Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
What We Had.
WriteBeLight said:
Great job Fay and love the significance of the sunset, or sunrise. What ever fits here.
May 1st, 2017 11:00
WriteBeLight said:
Great job Fay and love the significance of the sunset, or sunrise. What ever fits here.
May 1st, 2017 11:00
What We Had.
Michael Edwards said:
So well written - the pain of breaking up - can\'t imagine what is like to suffer this but the poem goes a long way to explain.
May 1st, 2017 07:32
Michael Edwards said:
So well written - the pain of breaking up - can\'t imagine what is like to suffer this but the poem goes a long way to explain.
May 1st, 2017 07:32
What We Had.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ I meet this scenario too often in all walks of life ~ tensions come in ~ love dies and the sacred bond is broken ! What first drew them together and grew in love ~ WHAT THY HAD BEFORE ~ does not last for ever and when it ies they separate. I see it at work ~ in my extended Family and even in my Church Family. The sad thing iss it is seldom amicable and never equal. On partner is always hurt more than the other sometimes ~ much much more ~ and that is very sad. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours B.
May 1st, 2017 07:13
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ I meet this scenario too often in all walks of life ~ tensions come in ~ love dies and the sacred bond is broken ! What first drew them together and grew in love ~ WHAT THY HAD BEFORE ~ does not last for ever and when it ies they separate. I see it at work ~ in my extended Family and even in my Church Family. The sad thing iss it is seldom amicable and never equal. On partner is always hurt more than the other sometimes ~ much much more ~ and that is very sad. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours B.
May 1st, 2017 07:13
Small Beginnings.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Early morning ever attracts us and our attention sticks to the time of joy. Gem of early morning is calling here with a diamond day. Earth begins with love and never warns to leave love away. Love of light power that gives us shining effect, is nice gem. We find fortunes in this spring morning. Beautiful imagery is drawn here and this is an excellent brilliant poem shared here.
April 30th, 2017 00:42
Pintu Mahakul said:
Early morning ever attracts us and our attention sticks to the time of joy. Gem of early morning is calling here with a diamond day. Earth begins with love and never warns to leave love away. Love of light power that gives us shining effect, is nice gem. We find fortunes in this spring morning. Beautiful imagery is drawn here and this is an excellent brilliant poem shared here.
April 30th, 2017 00:42
Bird Talk.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fay, I have seen many Goldcrest but I have also seen a firecrest which is a much rarer bird.
April 30th, 2017 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fay, I have seen many Goldcrest but I have also seen a firecrest which is a much rarer bird.
April 30th, 2017 00:40
Smitten.
Pintu Mahakul said:
A soft wishing with passage of time is marked very well here. Embarrassment is excused really. This amazes mind while anyone puts blood question. Open confession to being with a season of love. Interesting poem is shared.
April 30th, 2017 00:39
Pintu Mahakul said:
A soft wishing with passage of time is marked very well here. Embarrassment is excused really. This amazes mind while anyone puts blood question. Open confession to being with a season of love. Interesting poem is shared.
April 30th, 2017 00:39
Counting Sheep.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Scent of lambing arises when farmers, asleep under snoring duvets. Greatness of imagery is very well judged from this expression. Few heaving ewes as night creeps away. Starting early in dawn\'s high time counting sheep mesmerizes mind. A great perceptional poem is shared here.
April 30th, 2017 00:35
Pintu Mahakul said:
Scent of lambing arises when farmers, asleep under snoring duvets. Greatness of imagery is very well judged from this expression. Few heaving ewes as night creeps away. Starting early in dawn\'s high time counting sheep mesmerizes mind. A great perceptional poem is shared here.
April 30th, 2017 00:35
Naked Heart.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Wow, really very beautiful presentation of this poem amazes mind entirely. Urging for drug of sleep to come is interesting and while a drop of comes woolly mind dulls with clear thought. Thick night comes covering mind. Silence takes mind so far in dream of realization. An amazing poem is shared with nice imagery.
April 30th, 2017 00:33
Pintu Mahakul said:
Wow, really very beautiful presentation of this poem amazes mind entirely. Urging for drug of sleep to come is interesting and while a drop of comes woolly mind dulls with clear thought. Thick night comes covering mind. Silence takes mind so far in dream of realization. An amazing poem is shared with nice imagery.
April 30th, 2017 00:33
Scaled.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Pride never remains for long time. Sweet blows make stronger the wall of love and memories. Love scales brings memory ahead. An amazing poem is very well crafted and shared.
April 30th, 2017 00:29
Pintu Mahakul said:
Pride never remains for long time. Sweet blows make stronger the wall of love and memories. Love scales brings memory ahead. An amazing poem is very well crafted and shared.
April 30th, 2017 00:29
Treasured.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Water and light lift air that we remember. With grainy twilight we remember the day. From nervousness love grows slowly to find light of treasured memories. A beautifully narrated poem is shared here.
April 30th, 2017 00:26
Pintu Mahakul said:
Water and light lift air that we remember. With grainy twilight we remember the day. From nervousness love grows slowly to find light of treasured memories. A beautifully narrated poem is shared here.
April 30th, 2017 00:26
Brightness..
Pintu Mahakul said:
The beautiful fullness of sight is positively captured in mind. Dawn is beautiful creation. Change comes with spilling sky with emerging light. At this horizon magically dawn and night clouds part. Glowing light greets us surely. Excellent poem presented here.
April 30th, 2017 00:23
Pintu Mahakul said:
The beautiful fullness of sight is positively captured in mind. Dawn is beautiful creation. Change comes with spilling sky with emerging light. At this horizon magically dawn and night clouds part. Glowing light greets us surely. Excellent poem presented here.
April 30th, 2017 00:23
Surrender.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Pleasant passivity has to be met. As surrender begins storm of submission begins here with wonderful imagery. Resistance yields at right time and gathering peace becomes motive. This is interesting poem shared here really.
April 30th, 2017 00:20
Pintu Mahakul said:
Pleasant passivity has to be met. As surrender begins storm of submission begins here with wonderful imagery. Resistance yields at right time and gathering peace becomes motive. This is interesting poem shared here really.
April 30th, 2017 00:20
Boldness.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Through nose this detects air and and they smell well these grasses at top while running. Touching clumsy bundle of grasses and shaking and trembling with rapid motion they move fast ahead to take rest to release out stress. Light explosive sound comes and this gives doubt in mind. They remain safely all there. This is an excellent poem and a great imagery is drawn here.
April 30th, 2017 00:17
Pintu Mahakul said:
Through nose this detects air and and they smell well these grasses at top while running. Touching clumsy bundle of grasses and shaking and trembling with rapid motion they move fast ahead to take rest to release out stress. Light explosive sound comes and this gives doubt in mind. They remain safely all there. This is an excellent poem and a great imagery is drawn here.
April 30th, 2017 00:17
Bird Talk.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Early walk is welcomed by this tiny bird. A nice imagery is drawn in this poem with natural perception. Spring morning is very well caught in memory. A small bird thrills high here. A great imagery is drawn here. Excellent poem!
April 30th, 2017 00:08
Pintu Mahakul said:
Early walk is welcomed by this tiny bird. A nice imagery is drawn in this poem with natural perception. Spring morning is very well caught in memory. A small bird thrills high here. A great imagery is drawn here. Excellent poem!
April 30th, 2017 00:08
Bird Talk.
Gary Edward Geraci said:
The \'trills and thrills\' spoke to me in your poem; a reminder of the joys found in bird watching! Great work!
April 29th, 2017 19:42
Gary Edward Geraci said:
The \'trills and thrills\' spoke to me in your poem; a reminder of the joys found in bird watching! Great work!
April 29th, 2017 19:42
Bird Talk.
Michael Edwards said:
Super poem to go with such a lovely little bird - don\'t see enough of them.
April 29th, 2017 13:24
Michael Edwards said:
Super poem to go with such a lovely little bird - don\'t see enough of them.
April 29th, 2017 13:24
Boldness.
WriteBeLight said:
They are very cute, but destructive. Your poetry does show the sweet side of nature, though. Love the picture!
April 29th, 2017 07:17
WriteBeLight said:
They are very cute, but destructive. Your poetry does show the sweet side of nature, though. Love the picture!
April 29th, 2017 07:17
Boldness.
Philip said:
Lovely poem Fay. It\'s fascinating when you get a longer look at usually shy creatures. Phil.G
April 29th, 2017 03:28
Philip said:
Lovely poem Fay. It\'s fascinating when you get a longer look at usually shy creatures. Phil.G
April 29th, 2017 03:28
Boldness.
MendedFences27 said:
Beautifully spoken moment with Nature. All creatures become fascinating when they are so rarely seen. Also tea in the outdoors sounds like a treat. Loved your phrasings and style in this one. - Phil A.
April 28th, 2017 22:07
MendedFences27 said:
Beautifully spoken moment with Nature. All creatures become fascinating when they are so rarely seen. Also tea in the outdoors sounds like a treat. Loved your phrasings and style in this one. - Phil A.
April 28th, 2017 22:07
Surrender.
orchidee said:
A fine write. Only bothered about any weather-storms at the moment! lol
April 27th, 2017 08:43
orchidee said:
A fine write. Only bothered about any weather-storms at the moment! lol
April 27th, 2017 08:43
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