Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
I Am Desire.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW FAY ~ What aphrodisiac did you have for breakfast this morning to unleash this uncompromising and sensuous poem on us. I loved every word and will show it to ANGELA as an excuse for any \"ungentlemanly\" behaviour that might ensue ! thanks for sharing ~ also for the TRUTH in your exhilarating verse ! You are ~ as always ~ Lovely ! Your Friend BRIAN
July 17th, 2017 05:39
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW FAY ~ What aphrodisiac did you have for breakfast this morning to unleash this uncompromising and sensuous poem on us. I loved every word and will show it to ANGELA as an excuse for any \"ungentlemanly\" behaviour that might ensue ! thanks for sharing ~ also for the TRUTH in your exhilarating verse ! You are ~ as always ~ Lovely ! Your Friend BRIAN
July 17th, 2017 05:39
Motley.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY~ lovely poem & picture ! Love the subject ~ Nature\'s dappled things ! Your poem painted so many (well remembered) pictures that my mind was reeling with images ~ so i reread it slowly a line at a time ! Thanks for sharing ~Yours BRIAN
July 16th, 2017 18:17
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY~ lovely poem & picture ! Love the subject ~ Nature\'s dappled things ! Your poem painted so many (well remembered) pictures that my mind was reeling with images ~ so i reread it slowly a line at a time ! Thanks for sharing ~Yours BRIAN
July 16th, 2017 18:17
Motley.
orchidee said:
\'All things bright and beautiful\' there Fay. But we leave out that controversial rich man / poor man verse. It\'s never in hymn books that I\'ve seen!
July 16th, 2017 10:42
orchidee said:
\'All things bright and beautiful\' there Fay. But we leave out that controversial rich man / poor man verse. It\'s never in hymn books that I\'ve seen!
July 16th, 2017 10:42
Motley.
Louis Gibbs said:
I envy your fluent familiarity words I\'ve never met. There are several in this lovely poem, but they didn\'t interfere with my appreciation of it. Thanks for sharing, Fay.
July 16th, 2017 10:17
Louis Gibbs said:
I envy your fluent familiarity words I\'ve never met. There are several in this lovely poem, but they didn\'t interfere with my appreciation of it. Thanks for sharing, Fay.
July 16th, 2017 10:17
Incoming.
onepauly said:
great poem, can you swim?
I feel best about horizon. next I like between shore and ship.
July 16th, 2017 06:31
onepauly said:
great poem, can you swim?
I feel best about horizon. next I like between shore and ship.
July 16th, 2017 06:31
Motley.
onepauly said:
you are a true poet. reading this
poem has got me going. the spelling of the words is great. I can relate to that. sometimes I have to create a word to fit with the poem. and I and other poets do this.
onepauly
July 16th, 2017 05:30
onepauly said:
you are a true poet. reading this
poem has got me going. the spelling of the words is great. I can relate to that. sometimes I have to create a word to fit with the poem. and I and other poets do this.
onepauly
July 16th, 2017 05:30
Motley.
Michael Edwards said:
Another beauty - I love embroidered hedgerows - sheer inspiration.
July 16th, 2017 04:49
Michael Edwards said:
Another beauty - I love embroidered hedgerows - sheer inspiration.
July 16th, 2017 04:49
Movement.
Heather T said:
You never need worry about whether anything you gift is too verbose. When Fay speaks, we consume in hush. Too many favorites to quote.
July 15th, 2017 12:42
Heather T said:
You never need worry about whether anything you gift is too verbose. When Fay speaks, we consume in hush. Too many favorites to quote.
July 15th, 2017 12:42
Movement.
Michael Edwards said:
FP is right - so self-evidently a Slimm and oh so good.
July 15th, 2017 07:37
Michael Edwards said:
FP is right - so self-evidently a Slimm and oh so good.
July 15th, 2017 07:37
Movement.
FredPeyer said:
There is only one person I know who can write like this: You!
Thanks for this early morning poem, but I have to go to bed now. :-)
July 15th, 2017 04:04
FredPeyer said:
There is only one person I know who can write like this: You!
Thanks for this early morning poem, but I have to go to bed now. :-)
July 15th, 2017 04:04
Apprehension.
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderfully evocative write. I was with her on her journey.
July 14th, 2017 23:56
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderfully evocative write. I was with her on her journey.
July 14th, 2017 23:56
Apprehension.
Louis Gibbs said:
A moving poem throughout, but that last line really got to me! My heart is still recovering. Another beauty, Fay! Please keep them coming.
July 14th, 2017 07:09
Louis Gibbs said:
A moving poem throughout, but that last line really got to me! My heart is still recovering. Another beauty, Fay! Please keep them coming.
July 14th, 2017 07:09
Apprehension.
Michael Edwards said:
Such exciting use of a great language - by a poetess extreme.
July 14th, 2017 04:27
Michael Edwards said:
Such exciting use of a great language - by a poetess extreme.
July 14th, 2017 04:27
Apprehension.
burning-embers said:
Fay i love the pictures and colours you give me here. I was looking out of that train window. Excellent.
July 14th, 2017 03:41
burning-embers said:
Fay i love the pictures and colours you give me here. I was looking out of that train window. Excellent.
July 14th, 2017 03:41
Apprehension.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, this is beautiful. And where does a line like \"trailing indigo veiled them in muslin\" come from? I could never in a thousand years think of something like this.
Chapeau!
July 14th, 2017 03:34
FredPeyer said:
Fay, this is beautiful. And where does a line like \"trailing indigo veiled them in muslin\" come from? I could never in a thousand years think of something like this.
Chapeau!
July 14th, 2017 03:34
Memory\'s Pearl.
Heather T said:
The breaking of the silken bread...I wonder sometimes if your enchanted pen sings hymns for you as you sweep it across paper. Wonderful picture paired with verse.
July 13th, 2017 18:29
Heather T said:
The breaking of the silken bread...I wonder sometimes if your enchanted pen sings hymns for you as you sweep it across paper. Wonderful picture paired with verse.
July 13th, 2017 18:29
Memory\'s Pearl.
Louis Gibbs said:
The lady has known the blessing of a true love in her full life ... what more could one hope for? Thank you for granting us the pleasure of experiencing this fine tribute, Fay.
July 13th, 2017 08:16
Louis Gibbs said:
The lady has known the blessing of a true love in her full life ... what more could one hope for? Thank you for granting us the pleasure of experiencing this fine tribute, Fay.
July 13th, 2017 08:16
Memory\'s Pearl.
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. Will I need to swoon at this?! heehee.
July 13th, 2017 08:08
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. Will I need to swoon at this?! heehee.
July 13th, 2017 08:08
Memory\'s Pearl.
FredPeyer said:
Faye, you did it again! How many of these beautifully written poems to you still have up your sleeve?
The romance of a lifetime becomes memory\'s pearl. So well said!
The picture is beautiful too, looks like she is waiting for her sailor to return.
July 13th, 2017 03:04
FredPeyer said:
Faye, you did it again! How many of these beautifully written poems to you still have up your sleeve?
The romance of a lifetime becomes memory\'s pearl. So well said!
The picture is beautiful too, looks like she is waiting for her sailor to return.
July 13th, 2017 03:04
Heaven-Held.
FredPeyer said:
Love your poem Fay, you are right, there is so much more to us than just a bunch of atoms. A thought that popped into my head after reading this excellent poem is: If somebody would lose all his/her sensory perception (blind, deaf, etc.) would he/she still see, hear, feel, and smell solely in the brain?
July 12th, 2017 10:53
FredPeyer said:
Love your poem Fay, you are right, there is so much more to us than just a bunch of atoms. A thought that popped into my head after reading this excellent poem is: If somebody would lose all his/her sensory perception (blind, deaf, etc.) would he/she still see, hear, feel, and smell solely in the brain?
July 12th, 2017 10:53
Heaven-Held.
orchidee said:
Dunno why I thought of that question again, while reading this poem. I\'ve brought in clay, well dust again, in me recent poem!
July 12th, 2017 08:58
orchidee said:
Dunno why I thought of that question again, while reading this poem. I\'ve brought in clay, well dust again, in me recent poem!
July 12th, 2017 08:58
Heaven-Held.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I heard, maybe related in some way: If a tree falls in a forest, and no one is around, does it make a sound\'? Erm, how could we find out?! Here\'s ends TUI - Today\'s Useless Information from me?!
July 12th, 2017 08:56
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I heard, maybe related in some way: If a tree falls in a forest, and no one is around, does it make a sound\'? Erm, how could we find out?! Here\'s ends TUI - Today\'s Useless Information from me?!
July 12th, 2017 08:56
Heaven-Held.
Louis Gibbs said:
Fay, you humble me with your poetic expression of philosophy ... the realm of most of my poetic endeavors. \"Moments of noting translate by alchemy to each of the reflective senses\" is brilliant! To my mind, the reflective senses include the ones beyond the seven physical, those referred to as \'extra-sensory\' perception that we tend to ignore ... the still, small voice within. Thank you for this beautiful, evocative poem!
July 12th, 2017 08:42
Louis Gibbs said:
Fay, you humble me with your poetic expression of philosophy ... the realm of most of my poetic endeavors. \"Moments of noting translate by alchemy to each of the reflective senses\" is brilliant! To my mind, the reflective senses include the ones beyond the seven physical, those referred to as \'extra-sensory\' perception that we tend to ignore ... the still, small voice within. Thank you for this beautiful, evocative poem!
July 12th, 2017 08:42
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