Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Sea-Swell.
Michael Edwards said:
I an smell it I can taste it - great write fay.
May 13th, 2017 11:54
Michael Edwards said:
I an smell it I can taste it - great write fay.
May 13th, 2017 11:54
Mothering.
Goldfinch60 said:
So true. \"God could not be everywhere so he created mothers.\"
May 13th, 2017 00:15
Goldfinch60 said:
So true. \"God could not be everywhere so he created mothers.\"
May 13th, 2017 00:15
Mothering.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ I agree and I value my Mum above all the other Lovely Ladies that cross my path. I can never be a Mum but I value my Dad as well and see that being a Father would also be an awesome responsibility. Thanks for caring ~ Yours B.
May 12th, 2017 17:46
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ I agree and I value my Mum above all the other Lovely Ladies that cross my path. I can never be a Mum but I value my Dad as well and see that being a Father would also be an awesome responsibility. Thanks for caring ~ Yours B.
May 12th, 2017 17:46
Mothering.
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s an enduring relationship (thankfully) for the vast majority - great poem.
May 12th, 2017 14:51
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s an enduring relationship (thankfully) for the vast majority - great poem.
May 12th, 2017 14:51
My Rocker.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another gem ! My MUM has an ancient rocker (which belonged to my GRAN) which I love to rock in ~ just like you ! I am also pleased to FAY that you \"Are never off your Rocker !\" Love the picture ~ very evocative ~ Yours B
May 11th, 2017 16:50
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for another gem ! My MUM has an ancient rocker (which belonged to my GRAN) which I love to rock in ~ just like you ! I am also pleased to FAY that you \"Are never off your Rocker !\" Love the picture ~ very evocative ~ Yours B
May 11th, 2017 16:50
My Rocker.
Michael Edwards said:
I know that rocker - I have a mirror handed down from at least four generations and if only it could talk. Great write Fay
May 11th, 2017 09:41
Michael Edwards said:
I know that rocker - I have a mirror handed down from at least four generations and if only it could talk. Great write Fay
May 11th, 2017 09:41
My Rocker.
orchidee said:
A fine write. Just don\'t let Daniel O\'Donnell sit in that rocker - or worse still, start singing, or it will spoil the whole thing! heehee. Oops, no offence to the Irish!
May 11th, 2017 09:05
orchidee said:
A fine write. Just don\'t let Daniel O\'Donnell sit in that rocker - or worse still, start singing, or it will spoil the whole thing! heehee. Oops, no offence to the Irish!
May 11th, 2017 09:05
Compatibility.
WriteBeLight said:
I think it is the toughest thing one must do, but it must be done, in one\'s own time. Great write Fay.
May 10th, 2017 12:53
WriteBeLight said:
I think it is the toughest thing one must do, but it must be done, in one\'s own time. Great write Fay.
May 10th, 2017 12:53
Twice Stirred.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ For lifting our minds and spirits and also the quality of verse (on MPS) to a much higher plane. Greek Literature ~ Poetry ~ Art reached levels we seldom touch today if ever. The vision you paint in you picture and comment ~ of Calliope dancing naked is much too perfect for me to pass comment ! Writers and especially poets do not care where reality ends and fantasy begins and they spin for us ~ make-believe dreams. Because I am a Writer (and not an artist) I love the premise in your second verse ~ that writers have extra dimensions ! This does enable us to \"twice stir\" (and autheticate) UTOPIA and even grant reality to EDEN ~ Amen. I don\'t know what you\'re on FAY (is it Scrumpy ?) but your Poetry is DIVINE ~ Yours B.
May 8th, 2017 10:39
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY ~ For lifting our minds and spirits and also the quality of verse (on MPS) to a much higher plane. Greek Literature ~ Poetry ~ Art reached levels we seldom touch today if ever. The vision you paint in you picture and comment ~ of Calliope dancing naked is much too perfect for me to pass comment ! Writers and especially poets do not care where reality ends and fantasy begins and they spin for us ~ make-believe dreams. Because I am a Writer (and not an artist) I love the premise in your second verse ~ that writers have extra dimensions ! This does enable us to \"twice stir\" (and autheticate) UTOPIA and even grant reality to EDEN ~ Amen. I don\'t know what you\'re on FAY (is it Scrumpy ?) but your Poetry is DIVINE ~ Yours B.
May 8th, 2017 10:39
Undertow.
Fay Slimm. said:
My thank you to all for the comments - this poem was written as tribute to those who fought in ages past for some better future and lost their own lives.
May 6th, 2017 04:47
Fay Slimm. said:
My thank you to all for the comments - this poem was written as tribute to those who fought in ages past for some better future and lost their own lives.
May 6th, 2017 04:47
Undertow.
swingline said:
A stark insight into the devastation of war and how it affects the survivors . Something the dead do not have to live with .
May 5th, 2017 16:27
swingline said:
A stark insight into the devastation of war and how it affects the survivors . Something the dead do not have to live with .
May 5th, 2017 16:27
For Thine Eyes Only.
MendedFences27 said:
Who\'s this Thine guy? Lucky fellow. A beautiful message sent back in time by the use of forsaken language, but the message is as old as time. When? A beautiful thing, this. - Phil A
May 4th, 2017 17:18
MendedFences27 said:
Who\'s this Thine guy? Lucky fellow. A beautiful message sent back in time by the use of forsaken language, but the message is as old as time. When? A beautiful thing, this. - Phil A
May 4th, 2017 17:18
For Thine Eyes Only.
Michael Edwards said:
Had me sighing and reaching for the paper (yes I still write using a fountain pen - what\'s one of them? I hear the youngsters ask)
May 4th, 2017 09:35
Michael Edwards said:
Had me sighing and reaching for the paper (yes I still write using a fountain pen - what\'s one of them? I hear the youngsters ask)
May 4th, 2017 09:35
For Thine Eyes Only.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL FAY ! Love the visual ~ Demure & Tudor ! Write to me only with thine eyes ~ and I\'ll reply with mine ! You are lovely ! Yours B.
May 4th, 2017 07:46
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL FAY ! Love the visual ~ Demure & Tudor ! Write to me only with thine eyes ~ and I\'ll reply with mine ! You are lovely ! Yours B.
May 4th, 2017 07:46
For Thine Eyes Only.
kevin browne said:
my letter is in the post, signed and sealed safely for you my dearest poet friend.
May 4th, 2017 05:27
kevin browne said:
my letter is in the post, signed and sealed safely for you my dearest poet friend.
May 4th, 2017 05:27
The Stones Know.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ another very fine poem of Cornish lore. Life was much harder then and the rewards fewer. We all have to count our Blessings for what we all have today ~ Yours B.
May 3rd, 2017 16:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ another very fine poem of Cornish lore. Life was much harder then and the rewards fewer. We all have to count our Blessings for what we all have today ~ Yours B.
May 3rd, 2017 16:02
The Stones Know.
swingline said:
Epic encapsulation of the dire dread of mining and the children who were often employed to enrich the robber Barrons of ages past , centuries ago .
May 3rd, 2017 10:44
swingline said:
Epic encapsulation of the dire dread of mining and the children who were often employed to enrich the robber Barrons of ages past , centuries ago .
May 3rd, 2017 10:44
Perhaps.
MendedFences27 said:
Here where I live there is, on much older homes, an architectural phenomenon called a \"Widow\'s Walk.\"
Basically its a small porch high up on the structure allowing access for the woman to view the seaward horizon, looking for her husband\'s ship returning. Some never did, thus \"Widow\'s Walk.\" Your poem so reminded me of this. I believe that means your message was well received. And it came wrapped in glorious words. Great poem. - Phil A.
May 2nd, 2017 15:50
MendedFences27 said:
Here where I live there is, on much older homes, an architectural phenomenon called a \"Widow\'s Walk.\"
Basically its a small porch high up on the structure allowing access for the woman to view the seaward horizon, looking for her husband\'s ship returning. Some never did, thus \"Widow\'s Walk.\" Your poem so reminded me of this. I believe that means your message was well received. And it came wrapped in glorious words. Great poem. - Phil A.
May 2nd, 2017 15:50
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