Comments on community poems by Garry

• From the Sun to the Moon - FIBS. (Goldfinch60) Very neatly done. Cleverly constructed and flows well. Great ideas. But,...
  April 13th, 2017 01:52
• 12 April 2017 (Reivax Camlost) Traditionally aren\'t they 5, 7 5 syllables on the 3 lines. I realise...
  April 12th, 2017 11:56
• Sad brown eyes (Brandon k f) Everybody needs a dog
  April 12th, 2017 10:17
• 12 April 2017 (Reivax Camlost) Short and colourful
  April 12th, 2017 10:16
• I am the traveler (Willyweed) Very nicely put r together
  April 12th, 2017 10:15
• Spring Clean Up (WriteBeLight) Might do the planting. Otherwise no.
  April 12th, 2017 10:12
• Our Future The Past (Bryso) Very nice. I have on a similar theme floating round somewhere. Must brush...
  April 12th, 2017 03:38
• Tribal Organisation. (Fay Slimm.) Nicely written information. Very enjoyable.
  April 12th, 2017 03:34
• There was a young lady (Limerick) (Jabberwocky) Ha, ha. Won\'t get this into the Penguin book of Children\'s limericks !
  April 12th, 2017 03:33
• Neighbour Watching (Goldfinch60) Sadly true. Well done
  April 12th, 2017 03:32
• THE UNKNOWN MAN (Michael Edwards) Very good. Especially, as you said, the final lines.
  April 12th, 2017 03:31
• Show (Saphira) Enjoyed this. Like the theme. Who we are vs how we appear
  April 12th, 2017 03:29
• Nightmares (Saphira) Very spookily done. Enjoyed it.
  April 12th, 2017 03:28
• 9-17-2015 (Leexicaat) Beautifully done. Love the concept and especially enjoyed the last two...
  April 12th, 2017 03:27
• she (Neverending) Lovely. Nicely woven ideas.
  April 12th, 2017 03:21
• The unknown (B.rod) Love ideas about contradiction and confusion. Good stuff.
  April 12th, 2017 03:20
• Just Yellow (Elchupacabra) Very vivid, so few words so well used
  April 11th, 2017 14:29
• Braille (Elchupacabra) Beautifully worded.
  April 11th, 2017 14:28
• Escape (Elchupacabra) Wonderful.
  April 11th, 2017 14:27
• reflections (Elchupacabra) Vivid images. Glad i stumbled a across your postings.
  April 11th, 2017 14:27
• POTUS (Elchupacabra) Short and to the point
  April 11th, 2017 14:25
• Counting Sheep (Elchupacabra) Great. Enjoyed tbis.
  April 11th, 2017 14:25
• A Blind Eye (+3) (Kurt Philip Behm) I avree with WBL. Loved the first one.
  April 11th, 2017 14:17
• Post Party Depression (Katherined) Very good.
  April 11th, 2017 14:16
• ice and embers (Katherined) Just like Fay said. I really enjoyed it. Didn\'t quite understand it but...
  April 11th, 2017 14:15
• 11 April 2017 (Reivax Camlost) Hm very interesting. Well put together and thought out.
  April 11th, 2017 14:10
• Icy winds (EmerOR) Lovely piece of well structured verse. Brian said it all. Very well...
  April 11th, 2017 11:23
• Sunday in the Garden (Willyweed) Very sweet.
  April 11th, 2017 10:40
• Lost & Found (Down the rabbithole) Some lovely language used to paint a vivid picture. Well done.
  April 11th, 2017 06:23
• In A Pinch (WriteBeLight) Very good.
  April 11th, 2017 06:22
• Dead Red Limerick. (Garry) Thanks for that. Glad you Iiked it.
  April 11th, 2017 05:53
• Sketch: Arrogance (Jabberwocky) 5 feet great. Excellent . Technically not quite the limerick we were...
  April 11th, 2017 03:25
• A City Day (Nameless) Interesting. Unusual style and flow. Im not a fan of cities day or night ...
  April 11th, 2017 03:20
• OUR INNER BEAUTY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Nicely said.
  April 11th, 2017 03:17
• THREE SMILES (Michael Edwards) Absolutely love the second one. Wish I\'d written it. Didn\'t realise...
  April 11th, 2017 03:15
• Am i even here on time? (Elchupacabra) I, m working backwards through your poem\'s , having only discovered them...
  April 11th, 2017 03:12
• memoirs (Elchupacabra) Interesting poem. Well written to be both optimistic and pessimistic at...
  April 11th, 2017 03:09
• Noticed (Bvbyyxdoll) Very heartfelt and vivid for so short a poem. As Brian says, that\'s life,...
  April 11th, 2017 03:07
• Love is two (Garry) Just a bit of whimsy quickly written, but i think it\'s rather nice and ...
  April 10th, 2017 17:09
• Otherness (Bryso) Very well done. Interesting twist in the last line. Loved it but not sure...
  April 10th, 2017 16:20
• 10 April 2017 (Reivax Camlost) IVery warming. In content and style
  April 10th, 2017 16:18
• That day is not today (Marianne) Nicely done.
  April 10th, 2017 15:50
• unfolding (Willyweed) Fone poem, fine picture
  April 10th, 2017 15:44
• Things I Have Learned in Life (Vena Wolf) I enjoyed that. Thank you.
  April 10th, 2017 15:27
• Waiting On The Landing (WriteBeLight) Very entertaining.
  April 10th, 2017 15:25
• Sketch: The Player (Jabberwocky) Too many long poems around. Short and taut. Excellent
  April 10th, 2017 15:20
• Applying for a Rose (Bibbeck) Veey good. Loved the structure and some lovely sounding phrases and great...
  April 10th, 2017 15:19
• Beach Ball Connotations: (3lliS) Very good
  April 10th, 2017 15:17
• Acts of Kindness and Love. (Goldfinch60) Very good.
  April 10th, 2017 03:06
• Hidden (Cosmicbliss) Very good . Powerful ending.
  April 10th, 2017 02:57
• MY PLACE (Michael Edwards) Very good. Disturbingly neat studio.
  April 10th, 2017 02:56
• Dear Dad (Starr_) Nicely done
  April 10th, 2017 02:54
• Unentitled (Ashes) Wow. Beatuful, especially the opening lines.
  April 10th, 2017 02:53
• Caught inside a rain drop (Mogway) Very beautifully done.
  April 10th, 2017 02:50
• Could You? (Garry) I too am handsome and funny. In my dreams at least!
  April 9th, 2017 10:19
• Awaiting June (WriteBeLight) Very nice. Sitting here on the zunny beach in North East. England, it...
  April 9th, 2017 07:04
• Could You? (Garry) What, could you be me? Would you want to?
  April 9th, 2017 06:57
• Etch (SheWasTheSun) Excellent. I love the sound of some of the lines. The opening two...
  April 9th, 2017 02:36
• Three (---mari0) Great idea. Well written.
  April 9th, 2017 02:32
• Forever gone~(Pantoum) (PoeticFlows) Well done. Lovely structure. Nice images.
  April 9th, 2017 02:31
• Barriers.... (P.H.Rose) Nicely said
  April 9th, 2017 02:30
• Shoe (Jabberwocky) Very good.
  April 8th, 2017 06:16
• BINDING VOWS (Michael Edwards) Very good, but comes with a definite air of menace. You reaped what you...
  April 8th, 2017 02:35
• Tricked (Bay) Very poignant. I particularly like the first verse. Also the last two...
  April 8th, 2017 02:31
• This or that? (Anoldwoman) Nice ideas. My kind of poem.
  April 8th, 2017 02:25
• Dragonflies (Anoldwoman) Nice juxtaposition of ideas, works well, nicely written.
  April 8th, 2017 02:23
• 7 April 2017 (Severus Alexander) Interesting ideas, well written
  April 8th, 2017 02:18
• Picture it (Lovelydarkanddeep) Lovely idea, Beatifully encapsulated in the closing two lines.
  April 7th, 2017 16:41
• The Last Goodbye (Garry) Never heard of that. Will look it uo when i get home and have bettet...
  April 7th, 2017 16:30
• Mediocrity (Jabberwocky) Great poem, as always. I love the last 4 lines of the first verse, were...
  April 7th, 2017 14:14
• Wolves (Tony36) Very striking.
  April 7th, 2017 14:09
• 7 April 2017 (Reivax Camlost) Nicely done.
  April 7th, 2017 14:07
• Snowy weather (Silvertulip) Short, vivid and beautiful. Well done.
  April 7th, 2017 14:05
• Fishy (Stephanie Showers) Very much enjoyed the images of the last verse.
  April 7th, 2017 14:04
• Angel of a Thousand Shadows (Tristan Robert Lange) Excellent. Well written
  April 7th, 2017 14:03
• Beyond the Façade (JustABird) Welcome back. Worth the wait. I especially love the opening 4 lines.
  April 7th, 2017 14:01
• Falling (PoemsbyZahra) It is a beautiful poem. Some lovely images and gorgeous and rich sounding...
  April 7th, 2017 03:05
• Chasing Shadows (Edthepoet) Lovely opening verse. Beautiful and mysterious. Well written as it leads...
  April 7th, 2017 03:02
• Loss.. (P.H.Rose) A fantastic opening line. Love it.
  April 7th, 2017 02:57
• IS TODAY TODAY ? (Michael Edwards) Brilliant poem. A light hearted view on issues around who and when we are....
  April 7th, 2017 02:48
• Lost To Reality. (Goldfinch60) Remember, though, you are not \"lost to reality\" in your worlds of words ...
  April 7th, 2017 02:44
• Lost To Reality. (Goldfinch60) What a soulful poem about a situation that must be difficult. To manage...
  April 7th, 2017 02:39
• What\'s the Point and Why? (Garry) For god\'s sake, aamina, don\'t t repeat it to your teacher, unless...
  April 6th, 2017 15:54
• Me vs me (B.rod) Good message well written
  April 6th, 2017 14:31
• Realistic Love (HalcyonHusky) Very nicely written . Good rythm and flow. Lovely message
  April 6th, 2017 08:15
• AUTUMN SUN (Michael Edwards) Very beautiful. Feels nice to read. Appropriate for April?
  April 6th, 2017 02:15
• I Wish My Friends Were Like sausages (Garry) A poem and a recipe. Excellent.
  April 5th, 2017 16:37
• An Arachnid Alarm.... (P.H.Rose) Good story, nicely put together.
  April 5th, 2017 15:56
• Bedtime Musings (HalcyonHusky) No worries about the ending. Every one sbould have got it. Great end to a...
  April 5th, 2017 15:55
• Haiku Blues #2 (HalcyonHusky) Excellent.
  April 5th, 2017 15:53
• Haiku Blues #1 (HalcyonHusky) Very good.
  April 5th, 2017 15:52
• Broken Mind (Jesse Kuusemets) Great stuff well done
  April 5th, 2017 15:45
• Anxiety (Dakotah Lavender) Every one worries. Admitting this is surely one way to prevent ot getting...
  April 5th, 2017 12:34
• The Last Goodbye (Garry) We all have memories, which is good., , but sometimes it\'s doing the...
  April 5th, 2017 02:50
• Like what it seems (Marylaine) I love the last line. Seems to suugest lots of optimism in what might...
  April 4th, 2017 16:13
• The Last Goodbye (Garry) Thank you.
  April 4th, 2017 15:18
• The Last Goodbye (Garry) It\'s one of life\'s inevitabilities.
  April 4th, 2017 15:11
• still you remain (Willyweed) Nicely written. Well done
  April 4th, 2017 12:22
• Like what it seems (Marylaine) Very elegantly done
  April 4th, 2017 12:19
• Insanity (Laurie christine) Very good. Enjoyed it.
  April 4th, 2017 12:16