Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
The Undisturbed.
WriteBeLight said:
I like Edward\'s question. You do love nature and all of its glory. So well done.
August 25th, 2017 08:07
WriteBeLight said:
I like Edward\'s question. You do love nature and all of its glory. So well done.
August 25th, 2017 08:07
The Undisturbed.
Goldfinch60 said:
With Nature is a great place to be to become calm in life. Good write Fay.
August 25th, 2017 07:42
Goldfinch60 said:
With Nature is a great place to be to become calm in life. Good write Fay.
August 25th, 2017 07:42
The Undisturbed.
Louis Gibbs said:
The ordered form this poem takes adds to the calm it exudes. A pleasant piece, indeed, Fay!
August 25th, 2017 07:14
Louis Gibbs said:
The ordered form this poem takes adds to the calm it exudes. A pleasant piece, indeed, Fay!
August 25th, 2017 07:14
The Undisturbed.
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m there where e filial saplings stretch and reach beneath the forest’s canopy - great picture painted Fay.
August 25th, 2017 04:35
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m there where e filial saplings stretch and reach beneath the forest’s canopy - great picture painted Fay.
August 25th, 2017 04:35
The Undisturbed.
dusk arising said:
I can feel the coolness of your woodland. You brought it to life in my mind. Lovely writing here.
August 25th, 2017 04:35
dusk arising said:
I can feel the coolness of your woodland. You brought it to life in my mind. Lovely writing here.
August 25th, 2017 04:35
The Undisturbed.
Accidental Poet said:
Such a beautiful write Fay. Wooded trails can be so inspiring of nature\'s vibrant silence. I love it. ; )
August 25th, 2017 04:16
Accidental Poet said:
Such a beautiful write Fay. Wooded trails can be so inspiring of nature\'s vibrant silence. I love it. ; )
August 25th, 2017 04:16
The Undisturbed.
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
Fay, there\'s just something about you and nature.. You seem to go hand in hand! Hey! No, you couldn\'t be HER, could you? Mother Nature Herself?
August 25th, 2017 04:15
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
Fay, there\'s just something about you and nature.. You seem to go hand in hand! Hey! No, you couldn\'t be HER, could you? Mother Nature Herself?
August 25th, 2017 04:15
Questions.
dusk arising said:
Those last three lines kill me inside. I meet widows with my romantic intent.. Beautifully written.
August 24th, 2017 16:20
dusk arising said:
Those last three lines kill me inside. I meet widows with my romantic intent.. Beautifully written.
August 24th, 2017 16:20
Questions.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, this poem is brilliantly written, an emotional powerhouse, with a subject we all have to deal with sooner or later. Fay-tastic!
August 24th, 2017 13:18
FredPeyer said:
Fay, this poem is brilliantly written, an emotional powerhouse, with a subject we all have to deal with sooner or later. Fay-tastic!
August 24th, 2017 13:18
Questions.
Christina8 said:
Love this poem! Very descriptive and full of emotion. Wonderful!
August 24th, 2017 11:02
Christina8 said:
Love this poem! Very descriptive and full of emotion. Wonderful!
August 24th, 2017 11:02
Questions.
malubotelho said:
You can speak of anything in the same delicate way. You are a soft lady Fay. Again I repeat: I just love to read you. Thanks for sharing.
August 24th, 2017 09:34
malubotelho said:
You can speak of anything in the same delicate way. You are a soft lady Fay. Again I repeat: I just love to read you. Thanks for sharing.
August 24th, 2017 09:34
Questions.
orchidee said:
You walloweth not, Brian! It\'s not \'any old rubbish\' on \'ere, ya know!
August 24th, 2017 08:52
orchidee said:
You walloweth not, Brian! It\'s not \'any old rubbish\' on \'ere, ya know!
August 24th, 2017 08:52
Questions.
orchidee said:
Yes, good symbiosis - if I knew what it was exactly?! heehee. Good write Fay. The poem and picture covey a sort of claustrophobic atmosphere, even though the pic is a wide outdoor scene.
August 24th, 2017 08:51
orchidee said:
Yes, good symbiosis - if I knew what it was exactly?! heehee. Good write Fay. The poem and picture covey a sort of claustrophobic atmosphere, even though the pic is a wide outdoor scene.
August 24th, 2017 08:51
Questions.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. Those \"nows\" can be so very fleeting.\" .
August 24th, 2017 08:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. Those \"nows\" can be so very fleeting.\" .
August 24th, 2017 08:05
Questions.
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful lament of lost love, Fay. Nothing is more crushing to the spirit, and your poem portrays the effect well. I admire you for taking the risk of \"late-love\".
August 24th, 2017 07:35
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful lament of lost love, Fay. Nothing is more crushing to the spirit, and your poem portrays the effect well. I admire you for taking the risk of \"late-love\".
August 24th, 2017 07:35
Questions.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL symbiosis of Picture & Poem which is a FAY hallmark. While I wallow in my own odd-odes ~ I think \"Surely FAY can\'t raise the MPS Bar again !\" but you have ! Now I no longer question it but see each of you daily offerings as a \"Masterclass in Perfection\". This is no exception ~ it made me cry but I love it and You too ! Further analysis is superfluous ~ Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN
August 24th, 2017 04:25
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL symbiosis of Picture & Poem which is a FAY hallmark. While I wallow in my own odd-odes ~ I think \"Surely FAY can\'t raise the MPS Bar again !\" but you have ! Now I no longer question it but see each of you daily offerings as a \"Masterclass in Perfection\". This is no exception ~ it made me cry but I love it and You too ! Further analysis is superfluous ~ Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN
August 24th, 2017 04:25
In Sequence.
malubotelho said:
Always beautiful Fay, can not miss one. Just lovely.
August 23rd, 2017 13:54
malubotelho said:
Always beautiful Fay, can not miss one. Just lovely.
August 23rd, 2017 13:54
In Sequence.
FredPeyer said:
Fay you know how to make a sunrise very, very special!
August 23rd, 2017 04:10
FredPeyer said:
Fay you know how to make a sunrise very, very special!
August 23rd, 2017 04:10
In Sequence.
Michael Edwards said:
Every word so significant and not a word wasted or a word too many - superb write Fay
August 23rd, 2017 03:45
Michael Edwards said:
Every word so significant and not a word wasted or a word too many - superb write Fay
August 23rd, 2017 03:45
Read Rightly.
Sefrin said:
Such powerful words. This is an absolute masterpiece of a poem.
August 22nd, 2017 19:12
Sefrin said:
Such powerful words. This is an absolute masterpiece of a poem.
August 22nd, 2017 19:12
Read Rightly.
malubotelho said:
I bet if they had to fight war as they used to fight long time ago, with the king riding up front of the troops they would never start a war now. But the cowards can hide themselves behind inocente people and after they think there is victory. It is a shame. Thanks Fay for stepping out of your delicate field of flowers and write this.
August 22nd, 2017 14:53
malubotelho said:
I bet if they had to fight war as they used to fight long time ago, with the king riding up front of the troops they would never start a war now. But the cowards can hide themselves behind inocente people and after they think there is victory. It is a shame. Thanks Fay for stepping out of your delicate field of flowers and write this.
August 22nd, 2017 14:53
Read Rightly.
burning-embers said:
So much spilled blood wasted and ruined lifes and for what? What was gained or lost other than the saintlyness of those who stopped it. Excellent writing on our ongoing self inflicted plague.
August 22nd, 2017 14:13
burning-embers said:
So much spilled blood wasted and ruined lifes and for what? What was gained or lost other than the saintlyness of those who stopped it. Excellent writing on our ongoing self inflicted plague.
August 22nd, 2017 14:13
Read Rightly.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. We\'re the only species (a minority of humans?) that kills our fellow beings just for the sake of it surely, or because of being caught up in the conflict. Wild animals, etc need to kill for food. That we can understand.
August 22nd, 2017 08:37
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. We\'re the only species (a minority of humans?) that kills our fellow beings just for the sake of it surely, or because of being caught up in the conflict. Wild animals, etc need to kill for food. That we can understand.
August 22nd, 2017 08:37
Read Rightly.
Louis Gibbs said:
The need for conflict has always been an integral element in the plot of the reality we create and share. Is it time for a new paradigm, a revision in the story of man?
It would require a monumental shift in the awareness of our species.There are encouraging signs in the new ones coming in ... we shall see.
August 22nd, 2017 08:14
Louis Gibbs said:
The need for conflict has always been an integral element in the plot of the reality we create and share. Is it time for a new paradigm, a revision in the story of man?
It would require a monumental shift in the awareness of our species.There are encouraging signs in the new ones coming in ... we shall see.
August 22nd, 2017 08:14
Read Rightly.
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay, if only they who cause the wars just sorted it out themselves without involving all the innocent people they send to fight wars for their own egotism.
August 22nd, 2017 08:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay, if only they who cause the wars just sorted it out themselves without involving all the innocent people they send to fight wars for their own egotism.
August 22nd, 2017 08:04
Read Rightly.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ By conviction I am a Pacifist and will state my case and take my stand should I ever be conscripted ! Members of my extended Family suffered for their stance as Pacifists in WW1. I WW2 they were drafted into non~ combatant services (medical etc). The old lie is still prevalent today \"Dulce et Decorum est ~ por Patria Mori\" Yours as ever ~ BRIAN
August 22nd, 2017 07:25
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ By conviction I am a Pacifist and will state my case and take my stand should I ever be conscripted ! Members of my extended Family suffered for their stance as Pacifists in WW1. I WW2 they were drafted into non~ combatant services (medical etc). The old lie is still prevalent today \"Dulce et Decorum est ~ por Patria Mori\" Yours as ever ~ BRIAN
August 22nd, 2017 07:25
Read Rightly.
FredPeyer said:
War sucks! But you said it much more eloquently!
August 22nd, 2017 04:18
FredPeyer said:
War sucks! But you said it much more eloquently!
August 22nd, 2017 04:18
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