Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Betweeness.
Louis Gibbs said:
Exquisite, beautifully structured poem, Fay. Most impressive work!
May 30th, 2017 09:03
Louis Gibbs said:
Exquisite, beautifully structured poem, Fay. Most impressive work!
May 30th, 2017 09:03
Wild Beauty..
Augustus said:
Not a brochure but I want to pick up the phone and make reservations. Nicely done.
May 29th, 2017 19:47
Augustus said:
Not a brochure but I want to pick up the phone and make reservations. Nicely done.
May 29th, 2017 19:47
Wild Beauty..
Michael Edwards said:
You\'ve captured it Fay - A super part of the world and you make me want to visit it again.
May 29th, 2017 10:26
Michael Edwards said:
You\'ve captured it Fay - A super part of the world and you make me want to visit it again.
May 29th, 2017 10:26
Wild Beauty..
orchidee said:
Ohh will my wit know no end?! Yes - go and eat humble pie, Orchi! lol.
May 29th, 2017 08:48
orchidee said:
Ohh will my wit know no end?! Yes - go and eat humble pie, Orchi! lol.
May 29th, 2017 08:48
Wild Beauty..
orchidee said:
A fine write. You can taste the ice cream in Cornwall Brian!
May 29th, 2017 08:47
orchidee said:
A fine write. You can taste the ice cream in Cornwall Brian!
May 29th, 2017 08:47
Wild Beauty..
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Beautiful FAY ~ it makes my Ice Cream Sonnet seem lacking in Flavour ! Make no excuses FAY it is as you describe it ~ CORNWALL ~ almost Heaven. That\'s why the call it \"LANDS END\" because after Cornwall ~ there is nowhere on Earth ~ more beautiful and serene to visit ! Lovely FAY ~ the Picture ~ the Poem and the Poet ! Yiours B. Please check my ICE CREAM~ Thanks B.
May 29th, 2017 07:40
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Beautiful FAY ~ it makes my Ice Cream Sonnet seem lacking in Flavour ! Make no excuses FAY it is as you describe it ~ CORNWALL ~ almost Heaven. That\'s why the call it \"LANDS END\" because after Cornwall ~ there is nowhere on Earth ~ more beautiful and serene to visit ! Lovely FAY ~ the Picture ~ the Poem and the Poet ! Yiours B. Please check my ICE CREAM~ Thanks B.
May 29th, 2017 07:40
Catching the Drift.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, music can be heard form many different things and it can always be beautiful and inspiring.
May 27th, 2017 00:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, music can be heard form many different things and it can always be beautiful and inspiring.
May 27th, 2017 00:10
Catching the Drift.
P.H.Rose said:
The sound of a breeze
Flowing through metal
Beautiful
May 26th, 2017 18:37
P.H.Rose said:
The sound of a breeze
Flowing through metal
Beautiful
May 26th, 2017 18:37
Catching the Drift.
kevin browne said:
a breezy perfection in writing about it. nice one Fay Slimm.
May 26th, 2017 13:25
kevin browne said:
a breezy perfection in writing about it. nice one Fay Slimm.
May 26th, 2017 13:25
Catching the Drift.
Augustus said:
You keep coming up with these beautiful descriptive poems illuminating what is out there for all of us to see, but not in the same way. You have a much keener perception and it is as if your mind body dissolves into fine particles able to penetrate the surrounding scenery absorbing its beauty, then on reconstitution, you are imbued with magical elucidating powers.
May 26th, 2017 13:13
Augustus said:
You keep coming up with these beautiful descriptive poems illuminating what is out there for all of us to see, but not in the same way. You have a much keener perception and it is as if your mind body dissolves into fine particles able to penetrate the surrounding scenery absorbing its beauty, then on reconstitution, you are imbued with magical elucidating powers.
May 26th, 2017 13:13
Love\'s Glow.
Michael Edwards said:
Erotic comes more slowly these days but certainly sensuous - great write fay.
May 25th, 2017 12:53
Michael Edwards said:
Erotic comes more slowly these days but certainly sensuous - great write fay.
May 25th, 2017 12:53
Love\'s Glow.
Augustus said:
Is it just me that I get sensual erotic after perhaps a long fast. As I read this it takes my breath away.
May 25th, 2017 12:15
Augustus said:
Is it just me that I get sensual erotic after perhaps a long fast. As I read this it takes my breath away.
May 25th, 2017 12:15
Unmatched.
orchidee said:
I may not have got the \'sense\' of this poem. Maybe something too profound for me! Yet some things can be too deep for words. Just \'being there\' can be enough at times.
That\'s my comment on this. Hmmm.
May 25th, 2017 02:57
orchidee said:
I may not have got the \'sense\' of this poem. Maybe something too profound for me! Yet some things can be too deep for words. Just \'being there\' can be enough at times.
That\'s my comment on this. Hmmm.
May 25th, 2017 02:57
Unmatched.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write.
\"Meanwhile a poetic dreamer reveals
his penchant for embroidering
that which cannot be sewn, \"
Wonderfully poetic words.
Thank you Fay.
May 25th, 2017 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write.
\"Meanwhile a poetic dreamer reveals
his penchant for embroidering
that which cannot be sewn, \"
Wonderfully poetic words.
Thank you Fay.
May 25th, 2017 01:45
Unmatched.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Well FAY ~ let me say first of all how much I love your HOUR GLASS FIGURE ~ Form poems are not created on a whim ! All poetry enhances and does allow us (and hopefully our Readers) to slip outside reality. In a sense the absurdity of this poem ~ from so respected a poet ~ has reminded me that my last two poems have been too noir and too self~indulgent ! I have already promised CS that tomorrow\'s will strike a lighter note and will not be about MANCHESTER and the atrocity. So in its own sweet way your HGF Ode has re-ignited my m(f)use ! Thanks ~ Yours BRIAN
May 24th, 2017 14:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Well FAY ~ let me say first of all how much I love your HOUR GLASS FIGURE ~ Form poems are not created on a whim ! All poetry enhances and does allow us (and hopefully our Readers) to slip outside reality. In a sense the absurdity of this poem ~ from so respected a poet ~ has reminded me that my last two poems have been too noir and too self~indulgent ! I have already promised CS that tomorrow\'s will strike a lighter note and will not be about MANCHESTER and the atrocity. So in its own sweet way your HGF Ode has re-ignited my m(f)use ! Thanks ~ Yours BRIAN
May 24th, 2017 14:27
Watery Secrets.
whisperingquill said:
This is egnimatic and serene potently effective splendid write
May 24th, 2017 08:17
whisperingquill said:
This is egnimatic and serene potently effective splendid write
May 24th, 2017 08:17
Watery Secrets.
WriteBeLight said:
So beautiful, once again dear poet friend Fay!
May 23rd, 2017 13:24
WriteBeLight said:
So beautiful, once again dear poet friend Fay!
May 23rd, 2017 13:24
Watery Secrets.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ this is an amazing poem musing on the murmurings of the Stream. The birds and other animals (who are totally dependent on the stream !) catch whispers of their forbears in its ripples ! These sounds we ignore when we could learn so so much of our progenitors ~ who too depended on the stream for its life giving waters and fish and watercress etc ~ than perhaps we do ! I visit Friends in rural Mexico who get their water directly from the stream through a pipe. We always boil it of course ! Carmelita & Her Family will resonate with your poem ~ Her family have relied on that stream for generations ! Yours B.
May 23rd, 2017 10:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ this is an amazing poem musing on the murmurings of the Stream. The birds and other animals (who are totally dependent on the stream !) catch whispers of their forbears in its ripples ! These sounds we ignore when we could learn so so much of our progenitors ~ who too depended on the stream for its life giving waters and fish and watercress etc ~ than perhaps we do ! I visit Friends in rural Mexico who get their water directly from the stream through a pipe. We always boil it of course ! Carmelita & Her Family will resonate with your poem ~ Her family have relied on that stream for generations ! Yours B.
May 23rd, 2017 10:48
After Today.
Augustus said:
Recently I have challenged myself to smile at least 50%% of the time. Helps. Kudos
May 22nd, 2017 22:20
Augustus said:
Recently I have challenged myself to smile at least 50%% of the time. Helps. Kudos
May 22nd, 2017 22:20
After Today.
Michael Edwards said:
It is indeed elegant and what a great title repeated so expertly in the verses.
May 22nd, 2017 09:38
Michael Edwards said:
It is indeed elegant and what a great title repeated so expertly in the verses.
May 22nd, 2017 09:38
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