Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.



Bird Talk.
Frank Prem said:

Nice work Fay.

April 29th, 2017 19:30

Bird Talk.
Michael Edwards said:

Super poem to go with such a lovely little bird - don\'t see enough of them.

April 29th, 2017 13:24

Bird Talk.
orchidee said:

Lovely write and pic!

April 29th, 2017 12:56

Boldness.
WriteBeLight said:

They are very cute, but destructive. Your poetry does show the sweet side of nature, though. Love the picture!

April 29th, 2017 07:17

Boldness.
Philip said:

Lovely poem Fay. It\'s fascinating when you get a longer look at usually shy creatures. Phil.G

April 29th, 2017 03:28

Boldness.
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, nature is glorious.

April 29th, 2017 00:34

Boldness.
MendedFences27 said:

Beautifully spoken moment with Nature. All creatures become fascinating when they are so rarely seen. Also tea in the outdoors sounds like a treat. Loved your phrasings and style in this one. - Phil A.

April 28th, 2017 22:07

Boldness.
Lizzy Renee said:

Beautiful poem. :)


April 28th, 2017 12:11

Surrender.
Lizzy Renee said:

Beautiful.

April 27th, 2017 09:36

Surrender.
Michael Edwards said:

Great stuff Fay

April 27th, 2017 09:26

Surrender.
orchidee said:

A fine write. Only bothered about any weather-storms at the moment! lol

April 27th, 2017 08:43

Brightness..
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write.

April 27th, 2017 00:43

Brightness..
Michael Edwards said:

Paints a great picture Fay

April 26th, 2017 23:52

Brightness..
orchidee said:

A fine write.

April 26th, 2017 09:54

Brightness..
Tony36 said:

Great write

April 26th, 2017 07:31

Brightness..
WriteBeLight said:

I love the Sun. Nice tribute Fay!

April 26th, 2017 05:20

Treasured.
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Sublime elegant wording here, poetically rendered wow. I tink I have read u before. Kudos for this word art expressions.

U r most welcome to review my latest poem too. Pleeez do. I

April 26th, 2017 01:36

Treasured.
WriteBeLight said:

Beautiful Fay.

April 25th, 2017 18:16

Treasured.
Goldfinch60 said:

Good loving write

April 25th, 2017 08:18

Scaled.
MendedFences27 said:

Love can scale to the highest height, overcome any barrier, physical or otherwise. Separated lovers will always find the way back together. And lovers can be made of the strangest pairs. Myths have been written, castles have fallen, wars have been fought over love torn apart. Some intense sentiment here, very skillfully worded, abundant meanings, and a message from the heart. Great write. Loved it. - Phil A.

April 24th, 2017 20:08

Scaled.
orchidee said:

A fine write.

April 24th, 2017 13:52

Scaled.
WriteBeLight said:

Very true Fay. It has gotten some in trouble, as History has shown. Great poem.

April 24th, 2017 11:42

Naked Heart.
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write. Sleep can hide many ills unfortunately they do not always go away on waking.

April 24th, 2017 00:39

Naked Heart.
orchidee said:

A fine write.

April 23rd, 2017 10:38

Counting Sheep.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks you FAY ~ perfect picture to complement an elegant poem ! The Sheep Farmer\'s life in the Lakeland Fells ~ and in the West Country ~ is a hard but rewarding one ! The reward is not financial ~ but the bleat of Newborn Lambs at 5am. In the Sight of GOD being a Hedge Layer is infinitely more important (and spiritually rewarding) than being a Hedge Funder ~ AMEN Thanks for caring ~ Yours B.

April 22nd, 2017 14:41

Counting Sheep.
Michael Edwards said:

What do sheep count when they can\'t get to sleep? And I love lamb especially in one of my wife\'s curries

April 22nd, 2017 12:12

Counting Sheep.
orchidee said:

A fine write.

April 22nd, 2017 10:17

Counting Sheep.
WriteBeLight said:

A lot of great imagery of a hard life.

April 22nd, 2017 08:48

Counting Sheep.
willyweed said:

a nice piece, rough business, that farming!

April 22nd, 2017 08:39

Counting Sheep.
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, yes it not just the men that work now, all the family must get involved.



April 22nd, 2017 06:38



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