Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Undertow.
swingline said:
A stark insight into the devastation of war and how it affects the survivors . Something the dead do not have to live with .
May 5th, 2017 16:27
swingline said:
A stark insight into the devastation of war and how it affects the survivors . Something the dead do not have to live with .
May 5th, 2017 16:27
For Thine Eyes Only.
MendedFences27 said:
Who\'s this Thine guy? Lucky fellow. A beautiful message sent back in time by the use of forsaken language, but the message is as old as time. When? A beautiful thing, this. - Phil A
May 4th, 2017 17:18
MendedFences27 said:
Who\'s this Thine guy? Lucky fellow. A beautiful message sent back in time by the use of forsaken language, but the message is as old as time. When? A beautiful thing, this. - Phil A
May 4th, 2017 17:18
For Thine Eyes Only.
Michael Edwards said:
Had me sighing and reaching for the paper (yes I still write using a fountain pen - what\'s one of them? I hear the youngsters ask)
May 4th, 2017 09:35
Michael Edwards said:
Had me sighing and reaching for the paper (yes I still write using a fountain pen - what\'s one of them? I hear the youngsters ask)
May 4th, 2017 09:35
For Thine Eyes Only.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL FAY ! Love the visual ~ Demure & Tudor ! Write to me only with thine eyes ~ and I\'ll reply with mine ! You are lovely ! Yours B.
May 4th, 2017 07:46
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL FAY ! Love the visual ~ Demure & Tudor ! Write to me only with thine eyes ~ and I\'ll reply with mine ! You are lovely ! Yours B.
May 4th, 2017 07:46
For Thine Eyes Only.
kevin browne said:
my letter is in the post, signed and sealed safely for you my dearest poet friend.
May 4th, 2017 05:27
kevin browne said:
my letter is in the post, signed and sealed safely for you my dearest poet friend.
May 4th, 2017 05:27
The Stones Know.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ another very fine poem of Cornish lore. Life was much harder then and the rewards fewer. We all have to count our Blessings for what we all have today ~ Yours B.
May 3rd, 2017 16:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ another very fine poem of Cornish lore. Life was much harder then and the rewards fewer. We all have to count our Blessings for what we all have today ~ Yours B.
May 3rd, 2017 16:02
The Stones Know.
swingline said:
Epic encapsulation of the dire dread of mining and the children who were often employed to enrich the robber Barrons of ages past , centuries ago .
May 3rd, 2017 10:44
swingline said:
Epic encapsulation of the dire dread of mining and the children who were often employed to enrich the robber Barrons of ages past , centuries ago .
May 3rd, 2017 10:44
Perhaps.
MendedFences27 said:
Here where I live there is, on much older homes, an architectural phenomenon called a \"Widow\'s Walk.\"
Basically its a small porch high up on the structure allowing access for the woman to view the seaward horizon, looking for her husband\'s ship returning. Some never did, thus \"Widow\'s Walk.\" Your poem so reminded me of this. I believe that means your message was well received. And it came wrapped in glorious words. Great poem. - Phil A.
May 2nd, 2017 15:50
MendedFences27 said:
Here where I live there is, on much older homes, an architectural phenomenon called a \"Widow\'s Walk.\"
Basically its a small porch high up on the structure allowing access for the woman to view the seaward horizon, looking for her husband\'s ship returning. Some never did, thus \"Widow\'s Walk.\" Your poem so reminded me of this. I believe that means your message was well received. And it came wrapped in glorious words. Great poem. - Phil A.
May 2nd, 2017 15:50
What We Had.
WriteBeLight said:
Great job Fay and love the significance of the sunset, or sunrise. What ever fits here.
May 1st, 2017 11:00
WriteBeLight said:
Great job Fay and love the significance of the sunset, or sunrise. What ever fits here.
May 1st, 2017 11:00
What We Had.
Michael Edwards said:
So well written - the pain of breaking up - can\'t imagine what is like to suffer this but the poem goes a long way to explain.
May 1st, 2017 07:32
Michael Edwards said:
So well written - the pain of breaking up - can\'t imagine what is like to suffer this but the poem goes a long way to explain.
May 1st, 2017 07:32
What We Had.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ I meet this scenario too often in all walks of life ~ tensions come in ~ love dies and the sacred bond is broken ! What first drew them together and grew in love ~ WHAT THY HAD BEFORE ~ does not last for ever and when it ies they separate. I see it at work ~ in my extended Family and even in my Church Family. The sad thing iss it is seldom amicable and never equal. On partner is always hurt more than the other sometimes ~ much much more ~ and that is very sad. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours B.
May 1st, 2017 07:13
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ I meet this scenario too often in all walks of life ~ tensions come in ~ love dies and the sacred bond is broken ! What first drew them together and grew in love ~ WHAT THY HAD BEFORE ~ does not last for ever and when it ies they separate. I see it at work ~ in my extended Family and even in my Church Family. The sad thing iss it is seldom amicable and never equal. On partner is always hurt more than the other sometimes ~ much much more ~ and that is very sad. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours B.
May 1st, 2017 07:13
Small Beginnings.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Early morning ever attracts us and our attention sticks to the time of joy. Gem of early morning is calling here with a diamond day. Earth begins with love and never warns to leave love away. Love of light power that gives us shining effect, is nice gem. We find fortunes in this spring morning. Beautiful imagery is drawn here and this is an excellent brilliant poem shared here.
April 30th, 2017 00:42
Pintu Mahakul said:
Early morning ever attracts us and our attention sticks to the time of joy. Gem of early morning is calling here with a diamond day. Earth begins with love and never warns to leave love away. Love of light power that gives us shining effect, is nice gem. We find fortunes in this spring morning. Beautiful imagery is drawn here and this is an excellent brilliant poem shared here.
April 30th, 2017 00:42
Bird Talk.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fay, I have seen many Goldcrest but I have also seen a firecrest which is a much rarer bird.
April 30th, 2017 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fay, I have seen many Goldcrest but I have also seen a firecrest which is a much rarer bird.
April 30th, 2017 00:40
Smitten.
Pintu Mahakul said:
A soft wishing with passage of time is marked very well here. Embarrassment is excused really. This amazes mind while anyone puts blood question. Open confession to being with a season of love. Interesting poem is shared.
April 30th, 2017 00:39
Pintu Mahakul said:
A soft wishing with passage of time is marked very well here. Embarrassment is excused really. This amazes mind while anyone puts blood question. Open confession to being with a season of love. Interesting poem is shared.
April 30th, 2017 00:39
Counting Sheep.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Scent of lambing arises when farmers, asleep under snoring duvets. Greatness of imagery is very well judged from this expression. Few heaving ewes as night creeps away. Starting early in dawn\'s high time counting sheep mesmerizes mind. A great perceptional poem is shared here.
April 30th, 2017 00:35
Pintu Mahakul said:
Scent of lambing arises when farmers, asleep under snoring duvets. Greatness of imagery is very well judged from this expression. Few heaving ewes as night creeps away. Starting early in dawn\'s high time counting sheep mesmerizes mind. A great perceptional poem is shared here.
April 30th, 2017 00:35
Naked Heart.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Wow, really very beautiful presentation of this poem amazes mind entirely. Urging for drug of sleep to come is interesting and while a drop of comes woolly mind dulls with clear thought. Thick night comes covering mind. Silence takes mind so far in dream of realization. An amazing poem is shared with nice imagery.
April 30th, 2017 00:33
Pintu Mahakul said:
Wow, really very beautiful presentation of this poem amazes mind entirely. Urging for drug of sleep to come is interesting and while a drop of comes woolly mind dulls with clear thought. Thick night comes covering mind. Silence takes mind so far in dream of realization. An amazing poem is shared with nice imagery.
April 30th, 2017 00:33
Scaled.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Pride never remains for long time. Sweet blows make stronger the wall of love and memories. Love scales brings memory ahead. An amazing poem is very well crafted and shared.
April 30th, 2017 00:29
Pintu Mahakul said:
Pride never remains for long time. Sweet blows make stronger the wall of love and memories. Love scales brings memory ahead. An amazing poem is very well crafted and shared.
April 30th, 2017 00:29
Treasured.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Water and light lift air that we remember. With grainy twilight we remember the day. From nervousness love grows slowly to find light of treasured memories. A beautifully narrated poem is shared here.
April 30th, 2017 00:26
Pintu Mahakul said:
Water and light lift air that we remember. With grainy twilight we remember the day. From nervousness love grows slowly to find light of treasured memories. A beautifully narrated poem is shared here.
April 30th, 2017 00:26
Brightness..
Pintu Mahakul said:
The beautiful fullness of sight is positively captured in mind. Dawn is beautiful creation. Change comes with spilling sky with emerging light. At this horizon magically dawn and night clouds part. Glowing light greets us surely. Excellent poem presented here.
April 30th, 2017 00:23
Pintu Mahakul said:
The beautiful fullness of sight is positively captured in mind. Dawn is beautiful creation. Change comes with spilling sky with emerging light. At this horizon magically dawn and night clouds part. Glowing light greets us surely. Excellent poem presented here.
April 30th, 2017 00:23
Surrender.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Pleasant passivity has to be met. As surrender begins storm of submission begins here with wonderful imagery. Resistance yields at right time and gathering peace becomes motive. This is interesting poem shared here really.
April 30th, 2017 00:20
Pintu Mahakul said:
Pleasant passivity has to be met. As surrender begins storm of submission begins here with wonderful imagery. Resistance yields at right time and gathering peace becomes motive. This is interesting poem shared here really.
April 30th, 2017 00:20
Boldness.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Through nose this detects air and and they smell well these grasses at top while running. Touching clumsy bundle of grasses and shaking and trembling with rapid motion they move fast ahead to take rest to release out stress. Light explosive sound comes and this gives doubt in mind. They remain safely all there. This is an excellent poem and a great imagery is drawn here.
April 30th, 2017 00:17
Pintu Mahakul said:
Through nose this detects air and and they smell well these grasses at top while running. Touching clumsy bundle of grasses and shaking and trembling with rapid motion they move fast ahead to take rest to release out stress. Light explosive sound comes and this gives doubt in mind. They remain safely all there. This is an excellent poem and a great imagery is drawn here.
April 30th, 2017 00:17
Bird Talk.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Early walk is welcomed by this tiny bird. A nice imagery is drawn in this poem with natural perception. Spring morning is very well caught in memory. A small bird thrills high here. A great imagery is drawn here. Excellent poem!
April 30th, 2017 00:08
Pintu Mahakul said:
Early walk is welcomed by this tiny bird. A nice imagery is drawn in this poem with natural perception. Spring morning is very well caught in memory. A small bird thrills high here. A great imagery is drawn here. Excellent poem!
April 30th, 2017 00:08
Bird Talk.
Gary Edward Geraci said:
The \'trills and thrills\' spoke to me in your poem; a reminder of the joys found in bird watching! Great work!
April 29th, 2017 19:42
Gary Edward Geraci said:
The \'trills and thrills\' spoke to me in your poem; a reminder of the joys found in bird watching! Great work!
April 29th, 2017 19:42
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