Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Take One.
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful poem, incredible rhyming, nice structure, I don\'t think it can get any better, Fay.
August 6th, 2017 03:26
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful poem, incredible rhyming, nice structure, I don\'t think it can get any better, Fay.
August 6th, 2017 03:26
Take One.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ a poignant picture and an elegant but sad poem ~ straight for your loving heart. I know you speak from experience and your poem throbs with reality. Thanks for caring ~ Thinking of you ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
August 6th, 2017 03:17
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ a poignant picture and an elegant but sad poem ~ straight for your loving heart. I know you speak from experience and your poem throbs with reality. Thanks for caring ~ Thinking of you ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
August 6th, 2017 03:17
Too Long.
FredPeyer said:
Lately there were several poems with rain as subject matter. Yours definitely stands out! Great writing.
August 5th, 2017 12:30
FredPeyer said:
Lately there were several poems with rain as subject matter. Yours definitely stands out! Great writing.
August 5th, 2017 12:30
Too Long.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ for a lovely Complimentary Picture & Poem. I have spent dry days in Cornwall but also many wet ones ! However \"wet or dry\" Cornwall is on of the most beautiful Counties in England ! I guess being a Peninsular ~ surrounded on all sides by water ~ accounts for your high precipitation. Essex is much drier but much duller ! Because you are the \"Queen of Cornwall\" I have dedicated today\'s Poem \"Tristan & Isolde\" to you ~ OK ~ Yours as ever ~ BRIAN.
August 5th, 2017 10:06
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ for a lovely Complimentary Picture & Poem. I have spent dry days in Cornwall but also many wet ones ! However \"wet or dry\" Cornwall is on of the most beautiful Counties in England ! I guess being a Peninsular ~ surrounded on all sides by water ~ accounts for your high precipitation. Essex is much drier but much duller ! Because you are the \"Queen of Cornwall\" I have dedicated today\'s Poem \"Tristan & Isolde\" to you ~ OK ~ Yours as ever ~ BRIAN.
August 5th, 2017 10:06
Too Long.
malubotelho said:
I can listen to the rain and see your Valley. Beautiful images feels my mind. Soft and homely. Thanks for sharing
August 5th, 2017 09:54
malubotelho said:
I can listen to the rain and see your Valley. Beautiful images feels my mind. Soft and homely. Thanks for sharing
August 5th, 2017 09:54
Too Long.
WriteBeLight said:
Hope it stops raining! I agree that too much rain in one\'s life can do us much harm. I guess Mother Earth has her ways, though. Great job on this Fay!
August 5th, 2017 09:07
WriteBeLight said:
Hope it stops raining! I agree that too much rain in one\'s life can do us much harm. I guess Mother Earth has her ways, though. Great job on this Fay!
August 5th, 2017 09:07
Too Long.
burning-embers said:
Yes, it sure was wet in Cornwall which featured in my write of yesterday. Im deffo needing sunnier times ahead.
August 5th, 2017 08:44
burning-embers said:
Yes, it sure was wet in Cornwall which featured in my write of yesterday. Im deffo needing sunnier times ahead.
August 5th, 2017 08:44
Too Long.
Louis Gibbs said:
An exquisite rendition of the old phrase; \"Rain, rain, go away. Come again another day.\" We\'ve had a similar wet summer here in south Alabama. Lovely, Fay!
August 5th, 2017 08:01
Louis Gibbs said:
An exquisite rendition of the old phrase; \"Rain, rain, go away. Come again another day.\" We\'ve had a similar wet summer here in south Alabama. Lovely, Fay!
August 5th, 2017 08:01
Too Long.
Michael Edwards said:
Had to come in from the garden - guess what - it was raining. Great poem.
August 5th, 2017 07:46
Michael Edwards said:
Had to come in from the garden - guess what - it was raining. Great poem.
August 5th, 2017 07:46
Too Long.
orchidee said:
You having too much \'proper rain\' as they say? Or I thought you was gonna write about some of my poems - too long?! heehee. A fine write again Fay.
August 5th, 2017 05:51
orchidee said:
You having too much \'proper rain\' as they say? Or I thought you was gonna write about some of my poems - too long?! heehee. A fine write again Fay.
August 5th, 2017 05:51
Not A Doubt.
FredPeyer said:
The picture and the poem do compliment each other, both are very beautiful and elegant. Beautiful writing as always!
August 4th, 2017 13:17
FredPeyer said:
The picture and the poem do compliment each other, both are very beautiful and elegant. Beautiful writing as always!
August 4th, 2017 13:17
Not A Doubt.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY it is indeed LADY HOLDING A ROSE by Emma Sandys ~ by a coincidence my POEM tomorrow is based on ISOLDE and the LOVE POTION ~ by Her husband FREDERICK SANDYS ~ must be a pre-Raphaelite Muse in the air ? Love both the Form & Function of the Poem ~ Yours as ever ~ BRIAN
August 4th, 2017 11:21
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY it is indeed LADY HOLDING A ROSE by Emma Sandys ~ by a coincidence my POEM tomorrow is based on ISOLDE and the LOVE POTION ~ by Her husband FREDERICK SANDYS ~ must be a pre-Raphaelite Muse in the air ? Love both the Form & Function of the Poem ~ Yours as ever ~ BRIAN
August 4th, 2017 11:21
Not A Doubt.
malubotelho said:
Another beauty Fay. I\'m enjoying reading your book. I open it on any page and fill my heart with beauty. Thanks for such an inspirational work.
August 4th, 2017 11:09
malubotelho said:
Another beauty Fay. I\'m enjoying reading your book. I open it on any page and fill my heart with beauty. Thanks for such an inspirational work.
August 4th, 2017 11:09
Not A Doubt.
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. is that you in the pic - a little younger?! heehee.
August 4th, 2017 10:05
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. is that you in the pic - a little younger?! heehee.
August 4th, 2017 10:05
Not A Doubt.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write and liked the William Holman Hunt painting.
August 4th, 2017 08:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write and liked the William Holman Hunt painting.
August 4th, 2017 08:10
Not A Doubt.
Louis Gibbs said:
You weave a fine tapestry with your words, Fay. I appreciate this poem as I do all of your work!
August 4th, 2017 07:09
Louis Gibbs said:
You weave a fine tapestry with your words, Fay. I appreciate this poem as I do all of your work!
August 4th, 2017 07:09
Not A Doubt.
Michael Edwards said:
A super work as always. I not usually a great fan of pre-Raphaelite but this is so well complemented by Emma Sandys painting.
August 4th, 2017 05:36
Michael Edwards said:
A super work as always. I not usually a great fan of pre-Raphaelite but this is so well complemented by Emma Sandys painting.
August 4th, 2017 05:36
Not A Doubt.
Accidental Poet said:
This is really beautiful. Excellent writing here Fay.
August 4th, 2017 04:10
Accidental Poet said:
This is really beautiful. Excellent writing here Fay.
August 4th, 2017 04:10
More Than.
P.H.Rose said:
Wonderful piece Fay
Love the line
\"Humanity worldwide yawns at your warning \"
August 3rd, 2017 13:57
P.H.Rose said:
Wonderful piece Fay
Love the line
\"Humanity worldwide yawns at your warning \"
August 3rd, 2017 13:57
Cutting Free.
P.H.Rose said:
Yes I agree a great write
And a brilliant read....
August 3rd, 2017 13:36
P.H.Rose said:
Yes I agree a great write
And a brilliant read....
August 3rd, 2017 13:36
Cutting Free.
WriteBeLight said:
Love it Fay, in particular the very first line! My feelings exactly!
August 3rd, 2017 12:38
WriteBeLight said:
Love it Fay, in particular the very first line! My feelings exactly!
August 3rd, 2017 12:38
Cutting Free.
FredPeyer said:
First I saw the picture and thought \'oh, a happy easy poem\'.
Started to read and realized \'not easy\', \'deep thoughts, intriguing and imaginative writing\'.....Fay at her best!
August 3rd, 2017 11:58
FredPeyer said:
First I saw the picture and thought \'oh, a happy easy poem\'.
Started to read and realized \'not easy\', \'deep thoughts, intriguing and imaginative writing\'.....Fay at her best!
August 3rd, 2017 11:58
Cutting Free.
kevin browne said:
great stuff written her Fay Slimm. I\'m intoxicated with your fine poetry.
August 3rd, 2017 11:06
kevin browne said:
great stuff written her Fay Slimm. I\'m intoxicated with your fine poetry.
August 3rd, 2017 11:06
Cutting Free.
orchidee said:
Phew! Well, I know you\'re not a \'dark\' poet, yet I wondered if it would be \'cutting free\' as in self-harm. That only makes me shudder! But this is nice!
August 3rd, 2017 08:34
orchidee said:
Phew! Well, I know you\'re not a \'dark\' poet, yet I wondered if it would be \'cutting free\' as in self-harm. That only makes me shudder! But this is nice!
August 3rd, 2017 08:34
More Than.
malubotelho said:
One more magnificent writing Fay. Lovely reading. The glorious Mother Nature, so awesome.
August 2nd, 2017 12:48
malubotelho said:
One more magnificent writing Fay. Lovely reading. The glorious Mother Nature, so awesome.
August 2nd, 2017 12:48
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