Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Underprized.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for caring and sharing about \"The Love of God\" especially at EASTER ! God\'s Love is AGAPE LOVE ~ It is unconditional and everlasting and freely available to all who reach out to him ! God Loved us so so much that he gave ~ the most precious thing He had to redeem us ~ JESUS ~ his blessed Son ~ AMEN Yours B.
April 15th, 2017 14:45
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for caring and sharing about \"The Love of God\" especially at EASTER ! God\'s Love is AGAPE LOVE ~ It is unconditional and everlasting and freely available to all who reach out to him ! God Loved us so so much that he gave ~ the most precious thing He had to redeem us ~ JESUS ~ his blessed Son ~ AMEN Yours B.
April 15th, 2017 14:45
Underprized.
orchidee said:
A fine write. I forgot the earthquake sometimes at Easter - Matthew\'s Gospel. Dramatic! Maybe that\'s how the stone did get rolled away. God working through \'natural\' means. But a deep and thoughtful write.
April 15th, 2017 06:31
orchidee said:
A fine write. I forgot the earthquake sometimes at Easter - Matthew\'s Gospel. Dramatic! Maybe that\'s how the stone did get rolled away. God working through \'natural\' means. But a deep and thoughtful write.
April 15th, 2017 06:31
Unsung Whispers.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Fay. Silence can be wonderful and can speak to us in many ways, if only we would listen.
April 15th, 2017 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Fay. Silence can be wonderful and can speak to us in many ways, if only we would listen.
April 15th, 2017 00:23
Unsung Whispers.
MendedFences27 said:
I think as writers we have more of an affinity for quiet than most. To me, the silence brings a clarity not otherwise attainable. The noise of living perhaps can bring inspiration, but only silence can release the muse. Well I think I\'ll be quiet now. Nice poem. - Phil A.
April 14th, 2017 21:11
MendedFences27 said:
I think as writers we have more of an affinity for quiet than most. To me, the silence brings a clarity not otherwise attainable. The noise of living perhaps can bring inspiration, but only silence can release the muse. Well I think I\'ll be quiet now. Nice poem. - Phil A.
April 14th, 2017 21:11
Unsung Whispers.
Pintu Mahakul said:
I love silence. I love whisper of silence. I understand silence and language of silence as language of God. Silence embraces us to guide in stillness. Beauty waiting behind sound welcomes us. With lightening days composing calmness and feeling we feel stress goes out. An outstanding poem is shared with great imagery.
April 14th, 2017 15:49
Pintu Mahakul said:
I love silence. I love whisper of silence. I understand silence and language of silence as language of God. Silence embraces us to guide in stillness. Beauty waiting behind sound welcomes us. With lightening days composing calmness and feeling we feel stress goes out. An outstanding poem is shared with great imagery.
April 14th, 2017 15:49
Unsung Whispers.
Garry said:
Very good. More examples of the silence that can say so much.
April 14th, 2017 09:24
Garry said:
Very good. More examples of the silence that can say so much.
April 14th, 2017 09:24
Unsung Whispers.
Michael Edwards said:
I read it in silence - and what a good read it is.
April 14th, 2017 06:38
Michael Edwards said:
I read it in silence - and what a good read it is.
April 14th, 2017 06:38
Unsung Whispers.
WriteBeLight said:
Such a wonderful tribute to silence, one of my most favorite things. Thanks Fay! Shhhhhh :)
April 14th, 2017 05:29
WriteBeLight said:
Such a wonderful tribute to silence, one of my most favorite things. Thanks Fay! Shhhhhh :)
April 14th, 2017 05:29
Wake-Up Call.
P.H.Rose said:
This is very good Fay
I can see everything
And your new pic
Is lovely, the one of
You not the dog....
April 13th, 2017 17:52
P.H.Rose said:
This is very good Fay
I can see everything
And your new pic
Is lovely, the one of
You not the dog....
April 13th, 2017 17:52
Wake-Up Call.
Philip said:
Lovely poem. We are a cat family although our cat is to coool to come and wake us up he waits for us to come to him Phil.G
April 13th, 2017 09:28
Philip said:
Lovely poem. We are a cat family although our cat is to coool to come and wake us up he waits for us to come to him Phil.G
April 13th, 2017 09:28
Wake-Up Call.
WriteBeLight said:
Cats are like that, but very comforting creatures and a lot less trouble :)
April 13th, 2017 06:26
WriteBeLight said:
Cats are like that, but very comforting creatures and a lot less trouble :)
April 13th, 2017 06:26
Wake-Up Call.
Michael Edwards said:
Afraid I have no love for cats but do love dogs so - yes - I can appreciate the poem - which is another corker Fay
April 13th, 2017 05:40
Michael Edwards said:
Afraid I have no love for cats but do love dogs so - yes - I can appreciate the poem - which is another corker Fay
April 13th, 2017 05:40
Wonderment.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Sea-foam skittered sand
on bare wet toes and in this twilight I discover nice imagery that expresses emotion and feelings. Piercing a rave in to infinity amazes mind. Again this is a very thoughtful poem shared here.
April 13th, 2017 05:32
Pintu Mahakul said:
Sea-foam skittered sand
on bare wet toes and in this twilight I discover nice imagery that expresses emotion and feelings. Piercing a rave in to infinity amazes mind. Again this is a very thoughtful poem shared here.
April 13th, 2017 05:32
Who I Am.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Muzzled soul will unravel slowly everything here. Asking self that who am I and realizing self is interesting really. Liberation-discharge has a loud call. Very thoughtful poem is shared here.
April 13th, 2017 05:24
Pintu Mahakul said:
Muzzled soul will unravel slowly everything here. Asking self that who am I and realizing self is interesting really. Liberation-discharge has a loud call. Very thoughtful poem is shared here.
April 13th, 2017 05:24
Whale-Play.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Gigantic leviathan tied to girth circled. Wonderful imagery was drawn in to mind. The whale severed the sea-surface and this scribbled mind of reader. We had been hailed. This timing was entirely thrilled.
April 13th, 2017 05:18
Pintu Mahakul said:
Gigantic leviathan tied to girth circled. Wonderful imagery was drawn in to mind. The whale severed the sea-surface and this scribbled mind of reader. We had been hailed. This timing was entirely thrilled.
April 13th, 2017 05:18
Would We ?
Pintu Mahakul said:
May came as fresh month. Morning came as fresh carrying passage of time. Each moment came as life\'s thrilling expression. Carriage passed and she waved to the crowd.For every act solutions were searched. For grasping peace there was desire. No one did seek for revenge. Wonderful poem is shared with wise expression.
April 13th, 2017 05:16
Pintu Mahakul said:
May came as fresh month. Morning came as fresh carrying passage of time. Each moment came as life\'s thrilling expression. Carriage passed and she waved to the crowd.For every act solutions were searched. For grasping peace there was desire. No one did seek for revenge. Wonderful poem is shared with wise expression.
April 13th, 2017 05:16
Victorious.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Love arranges feelings and love pours emotion in to expressive vision. Love never loses. Ever love shines with bliss. An interesting poem is shared here.
April 13th, 2017 04:49
Pintu Mahakul said:
Love arranges feelings and love pours emotion in to expressive vision. Love never loses. Ever love shines with bliss. An interesting poem is shared here.
April 13th, 2017 04:49
We Deserve It.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Beautiful rhyme poem shared. We need to decorate life and style. We need to decorate mind with wisdom. Yes, we deserve to look good from inside and as well as from outside. We deserve for shiny hearts. We ever feel great with freedom. An excellent poem is shared.
April 13th, 2017 04:47
Pintu Mahakul said:
Beautiful rhyme poem shared. We need to decorate life and style. We need to decorate mind with wisdom. Yes, we deserve to look good from inside and as well as from outside. We deserve for shiny hearts. We ever feel great with freedom. An excellent poem is shared.
April 13th, 2017 04:47
Tribal Organisation.
Pintu Mahakul said:
This is a great imagery drawn through fine expression of this poem. A great master piece of work you have shared here. The fable clearly indicates about first 3 and then about rest 5 and rest all. Invisible at the back of the line, but protective at the first of the site this row is. Yes, at front elderly belong. Very thoughtful poem is shared.
April 13th, 2017 04:44
Pintu Mahakul said:
This is a great imagery drawn through fine expression of this poem. A great master piece of work you have shared here. The fable clearly indicates about first 3 and then about rest 5 and rest all. Invisible at the back of the line, but protective at the first of the site this row is. Yes, at front elderly belong. Very thoughtful poem is shared.
April 13th, 2017 04:44
Wake-Up Call.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Breath is felt well with warmness alongside of love and affection. Sensuous dreams in untidy way cover emotion. Pets never sleep. We hear their calls. They call us to wake up. An amazing poem is nicely crafted and shared.
April 13th, 2017 04:41
Pintu Mahakul said:
Breath is felt well with warmness alongside of love and affection. Sensuous dreams in untidy way cover emotion. Pets never sleep. We hear their calls. They call us to wake up. An amazing poem is nicely crafted and shared.
April 13th, 2017 04:41
Tribal Organisation.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Love the wisdom and organisation in this poem which is a tribute to Our Senior Citizens ! Unfortunately they tend to be shuffled into corner ~ silenced and for gotten about ! In our Democracy you sometimes get a lot more sense from the House of Lords than you do from the back-biting Commons. Next time we have ramble on the Church Weekend ~ I will ask the AOP\'s to lead and not the Teens ~ good advice. Thanks also for the visual ~ which beautifully illustrates the poem ~ now that I have read ~ marked and inwardly digested it ! Thanks for caring & sharing another gem ~ this time by another hand ! Yours B.
April 12th, 2017 15:54
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Love the wisdom and organisation in this poem which is a tribute to Our Senior Citizens ! Unfortunately they tend to be shuffled into corner ~ silenced and for gotten about ! In our Democracy you sometimes get a lot more sense from the House of Lords than you do from the back-biting Commons. Next time we have ramble on the Church Weekend ~ I will ask the AOP\'s to lead and not the Teens ~ good advice. Thanks also for the visual ~ which beautifully illustrates the poem ~ now that I have read ~ marked and inwardly digested it ! Thanks for caring & sharing another gem ~ this time by another hand ! Yours B.
April 12th, 2017 15:54
Tribal Organisation.
P.H.Rose said:
Simply amazing
Beautiful Fay..
Well done..
April 12th, 2017 15:51
P.H.Rose said:
Simply amazing
Beautiful Fay..
Well done..
April 12th, 2017 15:51
Tribal Organisation.
MendedFences27 said:
Learned a lot from this one. It\'s almost human like. Our leaders tend to be older, our warriors much younger and stronger, every one else is in the middle. Thanks for sharing Fay. - Phil A.
April 12th, 2017 11:48
MendedFences27 said:
Learned a lot from this one. It\'s almost human like. Our leaders tend to be older, our warriors much younger and stronger, every one else is in the middle. Thanks for sharing Fay. - Phil A.
April 12th, 2017 11:48
Tribal Organisation.
Michael Edwards said:
A great piece = well written and informative. I can understand why you have not declared the author but I remain quite perplexed why there are not more poets on this who use their real name. Aren\'t they proud of their work I ask myself.
April 12th, 2017 05:51
Michael Edwards said:
A great piece = well written and informative. I can understand why you have not declared the author but I remain quite perplexed why there are not more poets on this who use their real name. Aren\'t they proud of their work I ask myself.
April 12th, 2017 05:51
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