Comments received on poems by dusk arising
dark august days
orchidee said:
I dunno why anyone\'s complaining - \'Cheer up, I say to them; there\'s even more rain tomorrow!\' Doh! (heehee).
August 17th, 2019 01:25
orchidee said:
I dunno why anyone\'s complaining - \'Cheer up, I say to them; there\'s even more rain tomorrow!\' Doh! (heehee).
August 17th, 2019 01:25
dark august days
Goldfinch60 said:
Those \'dark autumn days\' are filled with light from within your words.
August 17th, 2019 00:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Those \'dark autumn days\' are filled with light from within your words.
August 17th, 2019 00:07
pure as driven
PoeticBiscuit said:
A much needed message in today’s times. That last line perfectly sums it up. I really enjoyed this!
August 16th, 2019 20:14
PoeticBiscuit said:
A much needed message in today’s times. That last line perfectly sums it up. I really enjoyed this!
August 16th, 2019 20:14
pure as driven
Christina8 said:
This is a wonderful message and it has to start with each and every one of us...plastic water bottles, straws, EVERYTHING! Otherwise there is no hope for future generations. Thanks for writing and sharing!
August 16th, 2019 19:31
Christina8 said:
This is a wonderful message and it has to start with each and every one of us...plastic water bottles, straws, EVERYTHING! Otherwise there is no hope for future generations. Thanks for writing and sharing!
August 16th, 2019 19:31
pure as driven
Suresh said:
In the past, I equated humanity to be a cancerous cell, that destroys its host (planet earth and all living matter) and then moves on (space exploration) taking its deadly virus along, under the guise of progress..
It is most horrendous that there are non believers in power today, ( Trump and the Republican Party) hell bent on undoing even the little progress we were making in correcting our heinous actions.
August 16th, 2019 16:11
Suresh said:
In the past, I equated humanity to be a cancerous cell, that destroys its host (planet earth and all living matter) and then moves on (space exploration) taking its deadly virus along, under the guise of progress..
It is most horrendous that there are non believers in power today, ( Trump and the Republican Party) hell bent on undoing even the little progress we were making in correcting our heinous actions.
August 16th, 2019 16:11
pure as driven
Neville said:
I am write with you on this one .. these words were crying out to be writ
Something serious needs to be done and soon....
August 16th, 2019 14:12
Neville said:
I am write with you on this one .. these words were crying out to be writ
Something serious needs to be done and soon....
August 16th, 2019 14:12
pure as driven
Fay Slimm. said:
Even small changes if made by the many will shout the end to plastic invasion as does this thunder from your concerned corner my friend. With your poetic cry of complaint every step of the way..........
August 16th, 2019 12:20
Fay Slimm. said:
Even small changes if made by the many will shout the end to plastic invasion as does this thunder from your concerned corner my friend. With your poetic cry of complaint every step of the way..........
August 16th, 2019 12:20
what lights your eyes
Neville said:
Your authors note culminates in a universal truth..
Your fine words resonate... I would like to hear them both spoken and sung................
Neville
August 13th, 2019 16:55
Neville said:
Your authors note culminates in a universal truth..
Your fine words resonate... I would like to hear them both spoken and sung................
Neville
August 13th, 2019 16:55
what lights your eyes
Goldfinch60 said:
Another wonderful set of words d a, as Michael said they draw you into them.
August 13th, 2019 15:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Another wonderful set of words d a, as Michael said they draw you into them.
August 13th, 2019 15:15
what lights your eyes
PoeticBiscuit said:
I love this. Such emotional lyrics that really just pull you in. Has to be my favorite so far.
August 13th, 2019 13:51
PoeticBiscuit said:
I love this. Such emotional lyrics that really just pull you in. Has to be my favorite so far.
August 13th, 2019 13:51
what lights your eyes
Christina8 said:
This is a very moving song indeed! It reminds me of my mother who was addicted to my abusive father....I share all the sentiments of the people who left replies before me....And yes, thanks so much for sharing!
August 13th, 2019 12:46
Christina8 said:
This is a very moving song indeed! It reminds me of my mother who was addicted to my abusive father....I share all the sentiments of the people who left replies before me....And yes, thanks so much for sharing!
August 13th, 2019 12:46
what lights your eyes
Michael Edwards said:
It draws you in as you read it - would love to hear it sung.
August 13th, 2019 10:54
Michael Edwards said:
It draws you in as you read it - would love to hear it sung.
August 13th, 2019 10:54
what lights your eyes
Suresh said:
Loves pleasure and pain so fluidly penned.
Thnx for sharing
P.S. I wanted to say a lot more, but...
August 13th, 2019 10:42
Suresh said:
Loves pleasure and pain so fluidly penned.
Thnx for sharing
P.S. I wanted to say a lot more, but...
August 13th, 2019 10:42
we need a whole lot of love
Poetic Dan said:
Must be that acid that never left my system or maybe the mushrooms from the other week but this my friend was toe tapping sweet!
You was born to give us your melody!
August 13th, 2019 01:52
Poetic Dan said:
Must be that acid that never left my system or maybe the mushrooms from the other week but this my friend was toe tapping sweet!
You was born to give us your melody!
August 13th, 2019 01:52
destiny
Suresh said:
I am on a path from which I cannot falter, the light you speak of, is the ultimate enlightenment that I seek, for in its absence existence becomes irrelevant.
I so enjoyed the road you were traveling.
August 12th, 2019 18:48
Suresh said:
I am on a path from which I cannot falter, the light you speak of, is the ultimate enlightenment that I seek, for in its absence existence becomes irrelevant.
I so enjoyed the road you were traveling.
August 12th, 2019 18:48
destiny
orchidee said:
A fine write dusk. Though, as I say, I don\'t put all my trust in me. I...… well, the rest is on a spiritual/religious theme, so......
August 12th, 2019 01:27
orchidee said:
A fine write dusk. Though, as I say, I don\'t put all my trust in me. I...… well, the rest is on a spiritual/religious theme, so......
August 12th, 2019 01:27
destiny
Fay Slimm. said:
Powerfully penned and very appealing this urging for souls to know who they are -- - must be one of your best my friend and would have had a decided effect on your listeners back then as indeed it will have with readers here.... into my favourites with this trenchant piece.
August 12th, 2019 00:45
Fay Slimm. said:
Powerfully penned and very appealing this urging for souls to know who they are -- - must be one of your best my friend and would have had a decided effect on your listeners back then as indeed it will have with readers here.... into my favourites with this trenchant piece.
August 12th, 2019 00:45
destiny
Goldfinch60 said:
When you said yesterday that I should read this poem as it may be meaningful to me you were so right, this is me.
Every words I agree with, I too know that \"when the light grows dim\" I know that I will continue with My Spirit into the life of eternity.
I don\'t say this very often but this is going into my favourites.
Thank you d.a.
Andy
August 12th, 2019 00:15
Goldfinch60 said:
When you said yesterday that I should read this poem as it may be meaningful to me you were so right, this is me.
Every words I agree with, I too know that \"when the light grows dim\" I know that I will continue with My Spirit into the life of eternity.
I don\'t say this very often but this is going into my favourites.
Thank you d.a.
Andy
August 12th, 2019 00:15
destiny
Michael Edwards said:
Well this is truly exceptional and that last verse is a belter - thanks for a great read.
August 12th, 2019 00:15
Michael Edwards said:
Well this is truly exceptional and that last verse is a belter - thanks for a great read.
August 12th, 2019 00:15
we need a whole lot of love
PoeticBiscuit said:
Wish I could hear those instruments because the words alone almost have me on my feet.
August 11th, 2019 21:56
PoeticBiscuit said:
Wish I could hear those instruments because the words alone almost have me on my feet.
August 11th, 2019 21:56
we need a whole lot of love
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write d a, I was nearly up dancing.
August 11th, 2019 15:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write d a, I was nearly up dancing.
August 11th, 2019 15:20
we need a whole lot of love
Goddess of the Mist said:
Yes! That\'s exactly what we all need! Thank you for posting this, very beautiful!
August 11th, 2019 15:19
Goddess of the Mist said:
Yes! That\'s exactly what we all need! Thank you for posting this, very beautiful!
August 11th, 2019 15:19
we need a whole lot of love
Suresh said:
It was true then and is so now. So sing it loud and others hear it as well
August 11th, 2019 12:10
Suresh said:
It was true then and is so now. So sing it loud and others hear it as well
August 11th, 2019 12:10
all the times she tried
Suresh said:
As I said in my earlier work, it\'s great to visit the past works, and look at it in today\'s light. Much we may wish to tweak but best left as is for it shows our true self then.
Well writ then and look forward to more
August 11th, 2019 12:06
Suresh said:
As I said in my earlier work, it\'s great to visit the past works, and look at it in today\'s light. Much we may wish to tweak but best left as is for it shows our true self then.
Well writ then and look forward to more
August 11th, 2019 12:06
we need a whole lot of love
Christina8 said:
This sounded great in my head....I wish we all could hear it now! Great job DA!
August 11th, 2019 11:49
Christina8 said:
This sounded great in my head....I wish we all could hear it now! Great job DA!
August 11th, 2019 11:49
we need a whole lot of love
Michael Edwards said:
Don\'t we just - great write .
August 11th, 2019 09:47
Michael Edwards said:
Don\'t we just - great write .
August 11th, 2019 09:47
we need a whole lot of love
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Wise words for a younger soul Thanks DA
August 11th, 2019 08:53
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Wise words for a younger soul Thanks DA
August 11th, 2019 08:53
we need a whole lot of love
Fay Slimm. said:
Could hear you singin\' this summary of food for the dancers D.A. - -indeed love is what we all need.
August 11th, 2019 05:50
Fay Slimm. said:
Could hear you singin\' this summary of food for the dancers D.A. - -indeed love is what we all need.
August 11th, 2019 05:50
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