Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Perception
Doggerel Dave said:
Play on Fay, play on – and please give eternity, infinity and now another outing sometime. They are always welcome buzzing around my head – provided they don’t stay too long…..
August 24th, 2021 08:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Play on Fay, play on – and please give eternity, infinity and now another outing sometime. They are always welcome buzzing around my head – provided they don’t stay too long…..
August 24th, 2021 08:32
Impatient
The elder poet said:
A ppem that shows love and wanting. But never saying the words.A very nice write. Thank you Fay for sharing.
August 23rd, 2021 12:35
The elder poet said:
A ppem that shows love and wanting. But never saying the words.A very nice write. Thank you Fay for sharing.
August 23rd, 2021 12:35
Impatient
dusk arising said:
Well rip my nets on rocks if this aint a saucy missive. She cant wait till she surfaces his trawl and empties the goodies from his cod end. (All good trawlermen terms you understand).
Now I know why sailors and fishermen walk with wobbly legs.
August 23rd, 2021 07:44
dusk arising said:
Well rip my nets on rocks if this aint a saucy missive. She cant wait till she surfaces his trawl and empties the goodies from his cod end. (All good trawlermen terms you understand).
Now I know why sailors and fishermen walk with wobbly legs.
August 23rd, 2021 07:44
Impatient
Neville said:
if you know summat he don\'t .. you better just send him a note ........
can you not sea, nautical naughtyness does it for me ................................... tis luverly say\'s this reluctant land lubber ... x
August 23rd, 2021 06:54
Neville said:
if you know summat he don\'t .. you better just send him a note ........
can you not sea, nautical naughtyness does it for me ................................... tis luverly say\'s this reluctant land lubber ... x
August 23rd, 2021 06:54
Impatient
L. B. Mek said:
\'Bales
of unloaded sensation
striving, to be tasted.
Pay-loads
of waited-for nectar
sit ready for later.
Passion survives, only
if often
its action is savoured.\'
wonderfully vivid, dear Fay
there\'s enough sizzling sensuality
in your poetry, to cause
global warming, all by itself... lol
August 23rd, 2021 06:27
L. B. Mek said:
\'Bales
of unloaded sensation
striving, to be tasted.
Pay-loads
of waited-for nectar
sit ready for later.
Passion survives, only
if often
its action is savoured.\'
wonderfully vivid, dear Fay
there\'s enough sizzling sensuality
in your poetry, to cause
global warming, all by itself... lol
August 23rd, 2021 06:27
Until Day
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
An outstanding piece of writing. There are many nights where I welcome the comfort of sleep…a sleep that I wish to prolong for many hours…a sleep that delivers beautiful dreams…a sleep without pain…a sleep without worries…
Your words have eloquently defined what sleep has meant to me…especially during these past two years.
Thank you for sharing your extraordinary talent.
Laura🌻
August 22nd, 2021 22:37
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
An outstanding piece of writing. There are many nights where I welcome the comfort of sleep…a sleep that I wish to prolong for many hours…a sleep that delivers beautiful dreams…a sleep without pain…a sleep without worries…
Your words have eloquently defined what sleep has meant to me…especially during these past two years.
Thank you for sharing your extraordinary talent.
Laura🌻
August 22nd, 2021 22:37
Until Day
Doggerel Dave said:
All my hopes, as time for bed approaches, are to be found, much more poetically expressed than I could, in that beautifully structured piece of pure poetry. Total thanks Fay.
August 22nd, 2021 19:28
Doggerel Dave said:
All my hopes, as time for bed approaches, are to be found, much more poetically expressed than I could, in that beautifully structured piece of pure poetry. Total thanks Fay.
August 22nd, 2021 19:28
Until Day
Neville said:
I don\'t know how you do it, but you just keep on doing it day after day my lady .. or in this particular case night ..
superbly crafted, aesthetically pleasing and with the skill of a master word weaver (or mistress) in your case, of course :) ........................ x
August 22nd, 2021 13:22
Neville said:
I don\'t know how you do it, but you just keep on doing it day after day my lady .. or in this particular case night ..
superbly crafted, aesthetically pleasing and with the skill of a master word weaver (or mistress) in your case, of course :) ........................ x
August 22nd, 2021 13:22
Until Day
dusk arising said:
After writing my post of today then I feel your words here deep within for the times when sleep is a distant respite for a wretched mind.
Another Fay penned expression joins my favourites, thank you.
August 22nd, 2021 03:49
dusk arising said:
After writing my post of today then I feel your words here deep within for the times when sleep is a distant respite for a wretched mind.
Another Fay penned expression joins my favourites, thank you.
August 22nd, 2021 03:49
Caught
dusk arising said:
Looking past the surface, to the torn child within. Very moving and sad. So much to give in a mind locked away behind walls of torture. Subjected to hatred and abuse.
Your emotional insight reminds us of the human frailty of these crushed souls.
August 22nd, 2021 03:28
dusk arising said:
Looking past the surface, to the torn child within. Very moving and sad. So much to give in a mind locked away behind walls of torture. Subjected to hatred and abuse.
Your emotional insight reminds us of the human frailty of these crushed souls.
August 22nd, 2021 03:28
Caught
Dove said:
Well penned! Many young innocent girls fall prey to animals, and their lives are ruined! Dare they speak up, or run away and suffer the consequences
August 21st, 2021 11:48
Dove said:
Well penned! Many young innocent girls fall prey to animals, and their lives are ruined! Dare they speak up, or run away and suffer the consequences
August 21st, 2021 11:48
Caught
PrEm Ji said:
Your poem resounds for the innocent women harassed in Afghanistan... I listen to their silent shrieks...
August 21st, 2021 09:57
PrEm Ji said:
Your poem resounds for the innocent women harassed in Afghanistan... I listen to their silent shrieks...
August 21st, 2021 09:57
Caught
Neville said:
something quite different and I must say .. also unexpected my Lady but as always you deliver the goods and so well ...
I think you just done good by her and all those potential others out there .. x
August 21st, 2021 06:40
Neville said:
something quite different and I must say .. also unexpected my Lady but as always you deliver the goods and so well ...
I think you just done good by her and all those potential others out there .. x
August 21st, 2021 06:40
Caught
Doggerel Dave said:
The slave trade, which is not equal opportunity, exploits many thousands, nay millions of women across the world in diverse ways. Thanks for the reminder, Fay.
August 21st, 2021 05:48
Doggerel Dave said:
The slave trade, which is not equal opportunity, exploits many thousands, nay millions of women across the world in diverse ways. Thanks for the reminder, Fay.
August 21st, 2021 05:48
Single Handed
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, it is such a shame that so many children are being brought up by a single parent these days.
Andy
August 21st, 2021 00:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, it is such a shame that so many children are being brought up by a single parent these days.
Andy
August 21st, 2021 00:32
Single Handed
Trenz Pruca said:
Well what could be better? Not a thing. Once again, thank you Faye for brightening my day.
August 20th, 2021 16:15
Trenz Pruca said:
Well what could be better? Not a thing. Once again, thank you Faye for brightening my day.
August 20th, 2021 16:15
Single Handed
Coyote said:
Ah that\'s beautiful Fay. Being a single parent is the toughest job in the world.
August 20th, 2021 15:25
Coyote said:
Ah that\'s beautiful Fay. Being a single parent is the toughest job in the world.
August 20th, 2021 15:25
Single Handed
Neville said:
my word this takes me back .. tis gert lush Fay .. the words I mean .. not the actual doing .. apart from the breakfast bit .................................... x
August 20th, 2021 08:27
Neville said:
my word this takes me back .. tis gert lush Fay .. the words I mean .. not the actual doing .. apart from the breakfast bit .................................... x
August 20th, 2021 08:27
Single Handed
dusk arising said:
Aww - lovely. Really a fine example of your wonderful creative mind producing great entertaining poetry.
A super read which is going in among my favourites amid many others of yours there.
August 20th, 2021 06:26
dusk arising said:
Aww - lovely. Really a fine example of your wonderful creative mind producing great entertaining poetry.
A super read which is going in among my favourites amid many others of yours there.
August 20th, 2021 06:26
Single Handed
L. B. Mek said:
what a wholesome and life affirming read
a wonderful portrait or dedication
thanks for sharing, dear Fay
August 20th, 2021 05:47
L. B. Mek said:
what a wholesome and life affirming read
a wonderful portrait or dedication
thanks for sharing, dear Fay
August 20th, 2021 05:47
Single Handed
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
I was reading of a \'fatherless society\' - lots of single mums. Of course, not ALL families are fatherless, but I see what the author meant.
August 20th, 2021 04:35
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
I was reading of a \'fatherless society\' - lots of single mums. Of course, not ALL families are fatherless, but I see what the author meant.
August 20th, 2021 04:35
Chance
Neville said:
Muchly enjoyed moments like that can catch a guy unprepared ... feels good tho\' dunnit ............................ :) x
August 19th, 2021 10:07
Neville said:
Muchly enjoyed moments like that can catch a guy unprepared ... feels good tho\' dunnit ............................ :) x
August 19th, 2021 10:07
Chance
Dove said:
I love it! Indeed Passion can turn any No to Yes, if the promise is a sweet tender kiss
August 18th, 2021 13:55
Dove said:
I love it! Indeed Passion can turn any No to Yes, if the promise is a sweet tender kiss
August 18th, 2021 13:55
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