Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Tribal Organisation.
Frank Prem said:
It\'s great to get information while also the aft of the poem. Well done.
April 12th, 2017 03:14
Frank Prem said:
It\'s great to get information while also the aft of the poem. Well done.
April 12th, 2017 03:14
Tribal Organisation.
Goldfinch60 said:
The wolves are so wise and so generous in their behaviour, it has Ben shown that wolves will share there food where domesticated dogs will not share with others.
Good write.
April 12th, 2017 03:05
Goldfinch60 said:
The wolves are so wise and so generous in their behaviour, it has Ben shown that wolves will share there food where domesticated dogs will not share with others.
Good write.
April 12th, 2017 03:05
We Deserve It.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Fay, one day all will come to be free.
April 12th, 2017 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Fay, one day all will come to be free.
April 12th, 2017 00:25
We Deserve It.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ It is interesting that your poem today mirrors the one I wrote about Inner and Outer Beauty ! Thanks for your encouraging comment ~ Perhaps GOD has a message for us all today about maintaining the equilibrium of our Inside & Outside display of Beauty ! Thanks for caring & sharing a very beautiful and timely poem ! Yours B. Love the visual and the message !
April 11th, 2017 15:41
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ It is interesting that your poem today mirrors the one I wrote about Inner and Outer Beauty ! Thanks for your encouraging comment ~ Perhaps GOD has a message for us all today about maintaining the equilibrium of our Inside & Outside display of Beauty ! Thanks for caring & sharing a very beautiful and timely poem ! Yours B. Love the visual and the message !
April 11th, 2017 15:41
We Deserve It.
MendedFences27 said:
Yeah, let\'s all make over our hearts. Let\'s lose the greed, the lust for power, and the selfishness.Your message is a great way to live. If we all lived by it , what a wonderful world it would be. Loved the thoughts in this poem. -Phil A
April 11th, 2017 15:39
MendedFences27 said:
Yeah, let\'s all make over our hearts. Let\'s lose the greed, the lust for power, and the selfishness.Your message is a great way to live. If we all lived by it , what a wonderful world it would be. Loved the thoughts in this poem. -Phil A
April 11th, 2017 15:39
We Deserve It.
willyweed said:
I think this is great Fay our inner being celebrated our spirit unmasked
April 11th, 2017 06:39
willyweed said:
I think this is great Fay our inner being celebrated our spirit unmasked
April 11th, 2017 06:39
We Deserve It.
kevin browne said:
you deserve a whopping great big well done for writing this poem. keep the standard going.
April 11th, 2017 06:11
kevin browne said:
you deserve a whopping great big well done for writing this poem. keep the standard going.
April 11th, 2017 06:11
We Deserve It.
Michael Edwards said:
Goes well with Brians posting today - another great message Fay.
April 11th, 2017 05:18
Michael Edwards said:
Goes well with Brians posting today - another great message Fay.
April 11th, 2017 05:18
We Deserve It.
P.H.Rose said:
I love this Fay
It\'s exactly how I
Feel we should all
Start the change
From within
To much is put
On the way we look
And not how we
Feel....
April 11th, 2017 05:14
P.H.Rose said:
I love this Fay
It\'s exactly how I
Feel we should all
Start the change
From within
To much is put
On the way we look
And not how we
Feel....
April 11th, 2017 05:14
Victorious.
MendedFences27 said:
Love is the answer to everything. Human emotions are defenseless against it, yet it is a rare thing, and it has many copy-cat variants not the true thing. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
April 10th, 2017 20:44
MendedFences27 said:
Love is the answer to everything. Human emotions are defenseless against it, yet it is a rare thing, and it has many copy-cat variants not the true thing. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
April 10th, 2017 20:44
Victorious.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Today FAY ~ I know you are speaking from experience and that it the intensity of LOVE ~ someone a lovely as you deserves. I have touched the \"Hem of Loves Garment\" and it contained all that you express it to be. Love never loses and so far (in my experience) LOVE NEVER FAILS ~ All I ask ~ of my Partner ~ is to LOVE and be LOVED in return. Thanks for sharing ~ such an encouragement for LOVE ! Yours B.
April 10th, 2017 16:08
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Today FAY ~ I know you are speaking from experience and that it the intensity of LOVE ~ someone a lovely as you deserves. I have touched the \"Hem of Loves Garment\" and it contained all that you express it to be. Love never loses and so far (in my experience) LOVE NEVER FAILS ~ All I ask ~ of my Partner ~ is to LOVE and be LOVED in return. Thanks for sharing ~ such an encouragement for LOVE ! Yours B.
April 10th, 2017 16:08
Victorious.
willyweed said:
yes Fay you are correct, love is just like that, wonderful write my dear.
April 10th, 2017 07:29
willyweed said:
yes Fay you are correct, love is just like that, wonderful write my dear.
April 10th, 2017 07:29
Victorious.
P.H.Rose said:
Great poem Fay
Love is the doctor
Of my heart
With its power
My life would
Start....
April 10th, 2017 07:09
P.H.Rose said:
Great poem Fay
Love is the doctor
Of my heart
With its power
My life would
Start....
April 10th, 2017 07:09
Victorious.
Goldfinch60 said:
Love, so invidious, so powerful, so wonderful.
Good write.
April 10th, 2017 03:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Love, so invidious, so powerful, so wonderful.
Good write.
April 10th, 2017 03:37
Would We ?
willyweed said:
You ask a difficult question that requires a more difficult answer. ww
April 9th, 2017 12:36
willyweed said:
You ask a difficult question that requires a more difficult answer. ww
April 9th, 2017 12:36
Whale-Play.
WriteBeLight said:
Been whale watching and you have captured the awe and amazement I have felt😀
April 9th, 2017 10:25
WriteBeLight said:
Been whale watching and you have captured the awe and amazement I have felt😀
April 9th, 2017 10:25
Whale-Play.
Kurt Philip Behm said:
It\'s amazing how intelligent and relatable whales are, Fay. I\'ve had them come up right beside both my sailboat and seadoo explorer. The explorer (inflatable) is only 16 feet long. We were 5 miles off the beach in Cape May New Jersey and the blue whale (scary big) just lay beside us for almost 30 minutes. Unbelievable. Nice writing, you took me back!
April 8th, 2017 22:00
Kurt Philip Behm said:
It\'s amazing how intelligent and relatable whales are, Fay. I\'ve had them come up right beside both my sailboat and seadoo explorer. The explorer (inflatable) is only 16 feet long. We were 5 miles off the beach in Cape May New Jersey and the blue whale (scary big) just lay beside us for almost 30 minutes. Unbelievable. Nice writing, you took me back!
April 8th, 2017 22:00
Whale-Play.
MendedFences27 said:
And it wove a great tale indeed. I\'ve been whale watching and it was a spectacular pastime. They are massive creatures and yet seem to be gentle. Their movements are elegant and yet powerful. A great tale or could I say a whale of a tale. - Phil A.
April 8th, 2017 21:25
MendedFences27 said:
And it wove a great tale indeed. I\'ve been whale watching and it was a spectacular pastime. They are massive creatures and yet seem to be gentle. Their movements are elegant and yet powerful. A great tale or could I say a whale of a tale. - Phil A.
April 8th, 2017 21:25
Whale-Play.
Michael Edwards said:
I could be there - you\'ve painted a great picture Fay.
April 8th, 2017 14:50
Michael Edwards said:
I could be there - you\'ve painted a great picture Fay.
April 8th, 2017 14:50
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