Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Who I Am.
MendedFences27 said:
Sounds like a Declaration of Independence. Hope it all works out for you. Why not celebrate our own existence? Freedom is the most precious and precarious thing on Earth. Enjoy! - Phil A.
April 7th, 2017 20:18
MendedFences27 said:
Sounds like a Declaration of Independence. Hope it all works out for you. Why not celebrate our own existence? Freedom is the most precious and precarious thing on Earth. Enjoy! - Phil A.
April 7th, 2017 20:18
Who I Am.
Michael Edwards said:
Where do you keep finding this fabulous poetic language - super stuff Fay.
April 7th, 2017 15:33
Michael Edwards said:
Where do you keep finding this fabulous poetic language - super stuff Fay.
April 7th, 2017 15:33
Who I Am.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Excellent advice and attitude FAY ~ thanks for caring ~ and sharing. In each of our lives (as we mature !) we all face losses and disappointments some minor and some life changing. So at some level we can all empathise with each other ~ that is a blessing of MPS. Your final verse is an example (and a challenge) to each of us FAY ! To pick ourselves up ~ dust ourselves down ~ and start all over again. You are inspirational both in you poetry and example ! Yours BRIAN
April 7th, 2017 10:45
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Excellent advice and attitude FAY ~ thanks for caring ~ and sharing. In each of our lives (as we mature !) we all face losses and disappointments some minor and some life changing. So at some level we can all empathise with each other ~ that is a blessing of MPS. Your final verse is an example (and a challenge) to each of us FAY ! To pick ourselves up ~ dust ourselves down ~ and start all over again. You are inspirational both in you poetry and example ! Yours BRIAN
April 7th, 2017 10:45
Wonderment.
MendedFences27 said:
Thanks for the translation. I needed that .A sultry and sensuous presentation of a momentary indulgence by two lovers. What is there about the sea that inspires romance? Beautiful poem. - Phil A.
April 6th, 2017 19:18
MendedFences27 said:
Thanks for the translation. I needed that .A sultry and sensuous presentation of a momentary indulgence by two lovers. What is there about the sea that inspires romance? Beautiful poem. - Phil A.
April 6th, 2017 19:18
Wonderment.
P.H.Rose said:
This is really very good Fay
I could actually see what you
Were describing....
As in a film, one of those
Old black and white movies
April 6th, 2017 17:57
P.H.Rose said:
This is really very good Fay
I could actually see what you
Were describing....
As in a film, one of those
Old black and white movies
April 6th, 2017 17:57
Wonderment.
Michael Edwards said:
Yup - just read it again and it was worth returning to - great write.
April 6th, 2017 08:39
Michael Edwards said:
Yup - just read it again and it was worth returning to - great write.
April 6th, 2017 08:39
Wonderment.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing and caring FAY ~ a little West Country dialect adds piquancy to a poem and (as in Rabbie Burns !) facilitates rhyme. Thanks for glossary ! One question ~ was it imagination or stirred sub~consciousness ? Yours B.
April 6th, 2017 05:49
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing and caring FAY ~ a little West Country dialect adds piquancy to a poem and (as in Rabbie Burns !) facilitates rhyme. Thanks for glossary ! One question ~ was it imagination or stirred sub~consciousness ? Yours B.
April 6th, 2017 05:49
Wonderment.
orchidee said:
Oops when I \'translate\' this I feel a swoon coming on! heehee.
April 6th, 2017 03:27
orchidee said:
Oops when I \'translate\' this I feel a swoon coming on! heehee.
April 6th, 2017 03:27
Wonderment.
Michael Edwards said:
Just read this quickly but my wife is waiting to go shopping so will read again later - looks pretty darn good on first reading.
April 6th, 2017 02:48
Michael Edwards said:
Just read this quickly but my wife is waiting to go shopping so will read again later - looks pretty darn good on first reading.
April 6th, 2017 02:48
Winnow The Wind.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR SHARING FAY ~ As we grow older we begin to experience some of the extremes of love ~ but we never fully understand them. Love grows and love wilts ~ but we never (fully) understand WHY. I have learned to enjoy it while it lasts ~ but not to suffocate (in misery) when it dies ~ but to learn positives from the experience ~ and move on as gracefully and gratefully as possible ! Yours B.
April 5th, 2017 16:21
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR SHARING FAY ~ As we grow older we begin to experience some of the extremes of love ~ but we never fully understand them. Love grows and love wilts ~ but we never (fully) understand WHY. I have learned to enjoy it while it lasts ~ but not to suffocate (in misery) when it dies ~ but to learn positives from the experience ~ and move on as gracefully and gratefully as possible ! Yours B.
April 5th, 2017 16:21
Winnow The Wind.
Michael Edwards said:
A great read fay with some really great lines.
April 5th, 2017 15:37
Michael Edwards said:
A great read fay with some really great lines.
April 5th, 2017 15:37
Winnow The Wind.
P.H.Rose said:
Very very good Fay
I like the\" taste of
Ruby red wine\"
I have a poem
About memory
From youth, it has
The line, \"memory
Flows as I take a
Sip Of blood red wine\"
April 5th, 2017 14:02
P.H.Rose said:
Very very good Fay
I like the\" taste of
Ruby red wine\"
I have a poem
About memory
From youth, it has
The line, \"memory
Flows as I take a
Sip Of blood red wine\"
April 5th, 2017 14:02
Winnow The Wind.
kevin browne said:
beautifully written. such a gorgeous tone to this poem that it makes me feel to be the lost gold for you. a perfect poem of love.
April 5th, 2017 08:15
kevin browne said:
beautifully written. such a gorgeous tone to this poem that it makes me feel to be the lost gold for you. a perfect poem of love.
April 5th, 2017 08:15
Yellowness.
Christina8 said:
Stunning pic to go with your well written poem. Absolutely loved reading it. Spring is just coming to where I live. Great job!
April 4th, 2017 13:51
Christina8 said:
Stunning pic to go with your well written poem. Absolutely loved reading it. Spring is just coming to where I live. Great job!
April 4th, 2017 13:51
Yellowness.
Michael Edwards said:
Ah what a lovely poem for a great flower. I currently have large trumpets, jonquils, split coronas, doubles, pink trumpeted, and miniature species all in bloom but they are about to go over now - but there is so much to follow and look forward to.
April 4th, 2017 13:44
Michael Edwards said:
Ah what a lovely poem for a great flower. I currently have large trumpets, jonquils, split coronas, doubles, pink trumpeted, and miniature species all in bloom but they are about to go over now - but there is so much to follow and look forward to.
April 4th, 2017 13:44
Yellowness.
Philip said:
Fantastic, expressive poem. I can see the daffodils so clearly in my mind. Phil.G.
April 4th, 2017 12:06
Philip said:
Fantastic, expressive poem. I can see the daffodils so clearly in my mind. Phil.G.
April 4th, 2017 12:06
Yellowness.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write. May you float in Spring as you do in these words.
April 4th, 2017 08:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write. May you float in Spring as you do in these words.
April 4th, 2017 08:14
Yellowness.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Nothing stirs the muse quite like a \"Host of Golden Daffodils\" Thanks for caring and sharing. My poem (and Fusion) today is about the equally beautiful NORTHERN RED CARDINAL ~ Yours B
April 4th, 2017 07:45
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Nothing stirs the muse quite like a \"Host of Golden Daffodils\" Thanks for caring and sharing. My poem (and Fusion) today is about the equally beautiful NORTHERN RED CARDINAL ~ Yours B
April 4th, 2017 07:45
Yellowness.
Garry said:
Captured scents of happiness.
What a wonderdul image beautifully put.
More summery than my lastest posting.
April 4th, 2017 06:06
Garry said:
Captured scents of happiness.
What a wonderdul image beautifully put.
More summery than my lastest posting.
April 4th, 2017 06:06
Youth\'s blood.
Philip said:
Excellent Fay. I really like the first two lines of the second verse. Phil.G
April 3rd, 2017 13:20
Philip said:
Excellent Fay. I really like the first two lines of the second verse. Phil.G
April 3rd, 2017 13:20
Youth\'s blood.
orchidee said:
A fine write. War is such a waste of time really too.
April 3rd, 2017 13:09
orchidee said:
A fine write. War is such a waste of time really too.
April 3rd, 2017 13:09
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