Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Shyless.
Heather T said:
Stunning. I read aloud for the joy of feeling your words in my mouth. Just...sigh.
June 24th, 2017 22:29
Heather T said:
Stunning. I read aloud for the joy of feeling your words in my mouth. Just...sigh.
June 24th, 2017 22:29
Shyless.
orchidee said:
Will I swoon? I can\'t have \'ardour\' meself! It gives me a funny turn! heehee. A fine write F.
June 24th, 2017 10:30
orchidee said:
Will I swoon? I can\'t have \'ardour\' meself! It gives me a funny turn! heehee. A fine write F.
June 24th, 2017 10:30
Shyless.
Michael Edwards said:
Your work is certainly in my top selection Fay - another super piece of work.
June 24th, 2017 10:06
Michael Edwards said:
Your work is certainly in my top selection Fay - another super piece of work.
June 24th, 2017 10:06
Informed.
Heather T said:
Deeply touched all the places my Savior\'s salve was balm for. I can\'t do much, or else I would never had need of him.
June 23rd, 2017 16:02
Heather T said:
Deeply touched all the places my Savior\'s salve was balm for. I can\'t do much, or else I would never had need of him.
June 23rd, 2017 16:02
Informed.
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful tribute to the most beautiful of men ever to walk our way! Splendid, Fay!
June 23rd, 2017 09:09
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful tribute to the most beautiful of men ever to walk our way! Splendid, Fay!
June 23rd, 2017 09:09
Informed.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank you Fay ~ a very inspiring Poem about our Lord & Saviour JESUS CHRIST ~ AMEN What the WORLD needs ~ is JESUS ~ just a glimpse of Him ! He will give Joy & Gladness ~ take away Sin & Sadness ~ What the WORLD needs ~ is JESUS ~ just a glimpse of Him ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Blessings BRIAN
June 23rd, 2017 09:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank you Fay ~ a very inspiring Poem about our Lord & Saviour JESUS CHRIST ~ AMEN What the WORLD needs ~ is JESUS ~ just a glimpse of Him ! He will give Joy & Gladness ~ take away Sin & Sadness ~ What the WORLD needs ~ is JESUS ~ just a glimpse of Him ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Blessings BRIAN
June 23rd, 2017 09:02
Battle Lines.
FredPeyer said:
Every sunset is like a little death and every sunrise like a new birth. But you said it much much better!
June 21st, 2017 20:46
FredPeyer said:
Every sunset is like a little death and every sunrise like a new birth. But you said it much much better!
June 21st, 2017 20:46
Battle Lines.
Michael Edwards said:
a complete cycle so very well expressed as ever Fay.
June 21st, 2017 07:43
Michael Edwards said:
a complete cycle so very well expressed as ever Fay.
June 21st, 2017 07:43
Battle Lines.
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you Kathy - the change from dusk to dark or dawn to light has always attracted my imagination.
June 21st, 2017 04:45
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you Kathy - the change from dusk to dark or dawn to light has always attracted my imagination.
June 21st, 2017 04:45
Stirrings.
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you and bless your warm heart dear Robert - your comments to others always transfer encouragement however your own day is going - and I sincerely wish you that \"lasting reversal\"
June 19th, 2017 08:03
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you and bless your warm heart dear Robert - your comments to others always transfer encouragement however your own day is going - and I sincerely wish you that \"lasting reversal\"
June 19th, 2017 08:03
Woman-Fed.
Augustus said:
The difficulties they have to go through. Great tribute.
June 18th, 2017 12:08
Augustus said:
The difficulties they have to go through. Great tribute.
June 18th, 2017 12:08
Woman-Fed.
Louis Gibbs said:
As always, you make me work at an understanding of your poems. As always, it is worth the effort. Your flowing style presents a challenge to my structured mind, and I thank you for that!
June 18th, 2017 09:56
Louis Gibbs said:
As always, you make me work at an understanding of your poems. As always, it is worth the effort. Your flowing style presents a challenge to my structured mind, and I thank you for that!
June 18th, 2017 09:56
Woman-Fed.
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you dear Kathy - - your support is so valued.
June 18th, 2017 03:25
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you dear Kathy - - your support is so valued.
June 18th, 2017 03:25
Captive.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Wild distress provokes mind to think about this captive bird. Feathers lie in wild distress really. This moment of expression is thrilling for freedom. Cage-bird is pleading to give freedom to fly in sky. Quickly the door of future should be opened. Very sensitive and thought provoking poem this is. Excellently penned poem this is.
June 18th, 2017 02:46
Pintu Mahakul said:
Wild distress provokes mind to think about this captive bird. Feathers lie in wild distress really. This moment of expression is thrilling for freedom. Cage-bird is pleading to give freedom to fly in sky. Quickly the door of future should be opened. Very sensitive and thought provoking poem this is. Excellently penned poem this is.
June 18th, 2017 02:46
Captive.
Louis Gibbs said:
You\'ve done it again, Fay, with this captivating expression of captivity. Thank you for releasing both us and the bird at the end.
June 16th, 2017 11:03
Louis Gibbs said:
You\'ve done it again, Fay, with this captivating expression of captivity. Thank you for releasing both us and the bird at the end.
June 16th, 2017 11:03
Far More.
Heather T said:
The language here is gently transportive, as if I were more than a voyeur and simply fell into this slice of their lives. You always paint the loveliest scenes, even if I feel the ache of hard farm labor.
June 15th, 2017 08:44
Heather T said:
The language here is gently transportive, as if I were more than a voyeur and simply fell into this slice of their lives. You always paint the loveliest scenes, even if I feel the ache of hard farm labor.
June 15th, 2017 08:44
Far More.
Louis Gibbs said:
Yes, another one of your finest, as only you can compose. You have a rare and gifted style that I can only admire, never duplicate. I look forward to more.
June 15th, 2017 08:06
Louis Gibbs said:
Yes, another one of your finest, as only you can compose. You have a rare and gifted style that I can only admire, never duplicate. I look forward to more.
June 15th, 2017 08:06
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