Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Smitten.
willyweed said:
I think we all have felt this way once or twice, good write Fay!
April 20th, 2017 07:29
willyweed said:
I think we all have felt this way once or twice, good write Fay!
April 20th, 2017 07:29
Fate Waits.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the last two letters nes are so true.
April 19th, 2017 07:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the last two letters nes are so true.
April 19th, 2017 07:45
Fate Waits.
WriteBeLight said:
Yes Fay, I agree. I think many of us have a pair of those glasses. Great poetry.
April 19th, 2017 05:24
WriteBeLight said:
Yes Fay, I agree. I think many of us have a pair of those glasses. Great poetry.
April 19th, 2017 05:24
Fate Waits.
Michael Edwards said:
In fact I\'ve just returned to this one - I think I\'ll pop it in my favourites.
April 19th, 2017 05:04
Michael Edwards said:
In fact I\'ve just returned to this one - I think I\'ll pop it in my favourites.
April 19th, 2017 05:04
Fate Waits.
Michael Edwards said:
We remember only what we want to remember in terms that may reinvent the past - so elegantly put Fay.
April 19th, 2017 05:03
Michael Edwards said:
We remember only what we want to remember in terms that may reinvent the past - so elegantly put Fay.
April 19th, 2017 05:03
Inside Breath.
Michael Edwards said:
Lovely lovely words Fay - where do you find them? Great as always!!!!!
April 18th, 2017 08:45
Michael Edwards said:
Lovely lovely words Fay - where do you find them? Great as always!!!!!
April 18th, 2017 08:45
Inside Breath.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write, inside us are our dreams to which one day we will aspire.
April 18th, 2017 08:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write, inside us are our dreams to which one day we will aspire.
April 18th, 2017 08:02
Inside Breath.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ this elegant poem is food for both the soul and the eyes. I love shaped poems (see mine today) and your balanced quintets form perfect stepping stones ~ as in in your sensuous visual ! YES our Inside Breath does conjure ~ deep mystery ~ ageless perception ~ wild dreams - tamed and the White whispering Dove of Love ~ BEAUTIFUL ~ Yours B.
April 18th, 2017 04:12
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ this elegant poem is food for both the soul and the eyes. I love shaped poems (see mine today) and your balanced quintets form perfect stepping stones ~ as in in your sensuous visual ! YES our Inside Breath does conjure ~ deep mystery ~ ageless perception ~ wild dreams - tamed and the White whispering Dove of Love ~ BEAUTIFUL ~ Yours B.
April 18th, 2017 04:12
No Limits.
orchidee said:
Never knew there was so much in poetry-writing! heehee. A fine write.
April 17th, 2017 11:31
orchidee said:
Never knew there was so much in poetry-writing! heehee. A fine write.
April 17th, 2017 11:31
No Limits.
Michael Edwards said:
Great Fay - yes as poets we can actually get away with so much by using our imagination and putting them into verse which would be meaningless if written as straight prose. Oh joyloads as Prof Unwin would have said.
April 17th, 2017 08:11
Michael Edwards said:
Great Fay - yes as poets we can actually get away with so much by using our imagination and putting them into verse which would be meaningless if written as straight prose. Oh joyloads as Prof Unwin would have said.
April 17th, 2017 08:11
No Limits.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. Poets can free their imagination into words as you do Fay.
April 17th, 2017 07:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. Poets can free their imagination into words as you do Fay.
April 17th, 2017 07:43
Underprized.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, Easter is so meaningful as Jesus love abounds from his rising.
April 16th, 2017 00:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, Easter is so meaningful as Jesus love abounds from his rising.
April 16th, 2017 00:15
Underprized.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for caring and sharing about \"The Love of God\" especially at EASTER ! God\'s Love is AGAPE LOVE ~ It is unconditional and everlasting and freely available to all who reach out to him ! God Loved us so so much that he gave ~ the most precious thing He had to redeem us ~ JESUS ~ his blessed Son ~ AMEN Yours B.
April 15th, 2017 14:45
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for caring and sharing about \"The Love of God\" especially at EASTER ! God\'s Love is AGAPE LOVE ~ It is unconditional and everlasting and freely available to all who reach out to him ! God Loved us so so much that he gave ~ the most precious thing He had to redeem us ~ JESUS ~ his blessed Son ~ AMEN Yours B.
April 15th, 2017 14:45
Underprized.
orchidee said:
A fine write. I forgot the earthquake sometimes at Easter - Matthew\'s Gospel. Dramatic! Maybe that\'s how the stone did get rolled away. God working through \'natural\' means. But a deep and thoughtful write.
April 15th, 2017 06:31
orchidee said:
A fine write. I forgot the earthquake sometimes at Easter - Matthew\'s Gospel. Dramatic! Maybe that\'s how the stone did get rolled away. God working through \'natural\' means. But a deep and thoughtful write.
April 15th, 2017 06:31
Unsung Whispers.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Fay. Silence can be wonderful and can speak to us in many ways, if only we would listen.
April 15th, 2017 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Fay. Silence can be wonderful and can speak to us in many ways, if only we would listen.
April 15th, 2017 00:23
Unsung Whispers.
MendedFences27 said:
I think as writers we have more of an affinity for quiet than most. To me, the silence brings a clarity not otherwise attainable. The noise of living perhaps can bring inspiration, but only silence can release the muse. Well I think I\'ll be quiet now. Nice poem. - Phil A.
April 14th, 2017 21:11
MendedFences27 said:
I think as writers we have more of an affinity for quiet than most. To me, the silence brings a clarity not otherwise attainable. The noise of living perhaps can bring inspiration, but only silence can release the muse. Well I think I\'ll be quiet now. Nice poem. - Phil A.
April 14th, 2017 21:11
Unsung Whispers.
Pintu Mahakul said:
I love silence. I love whisper of silence. I understand silence and language of silence as language of God. Silence embraces us to guide in stillness. Beauty waiting behind sound welcomes us. With lightening days composing calmness and feeling we feel stress goes out. An outstanding poem is shared with great imagery.
April 14th, 2017 15:49
Pintu Mahakul said:
I love silence. I love whisper of silence. I understand silence and language of silence as language of God. Silence embraces us to guide in stillness. Beauty waiting behind sound welcomes us. With lightening days composing calmness and feeling we feel stress goes out. An outstanding poem is shared with great imagery.
April 14th, 2017 15:49
Unsung Whispers.
Garry said:
Very good. More examples of the silence that can say so much.
April 14th, 2017 09:24
Garry said:
Very good. More examples of the silence that can say so much.
April 14th, 2017 09:24
Unsung Whispers.
Michael Edwards said:
I read it in silence - and what a good read it is.
April 14th, 2017 06:38
Michael Edwards said:
I read it in silence - and what a good read it is.
April 14th, 2017 06:38
Unsung Whispers.
WriteBeLight said:
Such a wonderful tribute to silence, one of my most favorite things. Thanks Fay! Shhhhhh :)
April 14th, 2017 05:29
WriteBeLight said:
Such a wonderful tribute to silence, one of my most favorite things. Thanks Fay! Shhhhhh :)
April 14th, 2017 05:29
Wake-Up Call.
P.H.Rose said:
This is very good Fay
I can see everything
And your new pic
Is lovely, the one of
You not the dog....
April 13th, 2017 17:52
P.H.Rose said:
This is very good Fay
I can see everything
And your new pic
Is lovely, the one of
You not the dog....
April 13th, 2017 17:52
Wake-Up Call.
Philip said:
Lovely poem. We are a cat family although our cat is to coool to come and wake us up he waits for us to come to him Phil.G
April 13th, 2017 09:28
Philip said:
Lovely poem. We are a cat family although our cat is to coool to come and wake us up he waits for us to come to him Phil.G
April 13th, 2017 09:28
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