Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Intake.
Nicholas Browning said:
It feels chaotic, but in a pleasantly descriptive way. Nicely done.
August 14th, 2017 07:00
Nicholas Browning said:
It feels chaotic, but in a pleasantly descriptive way. Nicely done.
August 14th, 2017 07:00
Intake.
Louis Gibbs said:
Indeed, \"As division trembles on time\'s very edge\", nature plods on at its own pace and timing. Beautiful thoughts in an ugly time for mankind, Fay!
August 14th, 2017 06:17
Louis Gibbs said:
Indeed, \"As division trembles on time\'s very edge\", nature plods on at its own pace and timing. Beautiful thoughts in an ugly time for mankind, Fay!
August 14th, 2017 06:17
Intake.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY beautiful Picture & Poem to herald a new dawn. Like you ~ whatever our circumstances ~ I always thank God for EACH NEW DAY ~ AMEN ~ Yours as ever BRIAN. Please check my second Caribbean Poem ~ Thanks B.
August 14th, 2017 04:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY beautiful Picture & Poem to herald a new dawn. Like you ~ whatever our circumstances ~ I always thank God for EACH NEW DAY ~ AMEN ~ Yours as ever BRIAN. Please check my second Caribbean Poem ~ Thanks B.
August 14th, 2017 04:42
Redefining.
Heather T said:
Lovely reflection of still waters peace restoring virtues. Hard to center in the midst of lashing storms! Enjoyed your wise word gift today.
August 13th, 2017 23:48
Heather T said:
Lovely reflection of still waters peace restoring virtues. Hard to center in the midst of lashing storms! Enjoyed your wise word gift today.
August 13th, 2017 23:48
Redefining.
malubotelho said:
So delicately detailed in soft inspiration. So lovely written Fay. It is such a pleasure to read you.
August 13th, 2017 21:08
malubotelho said:
So delicately detailed in soft inspiration. So lovely written Fay. It is such a pleasure to read you.
August 13th, 2017 21:08
Redefining.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, beautiful picture, beautiful poem, so well written (as always). It is so true that gazing out onto a still pond, especially in twilight, calms the mind and opens the heart.
August 13th, 2017 16:01
FredPeyer said:
Fay, beautiful picture, beautiful poem, so well written (as always). It is so true that gazing out onto a still pond, especially in twilight, calms the mind and opens the heart.
August 13th, 2017 16:01
Redefining.
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve just written one which goes hand in glove with this excellent write - not sure its to the same standard but I\'ll make it my next posting.
August 13th, 2017 10:52
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve just written one which goes hand in glove with this excellent write - not sure its to the same standard but I\'ll make it my next posting.
August 13th, 2017 10:52
Redefining.
Accidental Poet said:
Fay, such a calming effect comes from this beautiful write. A masterpiece for sure.
August 13th, 2017 08:10
Accidental Poet said:
Fay, such a calming effect comes from this beautiful write. A masterpiece for sure.
August 13th, 2017 08:10
Redefining.
Louis Gibbs said:
Your lovely poem radiates tranquility as does the pool, Fay. Thanks for this fine, calming write to start my day.
August 13th, 2017 07:40
Louis Gibbs said:
Your lovely poem radiates tranquility as does the pool, Fay. Thanks for this fine, calming write to start my day.
August 13th, 2017 07:40
Enticing.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write and opening to my day in the UK. Thank you Fay.
August 13th, 2017 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write and opening to my day in the UK. Thank you Fay.
August 13th, 2017 00:51
Enticing.
malubotelho said:
Yes Fay, you are a truly blessing for us readers. Thank you 😊
August 12th, 2017 22:13
malubotelho said:
Yes Fay, you are a truly blessing for us readers. Thank you 😊
August 12th, 2017 22:13
Enticing.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ loved it !
Impeccable
Impressive
Imposing
Impassive
Impelling
Your Poetry & You are
summed up in those five
words ! Oh and you are also
ENTICING !
Your as always ~ BRIAN
August 12th, 2017 17:49
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ loved it !
Impeccable
Impressive
Imposing
Impassive
Impelling
Your Poetry & You are
summed up in those five
words ! Oh and you are also
ENTICING !
Your as always ~ BRIAN
August 12th, 2017 17:49
Enticing.
FredPeyer said:
After reading your poem, Fay, I now look at each dawn in a different way. Beautifully written!
August 12th, 2017 11:44
FredPeyer said:
After reading your poem, Fay, I now look at each dawn in a different way. Beautifully written!
August 12th, 2017 11:44
Enticing.
Louis Gibbs said:
Challenging in its fullness to comprehend completely upon initial review, but appreciation grows with each read. You have a gift, Fay ... thanks for sharing it!
August 12th, 2017 07:43
Louis Gibbs said:
Challenging in its fullness to comprehend completely upon initial review, but appreciation grows with each read. You have a gift, Fay ... thanks for sharing it!
August 12th, 2017 07:43
Enticing.
Michael Edwards said:
In fact lots of lovely lines - love nights shawl and the idea of day\'s entrance - great read.
August 12th, 2017 04:26
Michael Edwards said:
In fact lots of lovely lines - love nights shawl and the idea of day\'s entrance - great read.
August 12th, 2017 04:26
Interference.
malubotelho said:
Oh! This is so cute. How much I love the little creatures. They have God\'s appearance.
August 11th, 2017 16:56
malubotelho said:
Oh! This is so cute. How much I love the little creatures. They have God\'s appearance.
August 11th, 2017 16:56
Interference.
Michael Edwards said:
I can see them in my mind\'s eye - great write fay
August 11th, 2017 14:25
Michael Edwards said:
I can see them in my mind\'s eye - great write fay
August 11th, 2017 14:25
Interference.
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful depiction of fish. I see it and feel it through your words.
August 11th, 2017 12:09
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful depiction of fish. I see it and feel it through your words.
August 11th, 2017 12:09
Abundance.
FredPeyer said:
I don\'t think I ever saw a nicer write about August than this one, Fay. Beautifully penned!
August 11th, 2017 11:34
FredPeyer said:
I don\'t think I ever saw a nicer write about August than this one, Fay. Beautifully penned!
August 11th, 2017 11:34
Abundance.
WriteBeLight said:
Nicely done Fay. August is not my favorite month, but after reading this I reconsider :)
August 10th, 2017 12:08
WriteBeLight said:
Nicely done Fay. August is not my favorite month, but after reading this I reconsider :)
August 10th, 2017 12:08
Abundance.
malubotelho said:
Your poem took me back to my childhood in Brazil living in the farms with my family. Was so beautiful to see the corn fields. The coffee beans are so sweet when ripe. I loved to jump on the cotton balls at the shed. Thanks for taking me to lovely memories. Great sweet poem for abundance.
August 10th, 2017 10:35
malubotelho said:
Your poem took me back to my childhood in Brazil living in the farms with my family. Was so beautiful to see the corn fields. The coffee beans are so sweet when ripe. I loved to jump on the cotton balls at the shed. Thanks for taking me to lovely memories. Great sweet poem for abundance.
August 10th, 2017 10:35
Abundance.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
AUGUST ~ Come she must
But when she comes
A Harvest ripe she brings
And all of Nature sings ! AMEN
Thanks FAY ~ A lovely Month ~ A lovely Picture and Poem ~ From a lovely Lady ! There are so so many layers to this Poem ~ that I see a new nuance each time I read it ~ Yours as ever BRIAN ! I invite you to taste my Minestrone & a Glass of Chianti Classico ~ B.
August 10th, 2017 03:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
AUGUST ~ Come she must
But when she comes
A Harvest ripe she brings
And all of Nature sings ! AMEN
Thanks FAY ~ A lovely Month ~ A lovely Picture and Poem ~ From a lovely Lady ! There are so so many layers to this Poem ~ that I see a new nuance each time I read it ~ Yours as ever BRIAN ! I invite you to taste my Minestrone & a Glass of Chianti Classico ~ B.
August 10th, 2017 03:18
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