Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Treasured.
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Sublime elegant wording here, poetically rendered wow. I tink I have read u before. Kudos for this word art expressions.
U r most welcome to review my latest poem too. Pleeez do. I
April 26th, 2017 01:36
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Sublime elegant wording here, poetically rendered wow. I tink I have read u before. Kudos for this word art expressions.
U r most welcome to review my latest poem too. Pleeez do. I
April 26th, 2017 01:36
Scaled.
MendedFences27 said:
Love can scale to the highest height, overcome any barrier, physical or otherwise. Separated lovers will always find the way back together. And lovers can be made of the strangest pairs. Myths have been written, castles have fallen, wars have been fought over love torn apart. Some intense sentiment here, very skillfully worded, abundant meanings, and a message from the heart. Great write. Loved it. - Phil A.
April 24th, 2017 20:08
MendedFences27 said:
Love can scale to the highest height, overcome any barrier, physical or otherwise. Separated lovers will always find the way back together. And lovers can be made of the strangest pairs. Myths have been written, castles have fallen, wars have been fought over love torn apart. Some intense sentiment here, very skillfully worded, abundant meanings, and a message from the heart. Great write. Loved it. - Phil A.
April 24th, 2017 20:08
Scaled.
WriteBeLight said:
Very true Fay. It has gotten some in trouble, as History has shown. Great poem.
April 24th, 2017 11:42
WriteBeLight said:
Very true Fay. It has gotten some in trouble, as History has shown. Great poem.
April 24th, 2017 11:42
Naked Heart.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Sleep can hide many ills unfortunately they do not always go away on waking.
April 24th, 2017 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Sleep can hide many ills unfortunately they do not always go away on waking.
April 24th, 2017 00:39
Counting Sheep.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks you FAY ~ perfect picture to complement an elegant poem ! The Sheep Farmer\'s life in the Lakeland Fells ~ and in the West Country ~ is a hard but rewarding one ! The reward is not financial ~ but the bleat of Newborn Lambs at 5am. In the Sight of GOD being a Hedge Layer is infinitely more important (and spiritually rewarding) than being a Hedge Funder ~ AMEN Thanks for caring ~ Yours B.
April 22nd, 2017 14:41
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks you FAY ~ perfect picture to complement an elegant poem ! The Sheep Farmer\'s life in the Lakeland Fells ~ and in the West Country ~ is a hard but rewarding one ! The reward is not financial ~ but the bleat of Newborn Lambs at 5am. In the Sight of GOD being a Hedge Layer is infinitely more important (and spiritually rewarding) than being a Hedge Funder ~ AMEN Thanks for caring ~ Yours B.
April 22nd, 2017 14:41
Counting Sheep.
Michael Edwards said:
What do sheep count when they can\'t get to sleep? And I love lamb especially in one of my wife\'s curries
April 22nd, 2017 12:12
Michael Edwards said:
What do sheep count when they can\'t get to sleep? And I love lamb especially in one of my wife\'s curries
April 22nd, 2017 12:12
Counting Sheep.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, yes it not just the men that work now, all the family must get involved.
April 22nd, 2017 06:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, yes it not just the men that work now, all the family must get involved.
April 22nd, 2017 06:38
Small Beginnings.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for caring & sharing FAY ~ the uniqueness and rural beauty of DEVON percolates this gem. Your absence of verse is more than compensated by your strict adherence to metre ! For me a poem must have at least rhyme or rhythm. However it is the subject of the Poem that is ultimately of prime importance, I agree with LAMAR that the elegance of your similes between the \"beauty of flowers\" and the \"joy of morning\" are what makes this poem (and the complementary art) very special. Lovely to read ~ even more lovely to recite ~ Thanks B.
April 21st, 2017 15:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for caring & sharing FAY ~ the uniqueness and rural beauty of DEVON percolates this gem. Your absence of verse is more than compensated by your strict adherence to metre ! For me a poem must have at least rhyme or rhythm. However it is the subject of the Poem that is ultimately of prime importance, I agree with LAMAR that the elegance of your similes between the \"beauty of flowers\" and the \"joy of morning\" are what makes this poem (and the complementary art) very special. Lovely to read ~ even more lovely to recite ~ Thanks B.
April 21st, 2017 15:42
Small Beginnings.
Michael Edwards said:
Not so keen on the Raphaelites myself but still recognise the skill in his paintings. Keen on your poetry though and also recognise the skill in your work.
April 21st, 2017 10:15
Michael Edwards said:
Not so keen on the Raphaelites myself but still recognise the skill in his paintings. Keen on your poetry though and also recognise the skill in your work.
April 21st, 2017 10:15
Small Beginnings.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. Love the picture by William Holman Hunt, possibly my favourite artist.
April 21st, 2017 08:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. Love the picture by William Holman Hunt, possibly my favourite artist.
April 21st, 2017 08:08
Small Beginnings.
official1sp said:
Your similes of jewels and a morning in Spring are amazing. I can sense the Winter fading as orchards blossom and gardens bloom.
April 21st, 2017 06:41
official1sp said:
Your similes of jewels and a morning in Spring are amazing. I can sense the Winter fading as orchards blossom and gardens bloom.
April 21st, 2017 06:41
Smitten.
MendedFences27 said:
Bitten by the Dove of Love? So, someone has to ask the question, might as well be you. Why is it so difficult for humans to speak on this subject? We have mouths and tongues for communication, but in love they become almost useless. Great poem Fay, loved it. - Phil A.
April 20th, 2017 20:38
MendedFences27 said:
Bitten by the Dove of Love? So, someone has to ask the question, might as well be you. Why is it so difficult for humans to speak on this subject? We have mouths and tongues for communication, but in love they become almost useless. Great poem Fay, loved it. - Phil A.
April 20th, 2017 20:38
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