Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Us
L. B. Mek said:
\'wink wide
heavenly eyes, at us
while moon\'s lustrous belly
bends, earthward to spy\'..
really liked the flow
and as-always you imagery is majestic
thanks for sharing, dear Fay
August 17th, 2021 05:48
L. B. Mek said:
\'wink wide
heavenly eyes, at us
while moon\'s lustrous belly
bends, earthward to spy\'..
really liked the flow
and as-always you imagery is majestic
thanks for sharing, dear Fay
August 17th, 2021 05:48
Us
Doggerel Dave said:
I feel a little sorry for you folks in the northern hemisphere; although your poem captures richly the wonder of the heavens, Fay, if you came south I believe your entry here would probably cause MPS to start smoking....... and then there\'s the passion in a climate (certain seasons) conducive to....
August 17th, 2021 04:59
Doggerel Dave said:
I feel a little sorry for you folks in the northern hemisphere; although your poem captures richly the wonder of the heavens, Fay, if you came south I believe your entry here would probably cause MPS to start smoking....... and then there\'s the passion in a climate (certain seasons) conducive to....
August 17th, 2021 04:59
Yellows
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words once more Fay, thank you for sharing them.
Andy
August 16th, 2021 23:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words once more Fay, thank you for sharing them.
Andy
August 16th, 2021 23:45
Yellows
Neville said:
................. you just mellowed this old fellow out .. smiling though through it all ........................................... :) x
August 16th, 2021 12:27
Neville said:
................. you just mellowed this old fellow out .. smiling though through it all ........................................... :) x
August 16th, 2021 12:27
Yellows
The elder poet said:
A beautiful poem . making a picture out of your words. Thank you for sharing.
August 16th, 2021 11:34
The elder poet said:
A beautiful poem . making a picture out of your words. Thank you for sharing.
August 16th, 2021 11:34
Yellows
Dove said:
Lovely! I never thought of a yellow sky, more as golden or lavender! Even periwinkle!
Nice to read your words as always dear Fay
August 16th, 2021 10:01
Dove said:
Lovely! I never thought of a yellow sky, more as golden or lavender! Even periwinkle!
Nice to read your words as always dear Fay
August 16th, 2021 10:01
Yellows
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
We are blessed with he most amazing season changes in this country Fay and your poem today captures the emotion it stirs wonderfully thank you much enjoyed
August 16th, 2021 05:24
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
We are blessed with he most amazing season changes in this country Fay and your poem today captures the emotion it stirs wonderfully thank you much enjoyed
August 16th, 2021 05:24
Yellows
dusk arising said:
That yellow hue proves the sun is shining somewhere. I remember one morning arriving at the top of broadway hill and as i drove down there was a noticeable band of brown mist suspended above the vale of Evesham. That was in the 80\'s before we attempted to stop the pollution, not quickly enough I hear one and all say.
Confronted with daily news about pollution and global warming how refreshing to read your poetry today and envisage such a lovely view. I ache to sit quietly and take in such atmosphere..... methinks i have a wait ahead though.
August 16th, 2021 05:24
dusk arising said:
That yellow hue proves the sun is shining somewhere. I remember one morning arriving at the top of broadway hill and as i drove down there was a noticeable band of brown mist suspended above the vale of Evesham. That was in the 80\'s before we attempted to stop the pollution, not quickly enough I hear one and all say.
Confronted with daily news about pollution and global warming how refreshing to read your poetry today and envisage such a lovely view. I ache to sit quietly and take in such atmosphere..... methinks i have a wait ahead though.
August 16th, 2021 05:24
Yellows
L. B. Mek said:
took me back to past holidays
in the west country
so many wonderful walking paths
unassuming hidden beaches
and breath-taking hilltop views,
this is the best few weeks to view
the true wondrous nature of our beloved blighty
so many contrasting colours..
love your first line, a truly romantic depiction
\'Like a silk-veined yellow scarf
mist hangs today in the harbour.\'
such a wonderful read, dear Fay
August 16th, 2021 05:15
L. B. Mek said:
took me back to past holidays
in the west country
so many wonderful walking paths
unassuming hidden beaches
and breath-taking hilltop views,
this is the best few weeks to view
the true wondrous nature of our beloved blighty
so many contrasting colours..
love your first line, a truly romantic depiction
\'Like a silk-veined yellow scarf
mist hangs today in the harbour.\'
such a wonderful read, dear Fay
August 16th, 2021 05:15
Yellows
Lorna said:
Summer is so short isn\'t if Fay. We still have more than a month of it and yet Autumn already seems \"in the air\". Loved this.
August 16th, 2021 04:36
Lorna said:
Summer is so short isn\'t if Fay. We still have more than a month of it and yet Autumn already seems \"in the air\". Loved this.
August 16th, 2021 04:36
Yellows
Doggerel Dave said:
Yellow – one of my favourite c……s. Seriously – a high performance touring bicycle I ordered and rode around parts of England many years ago was bright daffodil yellow. I wandered lonely as a…no, may have been done before..
Avoided using the ‘c’ word didn’t you..too controversial?
Fresh and easy on my eye here, your piece.
August 16th, 2021 04:30
Doggerel Dave said:
Yellow – one of my favourite c……s. Seriously – a high performance touring bicycle I ordered and rode around parts of England many years ago was bright daffodil yellow. I wandered lonely as a…no, may have been done before..
Avoided using the ‘c’ word didn’t you..too controversial?
Fresh and easy on my eye here, your piece.
August 16th, 2021 04:30
Waste Not.
Neville said:
I say let\'s savour every single bloomin one .......................................................
this is so super cool my dear lady Fay, I am seriously thinking about fishing out my old scarf ...............:) x
August 15th, 2021 08:13
Neville said:
I say let\'s savour every single bloomin one .......................................................
this is so super cool my dear lady Fay, I am seriously thinking about fishing out my old scarf ...............:) x
August 15th, 2021 08:13
Waste Not.
Dove said:
Life’s rawness! You definitely scribe words in unique thoughts! Inspiration comes
from many places, and here you have inspired me to think more, pair words uniquely
Take Care!
August 14th, 2021 18:20
Dove said:
Life’s rawness! You definitely scribe words in unique thoughts! Inspiration comes
from many places, and here you have inspired me to think more, pair words uniquely
Take Care!
August 14th, 2021 18:20
Waste Not.
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Fay.
I had nothing for today but you have inspired me to stir fry something quick.
August 14th, 2021 16:19
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Fay.
I had nothing for today but you have inspired me to stir fry something quick.
August 14th, 2021 16:19
Waste Not.
Coyote said:
You never disappoint Fay and this is no exception. I wish I could borrow your muse as mine seems to be on a perpetual vacation. Excellent write🙂
August 14th, 2021 15:38
Coyote said:
You never disappoint Fay and this is no exception. I wish I could borrow your muse as mine seems to be on a perpetual vacation. Excellent write🙂
August 14th, 2021 15:38
Waste Not.
Goldfinch60 said:
May those wonderful words be forever with us Fay.
Andy
August 14th, 2021 11:55
Goldfinch60 said:
May those wonderful words be forever with us Fay.
Andy
August 14th, 2021 11:55
Waste Not.
Doggerel Dave said:
I fear I have a very mundane view of writing here compared with yours, Fay. I sometimes see it as the virtual card game of patience - this word fits or it doesn\'t.....yours fit , mine oftimes don\'t.....
August 14th, 2021 06:23
Doggerel Dave said:
I fear I have a very mundane view of writing here compared with yours, Fay. I sometimes see it as the virtual card game of patience - this word fits or it doesn\'t.....yours fit , mine oftimes don\'t.....
August 14th, 2021 06:23
Waste Not.
dusk arising said:
Hmm I\'m lacking all those things at the moment but I know how well you have described the wonderful creative times when words fall from your fingertips or you try to tease a novel way to adjoin words into something more meaningful.
All the more meaningful when respected poetic colleagues show appreciation in comments here on mps.
August 14th, 2021 04:49
dusk arising said:
Hmm I\'m lacking all those things at the moment but I know how well you have described the wonderful creative times when words fall from your fingertips or you try to tease a novel way to adjoin words into something more meaningful.
All the more meaningful when respected poetic colleagues show appreciation in comments here on mps.
August 14th, 2021 04:49
Brooding
Neville said:
Dunno how I missed this magnificent acknowledgement to late summer and the imminent arrival of autumn, till now ..
if I had been any later, I would be early for the onset of winter .. maybe ... an outstanding depiction filled to overflow with incredible imagery .... x
August 14th, 2021 03:59
Neville said:
Dunno how I missed this magnificent acknowledgement to late summer and the imminent arrival of autumn, till now ..
if I had been any later, I would be early for the onset of winter .. maybe ... an outstanding depiction filled to overflow with incredible imagery .... x
August 14th, 2021 03:59
Brooding
SureshG said:
Those much anticipated summer rains, a lifeline to thirsty, such as your poems.
August 13th, 2021 11:05
SureshG said:
Those much anticipated summer rains, a lifeline to thirsty, such as your poems.
August 13th, 2021 11:05
Brooding
Freni Karaluthara said:
You make the sommer dance in your poetry. the beautiful narration of sommer. the picture also suits to poem.
August 12th, 2021 17:07
Freni Karaluthara said:
You make the sommer dance in your poetry. the beautiful narration of sommer. the picture also suits to poem.
August 12th, 2021 17:07
Brooding
Coyote said:
August is too hot and unpleasant to justify this gem Fay. Perhaps a poem about April? LOL...Terrific write my friend🙂
August 12th, 2021 12:47
Coyote said:
August is too hot and unpleasant to justify this gem Fay. Perhaps a poem about April? LOL...Terrific write my friend🙂
August 12th, 2021 12:47
Brooding
Dove said:
I agree with Mek , that Bee and Pollen line was just exquisite! Definitely unique ! Here I sit feeling sorry for the Bee , oh such gluttony
August 12th, 2021 11:10
Dove said:
I agree with Mek , that Bee and Pollen line was just exquisite! Definitely unique ! Here I sit feeling sorry for the Bee , oh such gluttony
August 12th, 2021 11:10
Brooding
Classicmister said:
Faye - Another great evocative and descriptive write - Today I went walking and saw the red berries on the Mountain Ash - a true harbinger of autumn and a reminder that in my youth these berries foretold that the end of the summer holidays was nigh!
Go well John
August 12th, 2021 09:23
Classicmister said:
Faye - Another great evocative and descriptive write - Today I went walking and saw the red berries on the Mountain Ash - a true harbinger of autumn and a reminder that in my youth these berries foretold that the end of the summer holidays was nigh!
Go well John
August 12th, 2021 09:23
Brooding
L. B. Mek said:
\'Bees
stun themselves
with too, much
pollen\'..
Brilliant!
such a poignant portrait, in a poem
your choice words as sublime brush strokes
and your tone of melancholy
insuring even the coldest of hearts, cant help
but read, relate and sigh: in unison...
(one of your very best
in my humble opinion, dear Fay
thank you! for sharing)
August 12th, 2021 05:49
L. B. Mek said:
\'Bees
stun themselves
with too, much
pollen\'..
Brilliant!
such a poignant portrait, in a poem
your choice words as sublime brush strokes
and your tone of melancholy
insuring even the coldest of hearts, cant help
but read, relate and sigh: in unison...
(one of your very best
in my humble opinion, dear Fay
thank you! for sharing)
August 12th, 2021 05:49
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