Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Night-Stained.
malubotelho said:
Thanks for sharing this beauty. Lovely poem and picture. Fun to read.
July 29th, 2017 20:10
malubotelho said:
Thanks for sharing this beauty. Lovely poem and picture. Fun to read.
July 29th, 2017 20:10
Night-Stained.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Beautiful Picture ~ Perfect Metaphor ~ Lovely Lady ~ Your BRIAN
July 29th, 2017 16:01
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Beautiful Picture ~ Perfect Metaphor ~ Lovely Lady ~ Your BRIAN
July 29th, 2017 16:01
Night-Stained.
P.H.Rose said:
Wonderful.....
Wonderful.......
A wonderful poem
To match a wonderful
Scene!!!!!!
July 29th, 2017 14:43
P.H.Rose said:
Wonderful.....
Wonderful.......
A wonderful poem
To match a wonderful
Scene!!!!!!
July 29th, 2017 14:43
Night-Stained.
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful poem Fay, and we do have some sunsets that look exactly like the picture.
July 29th, 2017 12:30
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful poem Fay, and we do have some sunsets that look exactly like the picture.
July 29th, 2017 12:30
Night-Stained.
Michael Edwards said:
A masterful work - some really first class similes and metaphors used to quite outstanding effect.
July 29th, 2017 12:18
Michael Edwards said:
A masterful work - some really first class similes and metaphors used to quite outstanding effect.
July 29th, 2017 12:18
Night-Stained.
Louis Gibbs said:
Again you prove to be a maestro of verbiage. Beautiful poem and picture, Fay!.
July 29th, 2017 07:03
Louis Gibbs said:
Again you prove to be a maestro of verbiage. Beautiful poem and picture, Fay!.
July 29th, 2017 07:03
Love-Smitten.
FredPeyer said:
Lovely write, and so right!
While we do not have a dog anymore due to a lot of traveling, we used have dogs when the kids were smaller and I always enjoyed that evening walk with the dog.
July 28th, 2017 13:17
FredPeyer said:
Lovely write, and so right!
While we do not have a dog anymore due to a lot of traveling, we used have dogs when the kids were smaller and I always enjoyed that evening walk with the dog.
July 28th, 2017 13:17
Love-Smitten.
malubotelho said:
Awesome write as always. It is a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing.
July 28th, 2017 10:49
malubotelho said:
Awesome write as always. It is a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing.
July 28th, 2017 10:49
Love-Smitten.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderfully emotive write and that last line is very true for many people.
July 28th, 2017 08:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderfully emotive write and that last line is very true for many people.
July 28th, 2017 08:07
Love-Smitten.
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Seniors plod onwards, regaining a sense of lost value by homing a dog,\". You have the gift of nailing it, Fay! Another well written one from your reliable pen.
July 28th, 2017 07:09
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Seniors plod onwards, regaining a sense of lost value by homing a dog,\". You have the gift of nailing it, Fay! Another well written one from your reliable pen.
July 28th, 2017 07:09
Uncivilized.
burning-embers said:
Fear of the darkness brings forth many a picture. Have no fears i say, for these demons would have come and got you many moons ago were they real. The fear here is fear itself.
Splendid write with clearly understood metaphor.
July 27th, 2017 11:25
burning-embers said:
Fear of the darkness brings forth many a picture. Have no fears i say, for these demons would have come and got you many moons ago were they real. The fear here is fear itself.
Splendid write with clearly understood metaphor.
July 27th, 2017 11:25
Uncivilized.
malubotelho said:
I put myself inside that scenario as reading it. Felt intrigued by your writing. Thanks for sharing. Soon to receive your book.
July 27th, 2017 09:14
malubotelho said:
I put myself inside that scenario as reading it. Felt intrigued by your writing. Thanks for sharing. Soon to receive your book.
July 27th, 2017 09:14
Uncivilized.
Michael Edwards said:
Beautifully worded scene - I can see it my minds eye even without the picture.
July 27th, 2017 08:33
Michael Edwards said:
Beautifully worded scene - I can see it my minds eye even without the picture.
July 27th, 2017 08:33
Uncivilized.
Louis Gibbs said:
Enchanting poetic interpretation of an intriguing piece if art, Fay. I always look forward to your work.
July 27th, 2017 08:08
Louis Gibbs said:
Enchanting poetic interpretation of an intriguing piece if art, Fay. I always look forward to your work.
July 27th, 2017 08:08
Uncivilized.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ I love poetry that is inspired by a picture as this one is and some of mine are also. The LADY is so so wistful and (to my eye ?) appears to be \"with child\" ? This would add poignancy to your beautiful Word. Love all your Poems FAY they always speak to my Heart not my Head. I\'m trying to perceive the Poem through your eyes & mind ~ OK. Thanks for sharing ! Yours as ever BRIAN
July 27th, 2017 05:20
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ I love poetry that is inspired by a picture as this one is and some of mine are also. The LADY is so so wistful and (to my eye ?) appears to be \"with child\" ? This would add poignancy to your beautiful Word. Love all your Poems FAY they always speak to my Heart not my Head. I\'m trying to perceive the Poem through your eyes & mind ~ OK. Thanks for sharing ! Yours as ever BRIAN
July 27th, 2017 05:20
Uncivilized.
kevin browne said:
why must we in fact Fay Slimm? I love this and think you have done a great job. thank you.
July 27th, 2017 05:16
kevin browne said:
why must we in fact Fay Slimm? I love this and think you have done a great job. thank you.
July 27th, 2017 05:16
Uncivilized.
FredPeyer said:
What a picture, is she bringing the candle for a night of love-making, or is she leaving, saying good-bye?
And the poem is not bad either!
July 27th, 2017 04:51
FredPeyer said:
What a picture, is she bringing the candle for a night of love-making, or is she leaving, saying good-bye?
And the poem is not bad either!
July 27th, 2017 04:51
Uncivilized.
Frank Prem said:
Great painting to serve as meditation, Fay. Tricky in the rhymes - very strong ending, I thought.
July 27th, 2017 03:43
Frank Prem said:
Great painting to serve as meditation, Fay. Tricky in the rhymes - very strong ending, I thought.
July 27th, 2017 03:43
Making Sense.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. Love can confuse everything at times.
July 27th, 2017 01:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. Love can confuse everything at times.
July 27th, 2017 01:04
River-Speak.
charlesbarrett said:
“Deep-level eavesdroppers wrote liquid signatures
on your rocky bed as chromosome cries
preserved in suspension became effervescent.” Just beautiful. You are definitely one of a kind. My only negative comment is that I’m upset that I didn’t read your work sooner. Thanks for sharing.
July 26th, 2017 09:02
charlesbarrett said:
“Deep-level eavesdroppers wrote liquid signatures
on your rocky bed as chromosome cries
preserved in suspension became effervescent.” Just beautiful. You are definitely one of a kind. My only negative comment is that I’m upset that I didn’t read your work sooner. Thanks for sharing.
July 26th, 2017 09:02
Making Sense.
malubotelho said:
I would fall in love as many times as possible because it is a transcendent feeling. Beautiful writing Fay.
July 26th, 2017 08:31
malubotelho said:
I would fall in love as many times as possible because it is a transcendent feeling. Beautiful writing Fay.
July 26th, 2017 08:31
Making Sense.
lastbadbrad6 said:
faye, youve penned a true picture of love, enjoyed it immensley
July 26th, 2017 05:22
lastbadbrad6 said:
faye, youve penned a true picture of love, enjoyed it immensley
July 26th, 2017 05:22
Making Sense.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
\"Falling in love again ~ I can\'t help it !\"
Thanks for reminding us Fay ~ the sensation is all you say and more ! I am in love at the moment and Angela is love with me ~ so i don\'t fall in love with the delectable (good word) Ladies I come into contact with every day ~ BUT ~ God knows I so easily could. I find when i am really in love ~ my capacity to fall in love with another lady ~ is ON HOLD ! Is that your experience (being in love with a Man of course !) too. Thanks for sharing a beautifully penned (and so so true to experience) POEM ~ Yours as ever BRIAN Please check my FABRICS poem ~ I have rated it 18 because of the PICTURE ! Thanks B.
July 26th, 2017 04:49
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
\"Falling in love again ~ I can\'t help it !\"
Thanks for reminding us Fay ~ the sensation is all you say and more ! I am in love at the moment and Angela is love with me ~ so i don\'t fall in love with the delectable (good word) Ladies I come into contact with every day ~ BUT ~ God knows I so easily could. I find when i am really in love ~ my capacity to fall in love with another lady ~ is ON HOLD ! Is that your experience (being in love with a Man of course !) too. Thanks for sharing a beautifully penned (and so so true to experience) POEM ~ Yours as ever BRIAN Please check my FABRICS poem ~ I have rated it 18 because of the PICTURE ! Thanks B.
July 26th, 2017 04:49
Making Sense.
FredPeyer said:
....and now you are lost with scrambled brain, confused, mystified, and topsy-turvy tossed sky high.
Love is unpredictable. Nice writing Fay!
July 26th, 2017 04:20
FredPeyer said:
....and now you are lost with scrambled brain, confused, mystified, and topsy-turvy tossed sky high.
Love is unpredictable. Nice writing Fay!
July 26th, 2017 04:20
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