Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
After Today.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ another gem ! A FAY a DAY keeps the Blues away ! I love the resolve \"AFTER TODAY\" in this elegant poem ~ reinforced by the resolve in the face of the Young Lady ~ AMEN Thanks for caring ~ YOURS BRIAN.
May 22nd, 2017 05:14
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ another gem ! A FAY a DAY keeps the Blues away ! I love the resolve \"AFTER TODAY\" in this elegant poem ~ reinforced by the resolve in the face of the Young Lady ~ AMEN Thanks for caring ~ YOURS BRIAN.
May 22nd, 2017 05:14
A Given Day.
Augustus said:
Another special tribute to nature and the human spirit.
May 21st, 2017 12:44
Augustus said:
Another special tribute to nature and the human spirit.
May 21st, 2017 12:44
A Given Day.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
A GIVEN DAY ! Thanks for sharing FAY a Perfect Poem and a Pristine Picture. I love dialects and the West Country seeps from every line ! While some Days (especially in SPRING !) are more \"GIVEN\" than others ~ every Day is special and a unique \"Gift from God\" for us to enjoy CARPE DIEM ! Yours BRIAN
May 21st, 2017 10:35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
A GIVEN DAY ! Thanks for sharing FAY a Perfect Poem and a Pristine Picture. I love dialects and the West Country seeps from every line ! While some Days (especially in SPRING !) are more \"GIVEN\" than others ~ every Day is special and a unique \"Gift from God\" for us to enjoy CARPE DIEM ! Yours BRIAN
May 21st, 2017 10:35
Soothingly Good.
orchidee said:
A fine write. Erm, someone somewhere did an \'alternative\' version, starting with: \'Those pesky ****** wood-pigoens cooing woke me up; where\'s me gun\'?! oohhh terrible.
May 20th, 2017 10:41
orchidee said:
A fine write. Erm, someone somewhere did an \'alternative\' version, starting with: \'Those pesky ****** wood-pigoens cooing woke me up; where\'s me gun\'?! oohhh terrible.
May 20th, 2017 10:41
Soothingly Good.
Michael Edwards said:
Super descriptive prose - I can see feel hear it all.
May 20th, 2017 05:28
Michael Edwards said:
Super descriptive prose - I can see feel hear it all.
May 20th, 2017 05:28
Soothingly Good.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhhhhh FAY ~ I love this pom ~ You are so so romantic ! This really is a Tone Poem and your skill with words created each sound for me perfectly ! Cooing ~ word buzz ~ tidal ebb & flow ~ bees ~ rail rock & roll ~ grandfather clock tick tock ~ kettle sizzle ~ woodfire crackle ~ birdwing swish and nocturnal wind murmuring through the trees ~ Beautiful. BUT (and I agree) all eclipsed by the love murmurings of one\'s loved one asleep on one\'s breast ~ Perfection. You are lovely ~ Yours B..
May 20th, 2017 02:56
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhhhhh FAY ~ I love this pom ~ You are so so romantic ! This really is a Tone Poem and your skill with words created each sound for me perfectly ! Cooing ~ word buzz ~ tidal ebb & flow ~ bees ~ rail rock & roll ~ grandfather clock tick tock ~ kettle sizzle ~ woodfire crackle ~ birdwing swish and nocturnal wind murmuring through the trees ~ Beautiful. BUT (and I agree) all eclipsed by the love murmurings of one\'s loved one asleep on one\'s breast ~ Perfection. You are lovely ~ Yours B..
May 20th, 2017 02:56
Only Love.
Michael Edwards said:
Brighten my day as well - always look forward to reading yours and this is no exception.
May 19th, 2017 13:01
Michael Edwards said:
Brighten my day as well - always look forward to reading yours and this is no exception.
May 19th, 2017 13:01
Only Love.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ you brighten my day ! Only LOVE understands LOVE ~ Amen. Thanks for another perfect poem complimented by a perfect piucture ~ Love them ~ Yours B.
May 19th, 2017 08:54
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ you brighten my day ! Only LOVE understands LOVE ~ Amen. Thanks for another perfect poem complimented by a perfect piucture ~ Love them ~ Yours B.
May 19th, 2017 08:54
Incoming.
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. Ooh, some are not happy about bird-song. It wakes \'em up! lol.
May 16th, 2017 10:05
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. Ooh, some are not happy about bird-song. It wakes \'em up! lol.
May 16th, 2017 10:05
Incoming.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another elegant and meaningful poem. Just EIGHT short (but metered) lines reveals a different facet of a very pregnant Spring ~ An octet of optimism ~ LOVELY ! Yours B.
May 16th, 2017 09:56
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another elegant and meaningful poem. Just EIGHT short (but metered) lines reveals a different facet of a very pregnant Spring ~ An octet of optimism ~ LOVELY ! Yours B.
May 16th, 2017 09:56
Incoming.
Goldfinch60 said:
Each day is special and I am always thankful that I am here to see it. Good write.
May 16th, 2017 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Each day is special and I am always thankful that I am here to see it. Good write.
May 16th, 2017 01:31
Mantra\'s Mistique.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
AMEN FAY ~ Thanks for sharing a very inspiring Poem & Picture for Sunday Morning. My experience is the deeper I plunge in GOD\'s Love the more infinite I find Him to be. One of the great blessings of being Human is the inner capacity to believe in My Creator ~ GOD ~ and through prayer & meditation to have a day by day relationship with HIM ! Thanks for caring & sharing ! Please check my poem for today it resonates with yours ! Yours B.
May 14th, 2017 03:40
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
AMEN FAY ~ Thanks for sharing a very inspiring Poem & Picture for Sunday Morning. My experience is the deeper I plunge in GOD\'s Love the more infinite I find Him to be. One of the great blessings of being Human is the inner capacity to believe in My Creator ~ GOD ~ and through prayer & meditation to have a day by day relationship with HIM ! Thanks for caring & sharing ! Please check my poem for today it resonates with yours ! Yours B.
May 14th, 2017 03:40
Sea-Swell.
Goldfinch60 said:
What a glorious write Fay, I can see and smell the sea.
May 14th, 2017 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
What a glorious write Fay, I can see and smell the sea.
May 14th, 2017 00:23
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