Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Not Again.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL FAY ~ but ~ in its own way ~ so so sad. The secret of your Beauty & Grace FAY is that you have NO regrets ! You also have thousands of wonderful memories which you can recall to lift your spirit in times of loneliness. Additionally your Faith assures you ~ that you will be reunited in GLORY ~ AMEN ! Yours BRIAN
July 4th, 2017 09:00
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL FAY ~ but ~ in its own way ~ so so sad. The secret of your Beauty & Grace FAY is that you have NO regrets ! You also have thousands of wonderful memories which you can recall to lift your spirit in times of loneliness. Additionally your Faith assures you ~ that you will be reunited in GLORY ~ AMEN ! Yours BRIAN
July 4th, 2017 09:00
Not Again.
Louis Gibbs said:
Yes, no pain digs deeper into our heart\'s core than losing one\'s lover, as you so eloquently express herein. Thank you for sharing this beauty, Fay.
July 4th, 2017 06:51
Louis Gibbs said:
Yes, no pain digs deeper into our heart\'s core than losing one\'s lover, as you so eloquently express herein. Thank you for sharing this beauty, Fay.
July 4th, 2017 06:51
Not Again.
FredPeyer said:
Faye,
first of all, where do you get these beautiful pictures?
Second, your poem is so well written, I read it over and over again.
July 4th, 2017 04:19
FredPeyer said:
Faye,
first of all, where do you get these beautiful pictures?
Second, your poem is so well written, I read it over and over again.
July 4th, 2017 04:19
Do Try -
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. I\'m more likely to save a spider from a bath it does not want, if I find one in me tub!
July 3rd, 2017 14:08
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. I\'m more likely to save a spider from a bath it does not want, if I find one in me tub!
July 3rd, 2017 14:08
Do Try -
Michael Edwards said:
Gives the coffee that certain Musca domestica aroma - some would pay large amounts for that - errrr - but not me.
July 3rd, 2017 07:35
Michael Edwards said:
Gives the coffee that certain Musca domestica aroma - some would pay large amounts for that - errrr - but not me.
July 3rd, 2017 07:35
Do Try -
FredPeyer said:
Fay, most people just see a fly and get rid of it. You see beauty and a story.
July 3rd, 2017 02:49
FredPeyer said:
Fay, most people just see a fly and get rid of it. You see beauty and a story.
July 3rd, 2017 02:49
Do Try -
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, but any fly who drinks my coffee stands little chance of survival.
July 3rd, 2017 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, but any fly who drinks my coffee stands little chance of survival.
July 3rd, 2017 02:44
Things Nearest.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Fay, we need to look around us much more.
July 3rd, 2017 01:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Fay, we need to look around us much more.
July 3rd, 2017 01:02
Things Nearest.
Heather T said:
I love the comment that Augustus left. We really enjoy dandelions, from their yummy greens to first bouquets gifted by sticky, chubby baby hands. A delight to read, as always.
July 2nd, 2017 19:51
Heather T said:
I love the comment that Augustus left. We really enjoy dandelions, from their yummy greens to first bouquets gifted by sticky, chubby baby hands. A delight to read, as always.
July 2nd, 2017 19:51
Things Nearest.
Augustus said:
From the Dandelion you have made a very fine wine.
July 2nd, 2017 16:58
Augustus said:
From the Dandelion you have made a very fine wine.
July 2nd, 2017 16:58
Things Nearest.
malubotelho said:
Oh! How lovely is your writing. And yes, the things close to us is what makes us happier if we can see it. Because for many people they don\'t see it. They think happiness comes only from big things but God is so incredible in creation that even the most simple flower decorates our lives so beautifully. Thanks for sharing.
July 2nd, 2017 15:18
malubotelho said:
Oh! How lovely is your writing. And yes, the things close to us is what makes us happier if we can see it. Because for many people they don\'t see it. They think happiness comes only from big things but God is so incredible in creation that even the most simple flower decorates our lives so beautifully. Thanks for sharing.
July 2nd, 2017 15:18
Things Nearest.
FredPeyer said:
Fay, people who think Dandelions are a weed should read your poem! Beautiful writing!
July 2nd, 2017 13:24
FredPeyer said:
Fay, people who think Dandelions are a weed should read your poem! Beautiful writing!
July 2nd, 2017 13:24
Things Nearest.
Michael Edwards said:
Oh bless you - a most maligned flower - they look so great in spring with their bright showy flowers. it\'s a wonder the plant breeders haven\'t developed some great garden cultivars - but they are probably having to constantly wash bed linen !!
July 2nd, 2017 06:33
Michael Edwards said:
Oh bless you - a most maligned flower - they look so great in spring with their bright showy flowers. it\'s a wonder the plant breeders haven\'t developed some great garden cultivars - but they are probably having to constantly wash bed linen !!
July 2nd, 2017 06:33
Things Nearest.
kevin browne said:
my best friend is using dandelion root extract, among others, to kills his stage 4 advanced lung cancer. this poem touched in a way you least expected. thank you x
July 2nd, 2017 04:26
kevin browne said:
my best friend is using dandelion root extract, among others, to kills his stage 4 advanced lung cancer. this poem touched in a way you least expected. thank you x
July 2nd, 2017 04:26
Day\'s Eye.
Goldfinch60 said:
I was there Fay, beautiful wriye with great imagery.
July 2nd, 2017 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
I was there Fay, beautiful wriye with great imagery.
July 2nd, 2017 00:49
Day\'s Eye.
malubotelho said:
I loved your writing about the birds. Very well written. Stunning
July 1st, 2017 18:48
malubotelho said:
I loved your writing about the birds. Very well written. Stunning
July 1st, 2017 18:48
Day\'s Eye.
Heather T said:
Smitten with your language, as always.
\"Smut-red lips of sultry sun kiss\"
Get outta here!! Just strangling every atom of beauty and dipping the quill in its residue. A stunner.
July 1st, 2017 16:07
Heather T said:
Smitten with your language, as always.
\"Smut-red lips of sultry sun kiss\"
Get outta here!! Just strangling every atom of beauty and dipping the quill in its residue. A stunner.
July 1st, 2017 16:07
Day\'s Eye.
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful poem Fay, the second stanza just blew me away. We have these incredible mornings when the sun rises over the Koolau Mountain range in the east painting the clouds from pink to dark red. The same spectacle sometimes repeats the same day when the sun disappears behind the Waianae mountains in the west.
July 1st, 2017 12:06
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful poem Fay, the second stanza just blew me away. We have these incredible mornings when the sun rises over the Koolau Mountain range in the east painting the clouds from pink to dark red. The same spectacle sometimes repeats the same day when the sun disappears behind the Waianae mountains in the west.
July 1st, 2017 12:06
Day\'s Eye.
kevin browne said:
a beautiful day\'s eye work in this stunner of a poem. it quite took my breath away. what magic.
July 1st, 2017 07:31
kevin browne said:
a beautiful day\'s eye work in this stunner of a poem. it quite took my breath away. what magic.
July 1st, 2017 07:31
Day\'s Eye.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for caring & sharing about NATURE ~ FAY Sunset ~Sunrise are all noted by the birds Their flocking and nestling at night ~ bids us rest. Their Dawn Chorus reminds us that Today really is a New Day ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN
July 1st, 2017 06:56
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for caring & sharing about NATURE ~ FAY Sunset ~Sunrise are all noted by the birds Their flocking and nestling at night ~ bids us rest. Their Dawn Chorus reminds us that Today really is a New Day ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN
July 1st, 2017 06:56
Day\'s Eye.
P.H.Rose said:
This is wonderful Fay.
Just gorgeous....
My favourite is the
Swallows... the paths
They make in the sky
Are just wonderful and
Very hypnotic...
July 1st, 2017 05:42
P.H.Rose said:
This is wonderful Fay.
Just gorgeous....
My favourite is the
Swallows... the paths
They make in the sky
Are just wonderful and
Very hypnotic...
July 1st, 2017 05:42
Day\'s Eye.
Frank Prem said:
I think you really entered into this moment Fay, and it shows. I don\'t think hanging around the edges works - if you want to write it you really need to buy into the feeling of the tale.
Well done.
July 1st, 2017 03:22
Frank Prem said:
I think you really entered into this moment Fay, and it shows. I don\'t think hanging around the edges works - if you want to write it you really need to buy into the feeling of the tale.
Well done.
July 1st, 2017 03:22
Results.
FredPeyer said:
Faye you transported me back to my childhood. I can still feel the warm frothing milk I sometimes got straight from a cow. Beautiful poem. I feel sorry for all the kids today who don\'t have a clue about where the milk really comes from.
June 30th, 2017 12:05
FredPeyer said:
Faye you transported me back to my childhood. I can still feel the warm frothing milk I sometimes got straight from a cow. Beautiful poem. I feel sorry for all the kids today who don\'t have a clue about where the milk really comes from.
June 30th, 2017 12:05
Results.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhhhhhhhhhhh FAY another wonderful DEJA VU ~ Picture and Poem ! Yours BRIAN
June 30th, 2017 11:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhhhhhhhhhhh FAY another wonderful DEJA VU ~ Picture and Poem ! Yours BRIAN
June 30th, 2017 11:47
Results.
Louis Gibbs said:
Thank you for teaching us how superbly poetry can be written, Fay. You do have a way with words!
June 30th, 2017 08:15
Louis Gibbs said:
Thank you for teaching us how superbly poetry can be written, Fay. You do have a way with words!
June 30th, 2017 08:15
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