Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Full Spate.
RAJ NANDY said:
What you have poetically so well expressed, is indeed very relevant in our our Enlightened Age! Despite the advances of science with its String Theory & the Higgs Boson, we have not been able to fathom the full beauty & mysterious creation of the Lord! During the 3rd century BC it was the Greek philosopher Pythagoras who had said that the revolving planets create music in the depth of space! Thanks for sharing Fay, -Raj, New Delhi
June 7th, 2017 09:20
RAJ NANDY said:
What you have poetically so well expressed, is indeed very relevant in our our Enlightened Age! Despite the advances of science with its String Theory & the Higgs Boson, we have not been able to fathom the full beauty & mysterious creation of the Lord! During the 3rd century BC it was the Greek philosopher Pythagoras who had said that the revolving planets create music in the depth of space! Thanks for sharing Fay, -Raj, New Delhi
June 7th, 2017 09:20
Full Spate.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I never knew there was so much! I must get me coat and get out more! heehee.
June 7th, 2017 08:28
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. I never knew there was so much! I must get me coat and get out more! heehee.
June 7th, 2017 08:28
Full Spate.
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb write and you are so right about the sun getting brighter as we get towards our last breath.
June 7th, 2017 08:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb write and you are so right about the sun getting brighter as we get towards our last breath.
June 7th, 2017 08:23
Reminders.
Augustus said:
Tin and copper mines can go down pretty deep. We definitely need some recompense for laborers after they are spent.
June 6th, 2017 11:57
Augustus said:
Tin and copper mines can go down pretty deep. We definitely need some recompense for laborers after they are spent.
June 6th, 2017 11:57
Reminders.
Michael Edwards said:
I agree with Louis - great poem and last two lines still applies although with a little more subtleness these days.
June 6th, 2017 11:04
Michael Edwards said:
I agree with Louis - great poem and last two lines still applies although with a little more subtleness these days.
June 6th, 2017 11:04
Reminders.
Louis Gibbs said:
Beautiful poem, Fay, summed up nicely in the last two lines. I submit that nothing much has changed, just that the servitude has become much more subtle. Kudos on another fine one!
June 6th, 2017 10:47
Louis Gibbs said:
Beautiful poem, Fay, summed up nicely in the last two lines. I submit that nothing much has changed, just that the servitude has become much more subtle. Kudos on another fine one!
June 6th, 2017 10:47
Reminders.
RAJ NANDY said:
A poem with realism and poetic imagery, makes us aware of the sights & sound of old Cornwall! -Raj
June 6th, 2017 07:46
RAJ NANDY said:
A poem with realism and poetic imagery, makes us aware of the sights & sound of old Cornwall! -Raj
June 6th, 2017 07:46
Reminders.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write with great imagery.
They were hard times but have things changed?
June 6th, 2017 05:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write with great imagery.
They were hard times but have things changed?
June 6th, 2017 05:42
Unmatched.
RAJ NANDY said:
Loved the poem with its timeless hour glass format Fay! I had paid my tribute to the Muse of Epic Poetry when I had composed my \'Story of English Literature in Verse\' covering up to John Milton. Thanks, - Raj, 06 June, New Delhi
June 5th, 2017 23:53
RAJ NANDY said:
Loved the poem with its timeless hour glass format Fay! I had paid my tribute to the Muse of Epic Poetry when I had composed my \'Story of English Literature in Verse\' covering up to John Milton. Thanks, - Raj, 06 June, New Delhi
June 5th, 2017 23:53
Mislaid.
Michael Edwards said:
I am writing a poem where I mention speaking to the wind and heard in silence - great piece Fay.
June 5th, 2017 10:28
Michael Edwards said:
I am writing a poem where I mention speaking to the wind and heard in silence - great piece Fay.
June 5th, 2017 10:28
Mislaid.
Louis Gibbs said:
Ah, the beauty of silence! It so typically gets lost in the dance of relationships, doesn\'t it? Enjoyed it, Fay.
June 5th, 2017 08:36
Louis Gibbs said:
Ah, the beauty of silence! It so typically gets lost in the dance of relationships, doesn\'t it? Enjoyed it, Fay.
June 5th, 2017 08:36
Transformation.
MaddieJ said:
Very captivating and descirptive use of words. I love color too!!
June 4th, 2017 19:12
MaddieJ said:
Very captivating and descirptive use of words. I love color too!!
June 4th, 2017 19:12
Transformation.
P.H.Rose said:
I totally agree
Very well constructed
Well done Fay..
Lovely read..
June 4th, 2017 14:13
P.H.Rose said:
I totally agree
Very well constructed
Well done Fay..
Lovely read..
June 4th, 2017 14:13
Transformation.
Augustus said:
Intricacies of enterwoven color as only could be done by Fay. This will be favored.
If you get a chance check out Colormaster by Augustus in Feb. 2017.
June 4th, 2017 12:56
Augustus said:
Intricacies of enterwoven color as only could be done by Fay. This will be favored.
If you get a chance check out Colormaster by Augustus in Feb. 2017.
June 4th, 2017 12:56
Transformation.
Louis Gibbs said:
Methinks the lady sees that which most cannot, the world beyond illusion. Beautiful, colorful poem, Fay!
June 4th, 2017 10:11
Louis Gibbs said:
Methinks the lady sees that which most cannot, the world beyond illusion. Beautiful, colorful poem, Fay!
June 4th, 2017 10:11
Transformation.
Michael Edwards said:
If only people could unglue their eyes - I get so cross when I hear folk say they don\'t like abstracts without even thinking about them - they belong to what I call the if-it-doesn\'t-look-like-a photo-I-don\'t-like-it-brigade.
June 4th, 2017 10:05
Michael Edwards said:
If only people could unglue their eyes - I get so cross when I hear folk say they don\'t like abstracts without even thinking about them - they belong to what I call the if-it-doesn\'t-look-like-a photo-I-don\'t-like-it-brigade.
June 4th, 2017 10:05
Transformation.
kevin browne said:
beautifully constructed and I loved reading your work here. good work, Fay Slimm x
June 4th, 2017 05:41
kevin browne said:
beautifully constructed and I loved reading your work here. good work, Fay Slimm x
June 4th, 2017 05:41
Word Wisdom.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, that Muse has a great deal of wonderful ideas for us to explore.
June 4th, 2017 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, that Muse has a great deal of wonderful ideas for us to explore.
June 4th, 2017 01:03
Word Wisdom.
Augustus said:
I hope you can forgive the analogy : Willy Wonca in the intro is explaining to charley and others the mysteries behind the doors, a dream land of mystic wonder. Enjoyed.
June 3rd, 2017 14:14
Augustus said:
I hope you can forgive the analogy : Willy Wonca in the intro is explaining to charley and others the mysteries behind the doors, a dream land of mystic wonder. Enjoyed.
June 3rd, 2017 14:14
Word Wisdom.
Louis Gibbs said:
I agree that we often are sharing the wisdom of another reality in our poetry, Fay. Sometimes I am astounded at what comes through my pen. Kudos on this one!
June 3rd, 2017 12:15
Louis Gibbs said:
I agree that we often are sharing the wisdom of another reality in our poetry, Fay. Sometimes I am astounded at what comes through my pen. Kudos on this one!
June 3rd, 2017 12:15
Awayness.
Augustus said:
If I am away from my lover I am sad. You make awayness into something beautiful. At least this is what your poem says to me.
June 2nd, 2017 17:13
Augustus said:
If I am away from my lover I am sad. You make awayness into something beautiful. At least this is what your poem says to me.
June 2nd, 2017 17:13
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