Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
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Michael Edwards said:
I can hear the cattle and smell the shed - great stuff Fay.
June 30th, 2017 06:17
Michael Edwards said:
I can hear the cattle and smell the shed - great stuff Fay.
June 30th, 2017 06:17
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sue.evans said:
Love the language you have used to paint this picture- lovely.
June 30th, 2017 05:06
sue.evans said:
Love the language you have used to paint this picture- lovely.
June 30th, 2017 05:06
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P.H.Rose said:
This is absolutely
Superb Fay...
You can almost
See the scene
You set....
Ps... I love milk
More than alcohol
Always have....
June 30th, 2017 04:34
P.H.Rose said:
This is absolutely
Superb Fay...
You can almost
See the scene
You set....
Ps... I love milk
More than alcohol
Always have....
June 30th, 2017 04:34
Carrying On.
malubotelho said:
Thanks for your write. It came to me that soon we will be on hurricane season in Florida. The storm inside us roars many more times then the weather storms.
June 29th, 2017 20:51
malubotelho said:
Thanks for your write. It came to me that soon we will be on hurricane season in Florida. The storm inside us roars many more times then the weather storms.
June 29th, 2017 20:51
Carrying On.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR CARING FAY ! \"Oh hear us when we cry to Thee ~ for those in peril on the Sea\" Our local rep ANDY of \"The Mission to Deep Sea Fisherman\" gives a talk to local WI\'s etc entitled \"The real price of Fish & Chips\" some thing we take for granted and we always grumble about the escalating price of FISH ! A perfect poem ~ I could smell the OZONE and taste the SALT ! Yours BRIAN
June 29th, 2017 14:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR CARING FAY ! \"Oh hear us when we cry to Thee ~ for those in peril on the Sea\" Our local rep ANDY of \"The Mission to Deep Sea Fisherman\" gives a talk to local WI\'s etc entitled \"The real price of Fish & Chips\" some thing we take for granted and we always grumble about the escalating price of FISH ! A perfect poem ~ I could smell the OZONE and taste the SALT ! Yours BRIAN
June 29th, 2017 14:37
Carrying On.
FredPeyer said:
Being surrounded by ocean, your beautiful poem speaks to me, in both the actual words as well as the metaphorical meaning. Thank you!
June 29th, 2017 13:47
FredPeyer said:
Being surrounded by ocean, your beautiful poem speaks to me, in both the actual words as well as the metaphorical meaning. Thank you!
June 29th, 2017 13:47
Carrying On.
kevin browne said:
this brings back my memories of when I left school and started working for my father on his 2 fishing trawlers. I was 16 then and am 47 now but the storms we rode sometimes were very scary, fascinating and to watch the sea rise as the weather toughens up is a fear from God. we had many a lucky escape but am here to tell the tale of the deep @crash and cry\' as you put it. thank you for this lovely poem and the dangerous sea all around us. I love it.
June 29th, 2017 05:56
kevin browne said:
this brings back my memories of when I left school and started working for my father on his 2 fishing trawlers. I was 16 then and am 47 now but the storms we rode sometimes were very scary, fascinating and to watch the sea rise as the weather toughens up is a fear from God. we had many a lucky escape but am here to tell the tale of the deep @crash and cry\' as you put it. thank you for this lovely poem and the dangerous sea all around us. I love it.
June 29th, 2017 05:56
Carrying On.
Augustus said:
Many lost in storms. Nice tribute. Metaphor for tough times as well, batten down the hatches.
June 29th, 2017 03:41
Augustus said:
Many lost in storms. Nice tribute. Metaphor for tough times as well, batten down the hatches.
June 29th, 2017 03:41
Crescented Magic.
Goldfinch60 said:
There is always Gold a the end of the rainbow as it is Gods Covenant to us to remind us he is always with us. Good write.
June 26th, 2017 00:01
Goldfinch60 said:
There is always Gold a the end of the rainbow as it is Gods Covenant to us to remind us he is always with us. Good write.
June 26th, 2017 00:01
Crescented Magic.
kevin browne said:
ingratiates have been long obsessed, I love this sentence, trying to flatter someone or making the efforts to keep them pleased. a good sentiment if its the right one at the time. this is a brilliant piece of work filled with thoughts provoking to make sure every line is understood with the array of fantastic words you have chosen. can\'t wait to read your next one because i hope its just as amazing as this one. well done, Fay Slimm.
June 25th, 2017 08:18
kevin browne said:
ingratiates have been long obsessed, I love this sentence, trying to flatter someone or making the efforts to keep them pleased. a good sentiment if its the right one at the time. this is a brilliant piece of work filled with thoughts provoking to make sure every line is understood with the array of fantastic words you have chosen. can\'t wait to read your next one because i hope its just as amazing as this one. well done, Fay Slimm.
June 25th, 2017 08:18
Crescented Magic.
Louis Gibbs said:
Your poem requires much of nature\'s gift. I tend to settle on simple appreciation ... but then that could be explained by a simple mind, couldn\'t it? Well done, again, Fay!
June 25th, 2017 08:04
Louis Gibbs said:
Your poem requires much of nature\'s gift. I tend to settle on simple appreciation ... but then that could be explained by a simple mind, couldn\'t it? Well done, again, Fay!
June 25th, 2017 08:04
Crescented Magic.
RAJ NANDY said:
A great composition Fay! Saw the photograph on the \'Facebook\' also today! - Raj
June 25th, 2017 07:39
RAJ NANDY said:
A great composition Fay! Saw the photograph on the \'Facebook\' also today! - Raj
June 25th, 2017 07:39
Crescented Magic.
Michael Edwards said:
I\'d be happy with a pot of copper - and I\'d be happy if I\'d written this but sadly I didn\'t.
June 25th, 2017 05:34
Michael Edwards said:
I\'d be happy with a pot of copper - and I\'d be happy if I\'d written this but sadly I didn\'t.
June 25th, 2017 05:34
Crescented Magic.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, I read this poem and have to admit that it went way over my head. Your writing is incredible, I just don\'t understand it. My bad.
June 25th, 2017 03:37
FredPeyer said:
Fay, I read this poem and have to admit that it went way over my head. Your writing is incredible, I just don\'t understand it. My bad.
June 25th, 2017 03:37
Shyless.
Heather T said:
Stunning. I read aloud for the joy of feeling your words in my mouth. Just...sigh.
June 24th, 2017 22:29
Heather T said:
Stunning. I read aloud for the joy of feeling your words in my mouth. Just...sigh.
June 24th, 2017 22:29
Shyless.
orchidee said:
Will I swoon? I can\'t have \'ardour\' meself! It gives me a funny turn! heehee. A fine write F.
June 24th, 2017 10:30
orchidee said:
Will I swoon? I can\'t have \'ardour\' meself! It gives me a funny turn! heehee. A fine write F.
June 24th, 2017 10:30
Shyless.
Michael Edwards said:
Your work is certainly in my top selection Fay - another super piece of work.
June 24th, 2017 10:06
Michael Edwards said:
Your work is certainly in my top selection Fay - another super piece of work.
June 24th, 2017 10:06
Informed.
Heather T said:
Deeply touched all the places my Savior\'s salve was balm for. I can\'t do much, or else I would never had need of him.
June 23rd, 2017 16:02
Heather T said:
Deeply touched all the places my Savior\'s salve was balm for. I can\'t do much, or else I would never had need of him.
June 23rd, 2017 16:02
Informed.
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful tribute to the most beautiful of men ever to walk our way! Splendid, Fay!
June 23rd, 2017 09:09
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful tribute to the most beautiful of men ever to walk our way! Splendid, Fay!
June 23rd, 2017 09:09
Informed.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank you Fay ~ a very inspiring Poem about our Lord & Saviour JESUS CHRIST ~ AMEN What the WORLD needs ~ is JESUS ~ just a glimpse of Him ! He will give Joy & Gladness ~ take away Sin & Sadness ~ What the WORLD needs ~ is JESUS ~ just a glimpse of Him ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Blessings BRIAN
June 23rd, 2017 09:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank you Fay ~ a very inspiring Poem about our Lord & Saviour JESUS CHRIST ~ AMEN What the WORLD needs ~ is JESUS ~ just a glimpse of Him ! He will give Joy & Gladness ~ take away Sin & Sadness ~ What the WORLD needs ~ is JESUS ~ just a glimpse of Him ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Blessings BRIAN
June 23rd, 2017 09:02
Battle Lines.
FredPeyer said:
Every sunset is like a little death and every sunrise like a new birth. But you said it much much better!
June 21st, 2017 20:46
FredPeyer said:
Every sunset is like a little death and every sunrise like a new birth. But you said it much much better!
June 21st, 2017 20:46
Battle Lines.
Michael Edwards said:
a complete cycle so very well expressed as ever Fay.
June 21st, 2017 07:43
Michael Edwards said:
a complete cycle so very well expressed as ever Fay.
June 21st, 2017 07:43
Battle Lines.
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you Kathy - the change from dusk to dark or dawn to light has always attracted my imagination.
June 21st, 2017 04:45
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you Kathy - the change from dusk to dark or dawn to light has always attracted my imagination.
June 21st, 2017 04:45
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