Comments received on poems by FredPeyer



Musings
Christina8 said:

All very deeply thoughtful writes in their own right. \"It is so easy to fall in love, but very hard to lose it.\" Wow that is so true! I enjoyed reading all of these musings. Thanks so much for sharing!

September 29th, 2017 22:13

Sand Crabs
rrodriguez said:

Two perspectives of life. Is our choice. So let\'s choose wisely. Fine write my friend enjoyed the analogy.

September 28th, 2017 22:52

Sand Crabs
dusk arising said:

i love this Fred. i feel exactly the way you describe we should be insofar as i am both sand crab and moth - and i accept the duality of my existence.
Maybe the outlook of a person who has lived outside a relationship for many years is very different from what i perceive to be a more balanced outlook of a person who has lived within a secure relationship for many years - respectfully suggested.

September 28th, 2017 17:42

Sand Crabs
malubotelho said:

Nice to read this today. Yesterday I was talking to someone about how some people lives in fear always expecting that something bad is going to happen. Most of the things people fear, never happens. I just don\'t understand why suffer before thinking about bad things. Or not enjoying life because of fear. It is nonsense. Nice write Fred. Balance and good attitude means a lot.

September 28th, 2017 13:20

A Writers Life
malubotelho said:

This is amazing Fred. I was picturing you doing all those things and the words following you floating over your head. Fantastic writing.

September 28th, 2017 12:42

Sand Crabs
WL Schuett said:

Good write Fred I think as artists we must always try to put ourselves out there towards that light .

September 28th, 2017 09:12

Sand Crabs
Louis Gibbs said:

To find the balance of the middle, one must experience both extremes, as we all are doing and have done many times.
Your poem is fine food for thought, Fred!

September 28th, 2017 08:57

Sand Crabs
Christina8 said:

This is a really good and thoughtful write. I know people who are both. But you are right, we need a balance. Sage advice! Great poem!

September 28th, 2017 07:01

Sand Crabs
orchidee said:

A fine write again Fred.

September 28th, 2017 01:51

Sand Crabs
Michael Edwards said:

Great write Fred

September 28th, 2017 01:45

Sand Crabs
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write and good advice, without the risks we would not move forward but we also need to know when staying safe is the way to be. The balance of life is an art.

September 28th, 2017 01:39

Sand Crabs
Fay Slimm. said:

Yes balance is the answer Fred - a good reminder in this enjoyable verse that harmony with self is knowing when and how to take measures for right decisions.

September 28th, 2017 01:33

A Writers Life
Goldfinch60 said:

Super write, as we write our words that bike will take us on a journey of writing them.

September 28th, 2017 00:57

A Writers Life
Accidental Poet said:

When the writing stops from hitting that wall, listen closely for your muse with words written on the wall. Great write Fred. I love this. ; )

September 27th, 2017 19:08

A Writers Life
Poetic Dan said:

You had my mind hooked at the start, I was in that car and already done a lap then hit Mars. Resonating with every word in between, the ending came like words of my dreams, I am so glad to see you on this edge of lifes vibrational field.

A true master of your thoughts here my friend, thank you for sharing.

September 27th, 2017 16:48

A Writers Life
WL Schuett said:

Hit it again Fred great writing , I just pack it in and try later rather than banging my head to the wall .

September 27th, 2017 15:19

A Writers Life
MaddieJ said:

This was so captivating! Also, accurate! Great write!

September 27th, 2017 14:22

A Writers Life
Michael Edwards said:

Only true poets can fully appreciate this - fine write that must ring cords with most of us.

September 27th, 2017 13:56

A Writers Life
orchidee said:

A fine write Fred.

September 27th, 2017 13:48

A Writers Life
Louis Gibbs said:

Writing ... not unlike Riding. Takes one on a thrilling, tenuous, emotion-packed journey, doesn\'t it. Beautifully expressed in this fine metaphor, Fred!

September 27th, 2017 13:46

A Writers Life
Christina8 said:

Wow, your words really come alive on the page! The last stanza says it all. We can dream and write it all. \"a writers life is unlike any other\" So true. Great job on this!!

September 27th, 2017 12:43

Empathy
Baylee said:

This is definitely something I have felt as well. Thank you for sharing

September 27th, 2017 06:38

Empathy
Poetic Dan said:

Thank you for this deep and wonderful feel to a very strong emotion of my pain and love.
Inspirational work my friend

September 26th, 2017 16:48

Empathy
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

HI FRED ~ EMPATHY is SYMPATHY but with feeling and real understanding and your elegant Love Poem exemplifies that ! Thanks for caring and sharing ! When a NEW Member shares a sad Poem I always tell them that MPS is a very EMPATHETIC SITE. Do you agree ~ Yours BRIAN

September 26th, 2017 13:42

Empathy
malubotelho said:

This is a soft love tender poem. A great man is the one that cry together with his woman. Excellent writing Fred.

September 26th, 2017 13:27

Empathy
Christina8 said:

Oh, this is such a beautiful write! Great expression of your love--awesome!

September 26th, 2017 11:39

Empathy
WL Schuett said:

Beautiful poem Fred

September 26th, 2017 09:20

Empathy
Pintu Mahakul said:

Beautiful eyes perturb the core of my agitated soul in a liquid manifestation of empathy and love. Brilliant thought about love and empathy is excellently presented in this poem.

September 26th, 2017 08:31

Empathy
Louis Gibbs said:

Who says motorcycle riders can\'t be mushy too? We\'ve got hearts inside the leather jackets!
A sweet tribute to the magic of love, Fred.

September 26th, 2017 08:25

Empathy
Fay Slimm. said:

Tenderness perfected in this lovely tribute to empathy Fred.

September 26th, 2017 05:02



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