Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Catch-Trap.
Pintu Mahakul said:
Cobweb when becomes old and dusty still spider keeps a position in it. Fine precision-knifed filaments are well observed here. Tensile wires are cleverly glued. Repairing this next preparation is well made. Brilliant imagery is drawn in this poem.
March 23rd, 2017 15:29
Pintu Mahakul said:
Cobweb when becomes old and dusty still spider keeps a position in it. Fine precision-knifed filaments are well observed here. Tensile wires are cleverly glued. Repairing this next preparation is well made. Brilliant imagery is drawn in this poem.
March 23rd, 2017 15:29
Survival.
WriteBeLight said:
I think that garden weeds can take such a beating, but still thrive to take over if you let them. Great point of view Fay!
March 23rd, 2017 11:55
WriteBeLight said:
I think that garden weeds can take such a beating, but still thrive to take over if you let them. Great point of view Fay!
March 23rd, 2017 11:55
Survival.
Michael Edwards said:
You paint such a great scene with such well chosen language.
March 23rd, 2017 09:00
Michael Edwards said:
You paint such a great scene with such well chosen language.
March 23rd, 2017 09:00
In Transit.
MendedFences27 said:
Raindrops are gems, and so is this poem. Pearls, diamonds, crystaline orbs, how many forms can water take? To the poetic eye, whatever the mind can imagine. A wonderful concept brought to fruition in a dramatic manner. I never sensed rain, only gems and colors galore. Wonderful. - Phil A.
March 22nd, 2017 20:01
MendedFences27 said:
Raindrops are gems, and so is this poem. Pearls, diamonds, crystaline orbs, how many forms can water take? To the poetic eye, whatever the mind can imagine. A wonderful concept brought to fruition in a dramatic manner. I never sensed rain, only gems and colors galore. Wonderful. - Phil A.
March 22nd, 2017 20:01
In Transit.
willyweed said:
there is beauty everywhere if we care to look , beautiful poetry my Lady!
March 22nd, 2017 15:09
willyweed said:
there is beauty everywhere if we care to look , beautiful poetry my Lady!
March 22nd, 2017 15:09
In Transit.
Michael Edwards said:
Inspired choice of subject and inspired piece of writing too.
March 22nd, 2017 10:59
Michael Edwards said:
Inspired choice of subject and inspired piece of writing too.
March 22nd, 2017 10:59
In Transit.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WATER FAY is a far from simple substance ! Just H2O but because it has a positive (HYDROGEN) and negative (OXYGEN) ends ( H~O~H ) it sticks to itself and forms the alluring drops you mention. They can bejewel a Spider\'s Web or trace patterns on windows. each glittering orb is a PRISM and can split sunlight into a spectrum R-O-Y-G-B-I-V ! Which is how rainbows form. AND (as you say) rain drops really do stir the muse ! A true poet sees not only a rainbow ~ but also an ODE ~ in a humble raindrop. Love all you poems & pictures FAY ~ Yours B
March 22nd, 2017 06:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WATER FAY is a far from simple substance ! Just H2O but because it has a positive (HYDROGEN) and negative (OXYGEN) ends ( H~O~H ) it sticks to itself and forms the alluring drops you mention. They can bejewel a Spider\'s Web or trace patterns on windows. each glittering orb is a PRISM and can split sunlight into a spectrum R-O-Y-G-B-I-V ! Which is how rainbows form. AND (as you say) rain drops really do stir the muse ! A true poet sees not only a rainbow ~ but also an ODE ~ in a humble raindrop. Love all you poems & pictures FAY ~ Yours B
March 22nd, 2017 06:51
Stirrings.
MendedFences27 said:
Interesting style, very \" to the point.\" A lot said in few words. We are often turned in on ourselves, become reclusive, despaired by life, only to, suddenly, be reawakened. It is usually a very small thing that triggers the resurgence. So, now a new life begins ? Hope so. - Phil A.
March 21st, 2017 18:29
MendedFences27 said:
Interesting style, very \" to the point.\" A lot said in few words. We are often turned in on ourselves, become reclusive, despaired by life, only to, suddenly, be reawakened. It is usually a very small thing that triggers the resurgence. So, now a new life begins ? Hope so. - Phil A.
March 21st, 2017 18:29
I Wonder.
Kurt Philip Behm said:
I just LOVE these lines Fay ...
\"we decided to prove, in
fate\'s twilight
love\'s maturing delights, \"
Kurt
March 21st, 2017 11:37
Kurt Philip Behm said:
I just LOVE these lines Fay ...
\"we decided to prove, in
fate\'s twilight
love\'s maturing delights, \"
Kurt
March 21st, 2017 11:37
Stirrings.
orchidee said:
A fine write. I\'m in despair also, if I have no pork pies. I wish I would shut up! lol.
March 21st, 2017 11:13
orchidee said:
A fine write. I\'m in despair also, if I have no pork pies. I wish I would shut up! lol.
March 21st, 2017 11:13
Hearts Wept.
MendedFences27 said:
Losing a friend is most difficult. A poet-friend leaves behind words that can be read and reread and thus renew the acquaintance. Nothing distills the loss as well as remembrance. A great write, Fay. - Phil A.
March 20th, 2017 13:27
MendedFences27 said:
Losing a friend is most difficult. A poet-friend leaves behind words that can be read and reread and thus renew the acquaintance. Nothing distills the loss as well as remembrance. A great write, Fay. - Phil A.
March 20th, 2017 13:27
Hearts Wept.
Christina8 said:
Beautiful and touching tribute! Thanks for sharing.
March 20th, 2017 13:08
Christina8 said:
Beautiful and touching tribute! Thanks for sharing.
March 20th, 2017 13:08
Hearts Wept.
WriteBeLight said:
So sorry Fay, for your sadness. Very touching words.
March 20th, 2017 12:05
WriteBeLight said:
So sorry Fay, for your sadness. Very touching words.
March 20th, 2017 12:05
Hearts Wept.
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb tribute, he will always be with you in his words and Spirit.
March 20th, 2017 09:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb tribute, he will always be with you in his words and Spirit.
March 20th, 2017 09:36
Hearts Wept.
Michael Edwards said:
Yes a great tribute in your wonderful linguistic style .
March 20th, 2017 08:54
Michael Edwards said:
Yes a great tribute in your wonderful linguistic style .
March 20th, 2017 08:54
Hearts Wept.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thnks FAY for a wonderful tribute to a dear departed poet. I have lost friends who were artists ~ poets ~ musicians etc. Although their art ~ poetry ~ music lives on their unique creativity is stilled forever. It is that \"death of creativity\" that I too find hard to bear. Thanks for caring and sharing such an elegant requiem ode coupled with an equally poignant art form. Yours B
March 20th, 2017 08:44
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thnks FAY for a wonderful tribute to a dear departed poet. I have lost friends who were artists ~ poets ~ musicians etc. Although their art ~ poetry ~ music lives on their unique creativity is stilled forever. It is that \"death of creativity\" that I too find hard to bear. Thanks for caring and sharing such an elegant requiem ode coupled with an equally poignant art form. Yours B
March 20th, 2017 08:44
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