Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.



Three Faces.
RAJ NANDY said:

THE MUSE REMAINS AS OUR INSPIRATION AND IS HERE TO STAY! Thanks, Fay! -Raj, New Delhi

July 31st, 2017 09:00

Three Faces.
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write. That muse can be mischaeivious at times.

July 31st, 2017 08:00

Three Faces.
Louis Gibbs said:

A brilliant description of the writing process, Fay! Not only as it pertains to poetry, but to creating great literary works. One must surrender the busy mind to the muse, as your poem describes so well. This one becomes a favorite for sure. Thank you.

July 31st, 2017 07:16

Afterglow
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write Fay.

July 31st, 2017 00:23

Afterglow
onepauly said:

very good faye. evening

July 30th, 2017 20:04

Afterglow
P.H.Rose said:

Wonderful!!!!!
Simply wonderful

July 30th, 2017 17:53

Afterglow
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

AFTERGLOW ~ FAY ~ Now there\'s a double entendre in a title ! We (and especially we Men) could learn an awesome lot if we paid more attention to Nature ! As expected ~ Lovely Poem & Picture ! Yours BRIAN

July 30th, 2017 17:06

Afterglow
Louis Gibbs said:

As we, your fellow poets, thank him for you, Fay. You\'ve shown us again how it\'s done with this fine one.

July 30th, 2017 09:55

Afterglow
Michael Edwards said:

Beautifully descriptive

July 30th, 2017 08:43

Afterglow
orchidee said:

Never knew so much happened in the twilight! A fine write Fay. heehee.

July 30th, 2017 08:40

Afterglow
Heather T said:

Breathless burst of day fade words. Every poem of yours is my favorite.

July 30th, 2017 08:19

Night-Stained.
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful tasty write.

July 30th, 2017 00:58

Night-Stained.
malubotelho said:

Thanks for sharing this beauty. Lovely poem and picture. Fun to read.

July 29th, 2017 20:10

Night-Stained.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Beautiful Picture ~ Perfect Metaphor ~ Lovely Lady ~ Your BRIAN

July 29th, 2017 16:01

Night-Stained.
P.H.Rose said:

Wonderful.....
Wonderful.......
A wonderful poem
To match a wonderful
Scene!!!!!!

July 29th, 2017 14:43

Night-Stained.
FredPeyer said:

Beautiful poem Fay, and we do have some sunsets that look exactly like the picture.

July 29th, 2017 12:30

Night-Stained.
Michael Edwards said:

A masterful work - some really first class similes and metaphors used to quite outstanding effect.

July 29th, 2017 12:18

Night-Stained.
orchidee said:

Another fine write Fay.

July 29th, 2017 08:50

Night-Stained.
Louis Gibbs said:

Again you prove to be a maestro of verbiage. Beautiful poem and picture, Fay!.

July 29th, 2017 07:03

Love-Smitten.
P.H.Rose said:

Lovely poem Fay...

July 28th, 2017 17:09

Love-Smitten.
FredPeyer said:

Lovely write, and so right!
While we do not have a dog anymore due to a lot of traveling, we used have dogs when the kids were smaller and I always enjoyed that evening walk with the dog.

July 28th, 2017 13:17

Love-Smitten.
malubotelho said:

Awesome write as always. It is a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing.

July 28th, 2017 10:49

Love-Smitten.
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderfully emotive write and that last line is very true for many people.

July 28th, 2017 08:07

Love-Smitten.
Louis Gibbs said:

\"Seniors plod onwards, regaining a sense of lost value by homing a dog,\". You have the gift of nailing it, Fay! Another well written one from your reliable pen.

July 28th, 2017 07:09

Uncivilized.
Tony36 said:

Great write, love the painting to

July 27th, 2017 12:10

Uncivilized.
burning-embers said:

Fear of the darkness brings forth many a picture. Have no fears i say, for these demons would have come and got you many moons ago were they real. The fear here is fear itself.
Splendid write with clearly understood metaphor.

July 27th, 2017 11:25

Uncivilized.
malubotelho said:

I put myself inside that scenario as reading it. Felt intrigued by your writing. Thanks for sharing. Soon to receive your book.

July 27th, 2017 09:14

Uncivilized.
Michael Edwards said:

Beautifully worded scene - I can see it my minds eye even without the picture.

July 27th, 2017 08:33

Uncivilized.
Louis Gibbs said:

Enchanting poetic interpretation of an intriguing piece if art, Fay. I always look forward to your work.

July 27th, 2017 08:08

Uncivilized.
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful dark words Fay. Great write.

July 27th, 2017 08:08



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