Comments on community poems by Garry

• The Philosopher Clown (Tristan Robert Lange) I always found clowns vaguely threatening.
  March 24th, 2017 15:10
• WAS IT LOVE ? (Michael Edwards) Concise, but filled with meaning.
  March 24th, 2017 14:58
• The Visit (JJCooke) Do i detect inspiration from the grisly pen of of Edgar Allan Poe? The...
  March 24th, 2017 14:49
• Fear of Rejection (JustABird) Why i wonder? Can we ask?
  March 24th, 2017 12:24
• She\'s got Rock and Roll (Edthepoet) Good rythms.
  March 24th, 2017 12:17
• Electromagnetic Static (WriteBeLight) Very funny. Love the photo.
  March 24th, 2017 05:49
• The Morning After. (Garry) Thank you
  March 23rd, 2017 18:23
• AN ABCDARIAN POEM ~ 26 WORDS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Good one. Too hard for me, but am interested in trying.
  March 23rd, 2017 17:58
• What if... (Pupkit) Nice ideas interestingly written.. Well done
  March 23rd, 2017 17:45
• Survival. (Fay Slimm.) The urge to survive is strong within everything. One of the founders of...
  March 23rd, 2017 17:43
• Complain (JJCooke) Very good. I\'m sure both sides of the political spectrum could adopt this...
  March 23rd, 2017 17:36
• YACKY ZEBRAS (Michael Edwards) A brilliant contribution don\'t ever feel glum... I cant get any further...
  March 23rd, 2017 06:58
• Supermarket Meany (WriteBeLight) Good rant. Reads well. The ice cream-leavers would realky upset me
  March 23rd, 2017 06:50
• Girl In Search Of... (JustABird) \"everywhere to me\" so much better than the more familiar \"everything ...
  March 23rd, 2017 05:05
• Fear of Rejection (JustABird) Great imagery. Some beautiful phrases.
  March 23rd, 2017 05:00
• Love is a Battlefield (JustABird) Wow! Really good. Bit scary though.
  March 23rd, 2017 04:58
• Dinner in the Dark. (Goldfinch60) Very Gothic. Enjoyed the story, enjoyed the words you told it with....
  March 23rd, 2017 04:56
• A Man of Infinite Leisure. (Goldfinch60) Great poem. Nearing the age of retirement myself i am quite envious. I...
  March 23rd, 2017 04:50
• DO YOU WANT TO GO? (Michael Edwards) Very funny poem, love the play on words, which I missed on first read....
  March 23rd, 2017 04:40
• Forgotten Dreams (Garry) I\'m away from home at the moment with intermittent internet access , but...
  March 23rd, 2017 04:34
• Forgotten Dreams (Garry) Thank you. Very helpful and reassuring. I do like my poems to have flow...
  March 23rd, 2017 04:32
• THREE COUPLETS (Michael Edwards) Lovely use of words. It flows beautifully. Nice imagery. Love the painting...
  March 22nd, 2017 17:33
• In Transit. (Fay Slimm.) Beautifully crafted. Really enjoyed it
  March 22nd, 2017 17:29
• Demented (Tristan Robert Lange) Beautifully written. Love the feel of the words. Sadly don\'t really...
  March 22nd, 2017 17:25
• The Wood (Tristan Robert Lange) Despite their calmness and their beauty i often find forests can be a bit...
  March 22nd, 2017 17:21
• Pretty Lies (JustABird) Excellent last stanza.
  March 22nd, 2017 17:18
• Girl on a Pedestal (JustABird) Very good. As always.
  March 22nd, 2017 17:16
• Just a Dream (JustABird) I \'d Love to hear it \'performed\' I think there is a need for\"loss\"...
  March 22nd, 2017 17:15
• Night Moves (JustABird) Very dark. Really enjoy your writing style
  March 22nd, 2017 17:12
• Speak (JustABird) Beautiful, and uplifting. There is usually light to found in all the dark...
  March 22nd, 2017 17:10
• Deep Down (JustABird) Love the starting point. Really good to hear how people get started on a...
  March 22nd, 2017 17:04
• Empty Pockets (Edthepoet) Looked at three of your poems so far, Enjoyed them all looking forward to...
  March 22nd, 2017 16:51
• Ransom (Edthepoet) Too good for a country and western song😯, Though it would work ad...
  March 22nd, 2017 16:49
• Miles and Miles (Edthepoet) Very good. Really enjoyed the rythms and the flow. Good \'story\' too.
  March 22nd, 2017 16:46
• Candle (Caden_Mercer10) A deep sense of loss portrayed through the simple image of a candle. Well...
  March 21st, 2017 16:33
• 21 March 2017 (Reivax Camlost) Beautiful. Lovely phrases.
  March 21st, 2017 16:27
• Scapegoat (Quemis) A good read, effective use of alliteration.
  March 21st, 2017 06:36
• Towards That Place. (Goldfinch60) Though conversely who was it who said \"the saddest words in the English...
  March 21st, 2017 06:32
• Towards That Place. (Goldfinch60) It\'s often the twists and turns and changes of direction that provide...
  March 21st, 2017 06:30
• She. (Goldfinch60) Evocative of so many things. Full of life. Loved the last verse...
  March 21st, 2017 03:16
• Sex life of writers (MendedFences27) Certainly made me smile. Some excellent ideas and lovely phrases.
  March 21st, 2017 03:07
• MELANIA TRUMP ~ A MODEL FIRST LADY ! An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) Good job, given the constraints of the fornat. Are you doing one for...
  March 21st, 2017 03:03
• Tribute (JJCooke) Love it. Deep but not intellectual for the sake of it.
  March 20th, 2017 17:00
• She Shines (JJCooke) Bleak. Time will tell. Very much enjoyed this. . Thank you
  March 20th, 2017 16:58
• Nightmare (JJCooke) Very dark. Hope you don\'t really y have the dream all the time. Lay off...
  March 20th, 2017 16:56
• Going Back (Classicmister) Really enjoyed it. Nostalgic without being maudlin.
  March 20th, 2017 16:48
• My little boat (Classicmister) Like it very much, entertaining and i thought it was well structured.
  March 20th, 2017 16:46
• Hearts Wept. (Fay Slimm.) Very moving.
  March 20th, 2017 16:08