Comments on community poems by Garry
- I Remember (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Very nice.
April 4th, 2017 12:15 - Did he Fall or...... ? (Garry)
I have to admit the librarian at school has told me my students are right...
April 4th, 2017 07:10 - Truth (BeckyJo)
Short, vivid and elegant. Well done.
April 4th, 2017 06:19 - My Reflection (WriteBeLight)
It makes you sound quite scary.
April 4th, 2017 06:18 - Yellowness. (Fay Slimm.)
Captured scents of happiness.
What a wonderdul image beautifully put....
April 4th, 2017 06:06 - Escape (Jabberwocky)
Stark and beautiful. As always.
April 4th, 2017 06:00 - DOOR (Michael Edwards)
Short but sweet. The best things comes in small packages. I often think ...
April 4th, 2017 05:59 - Broken Heart (Jesse Kuusemets)
Love the last verse.
April 3rd, 2017 11:20 - Father (Brandon k f)
Very good.
April 3rd, 2017 11:19 - Silence Distills (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Nicely done. Well structured.
April 3rd, 2017 09:55 - Youth\'s blood. (Fay Slimm.)
Elegant and stylish.
April 3rd, 2017 07:47 - BICYCLE ~ ELCYCIB ~ A reverse acrostic sonnet ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Very well crafted and funny.
April 3rd, 2017 03:11 - MY FAVOURITE TIPPLE (Michael Edwards)
Very neat and well crafted. A good pint of real ale served without too...
April 3rd, 2017 02:58 - Banquet Places. (Goldfinch60)
Hm. Food for thought, in many ways.
April 3rd, 2017 02:56 - Reaching out. (a haiku?) (Garry)
Thank you. That was most informative. I will look up senryu and do more...
April 2nd, 2017 17:19 - Wisdom\'s Tooth (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Very wry
April 2nd, 2017 09:57 - Scrambled Message (Philip)
How gruesome. Excellent..
April 2nd, 2017 07:33 - Babel (Jabberwocky)
I too really enjoyed the idea of a tower in a pit. Thanks for the email...
April 2nd, 2017 07:29 - Babel (Jabberwocky)
The right words in the right order. Powerful images. beautifully written....
April 2nd, 2017 04:54 - lay at peace under Gibraltar Road... (P.H.Rose)
The opening two stanzas are particularly excellent.
April 2nd, 2017 04:50 - Nothing is ever really forgotten.... (P.H.Rose)
Very nice idea.
Is your profile pic meant to be upside down?
April 2nd, 2017 04:48 - What If? (Joyleen)
I really like the closing two lines. A final sad realisation beautifully...
April 2nd, 2017 03:13 - Life on the Rocks (Tristan Robert Lange)
Wonderful stuff: the poem as well as the whisky.
No ice, served at...
April 2nd, 2017 03:08 - Hips and Ribs (SheWasTheSun)
Powerful and dark. I enjoyed this.
April 2nd, 2017 03:02 - Broken Soul (Jesse Kuusemets)
Another good offering, full of interesting images andideas.
April 2nd, 2017 03:01 - Again (Tristan Robert Lange)
Nicely structured. Well done
April 1st, 2017 14:41 - Not Enough Soap (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Well formed verse. I enjoyed it. Thank you .
April 1st, 2017 14:09 - Date Request (Jabberwocky)
Very good. Starkly beaufiful. And, as usual, no wasted words. Well...
April 1st, 2017 10:24 - Take Out The Trash (WriteBeLight)
The grinding reality of everyday life. Nicely done
April 1st, 2017 10:23 - Glasses (Robert \" grave robber\" redford.)
Well crafted. Short and very sweet.
April 1st, 2017 10:20 - To Sleep? (Garry)
No pills added though!
April 1st, 2017 09:32 - To Sleep? (Garry)
I am out of whisky so recently my tipple has been a glass of homemade...
April 1st, 2017 09:31 - The Flag (Allfourwalkers)
I feel sure this isn\'t about a flag. I dont quite know what but it has...
April 1st, 2017 03:21 - You are (Katherined)
Some lovely ideas. Evokes a painful longing? Well done.
April 1st, 2017 03:13 - I Wish My Friends Were Like sausages (Garry)
Thank you.
March 31st, 2017 16:20 - I Wish My Friends Were Like sausages (Garry)
Broski. Never been called that before. I shall check it out with the kids...
March 31st, 2017 13:35 - Beg (Brandon k f)
Very good. I have tried haikus but find them really hard.
March 31st, 2017 08:25 - This World (Lovelydarkanddeep)
Though on rereading it migbt sound a bit threatening?
March 31st, 2017 08:15 - To a Road Sign. (Garry)
Excellent. Comment. Thank you
March 31st, 2017 04:56 - Straw Man (Jabberwocky)
Stark. So much said in so few words. Excellent.
March 31st, 2017 04:13 - Darkness (Dakotah Lavender)
Nice poem. I also like your comment about it. Well done.
March 31st, 2017 02:28 - THE BARMY BARD (Michael Edwards)
Veey clever, very funny. Well done.
March 31st, 2017 02:25 - Lost in a Book. (Goldfinch60)
Lovely poem. Books can be dangerous things! Have you read \"Inkheart\" by...
March 31st, 2017 02:22 - This World (Lovelydarkanddeep)
Love the last line in particular.
March 31st, 2017 02:18 - I Looked Away (Garry)
Glad you enjoyed it. Cheers
March 31st, 2017 02:16 - BBQ (Tony36)
Yum.
March 30th, 2017 11:29 - Perspectives (B.rod)
Like it a lot. Thank you.
March 30th, 2017 11:13 - When She Left. (Zwitterion)
The storm after the calm perhaps.
March 30th, 2017 06:27 - I hate that I love you (B.rod)
Some lovely ideas here. Life is full of contradictions most of the time.
March 30th, 2017 06:19 - Burgeoning. (Fay Slimm.)
Great images, nicely done.
March 30th, 2017 06:13 - Don\'t Deflect (WriteBeLight)
Nice thinking. Well done.
March 30th, 2017 06:12 - DAWN WAITS (Michael Edwards)
Very good, and very clever.
March 30th, 2017 03:44 - THE MAN NEXT DOOR (Michael Edwards)
I have done my bit of \"gloomy\" and have yet more gloom to add.
However...
March 29th, 2017 12:56 - Dead Birds (Jabberwocky)
Dark and disturbing. Love it.
March 29th, 2017 12:13 - Changing. (Fay Slimm.)
Very striking.
March 29th, 2017 12:11 - Gas Bag (WriteBeLight)
Very good. Very funny. Well done
There was a young man from...
March 29th, 2017 03:47 - WAS IT LOVE - THE CONCLUSION (Michael Edwards)
Perfect ending. Good job.
March 29th, 2017 03:43 - Now. (Goldfinch60)
Now is our future. Elegantly said.
However it\'s pretty soon our past....
March 29th, 2017 03:42 - You Were, and Now You\'re Not. (Garry)
No the poem was meant to a present for Mother\'s day. Well i couldnt give...
March 29th, 2017 03:39 - Violet (YouDontHaveToTrySoHard)
Very nice. Love the opening two lines especially.
March 28th, 2017 16:20 - I Could Dream But, (Lovelydarkanddeep)
Very beautiful. Well done
March 28th, 2017 16:16 - You Were, and Now You\'re Not. (Garry)
The chocolate is for my lovely wife, she was going to get a poem but this...
March 28th, 2017 14:54 - One Day;Maybe (Garry)
I was in Blyth, a town on the coast in the NE of Egland just north of...
March 28th, 2017 11:33 - The Bloom (Augustus)
Particularly like the last verse. All that effort and then....
March 28th, 2017 10:11 - Opening Poem To My New Novel: \'Death From The Sky\' (Kurt Philip Behm)
Short but striking. Well done!
March 28th, 2017 10:07 - Nelson Went To Battle. (Goldfinch60)
Excellent. Very entertaining.
March 28th, 2017 10:03 - The Oak Door (Classicmister)
Very good. I insistent and powerful.
March 28th, 2017 10:01 - A titan hidden in the clouds (Brandon k f)
Like the last line. Nice ideas.
March 28th, 2017 09:53 - You and me (Poems_)
Very good indeed.
March 28th, 2017 06:52 - February 2, 2017 (Lovelydarkanddeep)
I set out to write poems like this. Calm, beautiful and, as i said,...
March 27th, 2017 12:21 - February 2, 2017 (Lovelydarkanddeep)
Very striking.
March 27th, 2017 11:53 - Forgotten Dreams (Garry)
Done, just a few punctuation glitches but i can live with that.
Thank...
March 27th, 2017 06:39 - Real and Just Unseen (Discreation)
I always to to wonder what happened when we wenr to sleeo. if dreams were...
March 27th, 2017 05:32 - Scars/Deadly Silence (Discreation)
Very good. Very interesting.
March 27th, 2017 05:30 - Enemy (Wackyheartache4)
Strong stuff, well written. Enjoyed it.
March 27th, 2017 05:28 - Nicotine (Wackyheartache4)
Powerful stuff.
March 27th, 2017 05:26 - Moved Out (WriteBeLight)
Our son is studying history and Chinese and is fascinated by the far East....
March 27th, 2017 05:21 - So Alone. (Goldfinch60)
As usual a thoughtful offering, beautifully written. Enjoed as always.
March 27th, 2017 05:17 - To a Slut on Mothers Day (Jabberwocky)
Wow, heavy stuff gently expressed.
March 27th, 2017 05:15 - Someday (---mari0)
Excellent. Slowly working my way through all your poems and it\'s time...
March 26th, 2017 22:33 - (a)live (---mari0)
Very clever, very true. Beatifully expressed and presented.
March 26th, 2017 22:30 - You (---mari0)
Well done, great words, great ideas.
March 26th, 2017 22:29 - Words (---mari0)
Nicely said and i liked the presentation.
March 26th, 2017 22:28 - Friends (VictoriaOliviaGreene)
Ouch indeed.
Good poem, enjoyed the twist in the tale.
March 26th, 2017 22:25 - Carpe Diem (Augustus)
Nice poem. Im just past middle age and bits are starting to wear out. ...
March 26th, 2017 22:23 - One Day;Maybe (Garry)
Cartainly strangers tend not to strike up conversations in the street in...
March 26th, 2017 21:50 - by the end of the day (Avigail)
Some nice ideas here. I enjoyed it thank you.
March 26th, 2017 15:43 - WAS IT LOVE - PART3 (Michael Edwards)
Very good, developing well. Love the watercolours.
March 26th, 2017 13:03 - Got Game (WriteBeLight)
What a great idea. Very creative. Loved the verse about faith in...
March 26th, 2017 13:00 - Alice by the Window (Jabberwocky)
Well done. Particularly like the opening and closing verses.
March 26th, 2017 12:47 - Fear of Rejection (JustABird)
I\'d have been very proud if I\'d written it.
And overall it flows with...
March 26th, 2017 11:07 - Fear of Rejection (JustABird)
It\'s a very beautiful poem.
The way I read it in my head i suppose I...
March 26th, 2017 11:06 - Close Your Eyes (Dakotah Lavender)
Very gentle. Beautifully written. \".... soft as a yawn\" excellent. I...
March 26th, 2017 03:55 - horsemen would ride (Brandon k f)
Very good. Well crafted, very emotive. I reallt enjoyed it
March 26th, 2017 03:53 - A Man of Infinite Leisure - alternate version. (Goldfinch60)
Very poignant last two lines. A perfect ending. (though the last version...
March 25th, 2017 03:40 - Things That Make Me Smile (Garry)
Hadn\'t thought of that one. To be honest getting content for this was...
March 25th, 2017 03:31 - Things That Make Me Smile (Garry)
Certainly couldn\'t see Keith Richards on a moped , even though he\'s not...
March 24th, 2017 18:00 - Things That Make Me Smile (Garry)
Yeah, i thought it might be a bit dark for them. Hey ho. They do make ...
March 24th, 2017 16:35 - Red Dress (Naeners)
Dark sides find their own way out no matter how we start. Lovely simple...
March 24th, 2017 15:42 - WAS IT LOVE ? (Michael Edwards)
Good.
March 24th, 2017 15:38
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