Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Awayness.
Michael Edwards said:
Well I certainly understood it and also marvel at your superb use of the language - you have a great gift Fay.
June 2nd, 2017 12:24
Michael Edwards said:
Well I certainly understood it and also marvel at your superb use of the language - you have a great gift Fay.
June 2nd, 2017 12:24
Deadly Intent.
Fay Slimm. said:
Heartfelt thanks dear friends for you kind and encouraging comments and much appreciated as always - xx Fay
June 1st, 2017 16:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Heartfelt thanks dear friends for you kind and encouraging comments and much appreciated as always - xx Fay
June 1st, 2017 16:15
Deadly Intent.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Because I am a Conservationist I love Nature and it always stirs my muse ~ especially BIRDS ! In this excellent Poem ~ you have crafted the KESTRAL in all its majesty ~ Wings ~ Eyes ~ Claws ! I love your attendant photograph ~ as always. The structure of your poems has a complex /simplicity that is difficult to analyse objectively ~ but your poems are very fluid (linguistically) and a pleasure to recite. Thanks for your daily amelioration of this site ! Yours BRIAN.
June 1st, 2017 14:15
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Because I am a Conservationist I love Nature and it always stirs my muse ~ especially BIRDS ! In this excellent Poem ~ you have crafted the KESTRAL in all its majesty ~ Wings ~ Eyes ~ Claws ! I love your attendant photograph ~ as always. The structure of your poems has a complex /simplicity that is difficult to analyse objectively ~ but your poems are very fluid (linguistically) and a pleasure to recite. Thanks for your daily amelioration of this site ! Yours BRIAN.
June 1st, 2017 14:15
Deadly Intent.
Augustus said:
Fine tribute to its magestry. I have been fortunate enough to witness their aerial displays and hunting skills , not the kestrel but other falcons.
June 1st, 2017 12:27
Augustus said:
Fine tribute to its magestry. I have been fortunate enough to witness their aerial displays and hunting skills , not the kestrel but other falcons.
June 1st, 2017 12:27
Deadly Intent.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write. I have always been amazed at the sight of kestrels.
June 1st, 2017 08:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write. I have always been amazed at the sight of kestrels.
June 1st, 2017 08:03
Deadly Intent.
P.H.Rose said:
Fay I love this one
My favourite bird
Is the kestrel and
Favourite film and book.
June 1st, 2017 05:51
P.H.Rose said:
Fay I love this one
My favourite bird
Is the kestrel and
Favourite film and book.
June 1st, 2017 05:51
Deadly Intent.
Michael Edwards said:
Super - love your use of words: lunchtime sky etc Such a majestic bird.
June 1st, 2017 05:00
Michael Edwards said:
Super - love your use of words: lunchtime sky etc Such a majestic bird.
June 1st, 2017 05:00
Betweeness.
orchidee said:
Lovely write. I got in a big tangle about \'now\'. The next minute was not the same \'now\' as the previous minute\'s \'now\'.
Then someone said to me \'now, now\', which made me more confused! Much more of that and I shall be a jibbering wreck!
(Do shut up, erm, now, Orchi! heehee.)
May 30th, 2017 11:56
orchidee said:
Lovely write. I got in a big tangle about \'now\'. The next minute was not the same \'now\' as the previous minute\'s \'now\'.
Then someone said to me \'now, now\', which made me more confused! Much more of that and I shall be a jibbering wreck!
(Do shut up, erm, now, Orchi! heehee.)
May 30th, 2017 11:56
Betweeness.
Michael Edwards said:
Another superb offering - thanks so much for posting it Fay.
May 30th, 2017 11:51
Michael Edwards said:
Another superb offering - thanks so much for posting it Fay.
May 30th, 2017 11:51
Betweeness.
Augustus said:
Damaged soul said it like it is. I might add dreamy exquisite imagery.
Kudos.
May 30th, 2017 10:32
Augustus said:
Damaged soul said it like it is. I might add dreamy exquisite imagery.
Kudos.
May 30th, 2017 10:32
Betweeness.
Louis Gibbs said:
Exquisite, beautifully structured poem, Fay. Most impressive work!
May 30th, 2017 09:03
Louis Gibbs said:
Exquisite, beautifully structured poem, Fay. Most impressive work!
May 30th, 2017 09:03
Wild Beauty..
Augustus said:
Not a brochure but I want to pick up the phone and make reservations. Nicely done.
May 29th, 2017 19:47
Augustus said:
Not a brochure but I want to pick up the phone and make reservations. Nicely done.
May 29th, 2017 19:47
Wild Beauty..
Michael Edwards said:
You\'ve captured it Fay - A super part of the world and you make me want to visit it again.
May 29th, 2017 10:26
Michael Edwards said:
You\'ve captured it Fay - A super part of the world and you make me want to visit it again.
May 29th, 2017 10:26
Wild Beauty..
orchidee said:
Ohh will my wit know no end?! Yes - go and eat humble pie, Orchi! lol.
May 29th, 2017 08:48
orchidee said:
Ohh will my wit know no end?! Yes - go and eat humble pie, Orchi! lol.
May 29th, 2017 08:48
Wild Beauty..
orchidee said:
A fine write. You can taste the ice cream in Cornwall Brian!
May 29th, 2017 08:47
orchidee said:
A fine write. You can taste the ice cream in Cornwall Brian!
May 29th, 2017 08:47
Wild Beauty..
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Beautiful FAY ~ it makes my Ice Cream Sonnet seem lacking in Flavour ! Make no excuses FAY it is as you describe it ~ CORNWALL ~ almost Heaven. That\'s why the call it \"LANDS END\" because after Cornwall ~ there is nowhere on Earth ~ more beautiful and serene to visit ! Lovely FAY ~ the Picture ~ the Poem and the Poet ! Yiours B. Please check my ICE CREAM~ Thanks B.
May 29th, 2017 07:40
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Beautiful FAY ~ it makes my Ice Cream Sonnet seem lacking in Flavour ! Make no excuses FAY it is as you describe it ~ CORNWALL ~ almost Heaven. That\'s why the call it \"LANDS END\" because after Cornwall ~ there is nowhere on Earth ~ more beautiful and serene to visit ! Lovely FAY ~ the Picture ~ the Poem and the Poet ! Yiours B. Please check my ICE CREAM~ Thanks B.
May 29th, 2017 07:40
Catching the Drift.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, music can be heard form many different things and it can always be beautiful and inspiring.
May 27th, 2017 00:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, music can be heard form many different things and it can always be beautiful and inspiring.
May 27th, 2017 00:10
Catching the Drift.
P.H.Rose said:
The sound of a breeze
Flowing through metal
Beautiful
May 26th, 2017 18:37
P.H.Rose said:
The sound of a breeze
Flowing through metal
Beautiful
May 26th, 2017 18:37
Catching the Drift.
kevin browne said:
a breezy perfection in writing about it. nice one Fay Slimm.
May 26th, 2017 13:25
kevin browne said:
a breezy perfection in writing about it. nice one Fay Slimm.
May 26th, 2017 13:25
Catching the Drift.
Augustus said:
You keep coming up with these beautiful descriptive poems illuminating what is out there for all of us to see, but not in the same way. You have a much keener perception and it is as if your mind body dissolves into fine particles able to penetrate the surrounding scenery absorbing its beauty, then on reconstitution, you are imbued with magical elucidating powers.
May 26th, 2017 13:13
Augustus said:
You keep coming up with these beautiful descriptive poems illuminating what is out there for all of us to see, but not in the same way. You have a much keener perception and it is as if your mind body dissolves into fine particles able to penetrate the surrounding scenery absorbing its beauty, then on reconstitution, you are imbued with magical elucidating powers.
May 26th, 2017 13:13
Love\'s Glow.
Michael Edwards said:
Erotic comes more slowly these days but certainly sensuous - great write fay.
May 25th, 2017 12:53
Michael Edwards said:
Erotic comes more slowly these days but certainly sensuous - great write fay.
May 25th, 2017 12:53
Love\'s Glow.
Augustus said:
Is it just me that I get sensual erotic after perhaps a long fast. As I read this it takes my breath away.
May 25th, 2017 12:15
Augustus said:
Is it just me that I get sensual erotic after perhaps a long fast. As I read this it takes my breath away.
May 25th, 2017 12:15
Unmatched.
orchidee said:
I may not have got the \'sense\' of this poem. Maybe something too profound for me! Yet some things can be too deep for words. Just \'being there\' can be enough at times.
That\'s my comment on this. Hmmm.
May 25th, 2017 02:57
orchidee said:
I may not have got the \'sense\' of this poem. Maybe something too profound for me! Yet some things can be too deep for words. Just \'being there\' can be enough at times.
That\'s my comment on this. Hmmm.
May 25th, 2017 02:57
Unmatched.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write.
\"Meanwhile a poetic dreamer reveals
his penchant for embroidering
that which cannot be sewn, \"
Wonderfully poetic words.
Thank you Fay.
May 25th, 2017 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write.
\"Meanwhile a poetic dreamer reveals
his penchant for embroidering
that which cannot be sewn, \"
Wonderfully poetic words.
Thank you Fay.
May 25th, 2017 01:45
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