Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Uncivilized.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ I love poetry that is inspired by a picture as this one is and some of mine are also. The LADY is so so wistful and (to my eye ?) appears to be \"with child\" ? This would add poignancy to your beautiful Word. Love all your Poems FAY they always speak to my Heart not my Head. I\'m trying to perceive the Poem through your eyes & mind ~ OK. Thanks for sharing ! Yours as ever BRIAN
July 27th, 2017 05:20
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ I love poetry that is inspired by a picture as this one is and some of mine are also. The LADY is so so wistful and (to my eye ?) appears to be \"with child\" ? This would add poignancy to your beautiful Word. Love all your Poems FAY they always speak to my Heart not my Head. I\'m trying to perceive the Poem through your eyes & mind ~ OK. Thanks for sharing ! Yours as ever BRIAN
July 27th, 2017 05:20
Uncivilized.
kevin browne said:
why must we in fact Fay Slimm? I love this and think you have done a great job. thank you.
July 27th, 2017 05:16
kevin browne said:
why must we in fact Fay Slimm? I love this and think you have done a great job. thank you.
July 27th, 2017 05:16
Uncivilized.
FredPeyer said:
What a picture, is she bringing the candle for a night of love-making, or is she leaving, saying good-bye?
And the poem is not bad either!
July 27th, 2017 04:51
FredPeyer said:
What a picture, is she bringing the candle for a night of love-making, or is she leaving, saying good-bye?
And the poem is not bad either!
July 27th, 2017 04:51
Uncivilized.
Frank Prem said:
Great painting to serve as meditation, Fay. Tricky in the rhymes - very strong ending, I thought.
July 27th, 2017 03:43
Frank Prem said:
Great painting to serve as meditation, Fay. Tricky in the rhymes - very strong ending, I thought.
July 27th, 2017 03:43
Making Sense.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. Love can confuse everything at times.
July 27th, 2017 01:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. Love can confuse everything at times.
July 27th, 2017 01:04
River-Speak.
charlesbarrett said:
“Deep-level eavesdroppers wrote liquid signatures
on your rocky bed as chromosome cries
preserved in suspension became effervescent.” Just beautiful. You are definitely one of a kind. My only negative comment is that I’m upset that I didn’t read your work sooner. Thanks for sharing.
July 26th, 2017 09:02
charlesbarrett said:
“Deep-level eavesdroppers wrote liquid signatures
on your rocky bed as chromosome cries
preserved in suspension became effervescent.” Just beautiful. You are definitely one of a kind. My only negative comment is that I’m upset that I didn’t read your work sooner. Thanks for sharing.
July 26th, 2017 09:02
Making Sense.
malubotelho said:
I would fall in love as many times as possible because it is a transcendent feeling. Beautiful writing Fay.
July 26th, 2017 08:31
malubotelho said:
I would fall in love as many times as possible because it is a transcendent feeling. Beautiful writing Fay.
July 26th, 2017 08:31
Making Sense.
lastbadbrad6 said:
faye, youve penned a true picture of love, enjoyed it immensley
July 26th, 2017 05:22
lastbadbrad6 said:
faye, youve penned a true picture of love, enjoyed it immensley
July 26th, 2017 05:22
Making Sense.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
\"Falling in love again ~ I can\'t help it !\"
Thanks for reminding us Fay ~ the sensation is all you say and more ! I am in love at the moment and Angela is love with me ~ so i don\'t fall in love with the delectable (good word) Ladies I come into contact with every day ~ BUT ~ God knows I so easily could. I find when i am really in love ~ my capacity to fall in love with another lady ~ is ON HOLD ! Is that your experience (being in love with a Man of course !) too. Thanks for sharing a beautifully penned (and so so true to experience) POEM ~ Yours as ever BRIAN Please check my FABRICS poem ~ I have rated it 18 because of the PICTURE ! Thanks B.
July 26th, 2017 04:49
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
\"Falling in love again ~ I can\'t help it !\"
Thanks for reminding us Fay ~ the sensation is all you say and more ! I am in love at the moment and Angela is love with me ~ so i don\'t fall in love with the delectable (good word) Ladies I come into contact with every day ~ BUT ~ God knows I so easily could. I find when i am really in love ~ my capacity to fall in love with another lady ~ is ON HOLD ! Is that your experience (being in love with a Man of course !) too. Thanks for sharing a beautifully penned (and so so true to experience) POEM ~ Yours as ever BRIAN Please check my FABRICS poem ~ I have rated it 18 because of the PICTURE ! Thanks B.
July 26th, 2017 04:49
Making Sense.
FredPeyer said:
....and now you are lost with scrambled brain, confused, mystified, and topsy-turvy tossed sky high.
Love is unpredictable. Nice writing Fay!
July 26th, 2017 04:20
FredPeyer said:
....and now you are lost with scrambled brain, confused, mystified, and topsy-turvy tossed sky high.
Love is unpredictable. Nice writing Fay!
July 26th, 2017 04:20
River-Speak.
Heather T said:
I love being lost in your language again. Your images brought to mind the many pieces of pottery and arrow heads churned up in the sandy banks by the river I played by all of my growing up years. I used to imagine the natives hunting deer and fishing.
July 25th, 2017 23:21
Heather T said:
I love being lost in your language again. Your images brought to mind the many pieces of pottery and arrow heads churned up in the sandy banks by the river I played by all of my growing up years. I used to imagine the natives hunting deer and fishing.
July 25th, 2017 23:21
River-Speak.
malubotelho said:
I agree with Fred, you are good indeed. I\'m looking to buy a book from you if you have published one. I almost feel like I\'m taking advantage of your writing reading it for free. Thank you so very much.
July 25th, 2017 12:23
malubotelho said:
I agree with Fred, you are good indeed. I\'m looking to buy a book from you if you have published one. I almost feel like I\'m taking advantage of your writing reading it for free. Thank you so very much.
July 25th, 2017 12:23
River-Speak.
FredPeyer said:
Incredible poem, incredible metaphors, incredible writing.
Fay, you are good indeed!
July 25th, 2017 12:16
FredPeyer said:
Incredible poem, incredible metaphors, incredible writing.
Fay, you are good indeed!
July 25th, 2017 12:16
River-Speak.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Rivers are very precious in the purification and preservation of life ! Trees thrive on River Banks ~ Animals enjoy their cool and life giving nectar ~ insects and fish spawn and dwell in and by Rivers. How would your River report on the Humans who have lived on her Banks ~ drank her Water and used her for transport from Village to Village ~ did they treat you well ? Do we treat you better now ? I think not ~ Let us PRAISE and PRESERVE our Rivers ~ they are a precious heritage. Thanks for caring ~ Yours BRIAN
July 25th, 2017 07:40
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Rivers are very precious in the purification and preservation of life ! Trees thrive on River Banks ~ Animals enjoy their cool and life giving nectar ~ insects and fish spawn and dwell in and by Rivers. How would your River report on the Humans who have lived on her Banks ~ drank her Water and used her for transport from Village to Village ~ did they treat you well ? Do we treat you better now ? I think not ~ Let us PRAISE and PRESERVE our Rivers ~ they are a precious heritage. Thanks for caring ~ Yours BRIAN
July 25th, 2017 07:40
River-Speak.
Michael Edwards said:
So evocative of the river - beautifully captured.
July 25th, 2017 06:49
Michael Edwards said:
So evocative of the river - beautifully captured.
July 25th, 2017 06:49
River-Speak.
kevin browne said:
I just jumped in the river and flowed along looking for everything you wrote and yes, it was totally beautiful just like River-Speak. brilliant, Fay Slimm x
July 25th, 2017 05:14
kevin browne said:
I just jumped in the river and flowed along looking for everything you wrote and yes, it was totally beautiful just like River-Speak. brilliant, Fay Slimm x
July 25th, 2017 05:14
New Appetite.
malubotelho said:
No regrets never for come here and read your poems. Each time a better read. Thank you so much.
July 24th, 2017 22:08
malubotelho said:
No regrets never for come here and read your poems. Each time a better read. Thank you so much.
July 24th, 2017 22:08
New Appetite.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, you have a way with words, and there is \'not a sign of regret\' for having read your beautiful poem.
July 24th, 2017 11:42
FredPeyer said:
Fay, you have a way with words, and there is \'not a sign of regret\' for having read your beautiful poem.
July 24th, 2017 11:42
New Appetite.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Move on ~ He\'s a chapter in the past
Don\'t close the book
Just turn the page !
I love it Fay ~ it is a new sentiment for you !
Unrequited Love ~ Cage ajar ~ The bird fled !
BUT ~ New desire ~ New appetite Female eyes
Lit again and full of hunger ~ Prized then the nectar
Fired by another ~ with not a sign of regret !
This is so so sensuous FAY and gives hope to
all who have Loved & Lost ~ To Love again !
Thanks for caring ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
July 24th, 2017 09:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Move on ~ He\'s a chapter in the past
Don\'t close the book
Just turn the page !
I love it Fay ~ it is a new sentiment for you !
Unrequited Love ~ Cage ajar ~ The bird fled !
BUT ~ New desire ~ New appetite Female eyes
Lit again and full of hunger ~ Prized then the nectar
Fired by another ~ with not a sign of regret !
This is so so sensuous FAY and gives hope to
all who have Loved & Lost ~ To Love again !
Thanks for caring ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
July 24th, 2017 09:47
New Appetite.
Louis Gibbs said:
A concise beauty, beautifully shaped! This one satisfies my order-driven soul. Thank you, Fay for rendering this gorgeous poem of love kindled anew.
July 24th, 2017 09:02
Louis Gibbs said:
A concise beauty, beautifully shaped! This one satisfies my order-driven soul. Thank you, Fay for rendering this gorgeous poem of love kindled anew.
July 24th, 2017 09:02
New Appetite.
Frank Prem said:
in with the new, and another page. Good job, Fay.
July 24th, 2017 04:29
Frank Prem said:
in with the new, and another page. Good job, Fay.
July 24th, 2017 04:29
Stillness.
Goldfinch60 said:
The stillness between lovers is a very special moment.
Wonderful words Fay.
July 24th, 2017 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
The stillness between lovers is a very special moment.
Wonderful words Fay.
July 24th, 2017 00:45
Stillness.
kevin browne said:
this has made me totally fall in love with you Fay Slimm. are you married? write of the day for me because it holds so much truth and meaning.
July 23rd, 2017 16:35
kevin browne said:
this has made me totally fall in love with you Fay Slimm. are you married? write of the day for me because it holds so much truth and meaning.
July 23rd, 2017 16:35
Stillness.
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful poem again, Fay. And you chose a good picture to go with it.
July 23rd, 2017 14:51
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful poem again, Fay. And you chose a good picture to go with it.
July 23rd, 2017 14:51
Stillness.
Louis Gibbs said:
Stillness between lovers speaks ever more loudly and deeply as their love evolves ... a beautiful thing to behold, indeed. So well messaged in this, another fine poem, Fay!
July 23rd, 2017 10:47
Louis Gibbs said:
Stillness between lovers speaks ever more loudly and deeply as their love evolves ... a beautiful thing to behold, indeed. So well messaged in this, another fine poem, Fay!
July 23rd, 2017 10:47
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