Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Losing You.
Louis Gibbs said:
Oh wow ... this touching poem, so beautifully shaped, hits all the bases of content and form, Fay! A classic to be sure, and a favorite. Thanks for this perfect example for us all.
August 18th, 2017 09:39
Louis Gibbs said:
Oh wow ... this touching poem, so beautifully shaped, hits all the bases of content and form, Fay! A classic to be sure, and a favorite. Thanks for this perfect example for us all.
August 18th, 2017 09:39
Losing You.
Sefrin said:
Absolutely breathtaking! Your words have the ability to reach the very soul. Amazing read, Fay!
August 18th, 2017 09:13
Sefrin said:
Absolutely breathtaking! Your words have the ability to reach the very soul. Amazing read, Fay!
August 18th, 2017 09:13
Losing You.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ I know your nostalgic Poems are difficult to write ~ but they have a unique beauty which i love ! It makes us all love you too with Poetic TLC ~ You jump off the page and into each o our hearts ~ You are lovely ! Love the Tree of Love and the melancholy visual ! Yours as ever BRIAN
August 18th, 2017 08:03
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ I know your nostalgic Poems are difficult to write ~ but they have a unique beauty which i love ! It makes us all love you too with Poetic TLC ~ You jump off the page and into each o our hearts ~ You are lovely ! Love the Tree of Love and the melancholy visual ! Yours as ever BRIAN
August 18th, 2017 08:03
Losing You.
Accidental Poet said:
Fay, you are a master of prose. The love you shared few ever get to experience. I myself have, but it was only one sided. You are such an inspiration.
August 18th, 2017 04:05
Accidental Poet said:
Fay, you are a master of prose. The love you shared few ever get to experience. I myself have, but it was only one sided. You are such an inspiration.
August 18th, 2017 04:05
Losing You.
FredPeyer said:
Faye, this is so beautiful, so tender, I think only a writer with a lot of life experience could penn. The shape of the poem reminds me of a Christmas tree (stylistic). I love the whole poem, but especially the last stanza starting with \'Yet love...\" In my humble opinion, that stanza could stand by itself as a separate insightful poem.
August 18th, 2017 03:15
FredPeyer said:
Faye, this is so beautiful, so tender, I think only a writer with a lot of life experience could penn. The shape of the poem reminds me of a Christmas tree (stylistic). I love the whole poem, but especially the last stanza starting with \'Yet love...\" In my humble opinion, that stanza could stand by itself as a separate insightful poem.
August 18th, 2017 03:15
Show Me.
malubotelho said:
I\'ve trained all my life to love. Today I\'m an expert. For me love is comfort because it is simple. It is just so easy. Beautiful prayer Fay.
August 17th, 2017 12:04
malubotelho said:
I\'ve trained all my life to love. Today I\'m an expert. For me love is comfort because it is simple. It is just so easy. Beautiful prayer Fay.
August 17th, 2017 12:04
Show Me.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ the BIBLE teaches that \"A GENTLE answer defuses WRATH !\" I have found this to work in real life. When we bring the ATTITUDES expressed in the Nine Fruit of the Spirit (Love ~ Joy ~ Peace etc) into real life situations then miracles do really happen ! Thanks for caring ~ yours as ever BRIAN
August 17th, 2017 07:49
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ the BIBLE teaches that \"A GENTLE answer defuses WRATH !\" I have found this to work in real life. When we bring the ATTITUDES expressed in the Nine Fruit of the Spirit (Love ~ Joy ~ Peace etc) into real life situations then miracles do really happen ! Thanks for caring ~ yours as ever BRIAN
August 17th, 2017 07:49
Show Me.
Louis Gibbs said:
Thank you for this timely prayer which reflects your wisdom and beautiful heart, Fay. I share it with you deeply.
August 17th, 2017 07:35
Louis Gibbs said:
Thank you for this timely prayer which reflects your wisdom and beautiful heart, Fay. I share it with you deeply.
August 17th, 2017 07:35
Show Me.
Nicholas Browning said:
I agree with the others. This is most certainly shifted from your usual style. I like it. Love\'s way is something I would also like to learn, in due time of course. Best wishes, Fay.
August 17th, 2017 07:17
Nicholas Browning said:
I agree with the others. This is most certainly shifted from your usual style. I like it. Love\'s way is something I would also like to learn, in due time of course. Best wishes, Fay.
August 17th, 2017 07:17
Show Me.
Michael Edwards said:
Fay this is so good and different from your usual style of writing - I like it very much.
August 17th, 2017 06:13
Michael Edwards said:
Fay this is so good and different from your usual style of writing - I like it very much.
August 17th, 2017 06:13
Show Me.
burning-embers said:
Its all about love really isn\'t it. But learning to love and what love is takes a lifetime.
August 17th, 2017 05:10
burning-embers said:
Its all about love really isn\'t it. But learning to love and what love is takes a lifetime.
August 17th, 2017 05:10
Changeling.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, you are making me look at air and wind in a whole different, much more exciting way!
August 16th, 2017 10:07
FredPeyer said:
Fay, you are making me look at air and wind in a whole different, much more exciting way!
August 16th, 2017 10:07
Changeling.
malubotelho said:
Equally beautiful as others I\'ve read from you before. Always awesome.
August 16th, 2017 10:00
malubotelho said:
Equally beautiful as others I\'ve read from you before. Always awesome.
August 16th, 2017 10:00
Love-Tongue.
FredPeyer said:
After all these other comments, all I can do now is to agree with them!
You ARE an awesome writer, Fay!
August 15th, 2017 11:49
FredPeyer said:
After all these other comments, all I can do now is to agree with them!
You ARE an awesome writer, Fay!
August 15th, 2017 11:49
Love-Tongue.
malubotelho said:
Fay, I\'ve read beautiful words from you but this one brought me to tears. This is the most beautiful poem I ever read about God and creation. Thanks for this awesome.
August 15th, 2017 10:45
malubotelho said:
Fay, I\'ve read beautiful words from you but this one brought me to tears. This is the most beautiful poem I ever read about God and creation. Thanks for this awesome.
August 15th, 2017 10:45
Love-Tongue.
Heather T said:
I have rarely read anything so beautiful about the One whose very syllables carved galaxy, flower, and fingerprint; that He loved so much, and poured out for humble skin and bones. What a gift, this morning\'s worship found in poem words. Just wow.
August 15th, 2017 07:55
Heather T said:
I have rarely read anything so beautiful about the One whose very syllables carved galaxy, flower, and fingerprint; that He loved so much, and poured out for humble skin and bones. What a gift, this morning\'s worship found in poem words. Just wow.
August 15th, 2017 07:55
Love-Tongue.
lasergraph said:
Diversity shows our uniqueness. Great read, thank you
August 15th, 2017 07:46
lasergraph said:
Diversity shows our uniqueness. Great read, thank you
August 15th, 2017 07:46
Love-Tongue.
Louis Gibbs said:
A perfection of a poem, Fay, giving tribute to Creator and the exquisite scheme of this world we all share. Beautifully presented in form!
August 15th, 2017 07:27
Louis Gibbs said:
A perfection of a poem, Fay, giving tribute to Creator and the exquisite scheme of this world we all share. Beautifully presented in form!
August 15th, 2017 07:27
Intake.
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Glamorous sunset scenes c poem in fabulous artistic phrasing. ESP I like how u put in jewelled diamanté arts. Thumbs up.
So nice to read from u again. Hope u will write your thoughts too under my latest poem.
August 15th, 2017 02:34
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Glamorous sunset scenes c poem in fabulous artistic phrasing. ESP I like how u put in jewelled diamanté arts. Thumbs up.
So nice to read from u again. Hope u will write your thoughts too under my latest poem.
August 15th, 2017 02:34
Intake.
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Swelling with bounty and grace; your words paint a sensual feast for the eyes and the ears as those waves come barreling and crashing into the \"intake\".
August 14th, 2017 22:10
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Swelling with bounty and grace; your words paint a sensual feast for the eyes and the ears as those waves come barreling and crashing into the \"intake\".
August 14th, 2017 22:10
Intake.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, there is nothing like watching the sun rise from the ocean (except maybe the sun sinking into the ocean), and the way you described it is awesome!
August 14th, 2017 11:46
FredPeyer said:
Fay, there is nothing like watching the sun rise from the ocean (except maybe the sun sinking into the ocean), and the way you described it is awesome!
August 14th, 2017 11:46
Intake.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write, I was sitting on that cliff top with you.
August 14th, 2017 08:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write, I was sitting on that cliff top with you.
August 14th, 2017 08:03
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