Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Read Rightly.
Michael Edwards said:
A moving work well captured - thanks for posting Fay
August 22nd, 2017 03:43
Michael Edwards said:
A moving work well captured - thanks for posting Fay
August 22nd, 2017 03:43
Read Rightly.
Frank Prem said:
So rare for a right reading Fay. We can but hope.
August 22nd, 2017 02:47
Frank Prem said:
So rare for a right reading Fay. We can but hope.
August 22nd, 2017 02:47
Chance.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Love your Poem FAY and it is a perfect reflection of the DAWNING of New Love ! And a perfect picture of a Couple ~ Lost in each others LOVE. We all from time to time try o express the wonder and intimacy of LOVE, However like trying to write about the Total Eclipse of Brother Sun by Sister Moon ~ \"It\'s better Felt than Telt\" so it is with LOVE ~ AMEN Thanks for sharing ~ Yours as ever ~ BRIAN
August 21st, 2017 18:14
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Love your Poem FAY and it is a perfect reflection of the DAWNING of New Love ! And a perfect picture of a Couple ~ Lost in each others LOVE. We all from time to time try o express the wonder and intimacy of LOVE, However like trying to write about the Total Eclipse of Brother Sun by Sister Moon ~ \"It\'s better Felt than Telt\" so it is with LOVE ~ AMEN Thanks for sharing ~ Yours as ever ~ BRIAN
August 21st, 2017 18:14
Chance.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, love the subject and love how you say it! Beautiful!
August 21st, 2017 16:16
FredPeyer said:
Fay, love the subject and love how you say it! Beautiful!
August 21st, 2017 16:16
Together.
FredPeyer said:
Now if only everybody in this world would subscribe to your mantra!
Beautifully written, great subject.
August 21st, 2017 15:32
FredPeyer said:
Now if only everybody in this world would subscribe to your mantra!
Beautifully written, great subject.
August 21st, 2017 15:32
Chance.
burning-embers said:
Destiny\'s chance for romance. Marvelous thought. Really enjoyed this.
August 21st, 2017 12:07
burning-embers said:
Destiny\'s chance for romance. Marvelous thought. Really enjoyed this.
August 21st, 2017 12:07
Chance.
malubotelho said:
Beautiful your poem about love encountered at late age. I\'m here living it in reality. It is beautiful indeed.
August 21st, 2017 10:23
malubotelho said:
Beautiful your poem about love encountered at late age. I\'m here living it in reality. It is beautiful indeed.
August 21st, 2017 10:23
Chance.
orchidee said:
A good write Fay. The layout gives pauses after each line. I don\'t pause at times - just waffle on a thousand words (well, almost!). heehee.
August 21st, 2017 08:09
orchidee said:
A good write Fay. The layout gives pauses after each line. I don\'t pause at times - just waffle on a thousand words (well, almost!). heehee.
August 21st, 2017 08:09
Chance.
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful description of the rekindling of love\'s fire at advanced age, Fay. It strikes a chord ... loved it!
August 21st, 2017 07:01
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful description of the rekindling of love\'s fire at advanced age, Fay. It strikes a chord ... loved it!
August 21st, 2017 07:01
Together.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. The Hippies had it right. \"MAKE LOVE, NOT WAR\"
August 21st, 2017 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. The Hippies had it right. \"MAKE LOVE, NOT WAR\"
August 21st, 2017 01:00
Together.
myself and me said:
Together, let\'s make this world a paradise to live.
An effective medicine for the current disease spreading around the world.
Thank you.
August 20th, 2017 22:10
myself and me said:
Together, let\'s make this world a paradise to live.
An effective medicine for the current disease spreading around the world.
Thank you.
August 20th, 2017 22:10
Together.
malubotelho said:
This is a beautiful thought Fay. If at least 50% of the humanity would think like that we could save the planet and our race.
August 20th, 2017 12:22
malubotelho said:
This is a beautiful thought Fay. If at least 50% of the humanity would think like that we could save the planet and our race.
August 20th, 2017 12:22
Together.
Michael Edwards said:
coming-togetherness - the way forward for us all but does everyone work to this end - sadly not and selfishness rules in many hearts - did enjoy the read Fay.
August 20th, 2017 08:35
Michael Edwards said:
coming-togetherness - the way forward for us all but does everyone work to this end - sadly not and selfishness rules in many hearts - did enjoy the read Fay.
August 20th, 2017 08:35
Together.
rrodriguez said:
Wow! To be me & to be you, then to be ❤. This is the way to be. Lovef it!
August 20th, 2017 06:56
rrodriguez said:
Wow! To be me & to be you, then to be ❤. This is the way to be. Lovef it!
August 20th, 2017 06:56
Together.
Accidental Poet said:
We belong to the Earth, not the Earth to us. We\'re just the custodians of the building belonging to God. And we\'ve got to do a better job. Excellent write Fay.
August 20th, 2017 06:35
Accidental Poet said:
We belong to the Earth, not the Earth to us. We\'re just the custodians of the building belonging to God. And we\'ve got to do a better job. Excellent write Fay.
August 20th, 2017 06:35
Together.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ for reminding us of the importance of Friends & family ! When we form a group of Caring Individuals like MPS ~ The WHOLE is always greater than the Sum of the Parts ! Love the visual ~ the Power to light the bulb is generated by the combined energy of those who encircle it ~ AMEN Sunday Love ~ BRIAN
August 20th, 2017 03:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ for reminding us of the importance of Friends & family ! When we form a group of Caring Individuals like MPS ~ The WHOLE is always greater than the Sum of the Parts ! Love the visual ~ the Power to light the bulb is generated by the combined energy of those who encircle it ~ AMEN Sunday Love ~ BRIAN
August 20th, 2017 03:30
Who Dares.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Otters are starting to flourish one more and that is great to see.
August 20th, 2017 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Otters are starting to flourish one more and that is great to see.
August 20th, 2017 00:27
Who Dares.
Nicholas Browning said:
This is quite nice. The last stanza gives a nice clean finish. Spot on.
August 19th, 2017 07:03
Nicholas Browning said:
This is quite nice. The last stanza gives a nice clean finish. Spot on.
August 19th, 2017 07:03
Losing You.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write again Fay, as Fred has sad that last stanza is superb.
August 19th, 2017 00:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write again Fay, as Fred has sad that last stanza is superb.
August 19th, 2017 00:05
Losing You.
myself and me said:
Are you writing this for me? This is my current situation.
So beautiful, so touching.
August 18th, 2017 19:50
myself and me said:
Are you writing this for me? This is my current situation.
So beautiful, so touching.
August 18th, 2017 19:50
Losing You.
malubotelho said:
You are always so delicate with your words. Straight to the heart. So lovely. Thanks
August 18th, 2017 19:48
malubotelho said:
You are always so delicate with your words. Straight to the heart. So lovely. Thanks
August 18th, 2017 19:48
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