Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
I Wonder.
Hopey_xx said:
I hope one day we can find the answers. Great poem, keep going.
March 19th, 2017 09:47
Hopey_xx said:
I hope one day we can find the answers. Great poem, keep going.
March 19th, 2017 09:47
I Wonder.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for sharing your \"pain of lost love\" in the context of such an elegant poem. Every sensual relationship we have makes ud better for it but worse ~ when it comes to an end. So at all stages in our lives we can empathise. In the case and DS & Yourself ~ where it the end of a long loving and happy marriage that must in essence be impossible to bear. When you share the agony of lost love in a Poem we do absorb with you some of the pain but the majority must always lie with you. There is no answer ~ The LORD gives and (for one partner) the LORD takes away. However if we do have Faith of a reunion in Glory with our loved ones who have gone before ~ it can (so I am told) make the inevitable period of bereavement more bearable. Thinking of you and praying for you (and DS as well !) Yours B.
March 19th, 2017 08:31
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY for sharing your \"pain of lost love\" in the context of such an elegant poem. Every sensual relationship we have makes ud better for it but worse ~ when it comes to an end. So at all stages in our lives we can empathise. In the case and DS & Yourself ~ where it the end of a long loving and happy marriage that must in essence be impossible to bear. When you share the agony of lost love in a Poem we do absorb with you some of the pain but the majority must always lie with you. There is no answer ~ The LORD gives and (for one partner) the LORD takes away. However if we do have Faith of a reunion in Glory with our loved ones who have gone before ~ it can (so I am told) make the inevitable period of bereavement more bearable. Thinking of you and praying for you (and DS as well !) Yours B.
March 19th, 2017 08:31
An Omen.
MendedFences27 said:
Better the owl than the rats. I felt the crumbling walls reading this. It\'s a shame so many of the old castles are
deteriorating, fit only for the Hoot Owls. I guess time does conquer a. Lovely poem. Enjoyed it. - Phil A.
March 18th, 2017 18:46
MendedFences27 said:
Better the owl than the rats. I felt the crumbling walls reading this. It\'s a shame so many of the old castles are
deteriorating, fit only for the Hoot Owls. I guess time does conquer a. Lovely poem. Enjoyed it. - Phil A.
March 18th, 2017 18:46
An Omen.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Great Fantasy poem FAY thanks for sharing ! I could see and scent the decay in the ruined Castle but also (through your words) envisage it in its former glory ~ and the silk-shod dancers in candelabra lit halls ! The OWL (as all Owls do !) takes advantage ~ in a soundless swoop ~ of and unwary rat. Many of the ruined Castles in the UK will never be restored but still remain as \"listed ruins\" to ever be the haunt of OWLS ! Thanks for caring ~ Yours B
March 18th, 2017 15:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Great Fantasy poem FAY thanks for sharing ! I could see and scent the decay in the ruined Castle but also (through your words) envisage it in its former glory ~ and the silk-shod dancers in candelabra lit halls ! The OWL (as all Owls do !) takes advantage ~ in a soundless swoop ~ of and unwary rat. Many of the ruined Castles in the UK will never be restored but still remain as \"listed ruins\" to ever be the haunt of OWLS ! Thanks for caring ~ Yours B
March 18th, 2017 15:27
Found Absent.
WriteBeLight said:
Such great descriptions Fay. Appropriate photo reflecting a very tough life.
March 18th, 2017 07:32
WriteBeLight said:
Such great descriptions Fay. Appropriate photo reflecting a very tough life.
March 18th, 2017 07:32
Found Absent.
MendedFences27 said:
My God, how long ago was this ended, child labor laws and all. What horrible conditions and treatment of children. Ignorance can not excuse it. That is always the guilty cowards way out. A great poem on a very tough subject. You are brave to write about it. Great poem. - Phil A.
March 17th, 2017 21:09
MendedFences27 said:
My God, how long ago was this ended, child labor laws and all. What horrible conditions and treatment of children. Ignorance can not excuse it. That is always the guilty cowards way out. A great poem on a very tough subject. You are brave to write about it. Great poem. - Phil A.
March 17th, 2017 21:09
Found Absent.
Michael Edwards said:
Awful awful times in many ways and you have captured it so well in this superb verse.
March 17th, 2017 08:38
Michael Edwards said:
Awful awful times in many ways and you have captured it so well in this superb verse.
March 17th, 2017 08:38
Truth\'s Trust........
MendedFences27 said:
Trust is a necessary part of any relationship. You speak of it\'s absolute need in a marriage, which it certainly is. Without trust, based on truth, a marriage will fail. Well spoken.- Phil A.
March 16th, 2017 21:06
MendedFences27 said:
Trust is a necessary part of any relationship. You speak of it\'s absolute need in a marriage, which it certainly is. Without trust, based on truth, a marriage will fail. Well spoken.- Phil A.
March 16th, 2017 21:06
Truth\'s Trust........
Goldfinch60 said:
Trust - so easily lost but almost impossible to regain. Good write.
March 16th, 2017 13:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Trust - so easily lost but almost impossible to regain. Good write.
March 16th, 2017 13:42
Truth\'s Trust........
Michael Edwards said:
Trust is a necessary part of a good relationship - my marriage is a testimony to that - super write Fay.
March 16th, 2017 11:53
Michael Edwards said:
Trust is a necessary part of a good relationship - my marriage is a testimony to that - super write Fay.
March 16th, 2017 11:53
Catch-Trap.
Hypothesis said:
This one here was very cleverly executed Fay. I loved the metaphors you\'ve managed to string together as the Charlottes web would interpret. It felt like reading a children\'s book, yet with a PG-13 inscription.
Well done poet!
March 15th, 2017 05:18
Hypothesis said:
This one here was very cleverly executed Fay. I loved the metaphors you\'ve managed to string together as the Charlottes web would interpret. It felt like reading a children\'s book, yet with a PG-13 inscription.
Well done poet!
March 15th, 2017 05:18
Tribute To Vincent.
MendedFences27 said:
Great tribute. Obviously you are a fan of the man. A painter ahead of his times. - Phil A.
March 14th, 2017 14:51
MendedFences27 said:
Great tribute. Obviously you are a fan of the man. A painter ahead of his times. - Phil A.
March 14th, 2017 14:51
Tribute To Vincent.
Michael Edwards said:
Super tribute and if I could only wield a brush the way he did. But at least I still have two ears.
March 14th, 2017 12:44
Michael Edwards said:
Super tribute and if I could only wield a brush the way he did. But at least I still have two ears.
March 14th, 2017 12:44
Tribute To Vincent.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Canvas had kept broad oily strokes. Lines moved across landscape. Beautiful paintings still remained in mind more. Vincent remained in memory of all. This poem is definitely a nice and brilliant tribute poem for Vincent.
March 14th, 2017 06:28
Pintu Mahakul said:
Canvas had kept broad oily strokes. Lines moved across landscape. Beautiful paintings still remained in mind more. Vincent remained in memory of all. This poem is definitely a nice and brilliant tribute poem for Vincent.
March 14th, 2017 06:28
Tribute To Vincent.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for reminding us FAY just what a unique Painter Van Goch was ~ liquid gold indeed ! One of his many SUNFLOWER paintings adorns my Fusion on Painters ~ there is a verse for Vincent ! Love the VG landscape you have chosen ~ the sky really is awesome ! Yours B
March 14th, 2017 06:25
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for reminding us FAY just what a unique Painter Van Goch was ~ liquid gold indeed ! One of his many SUNFLOWER paintings adorns my Fusion on Painters ~ there is a verse for Vincent ! Love the VG landscape you have chosen ~ the sky really is awesome ! Yours B
March 14th, 2017 06:25
White Nectar.
MendedFences27 said:
The old time milk maid\'s work was long and hard. Today\'s modern facilities make the work lighter, but are the cows any happier.
A great write on a very unique subject. Makes us all appreciate our morning glass of white nectar all the more. Loved it. - Phil A.
March 13th, 2017 18:34
MendedFences27 said:
The old time milk maid\'s work was long and hard. Today\'s modern facilities make the work lighter, but are the cows any happier.
A great write on a very unique subject. Makes us all appreciate our morning glass of white nectar all the more. Loved it. - Phil A.
March 13th, 2017 18:34
White Nectar.
Augustus said:
Sounds like you have milked a cow or two. Nicely done.
March 13th, 2017 18:17
Augustus said:
Sounds like you have milked a cow or two. Nicely done.
March 13th, 2017 18:17
White Nectar.
willyweed said:
Moo- ving piece fay loved it till the cows come home. ww
March 13th, 2017 09:45
willyweed said:
Moo- ving piece fay loved it till the cows come home. ww
March 13th, 2017 09:45
White Nectar.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and always grateful that we have milk.
March 13th, 2017 09:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and always grateful that we have milk.
March 13th, 2017 09:03
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