Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Wake-Up Call.
WriteBeLight said:
Cats are like that, but very comforting creatures and a lot less trouble :)
April 13th, 2017 06:26
WriteBeLight said:
Cats are like that, but very comforting creatures and a lot less trouble :)
April 13th, 2017 06:26
Wake-Up Call.
Michael Edwards said:
Afraid I have no love for cats but do love dogs so - yes - I can appreciate the poem - which is another corker Fay
April 13th, 2017 05:40
Michael Edwards said:
Afraid I have no love for cats but do love dogs so - yes - I can appreciate the poem - which is another corker Fay
April 13th, 2017 05:40
Wonderment.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Sea-foam skittered sand
on bare wet toes and in this twilight I discover nice imagery that expresses emotion and feelings. Piercing a rave in to infinity amazes mind. Again this is a very thoughtful poem shared here.
April 13th, 2017 05:32
Pintu Mahakul said:
Sea-foam skittered sand
on bare wet toes and in this twilight I discover nice imagery that expresses emotion and feelings. Piercing a rave in to infinity amazes mind. Again this is a very thoughtful poem shared here.
April 13th, 2017 05:32
Who I Am.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Muzzled soul will unravel slowly everything here. Asking self that who am I and realizing self is interesting really. Liberation-discharge has a loud call. Very thoughtful poem is shared here.
April 13th, 2017 05:24
Pintu Mahakul said:
Muzzled soul will unravel slowly everything here. Asking self that who am I and realizing self is interesting really. Liberation-discharge has a loud call. Very thoughtful poem is shared here.
April 13th, 2017 05:24
Whale-Play.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Gigantic leviathan tied to girth circled. Wonderful imagery was drawn in to mind. The whale severed the sea-surface and this scribbled mind of reader. We had been hailed. This timing was entirely thrilled.
April 13th, 2017 05:18
Pintu Mahakul said:
Gigantic leviathan tied to girth circled. Wonderful imagery was drawn in to mind. The whale severed the sea-surface and this scribbled mind of reader. We had been hailed. This timing was entirely thrilled.
April 13th, 2017 05:18
Would We ?
Pintu Mahakul said:
May came as fresh month. Morning came as fresh carrying passage of time. Each moment came as life\'s thrilling expression. Carriage passed and she waved to the crowd.For every act solutions were searched. For grasping peace there was desire. No one did seek for revenge. Wonderful poem is shared with wise expression.
April 13th, 2017 05:16
Pintu Mahakul said:
May came as fresh month. Morning came as fresh carrying passage of time. Each moment came as life\'s thrilling expression. Carriage passed and she waved to the crowd.For every act solutions were searched. For grasping peace there was desire. No one did seek for revenge. Wonderful poem is shared with wise expression.
April 13th, 2017 05:16
Victorious.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Love arranges feelings and love pours emotion in to expressive vision. Love never loses. Ever love shines with bliss. An interesting poem is shared here.
April 13th, 2017 04:49
Pintu Mahakul said:
Love arranges feelings and love pours emotion in to expressive vision. Love never loses. Ever love shines with bliss. An interesting poem is shared here.
April 13th, 2017 04:49
We Deserve It.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Beautiful rhyme poem shared. We need to decorate life and style. We need to decorate mind with wisdom. Yes, we deserve to look good from inside and as well as from outside. We deserve for shiny hearts. We ever feel great with freedom. An excellent poem is shared.
April 13th, 2017 04:47
Pintu Mahakul said:
Beautiful rhyme poem shared. We need to decorate life and style. We need to decorate mind with wisdom. Yes, we deserve to look good from inside and as well as from outside. We deserve for shiny hearts. We ever feel great with freedom. An excellent poem is shared.
April 13th, 2017 04:47
Tribal Organisation.
Pintu Mahakul said:
This is a great imagery drawn through fine expression of this poem. A great master piece of work you have shared here. The fable clearly indicates about first 3 and then about rest 5 and rest all. Invisible at the back of the line, but protective at the first of the site this row is. Yes, at front elderly belong. Very thoughtful poem is shared.
April 13th, 2017 04:44
Pintu Mahakul said:
This is a great imagery drawn through fine expression of this poem. A great master piece of work you have shared here. The fable clearly indicates about first 3 and then about rest 5 and rest all. Invisible at the back of the line, but protective at the first of the site this row is. Yes, at front elderly belong. Very thoughtful poem is shared.
April 13th, 2017 04:44
Wake-Up Call.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Breath is felt well with warmness alongside of love and affection. Sensuous dreams in untidy way cover emotion. Pets never sleep. We hear their calls. They call us to wake up. An amazing poem is nicely crafted and shared.
April 13th, 2017 04:41
Pintu Mahakul said:
Breath is felt well with warmness alongside of love and affection. Sensuous dreams in untidy way cover emotion. Pets never sleep. We hear their calls. They call us to wake up. An amazing poem is nicely crafted and shared.
April 13th, 2017 04:41
Tribal Organisation.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Love the wisdom and organisation in this poem which is a tribute to Our Senior Citizens ! Unfortunately they tend to be shuffled into corner ~ silenced and for gotten about ! In our Democracy you sometimes get a lot more sense from the House of Lords than you do from the back-biting Commons. Next time we have ramble on the Church Weekend ~ I will ask the AOP\'s to lead and not the Teens ~ good advice. Thanks also for the visual ~ which beautifully illustrates the poem ~ now that I have read ~ marked and inwardly digested it ! Thanks for caring & sharing another gem ~ this time by another hand ! Yours B.
April 12th, 2017 15:54
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Love the wisdom and organisation in this poem which is a tribute to Our Senior Citizens ! Unfortunately they tend to be shuffled into corner ~ silenced and for gotten about ! In our Democracy you sometimes get a lot more sense from the House of Lords than you do from the back-biting Commons. Next time we have ramble on the Church Weekend ~ I will ask the AOP\'s to lead and not the Teens ~ good advice. Thanks also for the visual ~ which beautifully illustrates the poem ~ now that I have read ~ marked and inwardly digested it ! Thanks for caring & sharing another gem ~ this time by another hand ! Yours B.
April 12th, 2017 15:54
Tribal Organisation.
P.H.Rose said:
Simply amazing
Beautiful Fay..
Well done..
April 12th, 2017 15:51
P.H.Rose said:
Simply amazing
Beautiful Fay..
Well done..
April 12th, 2017 15:51
Tribal Organisation.
MendedFences27 said:
Learned a lot from this one. It\'s almost human like. Our leaders tend to be older, our warriors much younger and stronger, every one else is in the middle. Thanks for sharing Fay. - Phil A.
April 12th, 2017 11:48
MendedFences27 said:
Learned a lot from this one. It\'s almost human like. Our leaders tend to be older, our warriors much younger and stronger, every one else is in the middle. Thanks for sharing Fay. - Phil A.
April 12th, 2017 11:48
Tribal Organisation.
Michael Edwards said:
A great piece = well written and informative. I can understand why you have not declared the author but I remain quite perplexed why there are not more poets on this who use their real name. Aren\'t they proud of their work I ask myself.
April 12th, 2017 05:51
Michael Edwards said:
A great piece = well written and informative. I can understand why you have not declared the author but I remain quite perplexed why there are not more poets on this who use their real name. Aren\'t they proud of their work I ask myself.
April 12th, 2017 05:51
Tribal Organisation.
Frank Prem said:
It\'s great to get information while also the aft of the poem. Well done.
April 12th, 2017 03:14
Frank Prem said:
It\'s great to get information while also the aft of the poem. Well done.
April 12th, 2017 03:14
Tribal Organisation.
Goldfinch60 said:
The wolves are so wise and so generous in their behaviour, it has Ben shown that wolves will share there food where domesticated dogs will not share with others.
Good write.
April 12th, 2017 03:05
Goldfinch60 said:
The wolves are so wise and so generous in their behaviour, it has Ben shown that wolves will share there food where domesticated dogs will not share with others.
Good write.
April 12th, 2017 03:05
We Deserve It.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Fay, one day all will come to be free.
April 12th, 2017 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Fay, one day all will come to be free.
April 12th, 2017 00:25
We Deserve It.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ It is interesting that your poem today mirrors the one I wrote about Inner and Outer Beauty ! Thanks for your encouraging comment ~ Perhaps GOD has a message for us all today about maintaining the equilibrium of our Inside & Outside display of Beauty ! Thanks for caring & sharing a very beautiful and timely poem ! Yours B. Love the visual and the message !
April 11th, 2017 15:41
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ It is interesting that your poem today mirrors the one I wrote about Inner and Outer Beauty ! Thanks for your encouraging comment ~ Perhaps GOD has a message for us all today about maintaining the equilibrium of our Inside & Outside display of Beauty ! Thanks for caring & sharing a very beautiful and timely poem ! Yours B. Love the visual and the message !
April 11th, 2017 15:41
We Deserve It.
MendedFences27 said:
Yeah, let\'s all make over our hearts. Let\'s lose the greed, the lust for power, and the selfishness.Your message is a great way to live. If we all lived by it , what a wonderful world it would be. Loved the thoughts in this poem. -Phil A
April 11th, 2017 15:39
MendedFences27 said:
Yeah, let\'s all make over our hearts. Let\'s lose the greed, the lust for power, and the selfishness.Your message is a great way to live. If we all lived by it , what a wonderful world it would be. Loved the thoughts in this poem. -Phil A
April 11th, 2017 15:39
We Deserve It.
willyweed said:
I think this is great Fay our inner being celebrated our spirit unmasked
April 11th, 2017 06:39
willyweed said:
I think this is great Fay our inner being celebrated our spirit unmasked
April 11th, 2017 06:39
We Deserve It.
kevin browne said:
you deserve a whopping great big well done for writing this poem. keep the standard going.
April 11th, 2017 06:11
kevin browne said:
you deserve a whopping great big well done for writing this poem. keep the standard going.
April 11th, 2017 06:11
We Deserve It.
Michael Edwards said:
Goes well with Brians posting today - another great message Fay.
April 11th, 2017 05:18
Michael Edwards said:
Goes well with Brians posting today - another great message Fay.
April 11th, 2017 05:18
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