Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Burgeoning.
Michael Edwards said:
Full of optimism with some great lines - especially like the last line.
March 30th, 2017 06:12
Michael Edwards said:
Full of optimism with some great lines - especially like the last line.
March 30th, 2017 06:12
Changing.
willyweed said:
kind of made me hungry, very interesting take on the weather! storm clouds approaching?
March 29th, 2017 07:54
willyweed said:
kind of made me hungry, very interesting take on the weather! storm clouds approaching?
March 29th, 2017 07:54
After A Sip.
orchidee said:
No please! It\'s me joking! let\'s not have a deep theological / philosophical / whatever discussion on it!
March 28th, 2017 08:54
orchidee said:
No please! It\'s me joking! let\'s not have a deep theological / philosophical / whatever discussion on it!
March 28th, 2017 08:54
After A Sip.
orchidee said:
Good write. I\'m permanent of course. Well, I keep saying I\'m millions of years old! I wish I would shut up sometimes! heehee.
March 28th, 2017 08:53
orchidee said:
Good write. I\'m permanent of course. Well, I keep saying I\'m millions of years old! I wish I would shut up sometimes! heehee.
March 28th, 2017 08:53
After A Sip.
Michael Edwards said:
Dipping toes into the moment - great words in a great poem.
March 28th, 2017 07:27
Michael Edwards said:
Dipping toes into the moment - great words in a great poem.
March 28th, 2017 07:27
After A Sip.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another well penned and enigmatic poem ~ to start a busy day ! The time between dawn and day is always uncertain ~ but with the Sun comes thoughts of love & liberty ! My poem today explores the Solar System with HAIKU ~ enjoy ~ Yours B
March 28th, 2017 05:52
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another well penned and enigmatic poem ~ to start a busy day ! The time between dawn and day is always uncertain ~ but with the Sun comes thoughts of love & liberty ! My poem today explores the Solar System with HAIKU ~ enjoy ~ Yours B
March 28th, 2017 05:52
Bubble Magic.
Michael Edwards said:
Catches the magic of bubbles with you usual superb descriptive verse
March 27th, 2017 12:54
Michael Edwards said:
Catches the magic of bubbles with you usual superb descriptive verse
March 27th, 2017 12:54
Bubble Magic.
ron parrish aka wordman said:
on the mind of your inner girl,,great write fay,loved the image
March 27th, 2017 10:06
ron parrish aka wordman said:
on the mind of your inner girl,,great write fay,loved the image
March 27th, 2017 10:06
Difference.
MendedFences27 said:
Diversity is what makes life worth living. It is God\'s artwork. No two humans the same. the breadth of colors and shapes in Nature that stimulate the eye, and Man\'s multitude of creations that we call art, all add to and give reason for living. A lovely poem, Fay, that captures and expounds on that glory of \"Difference.\" - Phil A.
March 26th, 2017 19:25
MendedFences27 said:
Diversity is what makes life worth living. It is God\'s artwork. No two humans the same. the breadth of colors and shapes in Nature that stimulate the eye, and Man\'s multitude of creations that we call art, all add to and give reason for living. A lovely poem, Fay, that captures and expounds on that glory of \"Difference.\" - Phil A.
March 26th, 2017 19:25
Difference.
Augustus said:
We are so blessed to have such a retinal display. Great!
March 26th, 2017 15:36
Augustus said:
We are so blessed to have such a retinal display. Great!
March 26th, 2017 15:36
Difference.
Philip said:
A lovely colourful poem Fay. The spring light adds colour to everything. Phil.G
March 26th, 2017 03:58
Philip said:
A lovely colourful poem Fay. The spring light adds colour to everything. Phil.G
March 26th, 2017 03:58
Difference.
Michael Edwards said:
Ah yes Fay - loved this and just off to the studio to get out my paints...can\'t say more.
March 26th, 2017 03:09
Michael Edwards said:
Ah yes Fay - loved this and just off to the studio to get out my paints...can\'t say more.
March 26th, 2017 03:09
Beyond Ahead.
Christina8 said:
Really great poem. I enjoyed reading! What the future holds only God knows, but you did a fine job in writing about it!
March 25th, 2017 13:10
Christina8 said:
Really great poem. I enjoyed reading! What the future holds only God knows, but you did a fine job in writing about it!
March 25th, 2017 13:10
Beyond Ahead.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ None of really knows what the future hold ! HOWEVER I do know who holds the future and I happily leave it in GOD\'s hands ~ AMEN ~ Yours B
March 25th, 2017 10:24
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ None of really knows what the future hold ! HOWEVER I do know who holds the future and I happily leave it in GOD\'s hands ~ AMEN ~ Yours B
March 25th, 2017 10:24
Survival.
Garry said:
The urge to survive is strong within everything. One of the founders of modern couselling, Carl Rogers, had a lot to say about this. He would have apprecited the sentiments of the poem and also the quality of the writing that expressed them. I certainly did.
March 23rd, 2017 17:43
Garry said:
The urge to survive is strong within everything. One of the founders of modern couselling, Carl Rogers, had a lot to say about this. He would have apprecited the sentiments of the poem and also the quality of the writing that expressed them. I certainly did.
March 23rd, 2017 17:43
Survival.
MendedFences27 said:
The spirit of trees is amazing. I have a tree that started growing out from a rocky ledge. Growing in a rock. Now, 45 years later, it\'s still there, still growing, a lovely Maple. Withstood blizzards, huge amounts of snow and ice, high winds, and occasional droughts. There must be something we can learn from them. A great write, Fay. - Phil A.
March 23rd, 2017 16:46
MendedFences27 said:
The spirit of trees is amazing. I have a tree that started growing out from a rocky ledge. Growing in a rock. Now, 45 years later, it\'s still there, still growing, a lovely Maple. Withstood blizzards, huge amounts of snow and ice, high winds, and occasional droughts. There must be something we can learn from them. A great write, Fay. - Phil A.
March 23rd, 2017 16:46
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