Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Until Day
Neville said:
I don\'t know how you do it, but you just keep on doing it day after day my lady .. or in this particular case night ..
superbly crafted, aesthetically pleasing and with the skill of a master word weaver (or mistress) in your case, of course :) ........................ x
August 22nd, 2021 13:22
Neville said:
I don\'t know how you do it, but you just keep on doing it day after day my lady .. or in this particular case night ..
superbly crafted, aesthetically pleasing and with the skill of a master word weaver (or mistress) in your case, of course :) ........................ x
August 22nd, 2021 13:22
Until Day
Accidental Poet said:
Fay, may you awake to a new day of confidence, strength and enthusiasm. A very heartfelt write. 👍
August 22nd, 2021 12:08
Accidental Poet said:
Fay, may you awake to a new day of confidence, strength and enthusiasm. A very heartfelt write. 👍
August 22nd, 2021 12:08
Until Day
dusk arising said:
After writing my post of today then I feel your words here deep within for the times when sleep is a distant respite for a wretched mind.
Another Fay penned expression joins my favourites, thank you.
August 22nd, 2021 03:49
dusk arising said:
After writing my post of today then I feel your words here deep within for the times when sleep is a distant respite for a wretched mind.
Another Fay penned expression joins my favourites, thank you.
August 22nd, 2021 03:49
Caught
dusk arising said:
Looking past the surface, to the torn child within. Very moving and sad. So much to give in a mind locked away behind walls of torture. Subjected to hatred and abuse.
Your emotional insight reminds us of the human frailty of these crushed souls.
August 22nd, 2021 03:28
dusk arising said:
Looking past the surface, to the torn child within. Very moving and sad. So much to give in a mind locked away behind walls of torture. Subjected to hatred and abuse.
Your emotional insight reminds us of the human frailty of these crushed souls.
August 22nd, 2021 03:28
Caught
Dove said:
Well penned! Many young innocent girls fall prey to animals, and their lives are ruined! Dare they speak up, or run away and suffer the consequences
August 21st, 2021 11:48
Dove said:
Well penned! Many young innocent girls fall prey to animals, and their lives are ruined! Dare they speak up, or run away and suffer the consequences
August 21st, 2021 11:48
Caught
PrEm Ji said:
Your poem resounds for the innocent women harassed in Afghanistan... I listen to their silent shrieks...
August 21st, 2021 09:57
PrEm Ji said:
Your poem resounds for the innocent women harassed in Afghanistan... I listen to their silent shrieks...
August 21st, 2021 09:57
Caught
Accidental Poet said:
So accurately penned Fay. I\'m reminded of the phrase, \"What goes \'round, comes back \'round.\" Karma has a way of evening the score on those most deserving.
August 21st, 2021 08:30
Accidental Poet said:
So accurately penned Fay. I\'m reminded of the phrase, \"What goes \'round, comes back \'round.\" Karma has a way of evening the score on those most deserving.
August 21st, 2021 08:30
Caught
Neville said:
something quite different and I must say .. also unexpected my Lady but as always you deliver the goods and so well ...
I think you just done good by her and all those potential others out there .. x
August 21st, 2021 06:40
Neville said:
something quite different and I must say .. also unexpected my Lady but as always you deliver the goods and so well ...
I think you just done good by her and all those potential others out there .. x
August 21st, 2021 06:40
Caught
Doggerel Dave said:
The slave trade, which is not equal opportunity, exploits many thousands, nay millions of women across the world in diverse ways. Thanks for the reminder, Fay.
August 21st, 2021 05:48
Doggerel Dave said:
The slave trade, which is not equal opportunity, exploits many thousands, nay millions of women across the world in diverse ways. Thanks for the reminder, Fay.
August 21st, 2021 05:48
Single Handed
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, it is such a shame that so many children are being brought up by a single parent these days.
Andy
August 21st, 2021 00:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, it is such a shame that so many children are being brought up by a single parent these days.
Andy
August 21st, 2021 00:32
Single Handed
Trenz Pruca said:
Well what could be better? Not a thing. Once again, thank you Faye for brightening my day.
August 20th, 2021 16:15
Trenz Pruca said:
Well what could be better? Not a thing. Once again, thank you Faye for brightening my day.
August 20th, 2021 16:15
Single Handed
Coyote said:
Ah that\'s beautiful Fay. Being a single parent is the toughest job in the world.
August 20th, 2021 15:25
Coyote said:
Ah that\'s beautiful Fay. Being a single parent is the toughest job in the world.
August 20th, 2021 15:25
Single Handed
Neville said:
my word this takes me back .. tis gert lush Fay .. the words I mean .. not the actual doing .. apart from the breakfast bit .................................... x
August 20th, 2021 08:27
Neville said:
my word this takes me back .. tis gert lush Fay .. the words I mean .. not the actual doing .. apart from the breakfast bit .................................... x
August 20th, 2021 08:27
Single Handed
dusk arising said:
Aww - lovely. Really a fine example of your wonderful creative mind producing great entertaining poetry.
A super read which is going in among my favourites amid many others of yours there.
August 20th, 2021 06:26
dusk arising said:
Aww - lovely. Really a fine example of your wonderful creative mind producing great entertaining poetry.
A super read which is going in among my favourites amid many others of yours there.
August 20th, 2021 06:26
Single Handed
L. B. Mek said:
what a wholesome and life affirming read
a wonderful portrait or dedication
thanks for sharing, dear Fay
August 20th, 2021 05:47
L. B. Mek said:
what a wholesome and life affirming read
a wonderful portrait or dedication
thanks for sharing, dear Fay
August 20th, 2021 05:47
Single Handed
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
I was reading of a \'fatherless society\' - lots of single mums. Of course, not ALL families are fatherless, but I see what the author meant.
August 20th, 2021 04:35
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
I was reading of a \'fatherless society\' - lots of single mums. Of course, not ALL families are fatherless, but I see what the author meant.
August 20th, 2021 04:35
Chance
Neville said:
Muchly enjoyed moments like that can catch a guy unprepared ... feels good tho\' dunnit ............................ :) x
August 19th, 2021 10:07
Neville said:
Muchly enjoyed moments like that can catch a guy unprepared ... feels good tho\' dunnit ............................ :) x
August 19th, 2021 10:07
Chance
Dove said:
I love it! Indeed Passion can turn any No to Yes, if the promise is a sweet tender kiss
August 18th, 2021 13:55
Dove said:
I love it! Indeed Passion can turn any No to Yes, if the promise is a sweet tender kiss
August 18th, 2021 13:55
Chance
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Romantic notion\'?
Come on Fay, that woz lust, not very pure but certainly simple.
On the basis of your evidence, they both enjoyed....\'Nuff said...
August 18th, 2021 03:59
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Romantic notion\'?
Come on Fay, that woz lust, not very pure but certainly simple.
On the basis of your evidence, they both enjoyed....\'Nuff said...
August 18th, 2021 03:59
Chance
dusk arising said:
Oh cor blimey Fay, a bit contravertial. Us blokes have been getting a lot of stick for not hearing the NOs and imagining they are not meant thereby ending up in court. Not that humble, innocent, romantic littuw me ever would do anything like that of course.
On the other hand yes, I do see your lady melting here as the passion of her dreams approaches and..... well, as the saying goes, the rest is just toothpaste...
Innit awful when legal matters interfere with the romantic instinct.
August 18th, 2021 02:58
dusk arising said:
Oh cor blimey Fay, a bit contravertial. Us blokes have been getting a lot of stick for not hearing the NOs and imagining they are not meant thereby ending up in court. Not that humble, innocent, romantic littuw me ever would do anything like that of course.
On the other hand yes, I do see your lady melting here as the passion of her dreams approaches and..... well, as the saying goes, the rest is just toothpaste...
Innit awful when legal matters interfere with the romantic instinct.
August 18th, 2021 02:58
Us
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Fay, time can be ageless in our lives.
Andy
August 18th, 2021 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Fay, time can be ageless in our lives.
Andy
August 18th, 2021 01:42
Us
dusk arising said:
That \'within loves halo\' feeling brings forth our wonderment about our surroundings and where we fit into the vast scheme of everything. There are no bigger surroundings than the sky above and around us and when seen on a cloud free night it can give that inclusive feeling that you two are simply meant to be.
Your romantic poem brings out the romantic in me LOL.
August 17th, 2021 09:54
dusk arising said:
That \'within loves halo\' feeling brings forth our wonderment about our surroundings and where we fit into the vast scheme of everything. There are no bigger surroundings than the sky above and around us and when seen on a cloud free night it can give that inclusive feeling that you two are simply meant to be.
Your romantic poem brings out the romantic in me LOL.
August 17th, 2021 09:54
Us
Neville said:
screaming solar systems Fay .. now ya got us going .. Never mind the been there, done that etc etc .. if this aint summat we all want a bit more of, then there\'s summat decidedly wrong with us ... N :) x
August 17th, 2021 06:47
Neville said:
screaming solar systems Fay .. now ya got us going .. Never mind the been there, done that etc etc .. if this aint summat we all want a bit more of, then there\'s summat decidedly wrong with us ... N :) x
August 17th, 2021 06:47
Us
Poetic Dan said:
O I seek to find then clicked on your name and what a delightful read.
Thank you
August 17th, 2021 06:29
Poetic Dan said:
O I seek to find then clicked on your name and what a delightful read.
Thank you
August 17th, 2021 06:29
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