Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Invasive
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is the strongest of all emotions Fay and can never be defeated.
Andy
August 27th, 2021 00:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is the strongest of all emotions Fay and can never be defeated.
Andy
August 27th, 2021 00:55
Invasive
dusk arising said:
Yep, love beats us into submission and once we have succumbed it imprisons us and has its way with us upon its whim. So powerful.
Your opening line \"Once installed Love arranges its station,\" so much in that line.... love is the BOSS lol.
August 26th, 2021 17:30
dusk arising said:
Yep, love beats us into submission and once we have succumbed it imprisons us and has its way with us upon its whim. So powerful.
Your opening line \"Once installed Love arranges its station,\" so much in that line.... love is the BOSS lol.
August 26th, 2021 17:30
Invasive
Coyote said:
Love flows eternal and so do the writings of Fay Slimm. This is an exquisite poem!
August 26th, 2021 16:55
Coyote said:
Love flows eternal and so do the writings of Fay Slimm. This is an exquisite poem!
August 26th, 2021 16:55
Invasive
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Fay.
Love is (fill in the blank) add a metaphor. Understood in any language and culture.
August 26th, 2021 15:39
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Fay.
Love is (fill in the blank) add a metaphor. Understood in any language and culture.
August 26th, 2021 15:39
Invasive
Accidental Poet said:
Bravo dear poetess. This should be framed within the Halls of Love Museum. 🌹
August 26th, 2021 05:31
Accidental Poet said:
Bravo dear poetess. This should be framed within the Halls of Love Museum. 🌹
August 26th, 2021 05:31
Invasive
L. B. Mek said:
some love stories, are for Hollywood
with popcorn and picket fence happy endings..
others, are much more personal and evocative
made for that theatre of your mind\'s regret channels..
still, one way or another they both invade
and build a cinema, in your forehead
that\'s a little too stubborn, to dismantle and shed...
(a wonderfully quirky write, dear Fay
thanks for sharing)
August 26th, 2021 04:36
L. B. Mek said:
some love stories, are for Hollywood
with popcorn and picket fence happy endings..
others, are much more personal and evocative
made for that theatre of your mind\'s regret channels..
still, one way or another they both invade
and build a cinema, in your forehead
that\'s a little too stubborn, to dismantle and shed...
(a wonderfully quirky write, dear Fay
thanks for sharing)
August 26th, 2021 04:36
Invasive
Caring dove said:
An interesting choice of words Fay 🙂 I liked the read
August 26th, 2021 02:19
Caring dove said:
An interesting choice of words Fay 🙂 I liked the read
August 26th, 2021 02:19
Cloistered
Goldfinch60 said:
That wait will one day be over and you will be sailing the sea again together.
Andy
August 26th, 2021 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
That wait will one day be over and you will be sailing the sea again together.
Andy
August 26th, 2021 00:45
Cloistered
Coyote said:
Wow, great use of metaphor in this beautiful piece Fay. Excellent write🙂
August 25th, 2021 11:22
Coyote said:
Wow, great use of metaphor in this beautiful piece Fay. Excellent write🙂
August 25th, 2021 11:22
Cloistered
dusk arising said:
The sea in all her changing guises with all her treacherous guilt, as beguiling as ever. A fearsome wasteland of ocean before the eyes of she awaiting his homecoming. A dreaded fearsome cruel overlord lest such time be stormy.
The sea, a teacher, Ever present and ageless.
Caught by the romance of your vivid pictures, I romanced.
August 25th, 2021 08:19
dusk arising said:
The sea in all her changing guises with all her treacherous guilt, as beguiling as ever. A fearsome wasteland of ocean before the eyes of she awaiting his homecoming. A dreaded fearsome cruel overlord lest such time be stormy.
The sea, a teacher, Ever present and ageless.
Caught by the romance of your vivid pictures, I romanced.
August 25th, 2021 08:19
Cloistered
Neville said:
tho your words could not be bettered, they provide the perfect vehicle, frame and marriage to the image you have chosen to represent them ................. x
August 25th, 2021 06:43
Neville said:
tho your words could not be bettered, they provide the perfect vehicle, frame and marriage to the image you have chosen to represent them ................. x
August 25th, 2021 06:43
Cloistered
Doggerel Dave said:
All that erotic literature, all that erotic content on line - all redundant . I can now just gaze at the sea....... A truly evocative piece Fay, when viewed through my eyes. powerful. Thanks.
August 25th, 2021 01:46
Doggerel Dave said:
All that erotic literature, all that erotic content on line - all redundant . I can now just gaze at the sea....... A truly evocative piece Fay, when viewed through my eyes. powerful. Thanks.
August 25th, 2021 01:46
Perception
dusk arising said:
Even the greatest shall know temporary relevance in their everyday now-ness\'. Though our history books record something different. but time, what is it, where does it go. Will they ever invent time travel or is that what some of the UFO\'s are, visitors from the future... who knows?
What a provokative can of worms you\'ve opened today Fay.
August 24th, 2021 13:06
dusk arising said:
Even the greatest shall know temporary relevance in their everyday now-ness\'. Though our history books record something different. but time, what is it, where does it go. Will they ever invent time travel or is that what some of the UFO\'s are, visitors from the future... who knows?
What a provokative can of worms you\'ve opened today Fay.
August 24th, 2021 13:06
Perception
Neville said:
Ha .. and there\'s me thinking mistress Fay has invented a new perceptual tool to determine amongst other things alignment and spatial judgement .... one can never be sure these days except for the certainty that she will never fail to deliver when it comes to the quality of her bespoke creations ..x
August 24th, 2021 12:12
Neville said:
Ha .. and there\'s me thinking mistress Fay has invented a new perceptual tool to determine amongst other things alignment and spatial judgement .... one can never be sure these days except for the certainty that she will never fail to deliver when it comes to the quality of her bespoke creations ..x
August 24th, 2021 12:12
Perception
Doggerel Dave said:
Play on Fay, play on – and please give eternity, infinity and now another outing sometime. They are always welcome buzzing around my head – provided they don’t stay too long…..
August 24th, 2021 08:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Play on Fay, play on – and please give eternity, infinity and now another outing sometime. They are always welcome buzzing around my head – provided they don’t stay too long…..
August 24th, 2021 08:32
Impatient
The elder poet said:
A ppem that shows love and wanting. But never saying the words.A very nice write. Thank you Fay for sharing.
August 23rd, 2021 12:35
The elder poet said:
A ppem that shows love and wanting. But never saying the words.A very nice write. Thank you Fay for sharing.
August 23rd, 2021 12:35
Impatient
dusk arising said:
Well rip my nets on rocks if this aint a saucy missive. She cant wait till she surfaces his trawl and empties the goodies from his cod end. (All good trawlermen terms you understand).
Now I know why sailors and fishermen walk with wobbly legs.
August 23rd, 2021 07:44
dusk arising said:
Well rip my nets on rocks if this aint a saucy missive. She cant wait till she surfaces his trawl and empties the goodies from his cod end. (All good trawlermen terms you understand).
Now I know why sailors and fishermen walk with wobbly legs.
August 23rd, 2021 07:44
Impatient
Neville said:
if you know summat he don\'t .. you better just send him a note ........
can you not sea, nautical naughtyness does it for me ................................... tis luverly say\'s this reluctant land lubber ... x
August 23rd, 2021 06:54
Neville said:
if you know summat he don\'t .. you better just send him a note ........
can you not sea, nautical naughtyness does it for me ................................... tis luverly say\'s this reluctant land lubber ... x
August 23rd, 2021 06:54
Impatient
L. B. Mek said:
\'Bales
of unloaded sensation
striving, to be tasted.
Pay-loads
of waited-for nectar
sit ready for later.
Passion survives, only
if often
its action is savoured.\'
wonderfully vivid, dear Fay
there\'s enough sizzling sensuality
in your poetry, to cause
global warming, all by itself... lol
August 23rd, 2021 06:27
L. B. Mek said:
\'Bales
of unloaded sensation
striving, to be tasted.
Pay-loads
of waited-for nectar
sit ready for later.
Passion survives, only
if often
its action is savoured.\'
wonderfully vivid, dear Fay
there\'s enough sizzling sensuality
in your poetry, to cause
global warming, all by itself... lol
August 23rd, 2021 06:27
Impatient
Accidental Poet said:
Don\'t forget to put out the \"Do Not Disturb\" sign. Well penned Fay. 👍
August 23rd, 2021 05:04
Accidental Poet said:
Don\'t forget to put out the \"Do Not Disturb\" sign. Well penned Fay. 👍
August 23rd, 2021 05:04
Until Day
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
An outstanding piece of writing. There are many nights where I welcome the comfort of sleep…a sleep that I wish to prolong for many hours…a sleep that delivers beautiful dreams…a sleep without pain…a sleep without worries…
Your words have eloquently defined what sleep has meant to me…especially during these past two years.
Thank you for sharing your extraordinary talent.
Laura🌻
August 22nd, 2021 22:37
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
An outstanding piece of writing. There are many nights where I welcome the comfort of sleep…a sleep that I wish to prolong for many hours…a sleep that delivers beautiful dreams…a sleep without pain…a sleep without worries…
Your words have eloquently defined what sleep has meant to me…especially during these past two years.
Thank you for sharing your extraordinary talent.
Laura🌻
August 22nd, 2021 22:37
Until Day
Doggerel Dave said:
All my hopes, as time for bed approaches, are to be found, much more poetically expressed than I could, in that beautifully structured piece of pure poetry. Total thanks Fay.
August 22nd, 2021 19:28
Doggerel Dave said:
All my hopes, as time for bed approaches, are to be found, much more poetically expressed than I could, in that beautifully structured piece of pure poetry. Total thanks Fay.
August 22nd, 2021 19:28
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