Comments received on poems by dusk arising
all the times she tried
Suresh said:
As I said in my earlier work, it\'s great to visit the past works, and look at it in today\'s light. Much we may wish to tweak but best left as is for it shows our true self then.
Well writ then and look forward to more
August 11th, 2019 12:06
Suresh said:
As I said in my earlier work, it\'s great to visit the past works, and look at it in today\'s light. Much we may wish to tweak but best left as is for it shows our true self then.
Well writ then and look forward to more
August 11th, 2019 12:06
we need a whole lot of love
Christina8 said:
This sounded great in my head....I wish we all could hear it now! Great job DA!
August 11th, 2019 11:49
Christina8 said:
This sounded great in my head....I wish we all could hear it now! Great job DA!
August 11th, 2019 11:49
we need a whole lot of love
Michael Edwards said:
Don\'t we just - great write .
August 11th, 2019 09:47
Michael Edwards said:
Don\'t we just - great write .
August 11th, 2019 09:47
we need a whole lot of love
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Wise words for a younger soul Thanks DA
August 11th, 2019 08:53
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Wise words for a younger soul Thanks DA
August 11th, 2019 08:53
we need a whole lot of love
Fay Slimm. said:
Could hear you singin\' this summary of food for the dancers D.A. - -indeed love is what we all need.
August 11th, 2019 05:50
Fay Slimm. said:
Could hear you singin\' this summary of food for the dancers D.A. - -indeed love is what we all need.
August 11th, 2019 05:50
all the times she tried
Fay Slimm. said:
An echo of musical poetry fills this reader who is glad to have caught its story of understanding why love at times must leave. A fine piece of work D.A.
August 11th, 2019 05:48
Fay Slimm. said:
An echo of musical poetry fills this reader who is glad to have caught its story of understanding why love at times must leave. A fine piece of work D.A.
August 11th, 2019 05:48
we need a whole lot of love
Neville said:
I bet this sounded great live n loud.. it sounds great whispered in my head....
N
August 11th, 2019 05:20
Neville said:
I bet this sounded great live n loud.. it sounds great whispered in my head....
N
August 11th, 2019 05:20
all the times she tried
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful lyrics that suited the time and possibly even more so now.
August 11th, 2019 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful lyrics that suited the time and possibly even more so now.
August 11th, 2019 00:39
all the times she tried
PoeticBiscuit said:
Keep them coming DA I’ll be here for them all!
August 10th, 2019 21:33
PoeticBiscuit said:
Keep them coming DA I’ll be here for them all!
August 10th, 2019 21:33
all the times she tried
kevin browne said:
Reads and sound like a song from the late 80s, I was 18 in 1988 and it was a fabulous year all year round. Your work her is sublime and managing to turn it into song would be a great acheivement, Great work, my freind....!!
August 10th, 2019 11:15
kevin browne said:
Reads and sound like a song from the late 80s, I was 18 in 1988 and it was a fabulous year all year round. Your work her is sublime and managing to turn it into song would be a great acheivement, Great work, my freind....!!
August 10th, 2019 11:15
all the times she tried
Christina8 said:
This was a great song...I could almost hear it playing in my head....I do hope you post more......Christina
August 10th, 2019 10:21
Christina8 said:
This was a great song...I could almost hear it playing in my head....I do hope you post more......Christina
August 10th, 2019 10:21
all the times she tried
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great lyrics made a great poem,... nothing to separate them
August 10th, 2019 04:33
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great lyrics made a great poem,... nothing to separate them
August 10th, 2019 04:33
all the times she tried
Neville said:
these words are so reminiscent of some of my own much earlier work.. they are fine words and true....
I am delighted you intend to post more...
I think we may both look back & smile.... N
August 10th, 2019 04:29
Neville said:
these words are so reminiscent of some of my own much earlier work.. they are fine words and true....
I am delighted you intend to post more...
I think we may both look back & smile.... N
August 10th, 2019 04:29
all the times she tried
Poetic Dan said:
88 that was great! I could hear the tune playing away. Look forward to seeing more of yesterday\'s
August 10th, 2019 04:15
Poetic Dan said:
88 that was great! I could hear the tune playing away. Look forward to seeing more of yesterday\'s
August 10th, 2019 04:15
the Jesus within
Laura🌻 said:
D.A.,
Such a great and meaningful write! This personal experience of yours is certainly helping! Thank you for sharing your pen!
~Laura~
August 10th, 2019 01:09
Laura🌻 said:
D.A.,
Such a great and meaningful write! This personal experience of yours is certainly helping! Thank you for sharing your pen!
~Laura~
August 10th, 2019 01:09
the Jesus within
Michael Edwards said:
It is not what you believe in life, it\'s how you lead your life.
Great write DA
August 9th, 2019 15:21
Michael Edwards said:
It is not what you believe in life, it\'s how you lead your life.
Great write DA
August 9th, 2019 15:21
the Jesus within
Goldfinch60 said:
The Spirituality within us can help us all, I am so glad that it helped you d a.
August 9th, 2019 15:11
Goldfinch60 said:
The Spirituality within us can help us all, I am so glad that it helped you d a.
August 9th, 2019 15:11
without drinking
BoxMyHeart said:
Hoping you\'re on the mend this time. Deep sound poem from a real space. Enjoyed it!
August 9th, 2019 14:46
BoxMyHeart said:
Hoping you\'re on the mend this time. Deep sound poem from a real space. Enjoyed it!
August 9th, 2019 14:46
the Jesus within
Suresh said:
Many will misunderstand your post, and claim it for their beliefs.
As I understand, such selfless acts are supremely greater than any belief.
Thnx for sharing
August 9th, 2019 13:30
Suresh said:
Many will misunderstand your post, and claim it for their beliefs.
As I understand, such selfless acts are supremely greater than any belief.
Thnx for sharing
August 9th, 2019 13:30
the Jesus within
Fay Slimm. said:
That last line says such a lot about the empathy existing in souls like the one who comforted you.......pain as your pen describes must be so very frightening - - yet sharing it with you in that kindest of ways you will be bound to remember - - a personal experience may help others so thanks for sharing this happening D.A.
August 9th, 2019 11:02
Fay Slimm. said:
That last line says such a lot about the empathy existing in souls like the one who comforted you.......pain as your pen describes must be so very frightening - - yet sharing it with you in that kindest of ways you will be bound to remember - - a personal experience may help others so thanks for sharing this happening D.A.
August 9th, 2019 11:02
the Jesus within
Neville said:
tis a very personal thing pain... but I and everyone who comes to this page will be able to understand where you are coming from.... I kind of enjoyed reading about your discomfort today.... N
August 9th, 2019 09:50
Neville said:
tis a very personal thing pain... but I and everyone who comes to this page will be able to understand where you are coming from.... I kind of enjoyed reading about your discomfort today.... N
August 9th, 2019 09:50
be able to enter
PoeticBiscuit said:
I may not fully agree with the message but the write is well done nonetheless!
August 8th, 2019 20:24
PoeticBiscuit said:
I may not fully agree with the message but the write is well done nonetheless!
August 8th, 2019 20:24
be able to enter
Neville said:
Thank the lord I am a Buddhist...
Oops , as you were Pyke...
August 8th, 2019 13:32
Neville said:
Thank the lord I am a Buddhist...
Oops , as you were Pyke...
August 8th, 2019 13:32
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