Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
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L. B. Mek said:
indeed, dear Fay
Nature is truly, our creativity\'s
sustainable source, for sustenance...
thank you! a wonderful read
August 31st, 2021 06:22
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, dear Fay
Nature is truly, our creativity\'s
sustainable source, for sustenance...
thank you! a wonderful read
August 31st, 2021 06:22
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Dove said:
Interesting, the covert poet! Observation is a poets greatest inspiration
August 31st, 2021 06:14
Dove said:
Interesting, the covert poet! Observation is a poets greatest inspiration
August 31st, 2021 06:14
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Accidental Poet said:
Yes Nature feeds poets as well as wildlife. Beautifully penned Fay.
August 31st, 2021 05:31
Accidental Poet said:
Yes Nature feeds poets as well as wildlife. Beautifully penned Fay.
August 31st, 2021 05:31
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Lorna said:
Loved the poem about my friend about my other friends the birds and loved the sentiment - I just watch from windows so I consider this my hide!
August 31st, 2021 05:02
Lorna said:
Loved the poem about my friend about my other friends the birds and loved the sentiment - I just watch from windows so I consider this my hide!
August 31st, 2021 05:02
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dusk arising said:
indeed, we are fed by the wild for too cossetted we can become.
Lovely suspenseful tale here.
August 31st, 2021 04:41
dusk arising said:
indeed, we are fed by the wild for too cossetted we can become.
Lovely suspenseful tale here.
August 31st, 2021 04:41
Dumbness
Goldfinch60 said:
That silence can be devastating Fay, there is so much truth in your words.
Andy
August 31st, 2021 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
That silence can be devastating Fay, there is so much truth in your words.
Andy
August 31st, 2021 00:47
Dumbness
dusk arising said:
The power of words unsaid. More especially when certain words need to be said.
Often a tactic in an unmatched wit of put you downs.
Love is about sharing after all and that includes sharing obstacles to be cleared for a road ahead not creating silent roadside bombs one fears could explode at any moment.
August 30th, 2021 07:47
dusk arising said:
The power of words unsaid. More especially when certain words need to be said.
Often a tactic in an unmatched wit of put you downs.
Love is about sharing after all and that includes sharing obstacles to be cleared for a road ahead not creating silent roadside bombs one fears could explode at any moment.
August 30th, 2021 07:47
Dumbness
L. B. Mek said:
\'dumbness fixed, on stunted
responses
admits, no warmth so love
topples
while couples mumble in cold
duo-disdain
a plain truth, being forgotten
that, bliss: shrivels...\'
hauntingly worded truth, dear Fay
thank you!
August 30th, 2021 06:54
L. B. Mek said:
\'dumbness fixed, on stunted
responses
admits, no warmth so love
topples
while couples mumble in cold
duo-disdain
a plain truth, being forgotten
that, bliss: shrivels...\'
hauntingly worded truth, dear Fay
thank you!
August 30th, 2021 06:54
Dumbness
Lorna said:
So well said. I\'ve known people who \"fight\" this way. It IS a great way to disable an opponent though - they have nothing to push against! But never a good weapon for love!
August 30th, 2021 06:15
Lorna said:
So well said. I\'ve known people who \"fight\" this way. It IS a great way to disable an opponent though - they have nothing to push against! But never a good weapon for love!
August 30th, 2021 06:15
Dumbness
HannahElisabeth said:
I wish I could send this to someone but, they wouldn\'t respond anyway...
This is so eloquently worded for something so painful. I enjoyed the lighthearted title despite the heartbreaking context, it\'s certainly a nice way of putting it!
August 30th, 2021 05:25
HannahElisabeth said:
I wish I could send this to someone but, they wouldn\'t respond anyway...
This is so eloquently worded for something so painful. I enjoyed the lighthearted title despite the heartbreaking context, it\'s certainly a nice way of putting it!
August 30th, 2021 05:25
Dumbness
Neville said:
this whole page screams TRUTH oh\' but perfect and loudly .................... x
August 30th, 2021 05:18
Neville said:
this whole page screams TRUTH oh\' but perfect and loudly .................... x
August 30th, 2021 05:18
Dumbness
Doggerel Dave said:
Human need and \'Love\' - so freely bandied about here - weaponised, Fay.
August 30th, 2021 05:03
Doggerel Dave said:
Human need and \'Love\' - so freely bandied about here - weaponised, Fay.
August 30th, 2021 05:03
Pleasures
Goldfinch60 said:
Experience is so important in our lives Fay as it cannot be taught.
Andy
August 30th, 2021 01:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Experience is so important in our lives Fay as it cannot be taught.
Andy
August 30th, 2021 01:01
Pleasures
The elder poet said:
Awesome feeling shown here . A very nice poem. I hope you get those feelings fulfilled . You have a great Sunday.
August 29th, 2021 10:41
The elder poet said:
Awesome feeling shown here . A very nice poem. I hope you get those feelings fulfilled . You have a great Sunday.
August 29th, 2021 10:41
Pleasures
Accidental Poet said:
May the pleasures you seek be the memories you keep. 😉
August 29th, 2021 10:07
Accidental Poet said:
May the pleasures you seek be the memories you keep. 😉
August 29th, 2021 10:07
Pleasures
Saxon Crow said:
Stirring, bold and strong. I love this Fay. I can feel the strength of passion flowing from each verse.
August 29th, 2021 08:39
Saxon Crow said:
Stirring, bold and strong. I love this Fay. I can feel the strength of passion flowing from each verse.
August 29th, 2021 08:39
Pleasures
Doggerel Dave said:
Go for it with every fibre of your being........
August 29th, 2021 05:27
Doggerel Dave said:
Go for it with every fibre of your being........
August 29th, 2021 05:27
Pleasures
Neville said:
as soon as I saw the title .. I just knew
this was gonna be something very special ........................................... Enjoyed to the bloomin hilt my friend n true ....................................
Neville x
August 29th, 2021 04:48
Neville said:
as soon as I saw the title .. I just knew
this was gonna be something very special ........................................... Enjoyed to the bloomin hilt my friend n true ....................................
Neville x
August 29th, 2021 04:48
Pleasures
dusk arising said:
Oh boy this is an exciting verve coming from you today Fay. Yes there are days, times in life where we just want to run down the street singing the joys, encouraging all around to join in..... and of course, ready for love. The crown upon human existence.
August 29th, 2021 04:39
dusk arising said:
Oh boy this is an exciting verve coming from you today Fay. Yes there are days, times in life where we just want to run down the street singing the joys, encouraging all around to join in..... and of course, ready for love. The crown upon human existence.
August 29th, 2021 04:39
Treasured
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories of times passed are so treasured Fay.
Andy
August 29th, 2021 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories of times passed are so treasured Fay.
Andy
August 29th, 2021 01:00
Treasured
dusk arising said:
You capture how alive we are at such times. When such awareness and feelings take our mind and body them we know we are in love. The most magical times of life when all else is second. No wonder we treasure such times in memory. No wonder they haunt our dreams.
August 28th, 2021 08:25
dusk arising said:
You capture how alive we are at such times. When such awareness and feelings take our mind and body them we know we are in love. The most magical times of life when all else is second. No wonder we treasure such times in memory. No wonder they haunt our dreams.
August 28th, 2021 08:25
Treasured
Neville said:
someone, some where is a very lucky fella ....................................................but then, aint we all ... thank you for this delightful, early autumnal gift .. x
August 28th, 2021 06:52
Neville said:
someone, some where is a very lucky fella ....................................................but then, aint we all ... thank you for this delightful, early autumnal gift .. x
August 28th, 2021 06:52
Invasive
Neville said:
this is probably my most favourite of poetic genres .. the kind with plenty of impregnating is defo my cuppa tea ..
and so deftly composed like only our Fay knows ............................. x
August 27th, 2021 02:38
Neville said:
this is probably my most favourite of poetic genres .. the kind with plenty of impregnating is defo my cuppa tea ..
and so deftly composed like only our Fay knows ............................. x
August 27th, 2021 02:38
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