Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.



Incoming.
Goldfinch60 said:

Each day is special and I am always thankful that I am here to see it. Good write.

May 16th, 2017 01:31

This Heart.
WriteBeLight said:

Very touching Fay.

May 15th, 2017 13:28

This Heart.
Michael Edwards said:

An absolute beauty Fay

May 15th, 2017 10:21

This Heart.
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic F.

May 15th, 2017 09:53

This Heart.
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write Fay.

May 15th, 2017 08:02

This Heart.
kevin browne said:

what a beauty of a poem. great write.

May 15th, 2017 05:34

Mantra\'s Mistique.
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write Fay.

May 14th, 2017 23:51

Mantra\'s Mistique.
ron parrish aka wordman said:

lovely write fay,enjoyed it

May 14th, 2017 12:42

Mantra\'s Mistique.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

AMEN FAY ~ Thanks for sharing a very inspiring Poem & Picture for Sunday Morning. My experience is the deeper I plunge in GOD\'s Love the more infinite I find Him to be. One of the great blessings of being Human is the inner capacity to believe in My Creator ~ GOD ~ and through prayer & meditation to have a day by day relationship with HIM ! Thanks for caring & sharing ! Please check my poem for today it resonates with yours ! Yours B.

May 14th, 2017 03:40

Mantra\'s Mistique.
orchidee said:

A fine write F.

May 14th, 2017 01:56

Sea-Swell.
Goldfinch60 said:

What a glorious write Fay, I can see and smell the sea.

May 14th, 2017 00:23

Sea-Swell.
Gino said:

Beautiful imagination, lovely write...

May 13th, 2017 15:16

Sea-Swell.
Michael Edwards said:

I an smell it I can taste it - great write fay.

May 13th, 2017 11:54

Sea-Swell.
orchidee said:

A fine write F.

May 13th, 2017 11:28

Mothering.
Goldfinch60 said:

So true. \"God could not be everywhere so he created mothers.\"

May 13th, 2017 00:15

Mothering.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for sharing FAY ~ I agree and I value my Mum above all the other Lovely Ladies that cross my path. I can never be a Mum but I value my Dad as well and see that being a Father would also be an awesome responsibility. Thanks for caring ~ Yours B.

May 12th, 2017 17:46

Mothering.
Michael Edwards said:

It\'s an enduring relationship (thankfully) for the vast majority - great poem.

May 12th, 2017 14:51

Mothering.
WriteBeLight said:

A truly one-of-a-kind connection Fay. Great poem.

May 12th, 2017 11:36

My Rocker.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks FAY for another gem ! My MUM has an ancient rocker (which belonged to my GRAN) which I love to rock in ~ just like you ! I am also pleased to FAY that you \"Are never off your Rocker !\" Love the picture ~ very evocative ~ Yours B


May 11th, 2017 16:50

My Rocker.
Michael Edwards said:

I know that rocker - I have a mirror handed down from at least four generations and if only it could talk. Great write Fay

May 11th, 2017 09:41

My Rocker.
orchidee said:

A fine write. Just don\'t let Daniel O\'Donnell sit in that rocker - or worse still, start singing, or it will spoil the whole thing! heehee. Oops, no offence to the Irish!

May 11th, 2017 09:05

Compatibility.
WriteBeLight said:

I think it is the toughest thing one must do, but it must be done, in one\'s own time. Great write Fay.

May 10th, 2017 12:53

Compatibility.
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Nice, Fay

May 10th, 2017 11:22

Compatibility.
Michael Edwards said:

Great sentiment and love the last line.

May 10th, 2017 10:43

Compatibility.
orchidee said:

A fine write F.

May 10th, 2017 08:42

Compatibility.
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write Fay and very true.

May 10th, 2017 08:11

Twice Stirred.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS FAY ~ For lifting our minds and spirits and also the quality of verse (on MPS) to a much higher plane. Greek Literature ~ Poetry ~ Art reached levels we seldom touch today if ever. The vision you paint in you picture and comment ~ of Calliope dancing naked is much too perfect for me to pass comment ! Writers and especially poets do not care where reality ends and fantasy begins and they spin for us ~ make-believe dreams. Because I am a Writer (and not an artist) I love the premise in your second verse ~ that writers have extra dimensions ! This does enable us to \"twice stir\" (and autheticate) UTOPIA and even grant reality to EDEN ~ Amen. I don\'t know what you\'re on FAY (is it Scrumpy ?) but your Poetry is DIVINE ~ Yours B.

May 8th, 2017 10:39

Twice Stirred.
Michael Edwards said:

Great writing Fay

May 7th, 2017 11:49

Twice Stirred.
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write Fay.

May 7th, 2017 11:20

Undertow.
Fay Slimm. said:

My thank you to all for the comments - this poem was written as tribute to those who fought in ages past for some better future and lost their own lives.

May 6th, 2017 04:47



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