Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Brooding
Freni Karaluthara said:
You make the sommer dance in your poetry. the beautiful narration of sommer. the picture also suits to poem.
August 12th, 2021 17:07
Freni Karaluthara said:
You make the sommer dance in your poetry. the beautiful narration of sommer. the picture also suits to poem.
August 12th, 2021 17:07
Brooding
Coyote said:
August is too hot and unpleasant to justify this gem Fay. Perhaps a poem about April? LOL...Terrific write my friendš
August 12th, 2021 12:47
Coyote said:
August is too hot and unpleasant to justify this gem Fay. Perhaps a poem about April? LOL...Terrific write my friendš
August 12th, 2021 12:47
Brooding
Dove said:
I agree with Mek , that Bee and Pollen line was just exquisite! Definitely unique ! Here I sit feeling sorry for the Bee , oh such gluttony
August 12th, 2021 11:10
Dove said:
I agree with Mek , that Bee and Pollen line was just exquisite! Definitely unique ! Here I sit feeling sorry for the Bee , oh such gluttony
August 12th, 2021 11:10
Brooding
Classicmister said:
Faye - Another great evocative and descriptive write - Today I went walking and saw the red berries on the Mountain Ash - a true harbinger of autumn and a reminder that in my youth these berries foretold that the end of the summer holidays was nigh!
Go well John
August 12th, 2021 09:23
Classicmister said:
Faye - Another great evocative and descriptive write - Today I went walking and saw the red berries on the Mountain Ash - a true harbinger of autumn and a reminder that in my youth these berries foretold that the end of the summer holidays was nigh!
Go well John
August 12th, 2021 09:23
Brooding
L. B. Mek said:
\'Bees
stun themselves
with too, much
pollen\'..
Brilliant!
such a poignant portrait, in a poem
your choice words as sublime brush strokes
and your tone of melancholy
insuring even the coldest of hearts, cant help
but read, relate and sigh: in unison...
(one of your very best
in my humble opinion, dear Fay
thank you! for sharing)
August 12th, 2021 05:49
L. B. Mek said:
\'Bees
stun themselves
with too, much
pollen\'..
Brilliant!
such a poignant portrait, in a poem
your choice words as sublime brush strokes
and your tone of melancholy
insuring even the coldest of hearts, cant help
but read, relate and sigh: in unison...
(one of your very best
in my humble opinion, dear Fay
thank you! for sharing)
August 12th, 2021 05:49
Brooding
Lorna said:
That\'s August for you - same here in US eastern coast - awful month of humid - imagine English folk in tropical jungles wearing corsets and high collars for dinner. That was intrepid.
August 12th, 2021 05:10
Lorna said:
That\'s August for you - same here in US eastern coast - awful month of humid - imagine English folk in tropical jungles wearing corsets and high collars for dinner. That was intrepid.
August 12th, 2021 05:10
Brooding
dusk arising said:
Cor streuth gal.... I\'m not going out if it\'s going to be like that all month.
August 12th, 2021 04:49
dusk arising said:
Cor streuth gal.... I\'m not going out if it\'s going to be like that all month.
August 12th, 2021 04:49
Otherness
SureshG said:
The image is powerful, but it took your words for me to feel the walk down those tracks
August 11th, 2021 20:17
SureshG said:
The image is powerful, but it took your words for me to feel the walk down those tracks
August 11th, 2021 20:17
Otherness
Lauraš» said:
My Dear Fay,
Your beautiful poem has evoked so many memoriesā¦past and present. Your talent in penning your poetry using effective, expressive, and persuasive words is exceptional. I admire your work my dear poetess.
Lauraš»
August 11th, 2021 18:47
Lauraš» said:
My Dear Fay,
Your beautiful poem has evoked so many memoriesā¦past and present. Your talent in penning your poetry using effective, expressive, and persuasive words is exceptional. I admire your work my dear poetess.
Lauraš»
August 11th, 2021 18:47
Otherness
MendedFences27 said:
I don\'t think these words are spontaneous, but rather they come from your heart. Love, the second time around, has never be so eloquently depicted. The \"otherness\" of which you speak, brings memories to bear, pleasant fondness of a time spent in romantic awareness. A beautiful poem. Well worth saving. - Phil A.
August 11th, 2021 13:11
MendedFences27 said:
I don\'t think these words are spontaneous, but rather they come from your heart. Love, the second time around, has never be so eloquently depicted. The \"otherness\" of which you speak, brings memories to bear, pleasant fondness of a time spent in romantic awareness. A beautiful poem. Well worth saving. - Phil A.
August 11th, 2021 13:11
Otherness
dusk arising said:
There is so much in your post today and reaches the core of this solo.
So carefully you have phrased the early lines here giving richness to the re-opening of heart and depth of meaning. I guess it can take years to know the true worth of love after a long years of wilderness but here it glows in your wonderful poem.
This is the most deserving of pride of place in my favourites Fay, it\'s beautiful.
August 11th, 2021 09:44
dusk arising said:
There is so much in your post today and reaches the core of this solo.
So carefully you have phrased the early lines here giving richness to the re-opening of heart and depth of meaning. I guess it can take years to know the true worth of love after a long years of wilderness but here it glows in your wonderful poem.
This is the most deserving of pride of place in my favourites Fay, it\'s beautiful.
August 11th, 2021 09:44
Otherness
Neville said:
how could any mortal soul fail to fall in love with these words.. nonpareil in any book ................................... Neville x
August 11th, 2021 03:40
Neville said:
how could any mortal soul fail to fall in love with these words.. nonpareil in any book ................................... Neville x
August 11th, 2021 03:40
Such Lavish
Goldfinch60 said:
\'Autumns motherhood\' such a wonderful saying Fay, it has nearly been born.
Andy
August 11th, 2021 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
\'Autumns motherhood\' such a wonderful saying Fay, it has nearly been born.
Andy
August 11th, 2021 00:36
Such Lavish
Saxon Crow said:
And here comes the beautiful autumnal poetry we expect from you Fay. Lovely
August 10th, 2021 09:33
Saxon Crow said:
And here comes the beautiful autumnal poetry we expect from you Fay. Lovely
August 10th, 2021 09:33
Such Lavish
dusk arising said:
Feel the love of approaching autumn in your words today country girl. How will this strange summer end. Are we the last ones who will remember childhood\'s seasons the way they should be, the way they were before global warming.
August 10th, 2021 09:29
dusk arising said:
Feel the love of approaching autumn in your words today country girl. How will this strange summer end. Are we the last ones who will remember childhood\'s seasons the way they should be, the way they were before global warming.
August 10th, 2021 09:29
Such Lavish
Neville said:
the lady\'s got it and in abundance .. roll on harvest, I say ... x
August 10th, 2021 06:43
Neville said:
the lady\'s got it and in abundance .. roll on harvest, I say ... x
August 10th, 2021 06:43
Such Lavish
L. B. Mek said:
\'Chime out berry time
of the ripened plentiful\'
\'Such lavish, has sufficient to spare.\'
as-ever, dear Fay
beautifully worded, a joy to read
August 10th, 2021 05:56
L. B. Mek said:
\'Chime out berry time
of the ripened plentiful\'
\'Such lavish, has sufficient to spare.\'
as-ever, dear Fay
beautifully worded, a joy to read
August 10th, 2021 05:56
Lovesight
Goldfinch60 said:
I have been there and is lasted for nearly forty years. She is still with me in Spirit.
Andy
August 10th, 2021 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
I have been there and is lasted for nearly forty years. She is still with me in Spirit.
Andy
August 10th, 2021 00:39
Sisters
HannahElisabeth said:
I don\'t have any biological sisters myself, but sisterhood I\'ve learned is something you can cultivate and beautiful in it\'s own right. This reminds me of the saying āthe blood of the covenant is thicker than the water of the wombā
August 9th, 2021 19:02
HannahElisabeth said:
I don\'t have any biological sisters myself, but sisterhood I\'ve learned is something you can cultivate and beautiful in it\'s own right. This reminds me of the saying āthe blood of the covenant is thicker than the water of the wombā
August 9th, 2021 19:02
Lovesight
HannahElisabeth said:
\"I know we have spoken before
in some distant age
and when the veil of blur falls
I almost evoke your face\"
You captured this feeling so beautifully in words.
August 9th, 2021 15:39
HannahElisabeth said:
\"I know we have spoken before
in some distant age
and when the veil of blur falls
I almost evoke your face\"
You captured this feeling so beautifully in words.
August 9th, 2021 15:39
Lovesight
Michael Edwards said:
Beautiful - your nagic word touch never fails.
August 9th, 2021 14:20
Michael Edwards said:
Beautiful - your nagic word touch never fails.
August 9th, 2021 14:20
Lovesight
Jerry Reynolds said:
Excellent write, Fay.
Yours and Nevilleās poem today make an interesting connection for me. Not sure just why yet. Thanks for the view.
August 9th, 2021 08:32
Jerry Reynolds said:
Excellent write, Fay.
Yours and Nevilleās poem today make an interesting connection for me. Not sure just why yet. Thanks for the view.
August 9th, 2021 08:32
Lovesight
Neville said:
these words fill this old scribbler with hope
.................................................. :)
there may yet still be time ........ N
August 9th, 2021 07:43
Neville said:
these words fill this old scribbler with hope
.................................................. :)
there may yet still be time ........ N
August 9th, 2021 07:43
Lovesight
dusk arising said:
The shudder of recognition as a soulmate from previous life crosses our path. The wonder of recognition when deep held hidden truths reveal themselves like electric shocks and answers fall in to moments of truth..... then blown in the wind of conscious wisdom, was it a dream after all.
I took your words and danced with them. A warm rewarding frolick into depths this earthly consciousness does not allow.
August 9th, 2021 06:34
dusk arising said:
The shudder of recognition as a soulmate from previous life crosses our path. The wonder of recognition when deep held hidden truths reveal themselves like electric shocks and answers fall in to moments of truth..... then blown in the wind of conscious wisdom, was it a dream after all.
I took your words and danced with them. A warm rewarding frolick into depths this earthly consciousness does not allow.
August 9th, 2021 06:34
Lovesight
L. B. Mek said:
\'We two have made contact before
and with instinct winching
more open that deja-vu-door
I sense another beginning.
I know we shared lovesight
before
in that timeless exchange
when former eye contact
caught-fire
and the feeling remains.\'
a love song, supreme
beautifully worded, as-ever dear Fay
thank you!
August 9th, 2021 06:29
L. B. Mek said:
\'We two have made contact before
and with instinct winching
more open that deja-vu-door
I sense another beginning.
I know we shared lovesight
before
in that timeless exchange
when former eye contact
caught-fire
and the feeling remains.\'
a love song, supreme
beautifully worded, as-ever dear Fay
thank you!
August 9th, 2021 06:29
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