Comments on community poems by Garry
- I\'m Screwed (Naeners)
Short, vivid and powerful.
Short is good, i think. Poetry is using the...
April 21st, 2017 03:47 - ALONE (Michael Edwards)
Very cleved and works very well.
April 21st, 2017 02:23 - Roses (Lucy)
A very good haiku. Well done. Paints a vivid image
April 20th, 2017 17:24 - Stop and Look Back. (Goldfinch60)
Like the ideas in this
April 20th, 2017 02:51 - Lost (Cosmicbliss)
Like this. Goid and strong. Unexpected finish. .
April 20th, 2017 02:48 - Salt (Velvetlascivious)
Very rich.
April 20th, 2017 02:46 - Death of Beauty (Naeners)
\"too much is left unsaid\".I think this is a beautiful phrase and...
April 19th, 2017 16:28 - In the Bath (Garry)
Thank you.short is good. As indeed is humerous. But definitely short.
I...
April 19th, 2017 16:12 - Never Got the Chance (K_dovexo)
Short. Vivid. Well done
April 19th, 2017 15:50 - Fate Waits. (Fay Slimm.)
Love the last two lines especially.
Well done.
April 19th, 2017 06:34 - Ghost Town (ElenaGrace)
Very beautiful. Well done
April 19th, 2017 03:42 - Dead. (Stella_Suicide)
Life indeed. I thought some of ny poems were dark. So far i have tended ...
April 18th, 2017 15:31 - Feathers. (Goldfinch60)
Well done. A fine example of the classic 4-liner. A much underated form....
April 18th, 2017 02:32 - TO THE RIGHT OF THE SETTING SUN (Michael Edwards)
Well done.
April 18th, 2017 02:27 - I am sorry my fitness instructor (JamieDayDream)
Very enjoyable.
April 18th, 2017 02:25
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