Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Hats Off.
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
Wow, Fay. Construction and Road Workers.. Doing what they love although laborious, the job gets done! Great write for nice reading..Thanks for Sharing Fay!
August 7th, 2017 16:14
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
Wow, Fay. Construction and Road Workers.. Doing what they love although laborious, the job gets done! Great write for nice reading..Thanks for Sharing Fay!
August 7th, 2017 16:14
Hats Off.
malubotelho said:
I wonder how can you create such incredible writing from all different themes. Thanks for sharing.
August 7th, 2017 15:30
malubotelho said:
I wonder how can you create such incredible writing from all different themes. Thanks for sharing.
August 7th, 2017 15:30
Hats Off.
Heather T said:
What you find in the seemingly mundane amazes me. Hats off to these everyday miracle workers that are so needed and so under praised.
August 7th, 2017 10:30
Heather T said:
What you find in the seemingly mundane amazes me. Hats off to these everyday miracle workers that are so needed and so under praised.
August 7th, 2017 10:30
Hats Off.
WriteBeLight said:
They do work hard, an not always in the best of weather! Nice Fay.
August 7th, 2017 09:17
WriteBeLight said:
They do work hard, an not always in the best of weather! Nice Fay.
August 7th, 2017 09:17
Take One.
malubotelho said:
Take one from two and sorrow tightens
love uncouples,
oneness frightens,
lips stay unkissed and distress climbs.
I love this verse specially. Lovely Fay.
August 7th, 2017 09:06
malubotelho said:
Take one from two and sorrow tightens
love uncouples,
oneness frightens,
lips stay unkissed and distress climbs.
I love this verse specially. Lovely Fay.
August 7th, 2017 09:06
Hats Off.
Louis Gibbs said:
A lovely tribute to those who keep our world patched together, Fay!
August 7th, 2017 05:27
Louis Gibbs said:
A lovely tribute to those who keep our world patched together, Fay!
August 7th, 2017 05:27
Hats Off.
Michael Edwards said:
This is such a god read and so well written as is your wont - congrats Fay.
August 7th, 2017 04:18
Michael Edwards said:
This is such a god read and so well written as is your wont - congrats Fay.
August 7th, 2017 04:18
Hats Off.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
You are lovely FAY and you can create a fragrant poem out of the noisy and dirty and sweaty. Mundane people deplore HOLESINTHEROAD and those who day-by-day seek to repair them only to see more appear ! Your poem paints an enchanting PICTURE eulogising them !
So hats off in thanks to the
all-weather hat and jacket
road menders ~ who grow moire
fluorescent with each passing day !
Love you for being you ~ Yours BRIAN
August 7th, 2017 03:54
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
You are lovely FAY and you can create a fragrant poem out of the noisy and dirty and sweaty. Mundane people deplore HOLESINTHEROAD and those who day-by-day seek to repair them only to see more appear ! Your poem paints an enchanting PICTURE eulogising them !
So hats off in thanks to the
all-weather hat and jacket
road menders ~ who grow moire
fluorescent with each passing day !
Love you for being you ~ Yours BRIAN
August 7th, 2017 03:54
Hats Off.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and tribute to the men who repair the roads.
August 7th, 2017 03:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and tribute to the men who repair the roads.
August 7th, 2017 03:02
Take One.
Louis Gibbs said:
Boy, does it ever hit with no compromise! Right in the heart and gut, with doubling-over pain. Your poem nails it, Fay! It resonates for sure.
August 6th, 2017 08:11
Louis Gibbs said:
Boy, does it ever hit with no compromise! Right in the heart and gut, with doubling-over pain. Your poem nails it, Fay! It resonates for sure.
August 6th, 2017 08:11
Take One.
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful poem, incredible rhyming, nice structure, I don\'t think it can get any better, Fay.
August 6th, 2017 03:26
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful poem, incredible rhyming, nice structure, I don\'t think it can get any better, Fay.
August 6th, 2017 03:26
Take One.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ a poignant picture and an elegant but sad poem ~ straight for your loving heart. I know you speak from experience and your poem throbs with reality. Thanks for caring ~ Thinking of you ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
August 6th, 2017 03:17
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ a poignant picture and an elegant but sad poem ~ straight for your loving heart. I know you speak from experience and your poem throbs with reality. Thanks for caring ~ Thinking of you ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
August 6th, 2017 03:17
Too Long.
FredPeyer said:
Lately there were several poems with rain as subject matter. Yours definitely stands out! Great writing.
August 5th, 2017 12:30
FredPeyer said:
Lately there were several poems with rain as subject matter. Yours definitely stands out! Great writing.
August 5th, 2017 12:30
Too Long.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ for a lovely Complimentary Picture & Poem. I have spent dry days in Cornwall but also many wet ones ! However \"wet or dry\" Cornwall is on of the most beautiful Counties in England ! I guess being a Peninsular ~ surrounded on all sides by water ~ accounts for your high precipitation. Essex is much drier but much duller ! Because you are the \"Queen of Cornwall\" I have dedicated today\'s Poem \"Tristan & Isolde\" to you ~ OK ~ Yours as ever ~ BRIAN.
August 5th, 2017 10:06
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ for a lovely Complimentary Picture & Poem. I have spent dry days in Cornwall but also many wet ones ! However \"wet or dry\" Cornwall is on of the most beautiful Counties in England ! I guess being a Peninsular ~ surrounded on all sides by water ~ accounts for your high precipitation. Essex is much drier but much duller ! Because you are the \"Queen of Cornwall\" I have dedicated today\'s Poem \"Tristan & Isolde\" to you ~ OK ~ Yours as ever ~ BRIAN.
August 5th, 2017 10:06
Too Long.
malubotelho said:
I can listen to the rain and see your Valley. Beautiful images feels my mind. Soft and homely. Thanks for sharing
August 5th, 2017 09:54
malubotelho said:
I can listen to the rain and see your Valley. Beautiful images feels my mind. Soft and homely. Thanks for sharing
August 5th, 2017 09:54
Too Long.
WriteBeLight said:
Hope it stops raining! I agree that too much rain in one\'s life can do us much harm. I guess Mother Earth has her ways, though. Great job on this Fay!
August 5th, 2017 09:07
WriteBeLight said:
Hope it stops raining! I agree that too much rain in one\'s life can do us much harm. I guess Mother Earth has her ways, though. Great job on this Fay!
August 5th, 2017 09:07
Too Long.
burning-embers said:
Yes, it sure was wet in Cornwall which featured in my write of yesterday. Im deffo needing sunnier times ahead.
August 5th, 2017 08:44
burning-embers said:
Yes, it sure was wet in Cornwall which featured in my write of yesterday. Im deffo needing sunnier times ahead.
August 5th, 2017 08:44
Too Long.
Louis Gibbs said:
An exquisite rendition of the old phrase; \"Rain, rain, go away. Come again another day.\" We\'ve had a similar wet summer here in south Alabama. Lovely, Fay!
August 5th, 2017 08:01
Louis Gibbs said:
An exquisite rendition of the old phrase; \"Rain, rain, go away. Come again another day.\" We\'ve had a similar wet summer here in south Alabama. Lovely, Fay!
August 5th, 2017 08:01
Too Long.
Michael Edwards said:
Had to come in from the garden - guess what - it was raining. Great poem.
August 5th, 2017 07:46
Michael Edwards said:
Had to come in from the garden - guess what - it was raining. Great poem.
August 5th, 2017 07:46
Too Long.
orchidee said:
You having too much \'proper rain\' as they say? Or I thought you was gonna write about some of my poems - too long?! heehee. A fine write again Fay.
August 5th, 2017 05:51
orchidee said:
You having too much \'proper rain\' as they say? Or I thought you was gonna write about some of my poems - too long?! heehee. A fine write again Fay.
August 5th, 2017 05:51
Not A Doubt.
FredPeyer said:
The picture and the poem do compliment each other, both are very beautiful and elegant. Beautiful writing as always!
August 4th, 2017 13:17
FredPeyer said:
The picture and the poem do compliment each other, both are very beautiful and elegant. Beautiful writing as always!
August 4th, 2017 13:17
Not A Doubt.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY it is indeed LADY HOLDING A ROSE by Emma Sandys ~ by a coincidence my POEM tomorrow is based on ISOLDE and the LOVE POTION ~ by Her husband FREDERICK SANDYS ~ must be a pre-Raphaelite Muse in the air ? Love both the Form & Function of the Poem ~ Yours as ever ~ BRIAN
August 4th, 2017 11:21
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY it is indeed LADY HOLDING A ROSE by Emma Sandys ~ by a coincidence my POEM tomorrow is based on ISOLDE and the LOVE POTION ~ by Her husband FREDERICK SANDYS ~ must be a pre-Raphaelite Muse in the air ? Love both the Form & Function of the Poem ~ Yours as ever ~ BRIAN
August 4th, 2017 11:21
Not A Doubt.
malubotelho said:
Another beauty Fay. I\'m enjoying reading your book. I open it on any page and fill my heart with beauty. Thanks for such an inspirational work.
August 4th, 2017 11:09
malubotelho said:
Another beauty Fay. I\'m enjoying reading your book. I open it on any page and fill my heart with beauty. Thanks for such an inspirational work.
August 4th, 2017 11:09
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