Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Mislaid.
Louis Gibbs said:
Ah, the beauty of silence! It so typically gets lost in the dance of relationships, doesn\'t it? Enjoyed it, Fay.
June 5th, 2017 08:36
Louis Gibbs said:
Ah, the beauty of silence! It so typically gets lost in the dance of relationships, doesn\'t it? Enjoyed it, Fay.
June 5th, 2017 08:36
Transformation.
MaddieJ said:
Very captivating and descirptive use of words. I love color too!!
June 4th, 2017 19:12
MaddieJ said:
Very captivating and descirptive use of words. I love color too!!
June 4th, 2017 19:12
Transformation.
P.H.Rose said:
I totally agree
Very well constructed
Well done Fay..
Lovely read..
June 4th, 2017 14:13
P.H.Rose said:
I totally agree
Very well constructed
Well done Fay..
Lovely read..
June 4th, 2017 14:13
Transformation.
Augustus said:
Intricacies of enterwoven color as only could be done by Fay. This will be favored.
If you get a chance check out Colormaster by Augustus in Feb. 2017.
June 4th, 2017 12:56
Augustus said:
Intricacies of enterwoven color as only could be done by Fay. This will be favored.
If you get a chance check out Colormaster by Augustus in Feb. 2017.
June 4th, 2017 12:56
Transformation.
Louis Gibbs said:
Methinks the lady sees that which most cannot, the world beyond illusion. Beautiful, colorful poem, Fay!
June 4th, 2017 10:11
Louis Gibbs said:
Methinks the lady sees that which most cannot, the world beyond illusion. Beautiful, colorful poem, Fay!
June 4th, 2017 10:11
Transformation.
Michael Edwards said:
If only people could unglue their eyes - I get so cross when I hear folk say they don\'t like abstracts without even thinking about them - they belong to what I call the if-it-doesn\'t-look-like-a photo-I-don\'t-like-it-brigade.
June 4th, 2017 10:05
Michael Edwards said:
If only people could unglue their eyes - I get so cross when I hear folk say they don\'t like abstracts without even thinking about them - they belong to what I call the if-it-doesn\'t-look-like-a photo-I-don\'t-like-it-brigade.
June 4th, 2017 10:05
Transformation.
kevin browne said:
beautifully constructed and I loved reading your work here. good work, Fay Slimm x
June 4th, 2017 05:41
kevin browne said:
beautifully constructed and I loved reading your work here. good work, Fay Slimm x
June 4th, 2017 05:41
Word Wisdom.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, that Muse has a great deal of wonderful ideas for us to explore.
June 4th, 2017 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, that Muse has a great deal of wonderful ideas for us to explore.
June 4th, 2017 01:03
Word Wisdom.
Augustus said:
I hope you can forgive the analogy : Willy Wonca in the intro is explaining to charley and others the mysteries behind the doors, a dream land of mystic wonder. Enjoyed.
June 3rd, 2017 14:14
Augustus said:
I hope you can forgive the analogy : Willy Wonca in the intro is explaining to charley and others the mysteries behind the doors, a dream land of mystic wonder. Enjoyed.
June 3rd, 2017 14:14
Word Wisdom.
Louis Gibbs said:
I agree that we often are sharing the wisdom of another reality in our poetry, Fay. Sometimes I am astounded at what comes through my pen. Kudos on this one!
June 3rd, 2017 12:15
Louis Gibbs said:
I agree that we often are sharing the wisdom of another reality in our poetry, Fay. Sometimes I am astounded at what comes through my pen. Kudos on this one!
June 3rd, 2017 12:15
Awayness.
Augustus said:
If I am away from my lover I am sad. You make awayness into something beautiful. At least this is what your poem says to me.
June 2nd, 2017 17:13
Augustus said:
If I am away from my lover I am sad. You make awayness into something beautiful. At least this is what your poem says to me.
June 2nd, 2017 17:13
Awayness.
Louis Gibbs said:
Wow! Maybe someday I can write like that. A jewel, Fay!
June 2nd, 2017 13:47
Louis Gibbs said:
Wow! Maybe someday I can write like that. A jewel, Fay!
June 2nd, 2017 13:47
Awayness.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks Fay for another lovely symbiotic picture & poem. Nostalgic poetry always makes me sad ~and each year sees the passing of aged loved ones and my Granny used to show me faded wedding photos and explain that I would only meet them in Heaven for they had long departed this scene. But to each of us the past is just a important as the present because it is our memories. And more important than the future because that is yet to be ! E-mails are much less personal than LETTERS and when an elderly person on my e-mailing list passes over I always delete Just in case I may send them a copy of a group missive and embarrass the remaining partner. The moral of this is one would never write a letter to someone who was deceased. But of course their memory and influence remains. The Bible says \"We are compassed about with a great cloud of witnesses\". The greatest tragedy of \"Manchester\" was that one little GIRL was only EIGHT ~ how prematurely tragic for her dear parents ~ nothing can ever compensate for the death of a child. Sorry to be so melancholy but your poem was so so nostalgic ~ Thanks for caring ~ YOUR BRIAN
June 2nd, 2017 12:44
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks Fay for another lovely symbiotic picture & poem. Nostalgic poetry always makes me sad ~and each year sees the passing of aged loved ones and my Granny used to show me faded wedding photos and explain that I would only meet them in Heaven for they had long departed this scene. But to each of us the past is just a important as the present because it is our memories. And more important than the future because that is yet to be ! E-mails are much less personal than LETTERS and when an elderly person on my e-mailing list passes over I always delete Just in case I may send them a copy of a group missive and embarrass the remaining partner. The moral of this is one would never write a letter to someone who was deceased. But of course their memory and influence remains. The Bible says \"We are compassed about with a great cloud of witnesses\". The greatest tragedy of \"Manchester\" was that one little GIRL was only EIGHT ~ how prematurely tragic for her dear parents ~ nothing can ever compensate for the death of a child. Sorry to be so melancholy but your poem was so so nostalgic ~ Thanks for caring ~ YOUR BRIAN
June 2nd, 2017 12:44
Awayness.
Michael Edwards said:
Well I certainly understood it and also marvel at your superb use of the language - you have a great gift Fay.
June 2nd, 2017 12:24
Michael Edwards said:
Well I certainly understood it and also marvel at your superb use of the language - you have a great gift Fay.
June 2nd, 2017 12:24
Deadly Intent.
Fay Slimm. said:
Heartfelt thanks dear friends for you kind and encouraging comments and much appreciated as always - xx Fay
June 1st, 2017 16:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Heartfelt thanks dear friends for you kind and encouraging comments and much appreciated as always - xx Fay
June 1st, 2017 16:15
Deadly Intent.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Because I am a Conservationist I love Nature and it always stirs my muse ~ especially BIRDS ! In this excellent Poem ~ you have crafted the KESTRAL in all its majesty ~ Wings ~ Eyes ~ Claws ! I love your attendant photograph ~ as always. The structure of your poems has a complex /simplicity that is difficult to analyse objectively ~ but your poems are very fluid (linguistically) and a pleasure to recite. Thanks for your daily amelioration of this site ! Yours BRIAN.
June 1st, 2017 14:15
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Because I am a Conservationist I love Nature and it always stirs my muse ~ especially BIRDS ! In this excellent Poem ~ you have crafted the KESTRAL in all its majesty ~ Wings ~ Eyes ~ Claws ! I love your attendant photograph ~ as always. The structure of your poems has a complex /simplicity that is difficult to analyse objectively ~ but your poems are very fluid (linguistically) and a pleasure to recite. Thanks for your daily amelioration of this site ! Yours BRIAN.
June 1st, 2017 14:15
Deadly Intent.
Augustus said:
Fine tribute to its magestry. I have been fortunate enough to witness their aerial displays and hunting skills , not the kestrel but other falcons.
June 1st, 2017 12:27
Augustus said:
Fine tribute to its magestry. I have been fortunate enough to witness their aerial displays and hunting skills , not the kestrel but other falcons.
June 1st, 2017 12:27
Deadly Intent.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write. I have always been amazed at the sight of kestrels.
June 1st, 2017 08:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write. I have always been amazed at the sight of kestrels.
June 1st, 2017 08:03
Deadly Intent.
P.H.Rose said:
Fay I love this one
My favourite bird
Is the kestrel and
Favourite film and book.
June 1st, 2017 05:51
P.H.Rose said:
Fay I love this one
My favourite bird
Is the kestrel and
Favourite film and book.
June 1st, 2017 05:51
Deadly Intent.
Michael Edwards said:
Super - love your use of words: lunchtime sky etc Such a majestic bird.
June 1st, 2017 05:00
Michael Edwards said:
Super - love your use of words: lunchtime sky etc Such a majestic bird.
June 1st, 2017 05:00
Betweeness.
orchidee said:
Lovely write. I got in a big tangle about \'now\'. The next minute was not the same \'now\' as the previous minute\'s \'now\'.
Then someone said to me \'now, now\', which made me more confused! Much more of that and I shall be a jibbering wreck!
(Do shut up, erm, now, Orchi! heehee.)
May 30th, 2017 11:56
orchidee said:
Lovely write. I got in a big tangle about \'now\'. The next minute was not the same \'now\' as the previous minute\'s \'now\'.
Then someone said to me \'now, now\', which made me more confused! Much more of that and I shall be a jibbering wreck!
(Do shut up, erm, now, Orchi! heehee.)
May 30th, 2017 11:56
Betweeness.
Michael Edwards said:
Another superb offering - thanks so much for posting it Fay.
May 30th, 2017 11:51
Michael Edwards said:
Another superb offering - thanks so much for posting it Fay.
May 30th, 2017 11:51
Betweeness.
Augustus said:
Damaged soul said it like it is. I might add dreamy exquisite imagery.
Kudos.
May 30th, 2017 10:32
Augustus said:
Damaged soul said it like it is. I might add dreamy exquisite imagery.
Kudos.
May 30th, 2017 10:32
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