Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Pleasures
The elder poet said:
Awesome feeling shown here . A very nice poem. I hope you get those feelings fulfilled . You have a great Sunday.
August 29th, 2021 10:41
The elder poet said:
Awesome feeling shown here . A very nice poem. I hope you get those feelings fulfilled . You have a great Sunday.
August 29th, 2021 10:41
Pleasures
Saxon Crow said:
Stirring, bold and strong. I love this Fay. I can feel the strength of passion flowing from each verse.
August 29th, 2021 08:39
Saxon Crow said:
Stirring, bold and strong. I love this Fay. I can feel the strength of passion flowing from each verse.
August 29th, 2021 08:39
Pleasures
Doggerel Dave said:
Go for it with every fibre of your being........
August 29th, 2021 05:27
Doggerel Dave said:
Go for it with every fibre of your being........
August 29th, 2021 05:27
Pleasures
Neville said:
as soon as I saw the title .. I just knew
this was gonna be something very special ........................................... Enjoyed to the bloomin hilt my friend n true ....................................
Neville x
August 29th, 2021 04:48
Neville said:
as soon as I saw the title .. I just knew
this was gonna be something very special ........................................... Enjoyed to the bloomin hilt my friend n true ....................................
Neville x
August 29th, 2021 04:48
Pleasures
dusk arising said:
Oh boy this is an exciting verve coming from you today Fay. Yes there are days, times in life where we just want to run down the street singing the joys, encouraging all around to join in..... and of course, ready for love. The crown upon human existence.
August 29th, 2021 04:39
dusk arising said:
Oh boy this is an exciting verve coming from you today Fay. Yes there are days, times in life where we just want to run down the street singing the joys, encouraging all around to join in..... and of course, ready for love. The crown upon human existence.
August 29th, 2021 04:39
Treasured
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories of times passed are so treasured Fay.
Andy
August 29th, 2021 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories of times passed are so treasured Fay.
Andy
August 29th, 2021 01:00
Treasured
dusk arising said:
You capture how alive we are at such times. When such awareness and feelings take our mind and body them we know we are in love. The most magical times of life when all else is second. No wonder we treasure such times in memory. No wonder they haunt our dreams.
August 28th, 2021 08:25
dusk arising said:
You capture how alive we are at such times. When such awareness and feelings take our mind and body them we know we are in love. The most magical times of life when all else is second. No wonder we treasure such times in memory. No wonder they haunt our dreams.
August 28th, 2021 08:25
Treasured
Neville said:
someone, some where is a very lucky fella ....................................................but then, aint we all ... thank you for this delightful, early autumnal gift .. x
August 28th, 2021 06:52
Neville said:
someone, some where is a very lucky fella ....................................................but then, aint we all ... thank you for this delightful, early autumnal gift .. x
August 28th, 2021 06:52
Invasive
Neville said:
this is probably my most favourite of poetic genres .. the kind with plenty of impregnating is defo my cuppa tea ..
and so deftly composed like only our Fay knows ............................. x
August 27th, 2021 02:38
Neville said:
this is probably my most favourite of poetic genres .. the kind with plenty of impregnating is defo my cuppa tea ..
and so deftly composed like only our Fay knows ............................. x
August 27th, 2021 02:38
Invasive
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is the strongest of all emotions Fay and can never be defeated.
Andy
August 27th, 2021 00:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is the strongest of all emotions Fay and can never be defeated.
Andy
August 27th, 2021 00:55
Invasive
dusk arising said:
Yep, love beats us into submission and once we have succumbed it imprisons us and has its way with us upon its whim. So powerful.
Your opening line \"Once installed Love arranges its station,\" so much in that line.... love is the BOSS lol.
August 26th, 2021 17:30
dusk arising said:
Yep, love beats us into submission and once we have succumbed it imprisons us and has its way with us upon its whim. So powerful.
Your opening line \"Once installed Love arranges its station,\" so much in that line.... love is the BOSS lol.
August 26th, 2021 17:30
Invasive
Coyote said:
Love flows eternal and so do the writings of Fay Slimm. This is an exquisite poem!
August 26th, 2021 16:55
Coyote said:
Love flows eternal and so do the writings of Fay Slimm. This is an exquisite poem!
August 26th, 2021 16:55
Invasive
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Fay.
Love is (fill in the blank) add a metaphor. Understood in any language and culture.
August 26th, 2021 15:39
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Fay.
Love is (fill in the blank) add a metaphor. Understood in any language and culture.
August 26th, 2021 15:39
Invasive
L. B. Mek said:
some love stories, are for Hollywood
with popcorn and picket fence happy endings..
others, are much more personal and evocative
made for that theatre of your mind\'s regret channels..
still, one way or another they both invade
and build a cinema, in your forehead
that\'s a little too stubborn, to dismantle and shed...
(a wonderfully quirky write, dear Fay
thanks for sharing)
August 26th, 2021 04:36
L. B. Mek said:
some love stories, are for Hollywood
with popcorn and picket fence happy endings..
others, are much more personal and evocative
made for that theatre of your mind\'s regret channels..
still, one way or another they both invade
and build a cinema, in your forehead
that\'s a little too stubborn, to dismantle and shed...
(a wonderfully quirky write, dear Fay
thanks for sharing)
August 26th, 2021 04:36
Invasive
Caring dove said:
An interesting choice of words Fay 🙂 I liked the read
August 26th, 2021 02:19
Caring dove said:
An interesting choice of words Fay 🙂 I liked the read
August 26th, 2021 02:19
Cloistered
Goldfinch60 said:
That wait will one day be over and you will be sailing the sea again together.
Andy
August 26th, 2021 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
That wait will one day be over and you will be sailing the sea again together.
Andy
August 26th, 2021 00:45
Cloistered
Coyote said:
Wow, great use of metaphor in this beautiful piece Fay. Excellent write🙂
August 25th, 2021 11:22
Coyote said:
Wow, great use of metaphor in this beautiful piece Fay. Excellent write🙂
August 25th, 2021 11:22
Cloistered
dusk arising said:
The sea in all her changing guises with all her treacherous guilt, as beguiling as ever. A fearsome wasteland of ocean before the eyes of she awaiting his homecoming. A dreaded fearsome cruel overlord lest such time be stormy.
The sea, a teacher, Ever present and ageless.
Caught by the romance of your vivid pictures, I romanced.
August 25th, 2021 08:19
dusk arising said:
The sea in all her changing guises with all her treacherous guilt, as beguiling as ever. A fearsome wasteland of ocean before the eyes of she awaiting his homecoming. A dreaded fearsome cruel overlord lest such time be stormy.
The sea, a teacher, Ever present and ageless.
Caught by the romance of your vivid pictures, I romanced.
August 25th, 2021 08:19
Cloistered
Neville said:
tho your words could not be bettered, they provide the perfect vehicle, frame and marriage to the image you have chosen to represent them ................. x
August 25th, 2021 06:43
Neville said:
tho your words could not be bettered, they provide the perfect vehicle, frame and marriage to the image you have chosen to represent them ................. x
August 25th, 2021 06:43
Cloistered
Doggerel Dave said:
All that erotic literature, all that erotic content on line - all redundant . I can now just gaze at the sea....... A truly evocative piece Fay, when viewed through my eyes. powerful. Thanks.
August 25th, 2021 01:46
Doggerel Dave said:
All that erotic literature, all that erotic content on line - all redundant . I can now just gaze at the sea....... A truly evocative piece Fay, when viewed through my eyes. powerful. Thanks.
August 25th, 2021 01:46
Perception
dusk arising said:
Even the greatest shall know temporary relevance in their everyday now-ness\'. Though our history books record something different. but time, what is it, where does it go. Will they ever invent time travel or is that what some of the UFO\'s are, visitors from the future... who knows?
What a provokative can of worms you\'ve opened today Fay.
August 24th, 2021 13:06
dusk arising said:
Even the greatest shall know temporary relevance in their everyday now-ness\'. Though our history books record something different. but time, what is it, where does it go. Will they ever invent time travel or is that what some of the UFO\'s are, visitors from the future... who knows?
What a provokative can of worms you\'ve opened today Fay.
August 24th, 2021 13:06
Perception
Neville said:
Ha .. and there\'s me thinking mistress Fay has invented a new perceptual tool to determine amongst other things alignment and spatial judgement .... one can never be sure these days except for the certainty that she will never fail to deliver when it comes to the quality of her bespoke creations ..x
August 24th, 2021 12:12
Neville said:
Ha .. and there\'s me thinking mistress Fay has invented a new perceptual tool to determine amongst other things alignment and spatial judgement .... one can never be sure these days except for the certainty that she will never fail to deliver when it comes to the quality of her bespoke creations ..x
August 24th, 2021 12:12
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