Comments received on poems by dusk arising
the love of birdsong
Neville said:
I was not expecting that at all, I dunno what I was expecting
not sure I was expecting anything in particular
But bum notes made me smile bigger than a lot of other things might have done...
Tis good to wake up with a smile on ya face.. thanks DA.... N
August 1st, 2019 01:51
Neville said:
I was not expecting that at all, I dunno what I was expecting
not sure I was expecting anything in particular
But bum notes made me smile bigger than a lot of other things might have done...
Tis good to wake up with a smile on ya face.. thanks DA.... N
August 1st, 2019 01:51
the love of birdsong
orchidee said:
Ye have done a fine write dusk. Aww, some people are horrid. They say \'If birdsong wakes me up one more morning, I\'ll shoot those pesky birds!\' Well, they don\'t say \'pesky\' but you get the gist.
August 1st, 2019 01:42
orchidee said:
Ye have done a fine write dusk. Aww, some people are horrid. They say \'If birdsong wakes me up one more morning, I\'ll shoot those pesky birds!\' Well, they don\'t say \'pesky\' but you get the gist.
August 1st, 2019 01:42
her weakness
Christina8 said:
Too many choices....I just walk on by! Very cute poem....and oh so true!
July 31st, 2019 15:05
Christina8 said:
Too many choices....I just walk on by! Very cute poem....and oh so true!
July 31st, 2019 15:05
her weakness
Michael Edwards said:
Conjures up such a great, albeit sad, scene.
July 31st, 2019 10:28
Michael Edwards said:
Conjures up such a great, albeit sad, scene.
July 31st, 2019 10:28
her weakness
Neville said:
This is one of them great little sad reads I like so much .. clever, well crafted and easily relateable to too sir.... N
July 31st, 2019 06:55
Neville said:
This is one of them great little sad reads I like so much .. clever, well crafted and easily relateable to too sir.... N
July 31st, 2019 06:55
her weakness
dusk arising said:
Its odd the things which stop us dead and jolt our thoughts to where they must travel for our own sanity.
July 31st, 2019 05:04
dusk arising said:
Its odd the things which stop us dead and jolt our thoughts to where they must travel for our own sanity.
July 31st, 2019 05:04
without drinking
Fay Slimm. said:
Sending the warmest of wishes as you undertake another few weeks of this which I hope is the healing process dear poet-friend......... your verse well describes how strong you must be to endure and you will
I am sure soon feel more alive.......... hugs and more .xxx Fay
July 28th, 2019 03:13
Fay Slimm. said:
Sending the warmest of wishes as you undertake another few weeks of this which I hope is the healing process dear poet-friend......... your verse well describes how strong you must be to endure and you will
I am sure soon feel more alive.......... hugs and more .xxx Fay
July 28th, 2019 03:13
without drinking
kevin browne said:
Life brings in the effects of what the human body can actually handle. Even young children, babies too, can have serious health problems from the time of birth deseases, fevers, HIV, drug addicts. alcoholism and the list goes on for eternity. There are no answers in some cases which can lead to unfortunate circumstances. I hope, at least, that somewhere somehow will hopefully be able to ease up with whatever the health is in you. May God bless you in order for another miracle to happen. Sending positive vibes, my freind..
July 27th, 2019 17:59
kevin browne said:
Life brings in the effects of what the human body can actually handle. Even young children, babies too, can have serious health problems from the time of birth deseases, fevers, HIV, drug addicts. alcoholism and the list goes on for eternity. There are no answers in some cases which can lead to unfortunate circumstances. I hope, at least, that somewhere somehow will hopefully be able to ease up with whatever the health is in you. May God bless you in order for another miracle to happen. Sending positive vibes, my freind..
July 27th, 2019 17:59
without drinking
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful write d a, I am sure all will be well, perhaps you should pick up the Saxophone again.
July 27th, 2019 14:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful write d a, I am sure all will be well, perhaps you should pick up the Saxophone again.
July 27th, 2019 14:54
without drinking
Christina8 said:
I am not sure what you are going through but you should be proud of your poem because it is powerful! Hope you feel better soon!
July 27th, 2019 13:46
Christina8 said:
I am not sure what you are going through but you should be proud of your poem because it is powerful! Hope you feel better soon!
July 27th, 2019 13:46
without drinking
Poetic Dan said:
Incredibly done, I saw something different until I read your comment.
You are a powerful soul, I have no doubt you\'ll heal. Ready to spin those lines right off your golden wheels
Much peace and rest my friend
July 27th, 2019 12:26
Poetic Dan said:
Incredibly done, I saw something different until I read your comment.
You are a powerful soul, I have no doubt you\'ll heal. Ready to spin those lines right off your golden wheels
Much peace and rest my friend
July 27th, 2019 12:26
without drinking
FineB said:
Thank you Dusk Arising
My support and encouragement is with you with what you are experiencing.
May you come out much stronger as a result.
An incredible awesome poem.
Keep writing FineB
July 27th, 2019 10:23
FineB said:
Thank you Dusk Arising
My support and encouragement is with you with what you are experiencing.
May you come out much stronger as a result.
An incredible awesome poem.
Keep writing FineB
July 27th, 2019 10:23
without drinking
Suresh said:
Since I am not aware of the cause of your treatment, I can only assume that it is dire. Yet, you compose such intense poem
July 27th, 2019 09:47
Suresh said:
Since I am not aware of the cause of your treatment, I can only assume that it is dire. Yet, you compose such intense poem
July 27th, 2019 09:47
without drinking
Neville said:
this is such a good poem,.. regardless of the inspiration behind it and indeed the motives for posting it today, you should feel proud of it at least and your good self........ Neville
July 27th, 2019 08:35
Neville said:
this is such a good poem,.. regardless of the inspiration behind it and indeed the motives for posting it today, you should feel proud of it at least and your good self........ Neville
July 27th, 2019 08:35
dusk arises
Silkseduction said:
This is beautifully composed- enjoyed immensely.
July 26th, 2019 15:42
Silkseduction said:
This is beautifully composed- enjoyed immensely.
July 26th, 2019 15:42
dusk arises
Suresh said:
Isn\'t is amazing how the pastel colors of dawn, become brilliant at dusk...
... yes dusk, like autumn, are my favorite times.
Your pen is far more poetic than mine
July 26th, 2019 11:39
Suresh said:
Isn\'t is amazing how the pastel colors of dawn, become brilliant at dusk...
... yes dusk, like autumn, are my favorite times.
Your pen is far more poetic than mine
July 26th, 2019 11:39
dusk arises
Laura🌻 said:
d a ,
A wonderful read.
Your poem excellently describes the hours I favor of a twenty-four hour period...of late...
“and dusk arises
that mystical time
neither day or night
when everything rhymes”...
~Laura~
July 26th, 2019 08:22
Laura🌻 said:
d a ,
A wonderful read.
Your poem excellently describes the hours I favor of a twenty-four hour period...of late...
“and dusk arises
that mystical time
neither day or night
when everything rhymes”...
~Laura~
July 26th, 2019 08:22
dusk arises
Neville said:
your muse is nocturnal then...
lucky you and all those of us who find this page.......... Neville
July 26th, 2019 06:20
Neville said:
your muse is nocturnal then...
lucky you and all those of us who find this page.......... Neville
July 26th, 2019 06:20
dusk arises
Fay Slimm. said:
Simply beautiful this description of dusk... into my faves. with this one D.A.
July 26th, 2019 04:40
Fay Slimm. said:
Simply beautiful this description of dusk... into my faves. with this one D.A.
July 26th, 2019 04:40
dusk arises
Poetic Dan said:
My man! What a great flow, really enjoyed this and start my day fresh. Letting my rhymes of the day, shine like the sun and moon all the rest for a bit of fun!
Thank you!
July 26th, 2019 03:01
Poetic Dan said:
My man! What a great flow, really enjoyed this and start my day fresh. Letting my rhymes of the day, shine like the sun and moon all the rest for a bit of fun!
Thank you!
July 26th, 2019 03:01
dusk arises
orchidee said:
A fine write dusk. You may not like me saying this: \'But who made the sunsets and sunrises then?\'
July 26th, 2019 01:37
orchidee said:
A fine write dusk. You may not like me saying this: \'But who made the sunsets and sunrises then?\'
July 26th, 2019 01:37
dusk arises
PoeticBiscuit said:
This poem painted me a very vivid picture. and it was spectacular.
July 26th, 2019 01:18
PoeticBiscuit said:
This poem painted me a very vivid picture. and it was spectacular.
July 26th, 2019 01:18
dusk arises
Christina8 said:
A beautiful message of a sweet sunset!! Well done dusk!
July 26th, 2019 00:16
Christina8 said:
A beautiful message of a sweet sunset!! Well done dusk!
July 26th, 2019 00:16
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