Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Full Spate.
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb write and you are so right about the sun getting brighter as we get towards our last breath.
June 7th, 2017 08:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb write and you are so right about the sun getting brighter as we get towards our last breath.
June 7th, 2017 08:23
Reminders.
Augustus said:
Tin and copper mines can go down pretty deep. We definitely need some recompense for laborers after they are spent.
June 6th, 2017 11:57
Augustus said:
Tin and copper mines can go down pretty deep. We definitely need some recompense for laborers after they are spent.
June 6th, 2017 11:57
Reminders.
Michael Edwards said:
I agree with Louis - great poem and last two lines still applies although with a little more subtleness these days.
June 6th, 2017 11:04
Michael Edwards said:
I agree with Louis - great poem and last two lines still applies although with a little more subtleness these days.
June 6th, 2017 11:04
Reminders.
Louis Gibbs said:
Beautiful poem, Fay, summed up nicely in the last two lines. I submit that nothing much has changed, just that the servitude has become much more subtle. Kudos on another fine one!
June 6th, 2017 10:47
Louis Gibbs said:
Beautiful poem, Fay, summed up nicely in the last two lines. I submit that nothing much has changed, just that the servitude has become much more subtle. Kudos on another fine one!
June 6th, 2017 10:47
Reminders.
RAJ NANDY said:
A poem with realism and poetic imagery, makes us aware of the sights & sound of old Cornwall! -Raj
June 6th, 2017 07:46
RAJ NANDY said:
A poem with realism and poetic imagery, makes us aware of the sights & sound of old Cornwall! -Raj
June 6th, 2017 07:46
Reminders.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write with great imagery.
They were hard times but have things changed?
June 6th, 2017 05:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write with great imagery.
They were hard times but have things changed?
June 6th, 2017 05:42
Unmatched.
RAJ NANDY said:
Loved the poem with its timeless hour glass format Fay! I had paid my tribute to the Muse of Epic Poetry when I had composed my \'Story of English Literature in Verse\' covering up to John Milton. Thanks, - Raj, 06 June, New Delhi
June 5th, 2017 23:53
RAJ NANDY said:
Loved the poem with its timeless hour glass format Fay! I had paid my tribute to the Muse of Epic Poetry when I had composed my \'Story of English Literature in Verse\' covering up to John Milton. Thanks, - Raj, 06 June, New Delhi
June 5th, 2017 23:53
Mislaid.
Michael Edwards said:
I am writing a poem where I mention speaking to the wind and heard in silence - great piece Fay.
June 5th, 2017 10:28
Michael Edwards said:
I am writing a poem where I mention speaking to the wind and heard in silence - great piece Fay.
June 5th, 2017 10:28
Mislaid.
Louis Gibbs said:
Ah, the beauty of silence! It so typically gets lost in the dance of relationships, doesn\'t it? Enjoyed it, Fay.
June 5th, 2017 08:36
Louis Gibbs said:
Ah, the beauty of silence! It so typically gets lost in the dance of relationships, doesn\'t it? Enjoyed it, Fay.
June 5th, 2017 08:36
Transformation.
MaddieJ said:
Very captivating and descirptive use of words. I love color too!!
June 4th, 2017 19:12
MaddieJ said:
Very captivating and descirptive use of words. I love color too!!
June 4th, 2017 19:12
Transformation.
P.H.Rose said:
I totally agree
Very well constructed
Well done Fay..
Lovely read..
June 4th, 2017 14:13
P.H.Rose said:
I totally agree
Very well constructed
Well done Fay..
Lovely read..
June 4th, 2017 14:13
Transformation.
Augustus said:
Intricacies of enterwoven color as only could be done by Fay. This will be favored.
If you get a chance check out Colormaster by Augustus in Feb. 2017.
June 4th, 2017 12:56
Augustus said:
Intricacies of enterwoven color as only could be done by Fay. This will be favored.
If you get a chance check out Colormaster by Augustus in Feb. 2017.
June 4th, 2017 12:56
Transformation.
Louis Gibbs said:
Methinks the lady sees that which most cannot, the world beyond illusion. Beautiful, colorful poem, Fay!
June 4th, 2017 10:11
Louis Gibbs said:
Methinks the lady sees that which most cannot, the world beyond illusion. Beautiful, colorful poem, Fay!
June 4th, 2017 10:11
Transformation.
Michael Edwards said:
If only people could unglue their eyes - I get so cross when I hear folk say they don\'t like abstracts without even thinking about them - they belong to what I call the if-it-doesn\'t-look-like-a photo-I-don\'t-like-it-brigade.
June 4th, 2017 10:05
Michael Edwards said:
If only people could unglue their eyes - I get so cross when I hear folk say they don\'t like abstracts without even thinking about them - they belong to what I call the if-it-doesn\'t-look-like-a photo-I-don\'t-like-it-brigade.
June 4th, 2017 10:05
Transformation.
kevin browne said:
beautifully constructed and I loved reading your work here. good work, Fay Slimm x
June 4th, 2017 05:41
kevin browne said:
beautifully constructed and I loved reading your work here. good work, Fay Slimm x
June 4th, 2017 05:41
Word Wisdom.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, that Muse has a great deal of wonderful ideas for us to explore.
June 4th, 2017 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, that Muse has a great deal of wonderful ideas for us to explore.
June 4th, 2017 01:03
Word Wisdom.
Augustus said:
I hope you can forgive the analogy : Willy Wonca in the intro is explaining to charley and others the mysteries behind the doors, a dream land of mystic wonder. Enjoyed.
June 3rd, 2017 14:14
Augustus said:
I hope you can forgive the analogy : Willy Wonca in the intro is explaining to charley and others the mysteries behind the doors, a dream land of mystic wonder. Enjoyed.
June 3rd, 2017 14:14
Word Wisdom.
Louis Gibbs said:
I agree that we often are sharing the wisdom of another reality in our poetry, Fay. Sometimes I am astounded at what comes through my pen. Kudos on this one!
June 3rd, 2017 12:15
Louis Gibbs said:
I agree that we often are sharing the wisdom of another reality in our poetry, Fay. Sometimes I am astounded at what comes through my pen. Kudos on this one!
June 3rd, 2017 12:15
Awayness.
Augustus said:
If I am away from my lover I am sad. You make awayness into something beautiful. At least this is what your poem says to me.
June 2nd, 2017 17:13
Augustus said:
If I am away from my lover I am sad. You make awayness into something beautiful. At least this is what your poem says to me.
June 2nd, 2017 17:13
Awayness.
Louis Gibbs said:
Wow! Maybe someday I can write like that. A jewel, Fay!
June 2nd, 2017 13:47
Louis Gibbs said:
Wow! Maybe someday I can write like that. A jewel, Fay!
June 2nd, 2017 13:47
Awayness.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks Fay for another lovely symbiotic picture & poem. Nostalgic poetry always makes me sad ~and each year sees the passing of aged loved ones and my Granny used to show me faded wedding photos and explain that I would only meet them in Heaven for they had long departed this scene. But to each of us the past is just a important as the present because it is our memories. And more important than the future because that is yet to be ! E-mails are much less personal than LETTERS and when an elderly person on my e-mailing list passes over I always delete Just in case I may send them a copy of a group missive and embarrass the remaining partner. The moral of this is one would never write a letter to someone who was deceased. But of course their memory and influence remains. The Bible says \"We are compassed about with a great cloud of witnesses\". The greatest tragedy of \"Manchester\" was that one little GIRL was only EIGHT ~ how prematurely tragic for her dear parents ~ nothing can ever compensate for the death of a child. Sorry to be so melancholy but your poem was so so nostalgic ~ Thanks for caring ~ YOUR BRIAN
June 2nd, 2017 12:44
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks Fay for another lovely symbiotic picture & poem. Nostalgic poetry always makes me sad ~and each year sees the passing of aged loved ones and my Granny used to show me faded wedding photos and explain that I would only meet them in Heaven for they had long departed this scene. But to each of us the past is just a important as the present because it is our memories. And more important than the future because that is yet to be ! E-mails are much less personal than LETTERS and when an elderly person on my e-mailing list passes over I always delete Just in case I may send them a copy of a group missive and embarrass the remaining partner. The moral of this is one would never write a letter to someone who was deceased. But of course their memory and influence remains. The Bible says \"We are compassed about with a great cloud of witnesses\". The greatest tragedy of \"Manchester\" was that one little GIRL was only EIGHT ~ how prematurely tragic for her dear parents ~ nothing can ever compensate for the death of a child. Sorry to be so melancholy but your poem was so so nostalgic ~ Thanks for caring ~ YOUR BRIAN
June 2nd, 2017 12:44
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