Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Frenzy.
Louis Gibbs said:
An elegant expression of the natural rhythm of nature, Fay. Well observed and reported!
August 30th, 2017 11:30
Louis Gibbs said:
An elegant expression of the natural rhythm of nature, Fay. Well observed and reported!
August 30th, 2017 11:30
Enmeshed.
malubotelho said:
Another delicate intricate web like work Fay. So adorable reading. Thanks
August 29th, 2017 16:45
malubotelho said:
Another delicate intricate web like work Fay. So adorable reading. Thanks
August 29th, 2017 16:45
Enmeshed.
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful poem, Fay. Like the last two lines. They could apply to our lives as well!
August 29th, 2017 11:38
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful poem, Fay. Like the last two lines. They could apply to our lives as well!
August 29th, 2017 11:38
Enmeshed.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write about n absolutely stunning site in autumn.
August 29th, 2017 07:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write about n absolutely stunning site in autumn.
August 29th, 2017 07:37
Enmeshed.
Louis Gibbs said:
Some of the world\'s greatest engineers, indeed, and I speak as an engineer. A fine tribute to these clever creatures, Fay!
August 29th, 2017 07:02
Louis Gibbs said:
Some of the world\'s greatest engineers, indeed, and I speak as an engineer. A fine tribute to these clever creatures, Fay!
August 29th, 2017 07:02
Enmeshed.
Michael Edwards said:
These are fascinating creatures often much aligned and irrationally disliked (strange that we admire lions but dislike spiders - no real rationality) but you\'ve done them proud Fay.
August 29th, 2017 05:31
Michael Edwards said:
These are fascinating creatures often much aligned and irrationally disliked (strange that we admire lions but dislike spiders - no real rationality) but you\'ve done them proud Fay.
August 29th, 2017 05:31
Conceding.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay. You do realise that those holes in the galaxy showing light through them are the holes in Heaven\'s floor.
August 29th, 2017 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Fay. You do realise that those holes in the galaxy showing light through them are the holes in Heaven\'s floor.
August 29th, 2017 00:51
Conceding.
malubotelho said:
I believe that this is about surrendering ourselves to destiny. Finally understanding that we should not fight life and its beauty. Awesome writing and imagenery as always Fay.
August 28th, 2017 20:57
malubotelho said:
I believe that this is about surrendering ourselves to destiny. Finally understanding that we should not fight life and its beauty. Awesome writing and imagenery as always Fay.
August 28th, 2017 20:57
Conceding.
Louis Gibbs said:
Sensing and surrendering to the vastness of the universe displayed in a night sky ... what could be more calming indeed. Tends to put our inconsequential problems in perspective. So well described in your poem, Fay!
August 28th, 2017 08:30
Louis Gibbs said:
Sensing and surrendering to the vastness of the universe displayed in a night sky ... what could be more calming indeed. Tends to put our inconsequential problems in perspective. So well described in your poem, Fay!
August 28th, 2017 08:30
Conceding.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Sometimes FAY ~ Conceding to Destiny ~ is the only answer to lifting our prevailing mood. However like you I find lying \"al freso\" and contemplating the developing Night Sky does lift the Spirits. Love your metaphor and the woodcut ~ classic ! Yours as always ~ BRIAN
August 28th, 2017 07:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Sometimes FAY ~ Conceding to Destiny ~ is the only answer to lifting our prevailing mood. However like you I find lying \"al freso\" and contemplating the developing Night Sky does lift the Spirits. Love your metaphor and the woodcut ~ classic ! Yours as always ~ BRIAN
August 28th, 2017 07:18
Conceding.
dusk arising said:
Is this about the night sky or ones spiritual journey to ones \'heaven\' ? Both so similarly intertwined in our imagination. Enjoyed reading and thinking it thru several times.
August 28th, 2017 04:09
dusk arising said:
Is this about the night sky or ones spiritual journey to ones \'heaven\' ? Both so similarly intertwined in our imagination. Enjoyed reading and thinking it thru several times.
August 28th, 2017 04:09
Conceding.
Accidental Poet said:
Fay, I have to agree with Martina. You\'ve penned a masterpiece poem of a perfect night sky. ; )
August 28th, 2017 04:07
Accidental Poet said:
Fay, I have to agree with Martina. You\'ve penned a masterpiece poem of a perfect night sky. ; )
August 28th, 2017 04:07
Omens.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WONDERFUL FAY ~ Photographic (The Future\'s Orange !) and Poetic perfection ! We can never be master Wordsmith\'s like you but reading (and reciting) your elegant odes always lifts me on to higher linguistic ground. When i\'m pondering a linguistic choice ~ I often think \"Which word would Fay choose ?\" The quality of tomorrow is determined by our attitude as we awake ! Yours as ever ~ BRIAN
August 27th, 2017 09:28
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WONDERFUL FAY ~ Photographic (The Future\'s Orange !) and Poetic perfection ! We can never be master Wordsmith\'s like you but reading (and reciting) your elegant odes always lifts me on to higher linguistic ground. When i\'m pondering a linguistic choice ~ I often think \"Which word would Fay choose ?\" The quality of tomorrow is determined by our attitude as we awake ! Yours as ever ~ BRIAN
August 27th, 2017 09:28
Omens.
malubotelho said:
Nothing left to be said but I still can repeat that you surprise me each and every day with your poetry. You are fantastic Fay. You don\'t know how I\'m pleased to be here writing poetry with one master like you. It is a blessing.
August 27th, 2017 08:34
malubotelho said:
Nothing left to be said but I still can repeat that you surprise me each and every day with your poetry. You are fantastic Fay. You don\'t know how I\'m pleased to be here writing poetry with one master like you. It is a blessing.
August 27th, 2017 08:34
Omens.
Accidental Poet said:
To quench that thirst for writing of the sunset and the evening skies for which you\'re so good at. A masterpiece Fay. ; )
August 27th, 2017 06:48
Accidental Poet said:
To quench that thirst for writing of the sunset and the evening skies for which you\'re so good at. A masterpiece Fay. ; )
August 27th, 2017 06:48
Lovescape.
malubotelho said:
Me too will have to break it so I can understand. I always use my intuition when reading poems and need to search the words to understand. I\'ve felt the eroticism here and as always I love your poetry.
August 26th, 2017 15:53
malubotelho said:
Me too will have to break it so I can understand. I always use my intuition when reading poems and need to search the words to understand. I\'ve felt the eroticism here and as always I love your poetry.
August 26th, 2017 15:53
Lovescape.
dusk arising said:
Made me giggle with the fun i hadst converting your olde worlde stylism into pictures Antonio might create with his sensuous words. Worlds apart in style both make me smile. Yeah forsooth thou hast raised upon mine countenance the disgrace of a smile!
August 26th, 2017 12:31
dusk arising said:
Made me giggle with the fun i hadst converting your olde worlde stylism into pictures Antonio might create with his sensuous words. Worlds apart in style both make me smile. Yeah forsooth thou hast raised upon mine countenance the disgrace of a smile!
August 26th, 2017 12:31
Lovescape.
orchidee said:
Oh lol, so I\'m not the only one who swoons! Great write again Fay.
August 26th, 2017 08:11
orchidee said:
Oh lol, so I\'m not the only one who swoons! Great write again Fay.
August 26th, 2017 08:11
Lovescape.
Louis Gibbs said:
A classic poem, classically formed with expanding phrases. An artistic piece, this one, Fay. Kudos!
August 26th, 2017 07:28
Louis Gibbs said:
A classic poem, classically formed with expanding phrases. An artistic piece, this one, Fay. Kudos!
August 26th, 2017 07:28
Lovescape.
Accidental Poet said:
Only an expert poet can pull off writing like this. Dripping with passion, you\'ve created a masterpiece. Thanks for sharing Fay.
August 26th, 2017 05:00
Accidental Poet said:
Only an expert poet can pull off writing like this. Dripping with passion, you\'ve created a masterpiece. Thanks for sharing Fay.
August 26th, 2017 05:00
Lovescape.
Michael Edwards said:
moth-soft, needs rack, ---- superb language as always Fay
August 26th, 2017 04:44
Michael Edwards said:
moth-soft, needs rack, ---- superb language as always Fay
August 26th, 2017 04:44
Lovescape.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhhhhhh FAY you have really touched my HEART with this beautiful symbiotic Painting & Poem ! I\'m a bit old fashioned in my choice of LADIES and you have painted & pencilled my ideal. Thank you for a perfect ODE to enlighten my Weekend ~ We have a Flower Festival in our local Anglican Church today ~ always Victorian and always uplifting. Your poem will enhance my Joy ~ Love as always ~ BRIAN Please check my Tribute to SANTITA ~ thanks B.
August 26th, 2017 04:22
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhhhhhh FAY you have really touched my HEART with this beautiful symbiotic Painting & Poem ! I\'m a bit old fashioned in my choice of LADIES and you have painted & pencilled my ideal. Thank you for a perfect ODE to enlighten my Weekend ~ We have a Flower Festival in our local Anglican Church today ~ always Victorian and always uplifting. Your poem will enhance my Joy ~ Love as always ~ BRIAN Please check my Tribute to SANTITA ~ thanks B.
August 26th, 2017 04:22
Lovescape.
FredPeyer said:
Sounds like something Victorian to my uneducated Yankee ears!
Great writing again, Fay!
August 26th, 2017 03:49
FredPeyer said:
Sounds like something Victorian to my uneducated Yankee ears!
Great writing again, Fay!
August 26th, 2017 03:49
The Undisturbed.
malubotelho said:
Whispers seep inward........from each tree and bird
to alter the psyche.
You spoke to me with these words. It is what I feel in relation to nature. It alters my psyche.
August 25th, 2017 13:03
malubotelho said:
Whispers seep inward........from each tree and bird
to alter the psyche.
You spoke to me with these words. It is what I feel in relation to nature. It alters my psyche.
August 25th, 2017 13:03
The Undisturbed.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, this is just so good. Love the poem, the structure.
And it works! I was so de-stressed by the time I finished reading, I nearly fell asleep! :-)
August 25th, 2017 12:18
FredPeyer said:
Fay, this is just so good. Love the poem, the structure.
And it works! I was so de-stressed by the time I finished reading, I nearly fell asleep! :-)
August 25th, 2017 12:18
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