Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Glorious Din.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fay, those geese are wonderful to see and when they are quiet it can be overwhelming.
October 18th, 2017 08:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fay, those geese are wonderful to see and when they are quiet it can be overwhelming.
October 18th, 2017 08:00
Be To Me.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing & caring FAY. The Nature of the perfect RELATIONSHIP you describe ~ is what we all crave for the whole of your life. My current relationship with ANGELA os like that and I trust it will last for ever. But like all things LOVE is transient ~ so I just enjoy it \"One Day at a time !\" Yours as ever ~ BRIAN ~ Please check out my FUSION on COLOUR and ~ if your muse moves ~ please add an ode ~ Thanks B.
October 17th, 2017 16:01
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing & caring FAY. The Nature of the perfect RELATIONSHIP you describe ~ is what we all crave for the whole of your life. My current relationship with ANGELA os like that and I trust it will last for ever. But like all things LOVE is transient ~ so I just enjoy it \"One Day at a time !\" Yours as ever ~ BRIAN ~ Please check out my FUSION on COLOUR and ~ if your muse moves ~ please add an ode ~ Thanks B.
October 17th, 2017 16:01
Be To Me.
Mugsdaddy said:
Beautiful message. True love til the last, always for all time.
Excellent,
Mugsdaddy
October 17th, 2017 12:54
Mugsdaddy said:
Beautiful message. True love til the last, always for all time.
Excellent,
Mugsdaddy
October 17th, 2017 12:54
Be To Me.
Christina8 said:
Wonderfully said, a love that withstands time! Of course you said it so beautifully. A truly great poem!
October 17th, 2017 07:05
Christina8 said:
Wonderfully said, a love that withstands time! Of course you said it so beautifully. A truly great poem!
October 17th, 2017 07:05
Be To Me.
Accidental Poet said:
And all these things of you Fay are true. ; )
October 17th, 2017 04:00
Accidental Poet said:
And all these things of you Fay are true. ; )
October 17th, 2017 04:00
YOU.
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Key? Secret? Text? Spell?\" You keep us enthralled to the end, Fay. It is a brilliant design, indeed, this creation ... as you capture herein!
October 16th, 2017 11:59
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Key? Secret? Text? Spell?\" You keep us enthralled to the end, Fay. It is a brilliant design, indeed, this creation ... as you capture herein!
October 16th, 2017 11:59
YOU.
FredPeyer said:
A beautiful, beautiful poem, Fay!
Thank you for posting!
October 16th, 2017 11:25
FredPeyer said:
A beautiful, beautiful poem, Fay!
Thank you for posting!
October 16th, 2017 11:25
YOU.
MendedFences27 said:
Alchemy and Nature, said to be one and the same. What great descriptive meanderings you have taken us on. Lovely as usual, especially the fourth stanza. Loved it. - Phil A.
October 16th, 2017 10:07
MendedFences27 said:
Alchemy and Nature, said to be one and the same. What great descriptive meanderings you have taken us on. Lovely as usual, especially the fourth stanza. Loved it. - Phil A.
October 16th, 2017 10:07
YOU.
Heather T said:
From your unique eye to your pen, you give us new revelations of creation\'s splendor. What a gift!
October 16th, 2017 08:28
Heather T said:
From your unique eye to your pen, you give us new revelations of creation\'s splendor. What a gift!
October 16th, 2017 08:28
YOU.
Accidental Poet said:
So beautiful words from such a beautiful soul. ; )
October 16th, 2017 04:53
Accidental Poet said:
So beautiful words from such a beautiful soul. ; )
October 16th, 2017 04:53
Owl-Sound.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write once more Fay. Owls are wonderful creatures.
October 16th, 2017 00:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write once more Fay. Owls are wonderful creatures.
October 16th, 2017 00:30
Owl-Sound.
MendedFences27 said:
As it hunts through ruins of castles, an owl\' s call do you hear? Somehow there is an unearthly tinge to this natural occurrence. Owls in myth are harbingers of death. In other myths they signify wisdom. Surely, an owl among the ruins of a former seat of wisdom, would be the basis for a great poem. Inspiration!!
Your poem is lovely and it creates images of many things, of ruins, of olden castles, of an owl flying in the night, then catching its prey in a sudden fall. Loved every line. - Phil A.
October 15th, 2017 15:43
MendedFences27 said:
As it hunts through ruins of castles, an owl\' s call do you hear? Somehow there is an unearthly tinge to this natural occurrence. Owls in myth are harbingers of death. In other myths they signify wisdom. Surely, an owl among the ruins of a former seat of wisdom, would be the basis for a great poem. Inspiration!!
Your poem is lovely and it creates images of many things, of ruins, of olden castles, of an owl flying in the night, then catching its prey in a sudden fall. Loved every line. - Phil A.
October 15th, 2017 15:43
Owl-Sound.
Louis Gibbs said:
A lovely ode to a magical creature, in my mind. I once had a unique encounter with a Great White Owl, but that it is a long story for another time. Really like this one, Fay!
October 15th, 2017 07:08
Louis Gibbs said:
A lovely ode to a magical creature, in my mind. I once had a unique encounter with a Great White Owl, but that it is a long story for another time. Really like this one, Fay!
October 15th, 2017 07:08
Owl-Sound.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for a lovely \"Tone Sonnet 4442 !) I can both hear and see the BARN OWL ~ lovely photo. Once again you have shared some of the sights and sounds of Autumn ~ beautiful. Your Friend BRIAN
October 15th, 2017 06:53
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for a lovely \"Tone Sonnet 4442 !) I can both hear and see the BARN OWL ~ lovely photo. Once again you have shared some of the sights and sounds of Autumn ~ beautiful. Your Friend BRIAN
October 15th, 2017 06:53
Crossed Wires.
orchidee said:
Yes, fine write Fay. I thought similar things when I saw some abstracts at an art show.
October 14th, 2017 10:01
orchidee said:
Yes, fine write Fay. I thought similar things when I saw some abstracts at an art show.
October 14th, 2017 10:01
Crossed Wires.
WL Schuett said:
Very good melding of poem to picture , well done Fay
October 14th, 2017 09:04
WL Schuett said:
Very good melding of poem to picture , well done Fay
October 14th, 2017 09:04
Crossed Wires.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR SHARING FAY ~ Using a \"block\" presentation gives it a poignancy the content justifies. In our communities we are all cross linked ~ Family ~ Work ~ Community ~ Church etc. Life & Love affects everyone in our web ! Love the poem ~ it made me think. MPS is of course one such network ! Love the picture it resonated with my muse as well ! Your as ever BRIAN
October 14th, 2017 08:26
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR SHARING FAY ~ Using a \"block\" presentation gives it a poignancy the content justifies. In our communities we are all cross linked ~ Family ~ Work ~ Community ~ Church etc. Life & Love affects everyone in our web ! Love the poem ~ it made me think. MPS is of course one such network ! Love the picture it resonated with my muse as well ! Your as ever BRIAN
October 14th, 2017 08:26
Crossed Wires.
Accidental Poet said:
Yes Fay, entanglements of points of view can be a breeding ground for disruption of peaceful waters. Great writing Fay. ; )
October 14th, 2017 07:42
Accidental Poet said:
Yes Fay, entanglements of points of view can be a breeding ground for disruption of peaceful waters. Great writing Fay. ; )
October 14th, 2017 07:42
Crossed Wires.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, this seems to be a departure from your usual writing, but I like it!
October 14th, 2017 04:48
FredPeyer said:
Fay, this seems to be a departure from your usual writing, but I like it!
October 14th, 2017 04:48
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