Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Unreal.
Louis Gibbs said:
Beautiful word painting, Fay! You are indeed an artist. Your gift with words continues to impress and amaze me.
July 8th, 2017 08:40
Louis Gibbs said:
Beautiful word painting, Fay! You are indeed an artist. Your gift with words continues to impress and amaze me.
July 8th, 2017 08:40
Unreal.
Nicholas Browning said:
This is pretty interesting. The way you string adjectives along like your plaything is admirable. Keep it up!
July 8th, 2017 07:38
Nicholas Browning said:
This is pretty interesting. The way you string adjectives along like your plaything is admirable. Keep it up!
July 8th, 2017 07:38
Unreal.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Excellent again FAY ! You are such a blessing (in so many ways) to MPS and your awesome daily Poems & Pictures inspire us all ! The painting \"Rainbows in the Evening\" perfectly compliments your poem and is alluded to in your closing verse. All of Nature is Unreal but it is God\'s gift to the Human Race ! A Chance to thank Him tomorrow ~ BUT ~ How many will ? Love you for being you ~ BRIAN
July 8th, 2017 04:35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Excellent again FAY ! You are such a blessing (in so many ways) to MPS and your awesome daily Poems & Pictures inspire us all ! The painting \"Rainbows in the Evening\" perfectly compliments your poem and is alluded to in your closing verse. All of Nature is Unreal but it is God\'s gift to the Human Race ! A Chance to thank Him tomorrow ~ BUT ~ How many will ? Love you for being you ~ BRIAN
July 8th, 2017 04:35
Unreal.
kevin browne said:
how did you manage to put the array of these beautiful words together because they sit side by side perfectly and the message is strong and clear which in itself pretty UNREAL. great worked out poem here and it so pleasant to read. well done Fay Slimm.
July 8th, 2017 04:26
kevin browne said:
how did you manage to put the array of these beautiful words together because they sit side by side perfectly and the message is strong and clear which in itself pretty UNREAL. great worked out poem here and it so pleasant to read. well done Fay Slimm.
July 8th, 2017 04:26
Regeneration.
Augustus said:
I am always in awe of your nature poems. Inspiring.
July 7th, 2017 18:53
Augustus said:
I am always in awe of your nature poems. Inspiring.
July 7th, 2017 18:53
Regeneration.
FredPeyer said:
Love your poem Fay, especially liked the line \"Unseen Love\'s Presence begins to reveal gift of contentment\"
Thank you!
July 7th, 2017 11:59
FredPeyer said:
Love your poem Fay, especially liked the line \"Unseen Love\'s Presence begins to reveal gift of contentment\"
Thank you!
July 7th, 2017 11:59
Regeneration.
Louis Gibbs said:
Fay, you blew me away this morning with this beautiful poem. Thank you for starting this day with awe, both of your poem and in full appreciation of the dawning of this new day, as so beautifully portrayed.
July 7th, 2017 07:14
Louis Gibbs said:
Fay, you blew me away this morning with this beautiful poem. Thank you for starting this day with awe, both of your poem and in full appreciation of the dawning of this new day, as so beautifully portrayed.
July 7th, 2017 07:14
Regeneration.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ this made my morning and has given me strength for TODAY ! Haunting picture and and assuring poem. We all need REGENERATION ~ day by day by day ~ thanks for caring ~ Yours BRIAN
July 7th, 2017 03:13
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ this made my morning and has given me strength for TODAY ! Haunting picture and and assuring poem. We all need REGENERATION ~ day by day by day ~ thanks for caring ~ Yours BRIAN
July 7th, 2017 03:13
Regeneration.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write once more Fay. I love the lines
\"Love\'s Presence reveals
gift of contentment.\"
July 7th, 2017 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write once more Fay. I love the lines
\"Love\'s Presence reveals
gift of contentment.\"
July 7th, 2017 02:24
Scented Solutions.
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write, love is so much in our lives, can it ever be completely explained.
July 6th, 2017 08:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write, love is so much in our lives, can it ever be completely explained.
July 6th, 2017 08:01
Scented Solutions.
Louis Gibbs said:
As your poem states so well, love requires \"Being tenderly constant\" in the relationship. It requires an effort and attentiveness on the part of both. It cannot be taken for granted. This is so well messaged in your fine poem, Fay. Thank you!
July 6th, 2017 07:41
Louis Gibbs said:
As your poem states so well, love requires \"Being tenderly constant\" in the relationship. It requires an effort and attentiveness on the part of both. It cannot be taken for granted. This is so well messaged in your fine poem, Fay. Thank you!
July 6th, 2017 07:41
Scented Solutions.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another lovely Love Poem and complimentary visual. In my experience the \"Fragrance of True Love\" eludes the Perfumers of the World. It is unique to each favoured Couple and can neither be compounded or bottled ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
July 6th, 2017 03:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another lovely Love Poem and complimentary visual. In my experience the \"Fragrance of True Love\" eludes the Perfumers of the World. It is unique to each favoured Couple and can neither be compounded or bottled ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
July 6th, 2017 03:32
Scented Solutions.
FredPeyer said:
Fay,
like the quote, love the poem. There really is a lot more to love than just saying \"I love you\". I think the last two lines of the poem I just published could be quoted here: Love.....is a bit of courage and a whole lot of work.
July 6th, 2017 02:58
FredPeyer said:
Fay,
like the quote, love the poem. There really is a lot more to love than just saying \"I love you\". I think the last two lines of the poem I just published could be quoted here: Love.....is a bit of courage and a whole lot of work.
July 6th, 2017 02:58
I Am Cloud.
Louis Gibbs said:
I agree, one of your finest, Fay, and it goes into my favorites as well. I\'ve always appreciated and been fascinated by clouds. One of my favorite expressions of nature.
July 5th, 2017 11:05
Louis Gibbs said:
I agree, one of your finest, Fay, and it goes into my favorites as well. I\'ve always appreciated and been fascinated by clouds. One of my favorite expressions of nature.
July 5th, 2017 11:05
I Am Cloud.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another beautiful symbiosis of POEM and PICTURE ! As an ECOLOGIST I have always been interested in clouds ~ how they are formed and what their shape and colour and height etc can inform (and warn) us of future weather. The \"pictures in the clouds\" and their coquettishness is infinite and I agree they are very very feminine. Three of the \"Elements of the Ancients\" are EARTH ~ AIR ~ WATER and in essence all three are involved in Cloud Formation ~ Cloud Movement and Precipitation (The Water Cycle) WATER evaporates and forms Clouds which are driven and shaped by the Wind (AIR) but temperature and height are also important for the movement of the clouds and precipitation ! The Earth traps heat and warms the air causing wind currents. Also the topography of the Earth (MOUNTAINS) causes the clouds to rise and shed their water vapour as rain ! So in essence all three WATER ~ AIR ~ EARTH all play their part in the Function of Clouds and their role in the Water Cycle. Cloud Ecology is beautiful visually ~ but can be complex scientifically ! Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN
July 5th, 2017 04:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another beautiful symbiosis of POEM and PICTURE ! As an ECOLOGIST I have always been interested in clouds ~ how they are formed and what their shape and colour and height etc can inform (and warn) us of future weather. The \"pictures in the clouds\" and their coquettishness is infinite and I agree they are very very feminine. Three of the \"Elements of the Ancients\" are EARTH ~ AIR ~ WATER and in essence all three are involved in Cloud Formation ~ Cloud Movement and Precipitation (The Water Cycle) WATER evaporates and forms Clouds which are driven and shaped by the Wind (AIR) but temperature and height are also important for the movement of the clouds and precipitation ! The Earth traps heat and warms the air causing wind currents. Also the topography of the Earth (MOUNTAINS) causes the clouds to rise and shed their water vapour as rain ! So in essence all three WATER ~ AIR ~ EARTH all play their part in the Function of Clouds and their role in the Water Cycle. Cloud Ecology is beautiful visually ~ but can be complex scientifically ! Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN
July 5th, 2017 04:42
I Am Cloud.
FredPeyer said:
Have to agree with Michael, this is one of your best. One question though: Aren\'t they offspring of water and air and not water and earth? Don\'t want to nitpick, your poem is too good for that!
July 5th, 2017 02:57
FredPeyer said:
Have to agree with Michael, this is one of your best. One question though: Aren\'t they offspring of water and air and not water and earth? Don\'t want to nitpick, your poem is too good for that!
July 5th, 2017 02:57
I Am Cloud.
Michael Edwards said:
One of your very very best Fay - going into my favourites.
July 5th, 2017 02:09
Michael Edwards said:
One of your very very best Fay - going into my favourites.
July 5th, 2017 02:09
Not Again.
Krystal Brewington said:
Well wrote. I loved it. I thought my poems was good but after reading yours there buying compared to how you write. Wow this is deep and lovely. Nice job. Hope to read more by you. Drop by and read some of mine. Tell me what you think
July 4th, 2017 14:43
Krystal Brewington said:
Well wrote. I loved it. I thought my poems was good but after reading yours there buying compared to how you write. Wow this is deep and lovely. Nice job. Hope to read more by you. Drop by and read some of mine. Tell me what you think
July 4th, 2017 14:43
Not Again.
Poetic Dan said:
Thank you for sharing
I could offer many words
But I\'ll truly take a moment
And just breathe.
Thank you again
July 4th, 2017 10:02
Poetic Dan said:
Thank you for sharing
I could offer many words
But I\'ll truly take a moment
And just breathe.
Thank you again
July 4th, 2017 10:02
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