Comments received on poems by dusk arising
all the times she tried
Fay Slimm. said:
An echo of musical poetry fills this reader who is glad to have caught its story of understanding why love at times must leave. A fine piece of work D.A.
August 11th, 2019 05:48
Fay Slimm. said:
An echo of musical poetry fills this reader who is glad to have caught its story of understanding why love at times must leave. A fine piece of work D.A.
August 11th, 2019 05:48
we need a whole lot of love
Neville said:
I bet this sounded great live n loud.. it sounds great whispered in my head....
N
August 11th, 2019 05:20
Neville said:
I bet this sounded great live n loud.. it sounds great whispered in my head....
N
August 11th, 2019 05:20
all the times she tried
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful lyrics that suited the time and possibly even more so now.
August 11th, 2019 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful lyrics that suited the time and possibly even more so now.
August 11th, 2019 00:39
all the times she tried
PoeticBiscuit said:
Keep them coming DA I’ll be here for them all!
August 10th, 2019 21:33
PoeticBiscuit said:
Keep them coming DA I’ll be here for them all!
August 10th, 2019 21:33
all the times she tried
kevin browne said:
Reads and sound like a song from the late 80s, I was 18 in 1988 and it was a fabulous year all year round. Your work her is sublime and managing to turn it into song would be a great acheivement, Great work, my freind....!!
August 10th, 2019 11:15
kevin browne said:
Reads and sound like a song from the late 80s, I was 18 in 1988 and it was a fabulous year all year round. Your work her is sublime and managing to turn it into song would be a great acheivement, Great work, my freind....!!
August 10th, 2019 11:15
all the times she tried
Christina8 said:
This was a great song...I could almost hear it playing in my head....I do hope you post more......Christina
August 10th, 2019 10:21
Christina8 said:
This was a great song...I could almost hear it playing in my head....I do hope you post more......Christina
August 10th, 2019 10:21
all the times she tried
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great lyrics made a great poem,... nothing to separate them
August 10th, 2019 04:33
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great lyrics made a great poem,... nothing to separate them
August 10th, 2019 04:33
all the times she tried
Neville said:
these words are so reminiscent of some of my own much earlier work.. they are fine words and true....
I am delighted you intend to post more...
I think we may both look back & smile.... N
August 10th, 2019 04:29
Neville said:
these words are so reminiscent of some of my own much earlier work.. they are fine words and true....
I am delighted you intend to post more...
I think we may both look back & smile.... N
August 10th, 2019 04:29
all the times she tried
Poetic Dan said:
88 that was great! I could hear the tune playing away. Look forward to seeing more of yesterday\'s
August 10th, 2019 04:15
Poetic Dan said:
88 that was great! I could hear the tune playing away. Look forward to seeing more of yesterday\'s
August 10th, 2019 04:15
the Jesus within
Laura🌻 said:
D.A.,
Such a great and meaningful write! This personal experience of yours is certainly helping! Thank you for sharing your pen!
~Laura~
August 10th, 2019 01:09
Laura🌻 said:
D.A.,
Such a great and meaningful write! This personal experience of yours is certainly helping! Thank you for sharing your pen!
~Laura~
August 10th, 2019 01:09
the Jesus within
Michael Edwards said:
It is not what you believe in life, it\'s how you lead your life.
Great write DA
August 9th, 2019 15:21
Michael Edwards said:
It is not what you believe in life, it\'s how you lead your life.
Great write DA
August 9th, 2019 15:21
the Jesus within
Goldfinch60 said:
The Spirituality within us can help us all, I am so glad that it helped you d a.
August 9th, 2019 15:11
Goldfinch60 said:
The Spirituality within us can help us all, I am so glad that it helped you d a.
August 9th, 2019 15:11
without drinking
BoxMyHeart said:
Hoping you\'re on the mend this time. Deep sound poem from a real space. Enjoyed it!
August 9th, 2019 14:46
BoxMyHeart said:
Hoping you\'re on the mend this time. Deep sound poem from a real space. Enjoyed it!
August 9th, 2019 14:46
the Jesus within
Suresh said:
Many will misunderstand your post, and claim it for their beliefs.
As I understand, such selfless acts are supremely greater than any belief.
Thnx for sharing
August 9th, 2019 13:30
Suresh said:
Many will misunderstand your post, and claim it for their beliefs.
As I understand, such selfless acts are supremely greater than any belief.
Thnx for sharing
August 9th, 2019 13:30
the Jesus within
Fay Slimm. said:
That last line says such a lot about the empathy existing in souls like the one who comforted you.......pain as your pen describes must be so very frightening - - yet sharing it with you in that kindest of ways you will be bound to remember - - a personal experience may help others so thanks for sharing this happening D.A.
August 9th, 2019 11:02
Fay Slimm. said:
That last line says such a lot about the empathy existing in souls like the one who comforted you.......pain as your pen describes must be so very frightening - - yet sharing it with you in that kindest of ways you will be bound to remember - - a personal experience may help others so thanks for sharing this happening D.A.
August 9th, 2019 11:02
the Jesus within
Neville said:
tis a very personal thing pain... but I and everyone who comes to this page will be able to understand where you are coming from.... I kind of enjoyed reading about your discomfort today.... N
August 9th, 2019 09:50
Neville said:
tis a very personal thing pain... but I and everyone who comes to this page will be able to understand where you are coming from.... I kind of enjoyed reading about your discomfort today.... N
August 9th, 2019 09:50
be able to enter
PoeticBiscuit said:
I may not fully agree with the message but the write is well done nonetheless!
August 8th, 2019 20:24
PoeticBiscuit said:
I may not fully agree with the message but the write is well done nonetheless!
August 8th, 2019 20:24
be able to enter
Neville said:
Thank the lord I am a Buddhist...
Oops , as you were Pyke...
August 8th, 2019 13:32
Neville said:
Thank the lord I am a Buddhist...
Oops , as you were Pyke...
August 8th, 2019 13:32
be able to enter
Michael Edwards said:
I share many of your views and agree there is much hypocrisy and double standards but we are all entitled to believe whatever we want to - as long our beliefs don\'t impact on others and as long as we don\'t try to impose them on others.
August 8th, 2019 02:29
Michael Edwards said:
I share many of your views and agree there is much hypocrisy and double standards but we are all entitled to believe whatever we want to - as long our beliefs don\'t impact on others and as long as we don\'t try to impose them on others.
August 8th, 2019 02:29
be able to enter
orchidee said:
There\'s some element of truth in this, I think, applying to SOME people, some Christians even, but not to all.
August 8th, 2019 01:34
orchidee said:
There\'s some element of truth in this, I think, applying to SOME people, some Christians even, but not to all.
August 8th, 2019 01:34
there
Goldfinch60 said:
Why - the most unanswered question of them all. Wonderful emotive write d a.
August 8th, 2019 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Why - the most unanswered question of them all. Wonderful emotive write d a.
August 8th, 2019 01:16
there
PoeticBiscuit said:
Perhaps you could show me where this place is? I could use a bit of reflection myself. I always enjoy your work Dusk, keep on taking me on these wonderful journeys
August 7th, 2019 21:21
PoeticBiscuit said:
Perhaps you could show me where this place is? I could use a bit of reflection myself. I always enjoy your work Dusk, keep on taking me on these wonderful journeys
August 7th, 2019 21:21
there
Suresh said:
(why?), lacking the reason, the journey is too arduous,
Your poetic words, deeply touch
August 7th, 2019 11:49
Suresh said:
(why?), lacking the reason, the journey is too arduous,
Your poetic words, deeply touch
August 7th, 2019 11:49
there
Michael Edwards said:
So simply written with such effectiveness - a gem of a write.
August 7th, 2019 08:09
Michael Edwards said:
So simply written with such effectiveness - a gem of a write.
August 7th, 2019 08:09
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