Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Undiluted.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fay. May the light always be with you.
August 10th, 2017 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fay. May the light always be with you.
August 10th, 2017 00:22
Undiluted.
malubotelho said:
Dear Fay, you so well describe what we most of the time don\'t recognize and let it take over us. Is that thing that sometimes bother us so much and for no specific reason. We are very luck if we can catch it in the beginning before it causes us destruction. Thanks for this marvelous writing.
August 9th, 2017 16:08
malubotelho said:
Dear Fay, you so well describe what we most of the time don\'t recognize and let it take over us. Is that thing that sometimes bother us so much and for no specific reason. We are very luck if we can catch it in the beginning before it causes us destruction. Thanks for this marvelous writing.
August 9th, 2017 16:08
Undiluted.
Louis Gibbs said:
The mind can become a beast to be mastered. So well described in this exquisite rendition, Fay! Nothing like \"Hours of relentless quiet\" to sort things out, is there.
August 9th, 2017 05:16
Louis Gibbs said:
The mind can become a beast to be mastered. So well described in this exquisite rendition, Fay! Nothing like \"Hours of relentless quiet\" to sort things out, is there.
August 9th, 2017 05:16
After Today.
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
Wow Fay! Again, inspiration! I, for the first time in my life, have real bluebirds that are nesting by my home! Not the mean Bluejay, but real, true Bluebirds!!!
August 8th, 2017 11:46
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
Wow Fay! Again, inspiration! I, for the first time in my life, have real bluebirds that are nesting by my home! Not the mean Bluejay, but real, true Bluebirds!!!
August 8th, 2017 11:46
So Much.
malubotelho said:
Much appreciated another beauty from you Fay. Your mind is a beautiful garden where flourishes beautiful poetry.
August 8th, 2017 08:46
malubotelho said:
Much appreciated another beauty from you Fay. Your mind is a beautiful garden where flourishes beautiful poetry.
August 8th, 2017 08:46
So Much.
Louis Gibbs said:
Beautifully structured, lovely poem, Fay! I love and admire the way you have shaped it. So satisfying to the eye, Kudos on this one!
August 8th, 2017 08:14
Louis Gibbs said:
Beautifully structured, lovely poem, Fay! I love and admire the way you have shaped it. So satisfying to the eye, Kudos on this one!
August 8th, 2017 08:14
So Much.
WriteBeLight said:
I love flowers, especially Sunflowers. Very bright, fresh and cheery work Fay!
August 8th, 2017 08:00
WriteBeLight said:
I love flowers, especially Sunflowers. Very bright, fresh and cheery work Fay!
August 8th, 2017 08:00
So Much.
Michael Edwards said:
Indeed there is so much beauty around us - well reflected in this poem of delight.
August 8th, 2017 05:12
Michael Edwards said:
Indeed there is so much beauty around us - well reflected in this poem of delight.
August 8th, 2017 05:12
So Much.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Perfect Poem FAY ~ for a Tuesday morning ! In an English Country Garden ~ We are nearer God\'s Heart than anywhere else on Earth. Love all the Beautiful County Gardens in the English S W Country ~ You are blest with SUN (and RAIN !) so everything in the S W English Country Garden is lovely ! Love the visual and the lovely quote ~ Yours as ever BRIAN.
August 8th, 2017 04:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Perfect Poem FAY ~ for a Tuesday morning ! In an English Country Garden ~ We are nearer God\'s Heart than anywhere else on Earth. Love all the Beautiful County Gardens in the English S W Country ~ You are blest with SUN (and RAIN !) so everything in the S W English Country Garden is lovely ! Love the visual and the lovely quote ~ Yours as ever BRIAN.
August 8th, 2017 04:23
Hats Off.
whisperingquill said:
Wow, it was like I was walking with you
So descriptive excellent weaving
August 7th, 2017 20:10
whisperingquill said:
Wow, it was like I was walking with you
So descriptive excellent weaving
August 7th, 2017 20:10
Hats Off.
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
Wow, Fay. Construction and Road Workers.. Doing what they love although laborious, the job gets done! Great write for nice reading..Thanks for Sharing Fay!
August 7th, 2017 16:14
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
Wow, Fay. Construction and Road Workers.. Doing what they love although laborious, the job gets done! Great write for nice reading..Thanks for Sharing Fay!
August 7th, 2017 16:14
Hats Off.
malubotelho said:
I wonder how can you create such incredible writing from all different themes. Thanks for sharing.
August 7th, 2017 15:30
malubotelho said:
I wonder how can you create such incredible writing from all different themes. Thanks for sharing.
August 7th, 2017 15:30
Hats Off.
Heather T said:
What you find in the seemingly mundane amazes me. Hats off to these everyday miracle workers that are so needed and so under praised.
August 7th, 2017 10:30
Heather T said:
What you find in the seemingly mundane amazes me. Hats off to these everyday miracle workers that are so needed and so under praised.
August 7th, 2017 10:30
Hats Off.
WriteBeLight said:
They do work hard, an not always in the best of weather! Nice Fay.
August 7th, 2017 09:17
WriteBeLight said:
They do work hard, an not always in the best of weather! Nice Fay.
August 7th, 2017 09:17
Take One.
malubotelho said:
Take one from two and sorrow tightens
love uncouples,
oneness frightens,
lips stay unkissed and distress climbs.
I love this verse specially. Lovely Fay.
August 7th, 2017 09:06
malubotelho said:
Take one from two and sorrow tightens
love uncouples,
oneness frightens,
lips stay unkissed and distress climbs.
I love this verse specially. Lovely Fay.
August 7th, 2017 09:06
Hats Off.
Louis Gibbs said:
A lovely tribute to those who keep our world patched together, Fay!
August 7th, 2017 05:27
Louis Gibbs said:
A lovely tribute to those who keep our world patched together, Fay!
August 7th, 2017 05:27
Hats Off.
Michael Edwards said:
This is such a god read and so well written as is your wont - congrats Fay.
August 7th, 2017 04:18
Michael Edwards said:
This is such a god read and so well written as is your wont - congrats Fay.
August 7th, 2017 04:18
Hats Off.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
You are lovely FAY and you can create a fragrant poem out of the noisy and dirty and sweaty. Mundane people deplore HOLESINTHEROAD and those who day-by-day seek to repair them only to see more appear ! Your poem paints an enchanting PICTURE eulogising them !
So hats off in thanks to the
all-weather hat and jacket
road menders ~ who grow moire
fluorescent with each passing day !
Love you for being you ~ Yours BRIAN
August 7th, 2017 03:54
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
You are lovely FAY and you can create a fragrant poem out of the noisy and dirty and sweaty. Mundane people deplore HOLESINTHEROAD and those who day-by-day seek to repair them only to see more appear ! Your poem paints an enchanting PICTURE eulogising them !
So hats off in thanks to the
all-weather hat and jacket
road menders ~ who grow moire
fluorescent with each passing day !
Love you for being you ~ Yours BRIAN
August 7th, 2017 03:54
Hats Off.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and tribute to the men who repair the roads.
August 7th, 2017 03:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and tribute to the men who repair the roads.
August 7th, 2017 03:02
Take One.
Louis Gibbs said:
Boy, does it ever hit with no compromise! Right in the heart and gut, with doubling-over pain. Your poem nails it, Fay! It resonates for sure.
August 6th, 2017 08:11
Louis Gibbs said:
Boy, does it ever hit with no compromise! Right in the heart and gut, with doubling-over pain. Your poem nails it, Fay! It resonates for sure.
August 6th, 2017 08:11
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