Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Stirrings.
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you and bless your warm heart dear Robert - your comments to others always transfer encouragement however your own day is going - and I sincerely wish you that \"lasting reversal\"
June 19th, 2017 08:03
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you and bless your warm heart dear Robert - your comments to others always transfer encouragement however your own day is going - and I sincerely wish you that \"lasting reversal\"
June 19th, 2017 08:03
Woman-Fed.
Augustus said:
The difficulties they have to go through. Great tribute.
June 18th, 2017 12:08
Augustus said:
The difficulties they have to go through. Great tribute.
June 18th, 2017 12:08
Woman-Fed.
Louis Gibbs said:
As always, you make me work at an understanding of your poems. As always, it is worth the effort. Your flowing style presents a challenge to my structured mind, and I thank you for that!
June 18th, 2017 09:56
Louis Gibbs said:
As always, you make me work at an understanding of your poems. As always, it is worth the effort. Your flowing style presents a challenge to my structured mind, and I thank you for that!
June 18th, 2017 09:56
Woman-Fed.
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you dear Kathy - - your support is so valued.
June 18th, 2017 03:25
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you dear Kathy - - your support is so valued.
June 18th, 2017 03:25
Captive.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Wild distress provokes mind to think about this captive bird. Feathers lie in wild distress really. This moment of expression is thrilling for freedom. Cage-bird is pleading to give freedom to fly in sky. Quickly the door of future should be opened. Very sensitive and thought provoking poem this is. Excellently penned poem this is.
June 18th, 2017 02:46
Pintu Mahakul said:
Wild distress provokes mind to think about this captive bird. Feathers lie in wild distress really. This moment of expression is thrilling for freedom. Cage-bird is pleading to give freedom to fly in sky. Quickly the door of future should be opened. Very sensitive and thought provoking poem this is. Excellently penned poem this is.
June 18th, 2017 02:46
Captive.
Louis Gibbs said:
You\'ve done it again, Fay, with this captivating expression of captivity. Thank you for releasing both us and the bird at the end.
June 16th, 2017 11:03
Louis Gibbs said:
You\'ve done it again, Fay, with this captivating expression of captivity. Thank you for releasing both us and the bird at the end.
June 16th, 2017 11:03
Far More.
Heather T said:
The language here is gently transportive, as if I were more than a voyeur and simply fell into this slice of their lives. You always paint the loveliest scenes, even if I feel the ache of hard farm labor.
June 15th, 2017 08:44
Heather T said:
The language here is gently transportive, as if I were more than a voyeur and simply fell into this slice of their lives. You always paint the loveliest scenes, even if I feel the ache of hard farm labor.
June 15th, 2017 08:44
Far More.
Louis Gibbs said:
Yes, another one of your finest, as only you can compose. You have a rare and gifted style that I can only admire, never duplicate. I look forward to more.
June 15th, 2017 08:06
Louis Gibbs said:
Yes, another one of your finest, as only you can compose. You have a rare and gifted style that I can only admire, never duplicate. I look forward to more.
June 15th, 2017 08:06
Foremost.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good and very true write. Love is all powerful.
June 14th, 2017 08:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good and very true write. Love is all powerful.
June 14th, 2017 08:01
Foremost.
Louis Gibbs said:
I see we are both expressing on the lighter side today. Nice example of the rhyming poem, Fay.
June 14th, 2017 06:51
Louis Gibbs said:
I see we are both expressing on the lighter side today. Nice example of the rhyming poem, Fay.
June 14th, 2017 06:51
First Love.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write with great imagery. First loves were so innocent.
June 12th, 2017 08:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write with great imagery. First loves were so innocent.
June 12th, 2017 08:03
First Love.
Louis Gibbs said:
Lovely, colorful imagery. A very pleasant poem. Thank you for sharing, Fay.
June 12th, 2017 07:48
Louis Gibbs said:
Lovely, colorful imagery. A very pleasant poem. Thank you for sharing, Fay.
June 12th, 2017 07:48
Line-Dancing
Augustus said:
I thought I was the only one that got excited over ladies undies hanging on the clothes line. This is truly a remarkable bit of writing granted just for fun.
June 10th, 2017 10:08
Augustus said:
I thought I was the only one that got excited over ladies undies hanging on the clothes line. This is truly a remarkable bit of writing granted just for fun.
June 10th, 2017 10:08
Line-Dancing
Louis Gibbs said:
Fay, I share and respect the attention you pay to the shape of a poem, as displayed so well in this one. To me, the fact that it is so \'comforting\' visually, adds much to its value and impact. Well done, and fun poem!
June 10th, 2017 08:50
Louis Gibbs said:
Fay, I share and respect the attention you pay to the shape of a poem, as displayed so well in this one. To me, the fact that it is so \'comforting\' visually, adds much to its value and impact. Well done, and fun poem!
June 10th, 2017 08:50
Line-Dancing
Heather T said:
That was a great deal of fun! It\'s probably best that they lose their spirits once dry or we would be accused of much PDA. Nice!
June 10th, 2017 07:53
Heather T said:
That was a great deal of fun! It\'s probably best that they lose their spirits once dry or we would be accused of much PDA. Nice!
June 10th, 2017 07:53
Line-Dancing
RAJ NANDY said:
Fay, you have an amazing talent to compose on any subject and turn it into a meaningful poem! - Raj
June 10th, 2017 07:22
RAJ NANDY said:
Fay, you have an amazing talent to compose on any subject and turn it into a meaningful poem! - Raj
June 10th, 2017 07:22
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