Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Souls Know.
Christina8 said:
I love this poem! \"defying barriers of culture or race...\" was a great way to start this poem. It just personally struck me. And then the ending \"made them one single flame..\" truly defined what it means to have true love and togetherness. One of my favorites from you, Fay!
September 28th, 2017 07:11
Christina8 said:
I love this poem! \"defying barriers of culture or race...\" was a great way to start this poem. It just personally struck me. And then the ending \"made them one single flame..\" truly defined what it means to have true love and togetherness. One of my favorites from you, Fay!
September 28th, 2017 07:11
Souls Know.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Wonderful uplifting thoughts for a Stressful Thursday Morning (First Academic Board of the New Term !) ~ I L Y ! TRUE LOVE ~ Like that between Angels & I ~ enables one to face the toughest assignments with a Smile. Please pray for William & Kate and Harry & Meghan as they represent the UK all over the World ~ but with love in their Hearts ! Pray also for the success of the Invictus Games in TORONTO which is a great outpouring of love by the Partners of the Wounded Veterans ~ LET THEIR BE LOVE~ LOVE CHANGES ALL THINGS ~ AMEN ! Love in the Spirit ~ BRIAN Your poem has lifted my Spirit to Paradise !
September 28th, 2017 01:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Wonderful uplifting thoughts for a Stressful Thursday Morning (First Academic Board of the New Term !) ~ I L Y ! TRUE LOVE ~ Like that between Angels & I ~ enables one to face the toughest assignments with a Smile. Please pray for William & Kate and Harry & Meghan as they represent the UK all over the World ~ but with love in their Hearts ! Pray also for the success of the Invictus Games in TORONTO which is a great outpouring of love by the Partners of the Wounded Veterans ~ LET THEIR BE LOVE~ LOVE CHANGES ALL THINGS ~ AMEN ! Love in the Spirit ~ BRIAN Your poem has lifted my Spirit to Paradise !
September 28th, 2017 01:47
Souls Know.
Michael Edwards said:
Just read Santita\'s posting - must be the day for feel-good - great write Fay.
September 28th, 2017 01:43
Michael Edwards said:
Just read Santita\'s posting - must be the day for feel-good - great write Fay.
September 28th, 2017 01:43
Souls Know.
Poetic Dan said:
Your words felt like a gigantic hug, thank you Fay a perfect read in the morning to set a day of love!
September 28th, 2017 01:39
Poetic Dan said:
Your words felt like a gigantic hug, thank you Fay a perfect read in the morning to set a day of love!
September 28th, 2017 01:39
Souls Know.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the souls fuse into one with all true lovers.
September 28th, 2017 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the souls fuse into one with all true lovers.
September 28th, 2017 01:30
Souls Know.
FredPeyer said:
Fay you have such an incredible way with words! I do look forward every day to read your newest poem. Have no idea how you do it!
\'Souls know when they become fused identity\' = an incredible, beautiful way of saying I love you.
Great, great writing!
September 28th, 2017 01:13
FredPeyer said:
Fay you have such an incredible way with words! I do look forward every day to read your newest poem. Have no idea how you do it!
\'Souls know when they become fused identity\' = an incredible, beautiful way of saying I love you.
Great, great writing!
September 28th, 2017 01:13
A Something.
WL Schuett said:
Very beautiful Fay , love a little birdwatching myself
September 27th, 2017 16:38
WL Schuett said:
Very beautiful Fay , love a little birdwatching myself
September 27th, 2017 16:38
A Something.
Louis Gibbs said:
A graceful tribute to this small creature of nature, Fay. Well done, as usual.
September 27th, 2017 14:01
Louis Gibbs said:
A graceful tribute to this small creature of nature, Fay. Well done, as usual.
September 27th, 2017 14:01
A Something.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, only you can make this birdsong encounter sound like a hymn!
September 27th, 2017 11:30
FredPeyer said:
Fay, only you can make this birdsong encounter sound like a hymn!
September 27th, 2017 11:30
A Something.
Michael Edwards said:
Love it and \'bluebell sky\' is inspired.
September 27th, 2017 08:30
Michael Edwards said:
Love it and \'bluebell sky\' is inspired.
September 27th, 2017 08:30
A Something.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ O to be in Cornwall now that Autumn\'s here ! We are all up Early today enjoying a walk and the Spring Chorus ~ Alas I have to leave for work soon (8:30 am). Love the Poem and the Picture ~ perfection ! Yours as ever BRIAN Please check my GHAZAL ~ some verses are a bit risque so early in the morning but its a \"15\" not an \"18\" ~ Thanks B.
September 27th, 2017 01:28
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ O to be in Cornwall now that Autumn\'s here ! We are all up Early today enjoying a walk and the Spring Chorus ~ Alas I have to leave for work soon (8:30 am). Love the Poem and the Picture ~ perfection ! Yours as ever BRIAN Please check my GHAZAL ~ some verses are a bit risque so early in the morning but its a \"15\" not an \"18\" ~ Thanks B.
September 27th, 2017 01:28
A Something.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful poem about a beautiful bird which is the smallest bird in the UK.
September 27th, 2017 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful poem about a beautiful bird which is the smallest bird in the UK.
September 27th, 2017 01:13
Turbulence.
malubotelho said:
Wonderful writing Fay. The ocean makes me feel very small with is grandiose mass. I love to sit at the beach and listen to it. Such an enchanting melody. Thanks for this vivid imaginary.
September 26th, 2017 15:01
malubotelho said:
Wonderful writing Fay. The ocean makes me feel very small with is grandiose mass. I love to sit at the beach and listen to it. Such an enchanting melody. Thanks for this vivid imaginary.
September 26th, 2017 15:01
Turbulence.
FredPeyer said:
After this poem Fay, every time I will be standing at the ocean\'s edge, I will think of you!
September 26th, 2017 11:55
FredPeyer said:
After this poem Fay, every time I will be standing at the ocean\'s edge, I will think of you!
September 26th, 2017 11:55
Turbulence.
WL Schuett said:
Took me there it\'s all I could ask , well done
September 26th, 2017 09:25
WL Schuett said:
Took me there it\'s all I could ask , well done
September 26th, 2017 09:25
Turbulence.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Her efforts to rise are heightened with effort of swelling. breaths inflate her skin to swollen balloons. We also see thinly super burst. With timely pitch she gives roar. Waves explode with ferocious sound and this amazes mind with turbulence and submarine pounding . Brilliant perception of sea is very well described in this poem. We get reality of sea while reading this. This is definitely an excellent drafting.
September 26th, 2017 08:21
Pintu Mahakul said:
Her efforts to rise are heightened with effort of swelling. breaths inflate her skin to swollen balloons. We also see thinly super burst. With timely pitch she gives roar. Waves explode with ferocious sound and this amazes mind with turbulence and submarine pounding . Brilliant perception of sea is very well described in this poem. We get reality of sea while reading this. This is definitely an excellent drafting.
September 26th, 2017 08:21
Turbulence.
Goldfinch60 said:
I was by that sea Fay. Thank you for taking me there.
September 26th, 2017 08:07
Goldfinch60 said:
I was by that sea Fay. Thank you for taking me there.
September 26th, 2017 08:07
Turbulence.
Louis Gibbs said:
A masterfully constructed piece composed of powerful imagery! Visually, as well as message-wise, this one is a beauty, Fay!
September 26th, 2017 07:56
Louis Gibbs said:
A masterfully constructed piece composed of powerful imagery! Visually, as well as message-wise, this one is a beauty, Fay!
September 26th, 2017 07:56
Turbulence.
Christina8 said:
Wonderfully written, so descriptive I feel like I\'m there. Splendid work!
September 26th, 2017 07:21
Christina8 said:
Wonderfully written, so descriptive I feel like I\'m there. Splendid work!
September 26th, 2017 07:21
Turbulence.
Michael Edwards said:
I can see it, I can hear it, I can smell it, a super work Fay
September 26th, 2017 07:04
Michael Edwards said:
I can see it, I can hear it, I can smell it, a super work Fay
September 26th, 2017 07:04
Not Yet..
dusk arising said:
Beautiful and really moving. Into my favourites.
September 25th, 2017 17:50
dusk arising said:
Beautiful and really moving. Into my favourites.
September 25th, 2017 17:50
Not Yet..
FredPeyer said:
Fay, you captured the feelings, the emotions perfectly. Great choice of words too. A very beautiful poem!
September 25th, 2017 16:56
FredPeyer said:
Fay, you captured the feelings, the emotions perfectly. Great choice of words too. A very beautiful poem!
September 25th, 2017 16:56
Not Yet..
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ Memories are indeed made of this. Your Memories of your Beloved Partner are very very dear to You and also become dear to us as you have the grace to share them ~ THANK YOU. Yours as ever ~ BRIAN I love the pathos in the visual ~ thank you ~ B.
September 25th, 2017 16:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ Memories are indeed made of this. Your Memories of your Beloved Partner are very very dear to You and also become dear to us as you have the grace to share them ~ THANK YOU. Yours as ever ~ BRIAN I love the pathos in the visual ~ thank you ~ B.
September 25th, 2017 16:51
Addiction.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, I think you are the only person on this planet who can turn sunrise and sunset into a passionate love affair! Great writing.
September 25th, 2017 11:11
FredPeyer said:
Fay, I think you are the only person on this planet who can turn sunrise and sunset into a passionate love affair! Great writing.
September 25th, 2017 11:11
Not Yet..
Christina8 said:
Beautiful write Fay, but sad. I would\'ve used \"evocative\" but it\'s been used twice! Full of emotion! Thanks for sharing.
September 25th, 2017 06:59
Christina8 said:
Beautiful write Fay, but sad. I would\'ve used \"evocative\" but it\'s been used twice! Full of emotion! Thanks for sharing.
September 25th, 2017 06:59
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