Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Incoming.
Nicholas Browning said:
You\'ve got an affinity for writing about human involvement with nature. It\'s very refreshing. This put a lovely spin on a simple, (in some countries), every day occurrence. Bravo Fay.
July 11th, 2017 17:26
Nicholas Browning said:
You\'ve got an affinity for writing about human involvement with nature. It\'s very refreshing. This put a lovely spin on a simple, (in some countries), every day occurrence. Bravo Fay.
July 11th, 2017 17:26
Incoming.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ BEAUTIFUL (as always) and a perfect symbiosis of Picture & Poem. It is apparent in many of you poems that you live near enough to the SEA to taste it ~ but that is true of all Cornish Pixies ! I love the contrast in the two verses., In the first verse you are behaving prim & proper ~ Sunday best and demurely waving ! In verse two you throw caution to the Cornish winds ~ you jump in (Sunday best and all !) ~ and wade willfully into the Arms of your Lover. Your Love Poems FAY always make me weep ~ but they are Tears of Appreciation & Understanding ~ Love the Quality of your Postings ~ Love YOU ~ through poetry ~ BRIAN.
July 11th, 2017 15:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ BEAUTIFUL (as always) and a perfect symbiosis of Picture & Poem. It is apparent in many of you poems that you live near enough to the SEA to taste it ~ but that is true of all Cornish Pixies ! I love the contrast in the two verses., In the first verse you are behaving prim & proper ~ Sunday best and demurely waving ! In verse two you throw caution to the Cornish winds ~ you jump in (Sunday best and all !) ~ and wade willfully into the Arms of your Lover. Your Love Poems FAY always make me weep ~ but they are Tears of Appreciation & Understanding ~ Love the Quality of your Postings ~ Love YOU ~ through poetry ~ BRIAN.
July 11th, 2017 15:48
Incoming.
Louis Gibbs said:
Your title redefines and restores a word usually associated with the horror of war! This poem painted a picture and told a story that held me captive to the end. A real beauty, Fay, thank you.
July 11th, 2017 08:25
Louis Gibbs said:
Your title redefines and restores a word usually associated with the horror of war! This poem painted a picture and told a story that held me captive to the end. A real beauty, Fay, thank you.
July 11th, 2017 08:25
Incoming.
P.H.Rose said:
This is superb Fay..
Wonderful feel to it
I get a lovely warm
Glow reading it....
July 11th, 2017 07:17
P.H.Rose said:
This is superb Fay..
Wonderful feel to it
I get a lovely warm
Glow reading it....
July 11th, 2017 07:17
Incoming.
Poetic Dan said:
Beautiful, this is sure to help me give me kids an extra long hug when we next meet.
Thank so kindly
July 11th, 2017 03:13
Poetic Dan said:
Beautiful, this is sure to help me give me kids an extra long hug when we next meet.
Thank so kindly
July 11th, 2017 03:13
Incoming.
FredPeyer said:
What a beautiful way to describe waiting for the loved one. Living on an island I fully understand. Sadly, sometimes the wait is for nothing.
Beautiful poem again Fay. Thank you.
July 11th, 2017 02:04
FredPeyer said:
What a beautiful way to describe waiting for the loved one. Living on an island I fully understand. Sadly, sometimes the wait is for nothing.
Beautiful poem again Fay. Thank you.
July 11th, 2017 02:04
Road-Shock.
P.H.Rose said:
Very good poem Fay..
It\'s the one thing I
Hate to see on a road.
July 10th, 2017 17:40
P.H.Rose said:
Very good poem Fay..
It\'s the one thing I
Hate to see on a road.
July 10th, 2017 17:40
Road-Shock.
Michael Edwards said:
See this quite a bit round my way. Some time ago I swerved to avoid one and ended up in a ditch - a farmer came to my rescue and pulled me out with his tractor but only after berating me for aiming my car at the poor creature.
July 10th, 2017 14:04
Michael Edwards said:
See this quite a bit round my way. Some time ago I swerved to avoid one and ended up in a ditch - a farmer came to my rescue and pulled me out with his tractor but only after berating me for aiming my car at the poor creature.
July 10th, 2017 14:04
Road-Shock.
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine tribute to one of natures beautiful creations. Thanks for sharing, Fay.
July 10th, 2017 08:40
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine tribute to one of natures beautiful creations. Thanks for sharing, Fay.
July 10th, 2017 08:40
Road-Shock.
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a sad sight to see any animal run over but foxes are such beautiful animals it seems to make it more so. Good write Fay.
July 10th, 2017 07:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a sad sight to see any animal run over but foxes are such beautiful animals it seems to make it more so. Good write Fay.
July 10th, 2017 07:39
Road-Shock.
Nicholas Browning said:
Road kill isn\'t a pleasant sight. One day the tables will turn, and we\'ll all be the road kill.
July 10th, 2017 06:08
Nicholas Browning said:
Road kill isn\'t a pleasant sight. One day the tables will turn, and we\'ll all be the road kill.
July 10th, 2017 06:08
Road-Shock.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ Picture and Poem both send a SAD MESSAGE ! Just as we cause great damage (with our cars) to our species ~ there is much more damage (mainly unacknowledged) to other living creatures All living things occupy the planet and we are all interdependent and should seek to conserve not kill! The CAR alas hold a position high in the FOOD chain ~ bizarre because it FEEDS on Fossil Fuel and kills but never consumes its kill ! I love you for your empathy ~ in all things ~ Yours BRIAN
July 10th, 2017 05:16
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ Picture and Poem both send a SAD MESSAGE ! Just as we cause great damage (with our cars) to our species ~ there is much more damage (mainly unacknowledged) to other living creatures All living things occupy the planet and we are all interdependent and should seek to conserve not kill! The CAR alas hold a position high in the FOOD chain ~ bizarre because it FEEDS on Fossil Fuel and kills but never consumes its kill ! I love you for your empathy ~ in all things ~ Yours BRIAN
July 10th, 2017 05:16
Road-Shock.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, your poem opens our eyes to the sad fact of road-kill. Be it a fox, cat, dog, or bird, they all die needlessly.
Well written as always.
July 10th, 2017 04:22
FredPeyer said:
Fay, your poem opens our eyes to the sad fact of road-kill. Be it a fox, cat, dog, or bird, they all die needlessly.
Well written as always.
July 10th, 2017 04:22
Shore-Song.
Nicholas Browning said:
Very interesting portrayal of one of nature\'s aspects. Nicely done as well.
July 9th, 2017 16:14
Nicholas Browning said:
Very interesting portrayal of one of nature\'s aspects. Nicely done as well.
July 9th, 2017 16:14
Shore-Song.
Heather T said:
Sing to me all day, Ms. Fay...the song of nature\'s might in salt plumes from your pen.
July 9th, 2017 13:07
Heather T said:
Sing to me all day, Ms. Fay...the song of nature\'s might in salt plumes from your pen.
July 9th, 2017 13:07
Shore-Song.
Louis Gibbs said:
I hear the sound your poem portrays so well, Fay. I can smell the salt air. I, too, live on a shore, but mine is sand rather than rock so the sound is muted. Oh well, I still appreciate it. Thanks for this fine post!
July 9th, 2017 10:34
Louis Gibbs said:
I hear the sound your poem portrays so well, Fay. I can smell the salt air. I, too, live on a shore, but mine is sand rather than rock so the sound is muted. Oh well, I still appreciate it. Thanks for this fine post!
July 9th, 2017 10:34
Shore-Song.
onepauly said:
I find I can relate to the waves crashing for hours on you tube
July 9th, 2017 08:26
onepauly said:
I find I can relate to the waves crashing for hours on you tube
July 9th, 2017 08:26
Shore-Song.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ living near the Coast is always a Blessing ~ Even the Essex ~ Suffolk Coast ! BUT to live near the Cornish Coast (as in your picture) and implied in your Poem is Paradise ! Blessings for SUNDAY ~ BRIAN
July 9th, 2017 03:31
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ living near the Coast is always a Blessing ~ Even the Essex ~ Suffolk Coast ! BUT to live near the Cornish Coast (as in your picture) and implied in your Poem is Paradise ! Blessings for SUNDAY ~ BRIAN
July 9th, 2017 03:31
Shore-Song.
FredPeyer said:
You are saying in such a beautiful way what I experience nearly every time we go to the beach. And the picture is nice too. Thanks for another good one Fay!
July 9th, 2017 03:02
FredPeyer said:
You are saying in such a beautiful way what I experience nearly every time we go to the beach. And the picture is nice too. Thanks for another good one Fay!
July 9th, 2017 03:02
Shore-Song.
Michael Edwards said:
Hear it, smell it, experience it - this says it all in a great atmospheric write.
July 9th, 2017 02:51
Michael Edwards said:
Hear it, smell it, experience it - this says it all in a great atmospheric write.
July 9th, 2017 02:51
Unreal.
Heather T said:
I love being taken along to Fay\'s world. I feel blessed when you write. Means I can come on in and sit a spell.
July 8th, 2017 13:20
Heather T said:
I love being taken along to Fay\'s world. I feel blessed when you write. Means I can come on in and sit a spell.
July 8th, 2017 13:20
Unreal.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, this is so beautiful, don\'t know how to say it....you used up all the words! I tried to pick a favorite line or stanza and could not. The whole poem is a favorite!
July 8th, 2017 13:04
FredPeyer said:
Fay, this is so beautiful, don\'t know how to say it....you used up all the words! I tried to pick a favorite line or stanza and could not. The whole poem is a favorite!
July 8th, 2017 13:04
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