Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Foremost.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good and very true write. Love is all powerful.
June 14th, 2017 08:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good and very true write. Love is all powerful.
June 14th, 2017 08:01
Foremost.
Louis Gibbs said:
I see we are both expressing on the lighter side today. Nice example of the rhyming poem, Fay.
June 14th, 2017 06:51
Louis Gibbs said:
I see we are both expressing on the lighter side today. Nice example of the rhyming poem, Fay.
June 14th, 2017 06:51
First Love.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write with great imagery. First loves were so innocent.
June 12th, 2017 08:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write with great imagery. First loves were so innocent.
June 12th, 2017 08:03
First Love.
Louis Gibbs said:
Lovely, colorful imagery. A very pleasant poem. Thank you for sharing, Fay.
June 12th, 2017 07:48
Louis Gibbs said:
Lovely, colorful imagery. A very pleasant poem. Thank you for sharing, Fay.
June 12th, 2017 07:48
Line-Dancing
Augustus said:
I thought I was the only one that got excited over ladies undies hanging on the clothes line. This is truly a remarkable bit of writing granted just for fun.
June 10th, 2017 10:08
Augustus said:
I thought I was the only one that got excited over ladies undies hanging on the clothes line. This is truly a remarkable bit of writing granted just for fun.
June 10th, 2017 10:08
Line-Dancing
Louis Gibbs said:
Fay, I share and respect the attention you pay to the shape of a poem, as displayed so well in this one. To me, the fact that it is so \'comforting\' visually, adds much to its value and impact. Well done, and fun poem!
June 10th, 2017 08:50
Louis Gibbs said:
Fay, I share and respect the attention you pay to the shape of a poem, as displayed so well in this one. To me, the fact that it is so \'comforting\' visually, adds much to its value and impact. Well done, and fun poem!
June 10th, 2017 08:50
Line-Dancing
Heather T said:
That was a great deal of fun! It\'s probably best that they lose their spirits once dry or we would be accused of much PDA. Nice!
June 10th, 2017 07:53
Heather T said:
That was a great deal of fun! It\'s probably best that they lose their spirits once dry or we would be accused of much PDA. Nice!
June 10th, 2017 07:53
Line-Dancing
RAJ NANDY said:
Fay, you have an amazing talent to compose on any subject and turn it into a meaningful poem! - Raj
June 10th, 2017 07:22
RAJ NANDY said:
Fay, you have an amazing talent to compose on any subject and turn it into a meaningful poem! - Raj
June 10th, 2017 07:22
Answered.
Michael Edwards said:
Great prose - it puts me in mind of the books by Mary Webb - just finished one and so inspiring.
June 9th, 2017 14:19
Michael Edwards said:
Great prose - it puts me in mind of the books by Mary Webb - just finished one and so inspiring.
June 9th, 2017 14:19
Answered.
Louis Gibbs said:
\"the music of duty\", What a wonderful, descriptive phrase! You have a way with words that I envy, my friend.
June 9th, 2017 11:22
Louis Gibbs said:
\"the music of duty\", What a wonderful, descriptive phrase! You have a way with words that I envy, my friend.
June 9th, 2017 11:22
Answered.
Augustus said:
Having milked many a cow, you captured it well. Love the photo.
June 9th, 2017 10:01
Augustus said:
Having milked many a cow, you captured it well. Love the photo.
June 9th, 2017 10:01
Answered.
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Wow! I didn\'t think the subject matter could be written in such a beautiful, poetic way. Your poem proves me wrong! Nice work!
June 9th, 2017 07:19
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Wow! I didn\'t think the subject matter could be written in such a beautiful, poetic way. Your poem proves me wrong! Nice work!
June 9th, 2017 07:19
Answered.
Heather T said:
My grandfather had a few cows many years ago, but not for dairy. Being raised on a large farm (mostly tobacco, fruits and vegetables) I felt the warm of this scene. I have an understanding of sun up to sundown sweat, the sweet cool of late evening meaning shower, supper, and satisfied rest.
June 9th, 2017 06:21
Heather T said:
My grandfather had a few cows many years ago, but not for dairy. Being raised on a large farm (mostly tobacco, fruits and vegetables) I felt the warm of this scene. I have an understanding of sun up to sundown sweat, the sweet cool of late evening meaning shower, supper, and satisfied rest.
June 9th, 2017 06:21
Mislaid.
Heather T said:
I think sometimes silence and grace are synonymous. What a gift you have!
June 8th, 2017 23:21
Heather T said:
I think sometimes silence and grace are synonymous. What a gift you have!
June 8th, 2017 23:21
Happenings.
Louis Gibbs said:
Another beauty, Fay, and I love the square format! Must be the engineer in me. Keep them coming!
June 8th, 2017 10:45
Louis Gibbs said:
Another beauty, Fay, and I love the square format! Must be the engineer in me. Keep them coming!
June 8th, 2017 10:45
Happenings.
Augustus said:
Things we attribute as beautiful or as painful to watch, nature is indifferent as it is simply their nature.
Hugs.
June 8th, 2017 10:25
Augustus said:
Things we attribute as beautiful or as painful to watch, nature is indifferent as it is simply their nature.
Hugs.
June 8th, 2017 10:25
Happenings.
RAJ NANDY said:
THE VERSE AND THE PHOTOGRAPH COMPLIMENT EACH OTHER ! Thanks for sharing, - Raj
June 8th, 2017 07:32
RAJ NANDY said:
THE VERSE AND THE PHOTOGRAPH COMPLIMENT EACH OTHER ! Thanks for sharing, - Raj
June 8th, 2017 07:32
Full Spate.
Louis Gibbs said:
I love the free-flowing form of your poetry, Fay. This is another beauty! You are a poet apart, indeed.
June 7th, 2017 10:35
Louis Gibbs said:
I love the free-flowing form of your poetry, Fay. This is another beauty! You are a poet apart, indeed.
June 7th, 2017 10:35
Full Spate.
Michael Edwards said:
Common theme in today\'s postings and another truly great write Fay.
June 7th, 2017 10:23
Michael Edwards said:
Common theme in today\'s postings and another truly great write Fay.
June 7th, 2017 10:23
Full Spate.
RAJ NANDY said:
What you have poetically so well expressed, is indeed very relevant in our our Enlightened Age! Despite the advances of science with its String Theory & the Higgs Boson, we have not been able to fathom the full beauty & mysterious creation of the Lord! During the 3rd century BC it was the Greek philosopher Pythagoras who had said that the revolving planets create music in the depth of space! Thanks for sharing Fay, -Raj, New Delhi
June 7th, 2017 09:20
RAJ NANDY said:
What you have poetically so well expressed, is indeed very relevant in our our Enlightened Age! Despite the advances of science with its String Theory & the Higgs Boson, we have not been able to fathom the full beauty & mysterious creation of the Lord! During the 3rd century BC it was the Greek philosopher Pythagoras who had said that the revolving planets create music in the depth of space! Thanks for sharing Fay, -Raj, New Delhi
June 7th, 2017 09:20
Full Spate.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I never knew there was so much! I must get me coat and get out more! heehee.
June 7th, 2017 08:28
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I never knew there was so much! I must get me coat and get out more! heehee.
June 7th, 2017 08:28
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