNESS. Thanks for sharing FAY another beautiful Poem tinged with melancholy ~ ameliorated with a picture of aloness ! We all LOVE you FAY and our lives are blessed by Your poetry ~ Yours for ever ~ BRIAN X
October 28th, 2017 04:14
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhh CORNWALL ~ Mysterious land of all our emotions JOY & PAIN ~ SUNSHINE & SADNESS. Thanks for sharing FAY another beautiful Poem tinged with melancholy ~ ameliorated with a picture of aloness ! We all LOVE you FAY and our lives are blessed by Your poetry ~ Yours for ever ~ BRIAN X
October 28th, 2017 04:14
Unexplained.
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully said, Fay! I think we who are in the Fall or even Winter of life, all have this yearning for Spring sometimes. You expressed it so well. And while we may not follow the other star yet, we do know that eventually we will be flying together again.
October 27th, 2017 11:55
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully said, Fay! I think we who are in the Fall or even Winter of life, all have this yearning for Spring sometimes. You expressed it so well. And while we may not follow the other star yet, we do know that eventually we will be flying together again.
October 27th, 2017 11:55
Unexplained.
Louis Gibbs said:
Your poem touches a deep chord in reflecting such a great loss, Fay. \"Why was one star made to fly in unexplained orbit yet its mate may not follow?\" says it all quite beautifully!
October 27th, 2017 10:04
Louis Gibbs said:
Your poem touches a deep chord in reflecting such a great loss, Fay. \"Why was one star made to fly in unexplained orbit yet its mate may not follow?\" says it all quite beautifully!
October 27th, 2017 10:04
Unexplained.
myself and me said:
The last stanza caught me. Beautiful writing.
October 27th, 2017 08:03
myself and me said:
The last stanza caught me. Beautiful writing.
October 27th, 2017 08:03
Unexplained.
Accidental Poet said:
Your writing always astounds me Fay. Great job as always.
October 27th, 2017 07:38
Accidental Poet said:
Your writing always astounds me Fay. Great job as always.
October 27th, 2017 07:38
Unexplained.
Laura🌻 said:
Fay,
Your writes are amazing!
This one does make us wonder and ponder
why one goes
and the other one stays!
My mom asks that
every single day!
Why he and not me?
October 27th, 2017 04:00
Laura🌻 said:
Fay,
Your writes are amazing!
This one does make us wonder and ponder
why one goes
and the other one stays!
My mom asks that
every single day!
Why he and not me?
October 27th, 2017 04:00
Behind and Between.
Goldfinch60 said:
That veil is so thin and some can see through it. Good write once more Fay.
October 27th, 2017 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
That veil is so thin and some can see through it. Good write once more Fay.
October 27th, 2017 00:50
Behind and Between.
Heather T said:
This other-worldly offering pairs well with a book by Dr. Hugh Ross that I\'m nibbling on for the second time regarding the transdimensionality of God. Stunning work, Fay.
October 26th, 2017 20:00
Heather T said:
This other-worldly offering pairs well with a book by Dr. Hugh Ross that I\'m nibbling on for the second time regarding the transdimensionality of God. Stunning work, Fay.
October 26th, 2017 20:00
Behind and Between.
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Through the thinnest of veils there exists worlds behind and between\" ... Speaks volumes on the perception of the seeker. The phrase says it all so succinctly and so poetically well, Fay. I do believe your and your muse share my conception of this illusory realm. This one must go into my favorites. Congratulations on this treasure!
October 26th, 2017 08:46
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Through the thinnest of veils there exists worlds behind and between\" ... Speaks volumes on the perception of the seeker. The phrase says it all so succinctly and so poetically well, Fay. I do believe your and your muse share my conception of this illusory realm. This one must go into my favorites. Congratulations on this treasure!
October 26th, 2017 08:46
Behind and Between.
myself and me said:
The words in your poem are so accurate and elegant. So much pleasure to read.
October 26th, 2017 07:51
myself and me said:
The words in your poem are so accurate and elegant. So much pleasure to read.
October 26th, 2017 07:51
Behind and Between.
Michael Edwards said:
Supreme poetry as ever - great Fay
October 26th, 2017 07:30
Michael Edwards said:
Supreme poetry as ever - great Fay
October 26th, 2017 07:30
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