Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Chance
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Romantic notion\'?
Come on Fay, that woz lust, not very pure but certainly simple.
On the basis of your evidence, they both enjoyed....\'Nuff said...
August 18th, 2021 03:59
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Romantic notion\'?
Come on Fay, that woz lust, not very pure but certainly simple.
On the basis of your evidence, they both enjoyed....\'Nuff said...
August 18th, 2021 03:59
Chance
dusk arising said:
Oh cor blimey Fay, a bit contravertial. Us blokes have been getting a lot of stick for not hearing the NOs and imagining they are not meant thereby ending up in court. Not that humble, innocent, romantic littuw me ever would do anything like that of course.
On the other hand yes, I do see your lady melting here as the passion of her dreams approaches and..... well, as the saying goes, the rest is just toothpaste...
Innit awful when legal matters interfere with the romantic instinct.
August 18th, 2021 02:58
dusk arising said:
Oh cor blimey Fay, a bit contravertial. Us blokes have been getting a lot of stick for not hearing the NOs and imagining they are not meant thereby ending up in court. Not that humble, innocent, romantic littuw me ever would do anything like that of course.
On the other hand yes, I do see your lady melting here as the passion of her dreams approaches and..... well, as the saying goes, the rest is just toothpaste...
Innit awful when legal matters interfere with the romantic instinct.
August 18th, 2021 02:58
Us
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Fay, time can be ageless in our lives.
Andy
August 18th, 2021 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Fay, time can be ageless in our lives.
Andy
August 18th, 2021 01:42
Us
dusk arising said:
That \'within loves halo\' feeling brings forth our wonderment about our surroundings and where we fit into the vast scheme of everything. There are no bigger surroundings than the sky above and around us and when seen on a cloud free night it can give that inclusive feeling that you two are simply meant to be.
Your romantic poem brings out the romantic in me LOL.
August 17th, 2021 09:54
dusk arising said:
That \'within loves halo\' feeling brings forth our wonderment about our surroundings and where we fit into the vast scheme of everything. There are no bigger surroundings than the sky above and around us and when seen on a cloud free night it can give that inclusive feeling that you two are simply meant to be.
Your romantic poem brings out the romantic in me LOL.
August 17th, 2021 09:54
Us
Neville said:
screaming solar systems Fay .. now ya got us going .. Never mind the been there, done that etc etc .. if this aint summat we all want a bit more of, then there\'s summat decidedly wrong with us ... N :) x
August 17th, 2021 06:47
Neville said:
screaming solar systems Fay .. now ya got us going .. Never mind the been there, done that etc etc .. if this aint summat we all want a bit more of, then there\'s summat decidedly wrong with us ... N :) x
August 17th, 2021 06:47
Us
Poetic Dan said:
O I seek to find then clicked on your name and what a delightful read.
Thank you
August 17th, 2021 06:29
Poetic Dan said:
O I seek to find then clicked on your name and what a delightful read.
Thank you
August 17th, 2021 06:29
Us
L. B. Mek said:
\'wink wide
heavenly eyes, at us
while moon\'s lustrous belly
bends, earthward to spy\'..
really liked the flow
and as-always you imagery is majestic
thanks for sharing, dear Fay
August 17th, 2021 05:48
L. B. Mek said:
\'wink wide
heavenly eyes, at us
while moon\'s lustrous belly
bends, earthward to spy\'..
really liked the flow
and as-always you imagery is majestic
thanks for sharing, dear Fay
August 17th, 2021 05:48
Us
Doggerel Dave said:
I feel a little sorry for you folks in the northern hemisphere; although your poem captures richly the wonder of the heavens, Fay, if you came south I believe your entry here would probably cause MPS to start smoking....... and then there\'s the passion in a climate (certain seasons) conducive to....
August 17th, 2021 04:59
Doggerel Dave said:
I feel a little sorry for you folks in the northern hemisphere; although your poem captures richly the wonder of the heavens, Fay, if you came south I believe your entry here would probably cause MPS to start smoking....... and then there\'s the passion in a climate (certain seasons) conducive to....
August 17th, 2021 04:59
Yellows
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words once more Fay, thank you for sharing them.
Andy
August 16th, 2021 23:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words once more Fay, thank you for sharing them.
Andy
August 16th, 2021 23:45
Yellows
Neville said:
................. you just mellowed this old fellow out .. smiling though through it all ........................................... :) x
August 16th, 2021 12:27
Neville said:
................. you just mellowed this old fellow out .. smiling though through it all ........................................... :) x
August 16th, 2021 12:27
Yellows
The elder poet said:
A beautiful poem . making a picture out of your words. Thank you for sharing.
August 16th, 2021 11:34
The elder poet said:
A beautiful poem . making a picture out of your words. Thank you for sharing.
August 16th, 2021 11:34
Yellows
Dove said:
Lovely! I never thought of a yellow sky, more as golden or lavender! Even periwinkle!
Nice to read your words as always dear Fay
August 16th, 2021 10:01
Dove said:
Lovely! I never thought of a yellow sky, more as golden or lavender! Even periwinkle!
Nice to read your words as always dear Fay
August 16th, 2021 10:01
Yellows
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
We are blessed with he most amazing season changes in this country Fay and your poem today captures the emotion it stirs wonderfully thank you much enjoyed
August 16th, 2021 05:24
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
We are blessed with he most amazing season changes in this country Fay and your poem today captures the emotion it stirs wonderfully thank you much enjoyed
August 16th, 2021 05:24
Yellows
dusk arising said:
That yellow hue proves the sun is shining somewhere. I remember one morning arriving at the top of broadway hill and as i drove down there was a noticeable band of brown mist suspended above the vale of Evesham. That was in the 80\'s before we attempted to stop the pollution, not quickly enough I hear one and all say.
Confronted with daily news about pollution and global warming how refreshing to read your poetry today and envisage such a lovely view. I ache to sit quietly and take in such atmosphere..... methinks i have a wait ahead though.
August 16th, 2021 05:24
dusk arising said:
That yellow hue proves the sun is shining somewhere. I remember one morning arriving at the top of broadway hill and as i drove down there was a noticeable band of brown mist suspended above the vale of Evesham. That was in the 80\'s before we attempted to stop the pollution, not quickly enough I hear one and all say.
Confronted with daily news about pollution and global warming how refreshing to read your poetry today and envisage such a lovely view. I ache to sit quietly and take in such atmosphere..... methinks i have a wait ahead though.
August 16th, 2021 05:24
Yellows
L. B. Mek said:
took me back to past holidays
in the west country
so many wonderful walking paths
unassuming hidden beaches
and breath-taking hilltop views,
this is the best few weeks to view
the true wondrous nature of our beloved blighty
so many contrasting colours..
love your first line, a truly romantic depiction
\'Like a silk-veined yellow scarf
mist hangs today in the harbour.\'
such a wonderful read, dear Fay
August 16th, 2021 05:15
L. B. Mek said:
took me back to past holidays
in the west country
so many wonderful walking paths
unassuming hidden beaches
and breath-taking hilltop views,
this is the best few weeks to view
the true wondrous nature of our beloved blighty
so many contrasting colours..
love your first line, a truly romantic depiction
\'Like a silk-veined yellow scarf
mist hangs today in the harbour.\'
such a wonderful read, dear Fay
August 16th, 2021 05:15
Yellows
Lorna said:
Summer is so short isn\'t if Fay. We still have more than a month of it and yet Autumn already seems \"in the air\". Loved this.
August 16th, 2021 04:36
Lorna said:
Summer is so short isn\'t if Fay. We still have more than a month of it and yet Autumn already seems \"in the air\". Loved this.
August 16th, 2021 04:36
Yellows
Doggerel Dave said:
Yellow – one of my favourite c……s. Seriously – a high performance touring bicycle I ordered and rode around parts of England many years ago was bright daffodil yellow. I wandered lonely as a…no, may have been done before..
Avoided using the ‘c’ word didn’t you..too controversial?
Fresh and easy on my eye here, your piece.
August 16th, 2021 04:30
Doggerel Dave said:
Yellow – one of my favourite c……s. Seriously – a high performance touring bicycle I ordered and rode around parts of England many years ago was bright daffodil yellow. I wandered lonely as a…no, may have been done before..
Avoided using the ‘c’ word didn’t you..too controversial?
Fresh and easy on my eye here, your piece.
August 16th, 2021 04:30
Waste Not.
Neville said:
I say let\'s savour every single bloomin one .......................................................
this is so super cool my dear lady Fay, I am seriously thinking about fishing out my old scarf ...............:) x
August 15th, 2021 08:13
Neville said:
I say let\'s savour every single bloomin one .......................................................
this is so super cool my dear lady Fay, I am seriously thinking about fishing out my old scarf ...............:) x
August 15th, 2021 08:13
Waste Not.
Dove said:
Life’s rawness! You definitely scribe words in unique thoughts! Inspiration comes
from many places, and here you have inspired me to think more, pair words uniquely
Take Care!
August 14th, 2021 18:20
Dove said:
Life’s rawness! You definitely scribe words in unique thoughts! Inspiration comes
from many places, and here you have inspired me to think more, pair words uniquely
Take Care!
August 14th, 2021 18:20
Waste Not.
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Fay.
I had nothing for today but you have inspired me to stir fry something quick.
August 14th, 2021 16:19
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Fay.
I had nothing for today but you have inspired me to stir fry something quick.
August 14th, 2021 16:19
Waste Not.
Coyote said:
You never disappoint Fay and this is no exception. I wish I could borrow your muse as mine seems to be on a perpetual vacation. Excellent write🙂
August 14th, 2021 15:38
Coyote said:
You never disappoint Fay and this is no exception. I wish I could borrow your muse as mine seems to be on a perpetual vacation. Excellent write🙂
August 14th, 2021 15:38
Waste Not.
Goldfinch60 said:
May those wonderful words be forever with us Fay.
Andy
August 14th, 2021 11:55
Goldfinch60 said:
May those wonderful words be forever with us Fay.
Andy
August 14th, 2021 11:55
Waste Not.
Doggerel Dave said:
I fear I have a very mundane view of writing here compared with yours, Fay. I sometimes see it as the virtual card game of patience - this word fits or it doesn\'t.....yours fit , mine oftimes don\'t.....
August 14th, 2021 06:23
Doggerel Dave said:
I fear I have a very mundane view of writing here compared with yours, Fay. I sometimes see it as the virtual card game of patience - this word fits or it doesn\'t.....yours fit , mine oftimes don\'t.....
August 14th, 2021 06:23
Waste Not.
dusk arising said:
Hmm I\'m lacking all those things at the moment but I know how well you have described the wonderful creative times when words fall from your fingertips or you try to tease a novel way to adjoin words into something more meaningful.
All the more meaningful when respected poetic colleagues show appreciation in comments here on mps.
August 14th, 2021 04:49
dusk arising said:
Hmm I\'m lacking all those things at the moment but I know how well you have described the wonderful creative times when words fall from your fingertips or you try to tease a novel way to adjoin words into something more meaningful.
All the more meaningful when respected poetic colleagues show appreciation in comments here on mps.
August 14th, 2021 04:49
Brooding
Neville said:
Dunno how I missed this magnificent acknowledgement to late summer and the imminent arrival of autumn, till now ..
if I had been any later, I would be early for the onset of winter .. maybe ... an outstanding depiction filled to overflow with incredible imagery .... x
August 14th, 2021 03:59
Neville said:
Dunno how I missed this magnificent acknowledgement to late summer and the imminent arrival of autumn, till now ..
if I had been any later, I would be early for the onset of winter .. maybe ... an outstanding depiction filled to overflow with incredible imagery .... x
August 14th, 2021 03:59
Brooding
SureshG said:
Those much anticipated summer rains, a lifeline to thirsty, such as your poems.
August 13th, 2021 11:05
SureshG said:
Those much anticipated summer rains, a lifeline to thirsty, such as your poems.
August 13th, 2021 11:05
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