Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Littleness.
Louis Gibbs said:
So much of the miracle of nature goes unnoticed and taken for granted, as your fine poem reminds us. Well done, Fay!
July 18th, 2017 08:29
Louis Gibbs said:
So much of the miracle of nature goes unnoticed and taken for granted, as your fine poem reminds us. Well done, Fay!
July 18th, 2017 08:29
Littleness.
onepauly said:
also a friend. great poem. easy to understand. its the little things that count.
July 18th, 2017 07:59
onepauly said:
also a friend. great poem. easy to understand. its the little things that count.
July 18th, 2017 07:59
Littleness.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ on Saturday I mentioned the TARDIGRADE smell ~ insignificant ~ largely unsung but much more prepared than you or I to withstand the inevitable environmental stress. The BIBLE exhorts us to consider the \"Lillies of the Field\" and the \"Ants\" Theresa May\'s Cabinet could learn much from them about cooperation. Thanks for sharing the lovely quote and the elegant Poem it generated in your fertile poetic mind ! More rhyme than usual made it a delight to recite ! Yours BRIAN
July 18th, 2017 07:56
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ on Saturday I mentioned the TARDIGRADE smell ~ insignificant ~ largely unsung but much more prepared than you or I to withstand the inevitable environmental stress. The BIBLE exhorts us to consider the \"Lillies of the Field\" and the \"Ants\" Theresa May\'s Cabinet could learn much from them about cooperation. Thanks for sharing the lovely quote and the elegant Poem it generated in your fertile poetic mind ! More rhyme than usual made it a delight to recite ! Yours BRIAN
July 18th, 2017 07:56
Littleness.
kevin browne said:
great poem my friend. a beauty. thanks for sharing.
July 18th, 2017 06:46
kevin browne said:
great poem my friend. a beauty. thanks for sharing.
July 18th, 2017 06:46
I Am Desire.
malubotelho said:
Wow! Wow! Wow! This is so desirable. Beautiful strong poem. A dangerous thing to deal with is that desire. Must be maintained leashed and released only on the limited doses when necessary. A hard one to rule though. It is what I call: to still the fire from the devil and make good use of it.
July 17th, 2017 20:06
malubotelho said:
Wow! Wow! Wow! This is so desirable. Beautiful strong poem. A dangerous thing to deal with is that desire. Must be maintained leashed and released only on the limited doses when necessary. A hard one to rule though. It is what I call: to still the fire from the devil and make good use of it.
July 17th, 2017 20:06
Motley.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, unfortunately I don\'t know G. Manley, but I like your poem. Wonderful writing as always.
July 17th, 2017 19:05
FredPeyer said:
Fay, unfortunately I don\'t know G. Manley, but I like your poem. Wonderful writing as always.
July 17th, 2017 19:05
I Am Desire.
FredPeyer said:
So well written Fay.....and the ultimate winner is: Fay
July 17th, 2017 11:58
FredPeyer said:
So well written Fay.....and the ultimate winner is: Fay
July 17th, 2017 11:58
I Am Desire.
burning-embers said:
Fay, what have you been doing? I recognise in your words that youve been creeping into my mind and seducing me! Such wicked intent utmost in your actions. All i can say to you is - see you later on !
July 17th, 2017 11:04
burning-embers said:
Fay, what have you been doing? I recognise in your words that youve been creeping into my mind and seducing me! Such wicked intent utmost in your actions. All i can say to you is - see you later on !
July 17th, 2017 11:04
I Am Desire.
orchidee said:
No \'hot desires\' now though! lol. I\'m Chairperson of the: \"Keeping-anything-remotely-hot-or-likely-to-cause-excitement-under-firm-control\" Committee! I bet there\'s only me in the group! heehee.
July 17th, 2017 08:47
orchidee said:
No \'hot desires\' now though! lol. I\'m Chairperson of the: \"Keeping-anything-remotely-hot-or-likely-to-cause-excitement-under-firm-control\" Committee! I bet there\'s only me in the group! heehee.
July 17th, 2017 08:47
I Am Desire.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Let\'s desire to write poems, and more will surely flow - or continue, if we\'ve dried up a bit!
July 17th, 2017 08:45
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Let\'s desire to write poems, and more will surely flow - or continue, if we\'ve dried up a bit!
July 17th, 2017 08:45
I Am Desire.
Louis Gibbs said:
Yes, I\'ve met the subject of your poem a few times. Damn powerful she is, too ... as well described in this fine offering, Fay. Enjoyed it!
July 17th, 2017 08:12
Louis Gibbs said:
Yes, I\'ve met the subject of your poem a few times. Damn powerful she is, too ... as well described in this fine offering, Fay. Enjoyed it!
July 17th, 2017 08:12
I Am Desire.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW FAY ~ What aphrodisiac did you have for breakfast this morning to unleash this uncompromising and sensuous poem on us. I loved every word and will show it to ANGELA as an excuse for any \"ungentlemanly\" behaviour that might ensue ! thanks for sharing ~ also for the TRUTH in your exhilarating verse ! You are ~ as always ~ Lovely ! Your Friend BRIAN
July 17th, 2017 05:39
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW FAY ~ What aphrodisiac did you have for breakfast this morning to unleash this uncompromising and sensuous poem on us. I loved every word and will show it to ANGELA as an excuse for any \"ungentlemanly\" behaviour that might ensue ! thanks for sharing ~ also for the TRUTH in your exhilarating verse ! You are ~ as always ~ Lovely ! Your Friend BRIAN
July 17th, 2017 05:39
Motley.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY~ lovely poem & picture ! Love the subject ~ Nature\'s dappled things ! Your poem painted so many (well remembered) pictures that my mind was reeling with images ~ so i reread it slowly a line at a time ! Thanks for sharing ~Yours BRIAN
July 16th, 2017 18:17
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY~ lovely poem & picture ! Love the subject ~ Nature\'s dappled things ! Your poem painted so many (well remembered) pictures that my mind was reeling with images ~ so i reread it slowly a line at a time ! Thanks for sharing ~Yours BRIAN
July 16th, 2017 18:17
Motley.
orchidee said:
\'All things bright and beautiful\' there Fay. But we leave out that controversial rich man / poor man verse. It\'s never in hymn books that I\'ve seen!
July 16th, 2017 10:42
orchidee said:
\'All things bright and beautiful\' there Fay. But we leave out that controversial rich man / poor man verse. It\'s never in hymn books that I\'ve seen!
July 16th, 2017 10:42
Motley.
Louis Gibbs said:
I envy your fluent familiarity words I\'ve never met. There are several in this lovely poem, but they didn\'t interfere with my appreciation of it. Thanks for sharing, Fay.
July 16th, 2017 10:17
Louis Gibbs said:
I envy your fluent familiarity words I\'ve never met. There are several in this lovely poem, but they didn\'t interfere with my appreciation of it. Thanks for sharing, Fay.
July 16th, 2017 10:17
Incoming.
onepauly said:
great poem, can you swim?
I feel best about horizon. next I like between shore and ship.
July 16th, 2017 06:31
onepauly said:
great poem, can you swim?
I feel best about horizon. next I like between shore and ship.
July 16th, 2017 06:31
Motley.
onepauly said:
you are a true poet. reading this
poem has got me going. the spelling of the words is great. I can relate to that. sometimes I have to create a word to fit with the poem. and I and other poets do this.
onepauly
July 16th, 2017 05:30
onepauly said:
you are a true poet. reading this
poem has got me going. the spelling of the words is great. I can relate to that. sometimes I have to create a word to fit with the poem. and I and other poets do this.
onepauly
July 16th, 2017 05:30
Motley.
Michael Edwards said:
Another beauty - I love embroidered hedgerows - sheer inspiration.
July 16th, 2017 04:49
Michael Edwards said:
Another beauty - I love embroidered hedgerows - sheer inspiration.
July 16th, 2017 04:49
Movement.
Heather T said:
You never need worry about whether anything you gift is too verbose. When Fay speaks, we consume in hush. Too many favorites to quote.
July 15th, 2017 12:42
Heather T said:
You never need worry about whether anything you gift is too verbose. When Fay speaks, we consume in hush. Too many favorites to quote.
July 15th, 2017 12:42
Movement.
Michael Edwards said:
FP is right - so self-evidently a Slimm and oh so good.
July 15th, 2017 07:37
Michael Edwards said:
FP is right - so self-evidently a Slimm and oh so good.
July 15th, 2017 07:37
Movement.
FredPeyer said:
There is only one person I know who can write like this: You!
Thanks for this early morning poem, but I have to go to bed now. :-)
July 15th, 2017 04:04
FredPeyer said:
There is only one person I know who can write like this: You!
Thanks for this early morning poem, but I have to go to bed now. :-)
July 15th, 2017 04:04
Apprehension.
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderfully evocative write. I was with her on her journey.
July 14th, 2017 23:56
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderfully evocative write. I was with her on her journey.
July 14th, 2017 23:56
Apprehension.
Louis Gibbs said:
A moving poem throughout, but that last line really got to me! My heart is still recovering. Another beauty, Fay! Please keep them coming.
July 14th, 2017 07:09
Louis Gibbs said:
A moving poem throughout, but that last line really got to me! My heart is still recovering. Another beauty, Fay! Please keep them coming.
July 14th, 2017 07:09
Apprehension.
Michael Edwards said:
Such exciting use of a great language - by a poetess extreme.
July 14th, 2017 04:27
Michael Edwards said:
Such exciting use of a great language - by a poetess extreme.
July 14th, 2017 04:27
Apprehension.
burning-embers said:
Fay i love the pictures and colours you give me here. I was looking out of that train window. Excellent.
July 14th, 2017 03:41
burning-embers said:
Fay i love the pictures and colours you give me here. I was looking out of that train window. Excellent.
July 14th, 2017 03:41
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