Comments on community poems by LMTobin
- Money Greed. (Goldfinch60)
I can\'t disagree.
The love of money is the root of all kinds of evil.
June 5th, 2022 19:04
- A Father Passes (Vaughn Walker)
Beautiful You captured those painful moments with such raw emotion. Thank...
May 24th, 2022 14:48
- Original Thinking? (Saxon Crow)
When I think of original, I think of Milton and \'Paradise Lost\'. He...
May 24th, 2022 14:47
- Another Worthless Poem (Thomasine Dye)
You shared your feelings with the world through beautiful words---that is...
May 23rd, 2022 19:58
- Professional lover (Anny)
I love this. It\'s just perfect!
May 11th, 2022 20:36
- Am I crazy? (SadGirlHigh)
I get this. The constant need to do things and then wondering \'why why...
May 11th, 2022 20:35
- Prude for a reason (Saxon Crow)
I love poetry with the subtle humor! Good job!
May 11th, 2022 20:30
- Fertile in the Futile (Rocky Lagou)
This is good. Wow. I love the butterfly that\'s just in arm\'s reach but...
May 11th, 2022 20:29
- Ballad of the Wilting Daisies (Rocky Lagou)
I had my Shakespeare class write a poem in iambic pentameter and they all...
May 11th, 2022 20:26
- RubyRae: The Light Seen with Closed Eyes (A Dedication to a Departed MPS Poet) (Rocky Lagou)
Beautiful tribute.
Praying Ruby is in peace and comfort now.
May 11th, 2022 20:23
- Ruby\'s final poem (RubyRae)
Rest In Peace Ruby.
Your poetry and your life has made an impact on the...
May 11th, 2022 20:19
- Miss. Lock Memories (Neville)
This was just a joy to read! Those sweet crushes in our youth. You...
May 8th, 2022 21:16
- Why Do I Smile? (Goldfinch60)
YES!! Good message that encourages us all :)
Thank you!
May 8th, 2022 21:00
- Another Mansion Filled (ForeverJesus7)
Lovely tribute to your friend. I pray writing this helped with your pain....
May 8th, 2022 20:58
- Her heartbeat (Kitty the naughty poet)
I love the \'blue green eyes\' description :)
I have a soft spot for love...
May 6th, 2022 14:16
- monster. (Fernaaz)
I really enjoyed this. It has a very nice flow and it made me pause to...
May 5th, 2022 16:04
- Life Itself (Joren.Taylor)
Good job!
Bitter sweet tribute to the crazy life we all have :)
May 5th, 2022 15:59
- Wellness Way (Rocky Lagou)
The similes here are really good--the cross around the sinful neck is ...
April 30th, 2022 20:50
- Turn off the oven, Sylvia Plath (Rocky Lagou)
The Bell Jar was such a sad story and reading this brought me back to it....
April 20th, 2022 13:30
- The Little Black Book (Paul Bell)
I really enjoyed this. There was a strong rhythm that pulled me Into this...
April 9th, 2022 14:41
- Dear Maths (Theneophiles_words)
Ha! I. believe it was Satan to add the alphabet to math ;)
Honestly--I...
April 8th, 2022 12:53
- Living Lady Lilac (Rocky Lagou)
I enjoyed the alliteration you used throughout the poem with the roll of...
April 5th, 2022 14:47
- the tea’s got cold (Arobot)
This was beautiful. Poems like this are why I love poetry.
Well done!
March 31st, 2022 19:17
- i am truly in pain (Katarinaspoems)
Poetry is pretty great therapy!! I hope sending this out in the world has...
March 31st, 2022 19:12
- Waves Roll Off of Me (Rocky Lagou)
This is good! I especially liked \"I am the living display of...
March 30th, 2022 10:34