Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
River-Speak.
Heather T said:
I love being lost in your language again. Your images brought to mind the many pieces of pottery and arrow heads churned up in the sandy banks by the river I played by all of my growing up years. I used to imagine the natives hunting deer and fishing.
July 25th, 2017 23:21
Heather T said:
I love being lost in your language again. Your images brought to mind the many pieces of pottery and arrow heads churned up in the sandy banks by the river I played by all of my growing up years. I used to imagine the natives hunting deer and fishing.
July 25th, 2017 23:21
River-Speak.
malubotelho said:
I agree with Fred, you are good indeed. I\'m looking to buy a book from you if you have published one. I almost feel like I\'m taking advantage of your writing reading it for free. Thank you so very much.
July 25th, 2017 12:23
malubotelho said:
I agree with Fred, you are good indeed. I\'m looking to buy a book from you if you have published one. I almost feel like I\'m taking advantage of your writing reading it for free. Thank you so very much.
July 25th, 2017 12:23
River-Speak.
FredPeyer said:
Incredible poem, incredible metaphors, incredible writing.
Fay, you are good indeed!
July 25th, 2017 12:16
FredPeyer said:
Incredible poem, incredible metaphors, incredible writing.
Fay, you are good indeed!
July 25th, 2017 12:16
River-Speak.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Rivers are very precious in the purification and preservation of life ! Trees thrive on River Banks ~ Animals enjoy their cool and life giving nectar ~ insects and fish spawn and dwell in and by Rivers. How would your River report on the Humans who have lived on her Banks ~ drank her Water and used her for transport from Village to Village ~ did they treat you well ? Do we treat you better now ? I think not ~ Let us PRAISE and PRESERVE our Rivers ~ they are a precious heritage. Thanks for caring ~ Yours BRIAN
July 25th, 2017 07:40
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Rivers are very precious in the purification and preservation of life ! Trees thrive on River Banks ~ Animals enjoy their cool and life giving nectar ~ insects and fish spawn and dwell in and by Rivers. How would your River report on the Humans who have lived on her Banks ~ drank her Water and used her for transport from Village to Village ~ did they treat you well ? Do we treat you better now ? I think not ~ Let us PRAISE and PRESERVE our Rivers ~ they are a precious heritage. Thanks for caring ~ Yours BRIAN
July 25th, 2017 07:40
River-Speak.
Michael Edwards said:
So evocative of the river - beautifully captured.
July 25th, 2017 06:49
Michael Edwards said:
So evocative of the river - beautifully captured.
July 25th, 2017 06:49
River-Speak.
kevin browne said:
I just jumped in the river and flowed along looking for everything you wrote and yes, it was totally beautiful just like River-Speak. brilliant, Fay Slimm x
July 25th, 2017 05:14
kevin browne said:
I just jumped in the river and flowed along looking for everything you wrote and yes, it was totally beautiful just like River-Speak. brilliant, Fay Slimm x
July 25th, 2017 05:14
New Appetite.
malubotelho said:
No regrets never for come here and read your poems. Each time a better read. Thank you so much.
July 24th, 2017 22:08
malubotelho said:
No regrets never for come here and read your poems. Each time a better read. Thank you so much.
July 24th, 2017 22:08
New Appetite.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, you have a way with words, and there is \'not a sign of regret\' for having read your beautiful poem.
July 24th, 2017 11:42
FredPeyer said:
Fay, you have a way with words, and there is \'not a sign of regret\' for having read your beautiful poem.
July 24th, 2017 11:42
New Appetite.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Move on ~ He\'s a chapter in the past
Don\'t close the book
Just turn the page !
I love it Fay ~ it is a new sentiment for you !
Unrequited Love ~ Cage ajar ~ The bird fled !
BUT ~ New desire ~ New appetite Female eyes
Lit again and full of hunger ~ Prized then the nectar
Fired by another ~ with not a sign of regret !
This is so so sensuous FAY and gives hope to
all who have Loved & Lost ~ To Love again !
Thanks for caring ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
July 24th, 2017 09:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Move on ~ He\'s a chapter in the past
Don\'t close the book
Just turn the page !
I love it Fay ~ it is a new sentiment for you !
Unrequited Love ~ Cage ajar ~ The bird fled !
BUT ~ New desire ~ New appetite Female eyes
Lit again and full of hunger ~ Prized then the nectar
Fired by another ~ with not a sign of regret !
This is so so sensuous FAY and gives hope to
all who have Loved & Lost ~ To Love again !
Thanks for caring ~ Yours as ever BRIAN
July 24th, 2017 09:47
New Appetite.
Louis Gibbs said:
A concise beauty, beautifully shaped! This one satisfies my order-driven soul. Thank you, Fay for rendering this gorgeous poem of love kindled anew.
July 24th, 2017 09:02
Louis Gibbs said:
A concise beauty, beautifully shaped! This one satisfies my order-driven soul. Thank you, Fay for rendering this gorgeous poem of love kindled anew.
July 24th, 2017 09:02
New Appetite.
Frank Prem said:
in with the new, and another page. Good job, Fay.
July 24th, 2017 04:29
Frank Prem said:
in with the new, and another page. Good job, Fay.
July 24th, 2017 04:29
Stillness.
Goldfinch60 said:
The stillness between lovers is a very special moment.
Wonderful words Fay.
July 24th, 2017 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
The stillness between lovers is a very special moment.
Wonderful words Fay.
July 24th, 2017 00:45
Stillness.
kevin browne said:
this has made me totally fall in love with you Fay Slimm. are you married? write of the day for me because it holds so much truth and meaning.
July 23rd, 2017 16:35
kevin browne said:
this has made me totally fall in love with you Fay Slimm. are you married? write of the day for me because it holds so much truth and meaning.
July 23rd, 2017 16:35
Stillness.
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful poem again, Fay. And you chose a good picture to go with it.
July 23rd, 2017 14:51
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful poem again, Fay. And you chose a good picture to go with it.
July 23rd, 2017 14:51
Stillness.
Louis Gibbs said:
Stillness between lovers speaks ever more loudly and deeply as their love evolves ... a beautiful thing to behold, indeed. So well messaged in this, another fine poem, Fay!
July 23rd, 2017 10:47
Louis Gibbs said:
Stillness between lovers speaks ever more loudly and deeply as their love evolves ... a beautiful thing to behold, indeed. So well messaged in this, another fine poem, Fay!
July 23rd, 2017 10:47
Stillness.
orchidee said:
Then again, if I had a last word, it would be \'sherry\' or \'pork pie\' please. I wish I would shut up! lol.
July 23rd, 2017 09:13
orchidee said:
Then again, if I had a last word, it would be \'sherry\' or \'pork pie\' please. I wish I would shut up! lol.
July 23rd, 2017 09:13
Stillness.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I\'m not always so meditative. If I am, I aim not to be complex. In \'deep times\' some words seem to \'get in the way\' for me. None of this applies to your fine poem though. It\'s just me thinking aloud.
July 23rd, 2017 09:12
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I\'m not always so meditative. If I am, I aim not to be complex. In \'deep times\' some words seem to \'get in the way\' for me. None of this applies to your fine poem though. It\'s just me thinking aloud.
July 23rd, 2017 09:12
Stillness.
Poetic Dan said:
If I had a last word I think it would be \"forgiveness\"
Great piece of art
July 23rd, 2017 04:18
Poetic Dan said:
If I had a last word I think it would be \"forgiveness\"
Great piece of art
July 23rd, 2017 04:18
Endings.
Goldfinch60 said:
Super sensitive write. Nature can seem to be cruel but it will survive as long as homo sapiens appreciates it.
July 23rd, 2017 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Super sensitive write. Nature can seem to be cruel but it will survive as long as homo sapiens appreciates it.
July 23rd, 2017 00:26
Endings.
malubotelho said:
What a beautiful poem of love and understanding for nature and the life cycle. No one could express it in a better way. I can do nothing but fall in love. Gratitude!
July 22nd, 2017 16:37
malubotelho said:
What a beautiful poem of love and understanding for nature and the life cycle. No one could express it in a better way. I can do nothing but fall in love. Gratitude!
July 22nd, 2017 16:37
Endings.
FredPeyer said:
While sad, you saw so much more in the death of that bird and you said it beautifully.
July 22nd, 2017 14:53
FredPeyer said:
While sad, you saw so much more in the death of that bird and you said it beautifully.
July 22nd, 2017 14:53
Endings.
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful poem with some stunning lines ... \"nature\'s calm requiem for the life and death journey\". Thank you for this poem so inspiring to all poets, I\'m sure!
July 22nd, 2017 09:31
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful poem with some stunning lines ... \"nature\'s calm requiem for the life and death journey\". Thank you for this poem so inspiring to all poets, I\'m sure!
July 22nd, 2017 09:31
Hypnotic.
malubotelho said:
I felt the experience through your writing. I have a double feeling about snakes. Some attraction and then respect. I don\'t know if I could have one draped on my little shoulder. Too scary for that, brace Fay.
July 21st, 2017 21:29
malubotelho said:
I felt the experience through your writing. I have a double feeling about snakes. Some attraction and then respect. I don\'t know if I could have one draped on my little shoulder. Too scary for that, brace Fay.
July 21st, 2017 21:29
Hypnotic.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW FAY ~ never saw you as a SNAKE DANCER ~ Well done ~ Oddly enough Ladies often find a big snake ~ Like a BOA CONSTRICTOR (as in your and my picture) less threatening than a small one ! I have an African Grass Snake I take into Primary Schools the Kids love it but the Female Teachers run a mile ! thanks for sharing the thought of FAY draped with a mega snake really made me smile ! Yours BRIAN
July 21st, 2017 12:50
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW FAY ~ never saw you as a SNAKE DANCER ~ Well done ~ Oddly enough Ladies often find a big snake ~ Like a BOA CONSTRICTOR (as in your and my picture) less threatening than a small one ! I have an African Grass Snake I take into Primary Schools the Kids love it but the Female Teachers run a mile ! thanks for sharing the thought of FAY draped with a mega snake really made me smile ! Yours BRIAN
July 21st, 2017 12:50
Hypnotic.
Louis Gibbs said:
Your courageous, youthful spirit shines through this fine piece, Fay. Kudos for this poem and for your brave adventure!
July 21st, 2017 07:31
Louis Gibbs said:
Your courageous, youthful spirit shines through this fine piece, Fay. Kudos for this poem and for your brave adventure!
July 21st, 2017 07:31
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