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her weakness
dusk arising said:
Its odd the things which stop us dead and jolt our thoughts to where they must travel for our own sanity.
July 31st, 2019 05:04
dusk arising said:
Its odd the things which stop us dead and jolt our thoughts to where they must travel for our own sanity.
July 31st, 2019 05:04
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Fay Slimm. said:
Sending the warmest of wishes as you undertake another few weeks of this which I hope is the healing process dear poet-friend......... your verse well describes how strong you must be to endure and you will
I am sure soon feel more alive.......... hugs and more .xxx Fay
July 28th, 2019 03:13
Fay Slimm. said:
Sending the warmest of wishes as you undertake another few weeks of this which I hope is the healing process dear poet-friend......... your verse well describes how strong you must be to endure and you will
I am sure soon feel more alive.......... hugs and more .xxx Fay
July 28th, 2019 03:13
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kevin browne said:
Life brings in the effects of what the human body can actually handle. Even young children, babies too, can have serious health problems from the time of birth deseases, fevers, HIV, drug addicts. alcoholism and the list goes on for eternity. There are no answers in some cases which can lead to unfortunate circumstances. I hope, at least, that somewhere somehow will hopefully be able to ease up with whatever the health is in you. May God bless you in order for another miracle to happen. Sending positive vibes, my freind..
July 27th, 2019 17:59
kevin browne said:
Life brings in the effects of what the human body can actually handle. Even young children, babies too, can have serious health problems from the time of birth deseases, fevers, HIV, drug addicts. alcoholism and the list goes on for eternity. There are no answers in some cases which can lead to unfortunate circumstances. I hope, at least, that somewhere somehow will hopefully be able to ease up with whatever the health is in you. May God bless you in order for another miracle to happen. Sending positive vibes, my freind..
July 27th, 2019 17:59
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Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful write d a, I am sure all will be well, perhaps you should pick up the Saxophone again.
July 27th, 2019 14:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful write d a, I am sure all will be well, perhaps you should pick up the Saxophone again.
July 27th, 2019 14:54
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Christina8 said:
I am not sure what you are going through but you should be proud of your poem because it is powerful! Hope you feel better soon!
July 27th, 2019 13:46
Christina8 said:
I am not sure what you are going through but you should be proud of your poem because it is powerful! Hope you feel better soon!
July 27th, 2019 13:46
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Poetic Dan said:
Incredibly done, I saw something different until I read your comment.
You are a powerful soul, I have no doubt you\'ll heal. Ready to spin those lines right off your golden wheels
Much peace and rest my friend
July 27th, 2019 12:26
Poetic Dan said:
Incredibly done, I saw something different until I read your comment.
You are a powerful soul, I have no doubt you\'ll heal. Ready to spin those lines right off your golden wheels
Much peace and rest my friend
July 27th, 2019 12:26
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FineB said:
Thank you Dusk Arising
My support and encouragement is with you with what you are experiencing.
May you come out much stronger as a result.
An incredible awesome poem.
Keep writing FineB
July 27th, 2019 10:23
FineB said:
Thank you Dusk Arising
My support and encouragement is with you with what you are experiencing.
May you come out much stronger as a result.
An incredible awesome poem.
Keep writing FineB
July 27th, 2019 10:23
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Suresh said:
Since I am not aware of the cause of your treatment, I can only assume that it is dire. Yet, you compose such intense poem
July 27th, 2019 09:47
Suresh said:
Since I am not aware of the cause of your treatment, I can only assume that it is dire. Yet, you compose such intense poem
July 27th, 2019 09:47
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Neville said:
this is such a good poem,.. regardless of the inspiration behind it and indeed the motives for posting it today, you should feel proud of it at least and your good self........ Neville
July 27th, 2019 08:35
Neville said:
this is such a good poem,.. regardless of the inspiration behind it and indeed the motives for posting it today, you should feel proud of it at least and your good self........ Neville
July 27th, 2019 08:35
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Silkseduction said:
This is beautifully composed- enjoyed immensely.
July 26th, 2019 15:42
Silkseduction said:
This is beautifully composed- enjoyed immensely.
July 26th, 2019 15:42
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Suresh said:
Isn\'t is amazing how the pastel colors of dawn, become brilliant at dusk...
... yes dusk, like autumn, are my favorite times.
Your pen is far more poetic than mine
July 26th, 2019 11:39
Suresh said:
Isn\'t is amazing how the pastel colors of dawn, become brilliant at dusk...
... yes dusk, like autumn, are my favorite times.
Your pen is far more poetic than mine
July 26th, 2019 11:39
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Laura🌻 said:
d a ,
A wonderful read.
Your poem excellently describes the hours I favor of a twenty-four hour period...of late...
“and dusk arises
that mystical time
neither day or night
when everything rhymes”...
~Laura~
July 26th, 2019 08:22
Laura🌻 said:
d a ,
A wonderful read.
Your poem excellently describes the hours I favor of a twenty-four hour period...of late...
“and dusk arises
that mystical time
neither day or night
when everything rhymes”...
~Laura~
July 26th, 2019 08:22
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Neville said:
your muse is nocturnal then...
lucky you and all those of us who find this page.......... Neville
July 26th, 2019 06:20
Neville said:
your muse is nocturnal then...
lucky you and all those of us who find this page.......... Neville
July 26th, 2019 06:20
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Fay Slimm. said:
Simply beautiful this description of dusk... into my faves. with this one D.A.
July 26th, 2019 04:40
Fay Slimm. said:
Simply beautiful this description of dusk... into my faves. with this one D.A.
July 26th, 2019 04:40
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Poetic Dan said:
My man! What a great flow, really enjoyed this and start my day fresh. Letting my rhymes of the day, shine like the sun and moon all the rest for a bit of fun!
Thank you!
July 26th, 2019 03:01
Poetic Dan said:
My man! What a great flow, really enjoyed this and start my day fresh. Letting my rhymes of the day, shine like the sun and moon all the rest for a bit of fun!
Thank you!
July 26th, 2019 03:01
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orchidee said:
A fine write dusk. You may not like me saying this: \'But who made the sunsets and sunrises then?\'
July 26th, 2019 01:37
orchidee said:
A fine write dusk. You may not like me saying this: \'But who made the sunsets and sunrises then?\'
July 26th, 2019 01:37
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PoeticBiscuit said:
This poem painted me a very vivid picture. and it was spectacular.
July 26th, 2019 01:18
PoeticBiscuit said:
This poem painted me a very vivid picture. and it was spectacular.
July 26th, 2019 01:18
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Christina8 said:
A beautiful message of a sweet sunset!! Well done dusk!
July 26th, 2019 00:16
Christina8 said:
A beautiful message of a sweet sunset!! Well done dusk!
July 26th, 2019 00:16
for one another
kevin browne said:
Indeed the though must be spread from your poetry to humans who are always painting the wrong picture by not holding onto what you haven\'t got. A hand held out should resognate through and through to everyone. Well penned.
July 25th, 2019 07:40
kevin browne said:
Indeed the though must be spread from your poetry to humans who are always painting the wrong picture by not holding onto what you haven\'t got. A hand held out should resognate through and through to everyone. Well penned.
July 25th, 2019 07:40
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ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thnaks for sharing *DA* This is MANTRA most on MPS will be able to share. It is Natural to care forOUR Families & OUR Lovers but it is Supanatural to care for all teh rest of the 7.5 Billion Humnas who cohabit this Old Earth with us. So yes I love Presidents Trump & Kim and our new PM Boris Johnson ! Just a s much as I love ANGELA but of course in a different way. To US *FRIENDS* are *STRANGERS* We haven*t met ! Because ~ as you say ~ We are all here for one another ~ To eliminate Hunger ~ Poverty ~ Unequality ~ War etc !
Blessings to YOU & YOURS
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙
July 25th, 2019 05:46
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thnaks for sharing *DA* This is MANTRA most on MPS will be able to share. It is Natural to care forOUR Families & OUR Lovers but it is Supanatural to care for all teh rest of the 7.5 Billion Humnas who cohabit this Old Earth with us. So yes I love Presidents Trump & Kim and our new PM Boris Johnson ! Just a s much as I love ANGELA but of course in a different way. To US *FRIENDS* are *STRANGERS* We haven*t met ! Because ~ as you say ~ We are all here for one another ~ To eliminate Hunger ~ Poverty ~ Unequality ~ War etc !
Blessings to YOU & YOURS
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙
July 25th, 2019 05:46
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Neville said:
words to remember
well penned, well shared and true...
July 25th, 2019 04:26
Neville said:
words to remember
well penned, well shared and true...
July 25th, 2019 04:26
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Fay Slimm. said:
A request phrased in poetic language yet simply explaining what we all need to know...... an inspiring read D.A. and thank you.
July 25th, 2019 02:45
Fay Slimm. said:
A request phrased in poetic language yet simply explaining what we all need to know...... an inspiring read D.A. and thank you.
July 25th, 2019 02:45
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Laura🌻 said:
dusk arising,
A beautifully stated sentiment that should be disseminated throughout the land!
~Laura~
July 25th, 2019 02:41
Laura🌻 said:
dusk arising,
A beautifully stated sentiment that should be disseminated throughout the land!
~Laura~
July 25th, 2019 02:41
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orchidee said:
A fine write Dusk. I\'m half-human, half-guinea pig (as in my pic!).
July 25th, 2019 02:28
orchidee said:
A fine write Dusk. I\'m half-human, half-guinea pig (as in my pic!).
July 25th, 2019 02:28
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