Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
And Now
dusk arising said:
Such a concise poetic passing of the seasons.
Exquisite. One for my favs.
August 8th, 2021 10:11
dusk arising said:
Such a concise poetic passing of the seasons.
Exquisite. One for my favs.
August 8th, 2021 10:11
Ponderings
Accidental Poet said:
I wonder, what MPS would be if not for the beautiful and thought provoking writings from your hands Fay. A gloriously penned write for this Sunday morning. 👍
August 8th, 2021 07:04
Accidental Poet said:
I wonder, what MPS would be if not for the beautiful and thought provoking writings from your hands Fay. A gloriously penned write for this Sunday morning. 👍
August 8th, 2021 07:04
And Now
Neville said:
tis best to be prepared .. and thanks for reminding me to place my log order ...
remarkably atmospherically and of the moment but with that much loved dated feel that you are so good at conveying .................... x
August 8th, 2021 05:52
Neville said:
tis best to be prepared .. and thanks for reminding me to place my log order ...
remarkably atmospherically and of the moment but with that much loved dated feel that you are so good at conveying .................... x
August 8th, 2021 05:52
Ponderings
Goldfinch60 said:
Your ponderings Fay bring us more joy every day.
Andy
August 8th, 2021 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Your ponderings Fay bring us more joy every day.
Andy
August 8th, 2021 00:52
Ponderings
Neville said:
there is something rather special here .. something that makes the reader do exactly what it says on the label .. x
August 7th, 2021 07:12
Neville said:
there is something rather special here .. something that makes the reader do exactly what it says on the label .. x
August 7th, 2021 07:12
Omens
SureshG said:
While all I can muster is ooooh! and aaaah! to my favorite scene of the day, your words breathes it life
August 6th, 2021 12:18
SureshG said:
While all I can muster is ooooh! and aaaah! to my favorite scene of the day, your words breathes it life
August 6th, 2021 12:18
Omens
Neville said:
these words have just found their ever home .. I note how comfortable they sit here ... and my guess is that if they could, they would be smiling with us too .....
Neville .............................. :) x
August 6th, 2021 07:00
Neville said:
these words have just found their ever home .. I note how comfortable they sit here ... and my guess is that if they could, they would be smiling with us too .....
Neville .............................. :) x
August 6th, 2021 07:00
Omens
L. B. Mek said:
share, and share it again dear Fay
your poetry, gets better with every read
(in my humble opinion)
\'I saw change, changing
ether-haze hue to dusk-covered, eeriness
creeping, round sickle-shaped moon-smile
thru\' dull-as-dust gloom.
I heard in day\'s goodbye: goodbye\'s, solo
purple-trailed, scarlet-dyed, gold-streaked
striped, azure sung
in lunar duet, with dark\'s rising crescendo. \'
August 6th, 2021 04:45
L. B. Mek said:
share, and share it again dear Fay
your poetry, gets better with every read
(in my humble opinion)
\'I saw change, changing
ether-haze hue to dusk-covered, eeriness
creeping, round sickle-shaped moon-smile
thru\' dull-as-dust gloom.
I heard in day\'s goodbye: goodbye\'s, solo
purple-trailed, scarlet-dyed, gold-streaked
striped, azure sung
in lunar duet, with dark\'s rising crescendo. \'
August 6th, 2021 04:45
Omens
Doggerel Dave said:
How do you put words together and structure them to produce such richly embroidered tapestry, Fay?
August 6th, 2021 00:59
Doggerel Dave said:
How do you put words together and structure them to produce such richly embroidered tapestry, Fay?
August 6th, 2021 00:59
Collusion
SureshG said:
If not for the dance between fire and water, life as we know won’t have a foothold to stand on, and poetic words, such as yours, to romance us.
August 5th, 2021 13:38
SureshG said:
If not for the dance between fire and water, life as we know won’t have a foothold to stand on, and poetic words, such as yours, to romance us.
August 5th, 2021 13:38
Collusion
Accidental Poet said:
The music of Mother Earth combined with your lyrics is a beautiful work of art Fay. I believe you\'ve made Mother Earth smile with this write. 👍
August 4th, 2021 18:34
Accidental Poet said:
The music of Mother Earth combined with your lyrics is a beautiful work of art Fay. I believe you\'ve made Mother Earth smile with this write. 👍
August 4th, 2021 18:34
Collusion
MendedFences27 said:
The Earth actually produces a sound as it spins on its axis. This and the sounds of other planets are sometimes referred to as the \"Music of the Spheres.\" Surely, that sound would be \"re-fashions\" as the \"Fire and water affair\" alters the planet. My comments are meant to support your image of \"Music\" from this planet, and to praise your six lines of \'Music \" of another sort. Sweet words, Fay -Phil A.
August 4th, 2021 16:22
MendedFences27 said:
The Earth actually produces a sound as it spins on its axis. This and the sounds of other planets are sometimes referred to as the \"Music of the Spheres.\" Surely, that sound would be \"re-fashions\" as the \"Fire and water affair\" alters the planet. My comments are meant to support your image of \"Music\" from this planet, and to praise your six lines of \'Music \" of another sort. Sweet words, Fay -Phil A.
August 4th, 2021 16:22
Collusion
dusk arising said:
oooh and ouch Fay. A bit contravertial in this weird global july/august with disasters all over the place.
On second thoughts though, they are disasters for life as WE know it and not for planet earth. Though, regardless of cause, I cant welcome todays type of changes.
But my, you do dress them nicely here.
August 4th, 2021 13:34
dusk arising said:
oooh and ouch Fay. A bit contravertial in this weird global july/august with disasters all over the place.
On second thoughts though, they are disasters for life as WE know it and not for planet earth. Though, regardless of cause, I cant welcome todays type of changes.
But my, you do dress them nicely here.
August 4th, 2021 13:34
Collusion
Doggerel Dave said:
Lovely piece, Fay - just wish it were true......
August 4th, 2021 05:52
Doggerel Dave said:
Lovely piece, Fay - just wish it were true......
August 4th, 2021 05:52
Missed
Goldfinch60 said:
If only that oak could talk it would have some amazing stories to tell. Wonderful words Fay.
Andy
August 4th, 2021 00:28
Goldfinch60 said:
If only that oak could talk it would have some amazing stories to tell. Wonderful words Fay.
Andy
August 4th, 2021 00:28
Missed
Goldfinch60 said:
If only that oak could talk it would have some amazing stories to tell. Wonderful words Fay.
Andy
August 4th, 2021 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
If only that oak could talk it would have some amazing stories to tell. Wonderful words Fay.
Andy
August 4th, 2021 00:27
Missed
Thekkinkkattil said:
The law of nature is for the old to go and your sapling to grow .Beautifully penned
August 3rd, 2021 20:05
Thekkinkkattil said:
The law of nature is for the old to go and your sapling to grow .Beautifully penned
August 3rd, 2021 20:05
Time Versus Love
Freni Karaluthara said:
I liked your poem. most loved lines
Love the ageless young mistress
smiles at rushed hunger,
comforts each searcher
who needs some assistance
to find ease in another
with frequent undisguised thirst.
August 3rd, 2021 15:50
Freni Karaluthara said:
I liked your poem. most loved lines
Love the ageless young mistress
smiles at rushed hunger,
comforts each searcher
who needs some assistance
to find ease in another
with frequent undisguised thirst.
August 3rd, 2021 15:50
Celled
Coyote said:
An excellent write on the futility and reality of war and how the public is drawn into them. Nicely penned Fay.
August 3rd, 2021 13:52
Coyote said:
An excellent write on the futility and reality of war and how the public is drawn into them. Nicely penned Fay.
August 3rd, 2021 13:52
Missed
Jerry Reynolds said:
Great write, Fay.
Sent me on a jog down a red dirt road where an Oak just like that still lives.
August 3rd, 2021 09:22
Jerry Reynolds said:
Great write, Fay.
Sent me on a jog down a red dirt road where an Oak just like that still lives.
August 3rd, 2021 09:22
Missed
Doggerel Dave said:
A great English oak - one of my my favourite trees.
Should be given an \'X\' rating Fay - the though of it as firewood.....
Here\'s hope for the sapling, but who knows?
August 3rd, 2021 06:55
Doggerel Dave said:
A great English oak - one of my my favourite trees.
Should be given an \'X\' rating Fay - the though of it as firewood.....
Here\'s hope for the sapling, but who knows?
August 3rd, 2021 06:55
Missed
L. B. Mek said:
\'Yet I see a sapling, has been
fighting for air\'..
and that\'s just enough - ain\'t it
for us, to anchor our Hopes upon
and somewhere - far
Nature knows this, to be true
that\'s why
there\'s always been a \'But - for\', in every
cataclysmic: event...
(such an important message, dear Fay
thanks for sharing)
August 3rd, 2021 05:10
L. B. Mek said:
\'Yet I see a sapling, has been
fighting for air\'..
and that\'s just enough - ain\'t it
for us, to anchor our Hopes upon
and somewhere - far
Nature knows this, to be true
that\'s why
there\'s always been a \'But - for\', in every
cataclysmic: event...
(such an important message, dear Fay
thanks for sharing)
August 3rd, 2021 05:10
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