Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Scented Solutions.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another lovely Love Poem and complimentary visual. In my experience the \"Fragrance of True Love\" eludes the Perfumers of the World. It is unique to each favoured Couple and can neither be compounded or bottled ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
July 6th, 2017 03:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another lovely Love Poem and complimentary visual. In my experience the \"Fragrance of True Love\" eludes the Perfumers of the World. It is unique to each favoured Couple and can neither be compounded or bottled ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
July 6th, 2017 03:32
Scented Solutions.
FredPeyer said:
Fay,
like the quote, love the poem. There really is a lot more to love than just saying \"I love you\". I think the last two lines of the poem I just published could be quoted here: Love.....is a bit of courage and a whole lot of work.
July 6th, 2017 02:58
FredPeyer said:
Fay,
like the quote, love the poem. There really is a lot more to love than just saying \"I love you\". I think the last two lines of the poem I just published could be quoted here: Love.....is a bit of courage and a whole lot of work.
July 6th, 2017 02:58
I Am Cloud.
Louis Gibbs said:
I agree, one of your finest, Fay, and it goes into my favorites as well. I\'ve always appreciated and been fascinated by clouds. One of my favorite expressions of nature.
July 5th, 2017 11:05
Louis Gibbs said:
I agree, one of your finest, Fay, and it goes into my favorites as well. I\'ve always appreciated and been fascinated by clouds. One of my favorite expressions of nature.
July 5th, 2017 11:05
I Am Cloud.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another beautiful symbiosis of POEM and PICTURE ! As an ECOLOGIST I have always been interested in clouds ~ how they are formed and what their shape and colour and height etc can inform (and warn) us of future weather. The \"pictures in the clouds\" and their coquettishness is infinite and I agree they are very very feminine. Three of the \"Elements of the Ancients\" are EARTH ~ AIR ~ WATER and in essence all three are involved in Cloud Formation ~ Cloud Movement and Precipitation (The Water Cycle) WATER evaporates and forms Clouds which are driven and shaped by the Wind (AIR) but temperature and height are also important for the movement of the clouds and precipitation ! The Earth traps heat and warms the air causing wind currents. Also the topography of the Earth (MOUNTAINS) causes the clouds to rise and shed their water vapour as rain ! So in essence all three WATER ~ AIR ~ EARTH all play their part in the Function of Clouds and their role in the Water Cycle. Cloud Ecology is beautiful visually ~ but can be complex scientifically ! Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN
July 5th, 2017 04:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another beautiful symbiosis of POEM and PICTURE ! As an ECOLOGIST I have always been interested in clouds ~ how they are formed and what their shape and colour and height etc can inform (and warn) us of future weather. The \"pictures in the clouds\" and their coquettishness is infinite and I agree they are very very feminine. Three of the \"Elements of the Ancients\" are EARTH ~ AIR ~ WATER and in essence all three are involved in Cloud Formation ~ Cloud Movement and Precipitation (The Water Cycle) WATER evaporates and forms Clouds which are driven and shaped by the Wind (AIR) but temperature and height are also important for the movement of the clouds and precipitation ! The Earth traps heat and warms the air causing wind currents. Also the topography of the Earth (MOUNTAINS) causes the clouds to rise and shed their water vapour as rain ! So in essence all three WATER ~ AIR ~ EARTH all play their part in the Function of Clouds and their role in the Water Cycle. Cloud Ecology is beautiful visually ~ but can be complex scientifically ! Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN
July 5th, 2017 04:42
I Am Cloud.
FredPeyer said:
Have to agree with Michael, this is one of your best. One question though: Aren\'t they offspring of water and air and not water and earth? Don\'t want to nitpick, your poem is too good for that!
July 5th, 2017 02:57
FredPeyer said:
Have to agree with Michael, this is one of your best. One question though: Aren\'t they offspring of water and air and not water and earth? Don\'t want to nitpick, your poem is too good for that!
July 5th, 2017 02:57
I Am Cloud.
Michael Edwards said:
One of your very very best Fay - going into my favourites.
July 5th, 2017 02:09
Michael Edwards said:
One of your very very best Fay - going into my favourites.
July 5th, 2017 02:09
Not Again.
Krystal Brewington said:
Well wrote. I loved it. I thought my poems was good but after reading yours there buying compared to how you write. Wow this is deep and lovely. Nice job. Hope to read more by you. Drop by and read some of mine. Tell me what you think
July 4th, 2017 14:43
Krystal Brewington said:
Well wrote. I loved it. I thought my poems was good but after reading yours there buying compared to how you write. Wow this is deep and lovely. Nice job. Hope to read more by you. Drop by and read some of mine. Tell me what you think
July 4th, 2017 14:43
Not Again.
Poetic Dan said:
Thank you for sharing
I could offer many words
But I\'ll truly take a moment
And just breathe.
Thank you again
July 4th, 2017 10:02
Poetic Dan said:
Thank you for sharing
I could offer many words
But I\'ll truly take a moment
And just breathe.
Thank you again
July 4th, 2017 10:02
Not Again.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL FAY ~ but ~ in its own way ~ so so sad. The secret of your Beauty & Grace FAY is that you have NO regrets ! You also have thousands of wonderful memories which you can recall to lift your spirit in times of loneliness. Additionally your Faith assures you ~ that you will be reunited in GLORY ~ AMEN ! Yours BRIAN
July 4th, 2017 09:00
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL FAY ~ but ~ in its own way ~ so so sad. The secret of your Beauty & Grace FAY is that you have NO regrets ! You also have thousands of wonderful memories which you can recall to lift your spirit in times of loneliness. Additionally your Faith assures you ~ that you will be reunited in GLORY ~ AMEN ! Yours BRIAN
July 4th, 2017 09:00
Not Again.
Louis Gibbs said:
Yes, no pain digs deeper into our heart\'s core than losing one\'s lover, as you so eloquently express herein. Thank you for sharing this beauty, Fay.
July 4th, 2017 06:51
Louis Gibbs said:
Yes, no pain digs deeper into our heart\'s core than losing one\'s lover, as you so eloquently express herein. Thank you for sharing this beauty, Fay.
July 4th, 2017 06:51
Not Again.
FredPeyer said:
Faye,
first of all, where do you get these beautiful pictures?
Second, your poem is so well written, I read it over and over again.
July 4th, 2017 04:19
FredPeyer said:
Faye,
first of all, where do you get these beautiful pictures?
Second, your poem is so well written, I read it over and over again.
July 4th, 2017 04:19
Do Try -
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. I\'m more likely to save a spider from a bath it does not want, if I find one in me tub!
July 3rd, 2017 14:08
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. I\'m more likely to save a spider from a bath it does not want, if I find one in me tub!
July 3rd, 2017 14:08
Do Try -
Michael Edwards said:
Gives the coffee that certain Musca domestica aroma - some would pay large amounts for that - errrr - but not me.
July 3rd, 2017 07:35
Michael Edwards said:
Gives the coffee that certain Musca domestica aroma - some would pay large amounts for that - errrr - but not me.
July 3rd, 2017 07:35
Do Try -
FredPeyer said:
Fay, most people just see a fly and get rid of it. You see beauty and a story.
July 3rd, 2017 02:49
FredPeyer said:
Fay, most people just see a fly and get rid of it. You see beauty and a story.
July 3rd, 2017 02:49
Do Try -
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, but any fly who drinks my coffee stands little chance of survival.
July 3rd, 2017 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, but any fly who drinks my coffee stands little chance of survival.
July 3rd, 2017 02:44
Things Nearest.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Fay, we need to look around us much more.
July 3rd, 2017 01:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Fay, we need to look around us much more.
July 3rd, 2017 01:02
Things Nearest.
Heather T said:
I love the comment that Augustus left. We really enjoy dandelions, from their yummy greens to first bouquets gifted by sticky, chubby baby hands. A delight to read, as always.
July 2nd, 2017 19:51
Heather T said:
I love the comment that Augustus left. We really enjoy dandelions, from their yummy greens to first bouquets gifted by sticky, chubby baby hands. A delight to read, as always.
July 2nd, 2017 19:51
Things Nearest.
Augustus said:
From the Dandelion you have made a very fine wine.
July 2nd, 2017 16:58
Augustus said:
From the Dandelion you have made a very fine wine.
July 2nd, 2017 16:58
Things Nearest.
malubotelho said:
Oh! How lovely is your writing. And yes, the things close to us is what makes us happier if we can see it. Because for many people they don\'t see it. They think happiness comes only from big things but God is so incredible in creation that even the most simple flower decorates our lives so beautifully. Thanks for sharing.
July 2nd, 2017 15:18
malubotelho said:
Oh! How lovely is your writing. And yes, the things close to us is what makes us happier if we can see it. Because for many people they don\'t see it. They think happiness comes only from big things but God is so incredible in creation that even the most simple flower decorates our lives so beautifully. Thanks for sharing.
July 2nd, 2017 15:18
Things Nearest.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, people who think Dandelions are a weed should read your poem! Beautiful writing!
July 2nd, 2017 13:24
FredPeyer said:
Fay, people who think Dandelions are a weed should read your poem! Beautiful writing!
July 2nd, 2017 13:24
Things Nearest.
Michael Edwards said:
Oh bless you - a most maligned flower - they look so great in spring with their bright showy flowers. it\'s a wonder the plant breeders haven\'t developed some great garden cultivars - but they are probably having to constantly wash bed linen !!
July 2nd, 2017 06:33
Michael Edwards said:
Oh bless you - a most maligned flower - they look so great in spring with their bright showy flowers. it\'s a wonder the plant breeders haven\'t developed some great garden cultivars - but they are probably having to constantly wash bed linen !!
July 2nd, 2017 06:33
Things Nearest.
kevin browne said:
my best friend is using dandelion root extract, among others, to kills his stage 4 advanced lung cancer. this poem touched in a way you least expected. thank you x
July 2nd, 2017 04:26
kevin browne said:
my best friend is using dandelion root extract, among others, to kills his stage 4 advanced lung cancer. this poem touched in a way you least expected. thank you x
July 2nd, 2017 04:26
Day\'s Eye.
Goldfinch60 said:
I was there Fay, beautiful wriye with great imagery.
July 2nd, 2017 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
I was there Fay, beautiful wriye with great imagery.
July 2nd, 2017 00:49
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