Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Shore-Song.
Nicholas Browning said:
Very interesting portrayal of one of nature\'s aspects. Nicely done as well.
July 9th, 2017 16:14
Nicholas Browning said:
Very interesting portrayal of one of nature\'s aspects. Nicely done as well.
July 9th, 2017 16:14
Shore-Song.
Heather T said:
Sing to me all day, Ms. Fay...the song of nature\'s might in salt plumes from your pen.
July 9th, 2017 13:07
Heather T said:
Sing to me all day, Ms. Fay...the song of nature\'s might in salt plumes from your pen.
July 9th, 2017 13:07
Shore-Song.
Louis Gibbs said:
I hear the sound your poem portrays so well, Fay. I can smell the salt air. I, too, live on a shore, but mine is sand rather than rock so the sound is muted. Oh well, I still appreciate it. Thanks for this fine post!
July 9th, 2017 10:34
Louis Gibbs said:
I hear the sound your poem portrays so well, Fay. I can smell the salt air. I, too, live on a shore, but mine is sand rather than rock so the sound is muted. Oh well, I still appreciate it. Thanks for this fine post!
July 9th, 2017 10:34
Shore-Song.
onepauly said:
I find I can relate to the waves crashing for hours on you tube
July 9th, 2017 08:26
onepauly said:
I find I can relate to the waves crashing for hours on you tube
July 9th, 2017 08:26
Shore-Song.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ living near the Coast is always a Blessing ~ Even the Essex ~ Suffolk Coast ! BUT to live near the Cornish Coast (as in your picture) and implied in your Poem is Paradise ! Blessings for SUNDAY ~ BRIAN
July 9th, 2017 03:31
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ living near the Coast is always a Blessing ~ Even the Essex ~ Suffolk Coast ! BUT to live near the Cornish Coast (as in your picture) and implied in your Poem is Paradise ! Blessings for SUNDAY ~ BRIAN
July 9th, 2017 03:31
Shore-Song.
FredPeyer said:
You are saying in such a beautiful way what I experience nearly every time we go to the beach. And the picture is nice too. Thanks for another good one Fay!
July 9th, 2017 03:02
FredPeyer said:
You are saying in such a beautiful way what I experience nearly every time we go to the beach. And the picture is nice too. Thanks for another good one Fay!
July 9th, 2017 03:02
Shore-Song.
Michael Edwards said:
Hear it, smell it, experience it - this says it all in a great atmospheric write.
July 9th, 2017 02:51
Michael Edwards said:
Hear it, smell it, experience it - this says it all in a great atmospheric write.
July 9th, 2017 02:51
Unreal.
Heather T said:
I love being taken along to Fay\'s world. I feel blessed when you write. Means I can come on in and sit a spell.
July 8th, 2017 13:20
Heather T said:
I love being taken along to Fay\'s world. I feel blessed when you write. Means I can come on in and sit a spell.
July 8th, 2017 13:20
Unreal.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, this is so beautiful, don\'t know how to say it....you used up all the words! I tried to pick a favorite line or stanza and could not. The whole poem is a favorite!
July 8th, 2017 13:04
FredPeyer said:
Fay, this is so beautiful, don\'t know how to say it....you used up all the words! I tried to pick a favorite line or stanza and could not. The whole poem is a favorite!
July 8th, 2017 13:04
Unreal.
Louis Gibbs said:
Beautiful word painting, Fay! You are indeed an artist. Your gift with words continues to impress and amaze me.
July 8th, 2017 08:40
Louis Gibbs said:
Beautiful word painting, Fay! You are indeed an artist. Your gift with words continues to impress and amaze me.
July 8th, 2017 08:40
Unreal.
Nicholas Browning said:
This is pretty interesting. The way you string adjectives along like your plaything is admirable. Keep it up!
July 8th, 2017 07:38
Nicholas Browning said:
This is pretty interesting. The way you string adjectives along like your plaything is admirable. Keep it up!
July 8th, 2017 07:38
Unreal.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Excellent again FAY ! You are such a blessing (in so many ways) to MPS and your awesome daily Poems & Pictures inspire us all ! The painting \"Rainbows in the Evening\" perfectly compliments your poem and is alluded to in your closing verse. All of Nature is Unreal but it is God\'s gift to the Human Race ! A Chance to thank Him tomorrow ~ BUT ~ How many will ? Love you for being you ~ BRIAN
July 8th, 2017 04:35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Excellent again FAY ! You are such a blessing (in so many ways) to MPS and your awesome daily Poems & Pictures inspire us all ! The painting \"Rainbows in the Evening\" perfectly compliments your poem and is alluded to in your closing verse. All of Nature is Unreal but it is God\'s gift to the Human Race ! A Chance to thank Him tomorrow ~ BUT ~ How many will ? Love you for being you ~ BRIAN
July 8th, 2017 04:35
Unreal.
kevin browne said:
how did you manage to put the array of these beautiful words together because they sit side by side perfectly and the message is strong and clear which in itself pretty UNREAL. great worked out poem here and it so pleasant to read. well done Fay Slimm.
July 8th, 2017 04:26
kevin browne said:
how did you manage to put the array of these beautiful words together because they sit side by side perfectly and the message is strong and clear which in itself pretty UNREAL. great worked out poem here and it so pleasant to read. well done Fay Slimm.
July 8th, 2017 04:26
Regeneration.
Augustus said:
I am always in awe of your nature poems. Inspiring.
July 7th, 2017 18:53
Augustus said:
I am always in awe of your nature poems. Inspiring.
July 7th, 2017 18:53
Regeneration.
FredPeyer said:
Love your poem Fay, especially liked the line \"Unseen Love\'s Presence begins to reveal gift of contentment\"
Thank you!
July 7th, 2017 11:59
FredPeyer said:
Love your poem Fay, especially liked the line \"Unseen Love\'s Presence begins to reveal gift of contentment\"
Thank you!
July 7th, 2017 11:59
Regeneration.
Louis Gibbs said:
Fay, you blew me away this morning with this beautiful poem. Thank you for starting this day with awe, both of your poem and in full appreciation of the dawning of this new day, as so beautifully portrayed.
July 7th, 2017 07:14
Louis Gibbs said:
Fay, you blew me away this morning with this beautiful poem. Thank you for starting this day with awe, both of your poem and in full appreciation of the dawning of this new day, as so beautifully portrayed.
July 7th, 2017 07:14
Regeneration.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ this made my morning and has given me strength for TODAY ! Haunting picture and and assuring poem. We all need REGENERATION ~ day by day by day ~ thanks for caring ~ Yours BRIAN
July 7th, 2017 03:13
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ this made my morning and has given me strength for TODAY ! Haunting picture and and assuring poem. We all need REGENERATION ~ day by day by day ~ thanks for caring ~ Yours BRIAN
July 7th, 2017 03:13
Regeneration.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write once more Fay. I love the lines
\"Love\'s Presence reveals
gift of contentment.\"
July 7th, 2017 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write once more Fay. I love the lines
\"Love\'s Presence reveals
gift of contentment.\"
July 7th, 2017 02:24
Scented Solutions.
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write, love is so much in our lives, can it ever be completely explained.
July 6th, 2017 08:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write, love is so much in our lives, can it ever be completely explained.
July 6th, 2017 08:01
Scented Solutions.
Louis Gibbs said:
As your poem states so well, love requires \"Being tenderly constant\" in the relationship. It requires an effort and attentiveness on the part of both. It cannot be taken for granted. This is so well messaged in your fine poem, Fay. Thank you!
July 6th, 2017 07:41
Louis Gibbs said:
As your poem states so well, love requires \"Being tenderly constant\" in the relationship. It requires an effort and attentiveness on the part of both. It cannot be taken for granted. This is so well messaged in your fine poem, Fay. Thank you!
July 6th, 2017 07:41
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