Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Lovesight
Lorna said:
Dear Fay - I remember a quote from the movie Perfect Storm: \"there is only love, Christina, there is only love\"........... maybe love has a life of it\'s own that floats in the universe....
August 9th, 2021 06:02
Lorna said:
Dear Fay - I remember a quote from the movie Perfect Storm: \"there is only love, Christina, there is only love\"........... maybe love has a life of it\'s own that floats in the universe....
August 9th, 2021 06:02
And Now
Eugene S. said:
Such classic beauty in your words. There is so much care in their choosing.
August 8th, 2021 17:50
Eugene S. said:
Such classic beauty in your words. There is so much care in their choosing.
August 8th, 2021 17:50
And Now
MendedFences27 said:
Four seasons in the countryside, painted with a time worn brush. It felt of olden times and \"hearth-fire\" warmness. A beautiful picture in words. - Phil A.
August 8th, 2021 16:13
MendedFences27 said:
Four seasons in the countryside, painted with a time worn brush. It felt of olden times and \"hearth-fire\" warmness. A beautiful picture in words. - Phil A.
August 8th, 2021 16:13
And Now
Coyote said:
You paint quite a remarkable picture with these lines Fay. Excellent write🙂
August 8th, 2021 12:45
Coyote said:
You paint quite a remarkable picture with these lines Fay. Excellent write🙂
August 8th, 2021 12:45
And Now
dusk arising said:
Such a concise poetic passing of the seasons.
Exquisite. One for my favs.
August 8th, 2021 10:11
dusk arising said:
Such a concise poetic passing of the seasons.
Exquisite. One for my favs.
August 8th, 2021 10:11
And Now
Neville said:
tis best to be prepared .. and thanks for reminding me to place my log order ...
remarkably atmospherically and of the moment but with that much loved dated feel that you are so good at conveying .................... x
August 8th, 2021 05:52
Neville said:
tis best to be prepared .. and thanks for reminding me to place my log order ...
remarkably atmospherically and of the moment but with that much loved dated feel that you are so good at conveying .................... x
August 8th, 2021 05:52
Ponderings
Goldfinch60 said:
Your ponderings Fay bring us more joy every day.
Andy
August 8th, 2021 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Your ponderings Fay bring us more joy every day.
Andy
August 8th, 2021 00:52
Ponderings
Neville said:
there is something rather special here .. something that makes the reader do exactly what it says on the label .. x
August 7th, 2021 07:12
Neville said:
there is something rather special here .. something that makes the reader do exactly what it says on the label .. x
August 7th, 2021 07:12
Omens
SureshG said:
While all I can muster is ooooh! and aaaah! to my favorite scene of the day, your words breathes it life
August 6th, 2021 12:18
SureshG said:
While all I can muster is ooooh! and aaaah! to my favorite scene of the day, your words breathes it life
August 6th, 2021 12:18
Omens
Neville said:
these words have just found their ever home .. I note how comfortable they sit here ... and my guess is that if they could, they would be smiling with us too .....
Neville .............................. :) x
August 6th, 2021 07:00
Neville said:
these words have just found their ever home .. I note how comfortable they sit here ... and my guess is that if they could, they would be smiling with us too .....
Neville .............................. :) x
August 6th, 2021 07:00
Omens
L. B. Mek said:
share, and share it again dear Fay
your poetry, gets better with every read
(in my humble opinion)
\'I saw change, changing
ether-haze hue to dusk-covered, eeriness
creeping, round sickle-shaped moon-smile
thru\' dull-as-dust gloom.
I heard in day\'s goodbye: goodbye\'s, solo
purple-trailed, scarlet-dyed, gold-streaked
striped, azure sung
in lunar duet, with dark\'s rising crescendo. \'
August 6th, 2021 04:45
L. B. Mek said:
share, and share it again dear Fay
your poetry, gets better with every read
(in my humble opinion)
\'I saw change, changing
ether-haze hue to dusk-covered, eeriness
creeping, round sickle-shaped moon-smile
thru\' dull-as-dust gloom.
I heard in day\'s goodbye: goodbye\'s, solo
purple-trailed, scarlet-dyed, gold-streaked
striped, azure sung
in lunar duet, with dark\'s rising crescendo. \'
August 6th, 2021 04:45
Omens
Doggerel Dave said:
How do you put words together and structure them to produce such richly embroidered tapestry, Fay?
August 6th, 2021 00:59
Doggerel Dave said:
How do you put words together and structure them to produce such richly embroidered tapestry, Fay?
August 6th, 2021 00:59
Collusion
SureshG said:
If not for the dance between fire and water, life as we know won’t have a foothold to stand on, and poetic words, such as yours, to romance us.
August 5th, 2021 13:38
SureshG said:
If not for the dance between fire and water, life as we know won’t have a foothold to stand on, and poetic words, such as yours, to romance us.
August 5th, 2021 13:38
Collusion
MendedFences27 said:
The Earth actually produces a sound as it spins on its axis. This and the sounds of other planets are sometimes referred to as the \"Music of the Spheres.\" Surely, that sound would be \"re-fashions\" as the \"Fire and water affair\" alters the planet. My comments are meant to support your image of \"Music\" from this planet, and to praise your six lines of \'Music \" of another sort. Sweet words, Fay -Phil A.
August 4th, 2021 16:22
MendedFences27 said:
The Earth actually produces a sound as it spins on its axis. This and the sounds of other planets are sometimes referred to as the \"Music of the Spheres.\" Surely, that sound would be \"re-fashions\" as the \"Fire and water affair\" alters the planet. My comments are meant to support your image of \"Music\" from this planet, and to praise your six lines of \'Music \" of another sort. Sweet words, Fay -Phil A.
August 4th, 2021 16:22
Collusion
dusk arising said:
oooh and ouch Fay. A bit contravertial in this weird global july/august with disasters all over the place.
On second thoughts though, they are disasters for life as WE know it and not for planet earth. Though, regardless of cause, I cant welcome todays type of changes.
But my, you do dress them nicely here.
August 4th, 2021 13:34
dusk arising said:
oooh and ouch Fay. A bit contravertial in this weird global july/august with disasters all over the place.
On second thoughts though, they are disasters for life as WE know it and not for planet earth. Though, regardless of cause, I cant welcome todays type of changes.
But my, you do dress them nicely here.
August 4th, 2021 13:34
Collusion
Doggerel Dave said:
Lovely piece, Fay - just wish it were true......
August 4th, 2021 05:52
Doggerel Dave said:
Lovely piece, Fay - just wish it were true......
August 4th, 2021 05:52
Missed
Goldfinch60 said:
If only that oak could talk it would have some amazing stories to tell. Wonderful words Fay.
Andy
August 4th, 2021 00:28
Goldfinch60 said:
If only that oak could talk it would have some amazing stories to tell. Wonderful words Fay.
Andy
August 4th, 2021 00:28
Missed
Goldfinch60 said:
If only that oak could talk it would have some amazing stories to tell. Wonderful words Fay.
Andy
August 4th, 2021 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
If only that oak could talk it would have some amazing stories to tell. Wonderful words Fay.
Andy
August 4th, 2021 00:27
Missed
Thekkinkkattil said:
The law of nature is for the old to go and your sapling to grow .Beautifully penned
August 3rd, 2021 20:05
Thekkinkkattil said:
The law of nature is for the old to go and your sapling to grow .Beautifully penned
August 3rd, 2021 20:05
Time Versus Love
Freni Karaluthara said:
I liked your poem. most loved lines
Love the ageless young mistress
smiles at rushed hunger,
comforts each searcher
who needs some assistance
to find ease in another
with frequent undisguised thirst.
August 3rd, 2021 15:50
Freni Karaluthara said:
I liked your poem. most loved lines
Love the ageless young mistress
smiles at rushed hunger,
comforts each searcher
who needs some assistance
to find ease in another
with frequent undisguised thirst.
August 3rd, 2021 15:50
Celled
Coyote said:
An excellent write on the futility and reality of war and how the public is drawn into them. Nicely penned Fay.
August 3rd, 2021 13:52
Coyote said:
An excellent write on the futility and reality of war and how the public is drawn into them. Nicely penned Fay.
August 3rd, 2021 13:52
Missed
Jerry Reynolds said:
Great write, Fay.
Sent me on a jog down a red dirt road where an Oak just like that still lives.
August 3rd, 2021 09:22
Jerry Reynolds said:
Great write, Fay.
Sent me on a jog down a red dirt road where an Oak just like that still lives.
August 3rd, 2021 09:22
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